1983 Past Life Manga King

“okay okay.”

After all, twins are one body. Write.

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A few days later, a parcel arrived from Kido.

Of course, Kyunghee.

Kyung-hee writes ‘top secret document’ in a notebook with a large sticker and makes sure no one touches it.

“Hey, what kind of military secret is that? Do it in moderation.”

I cover my ears with my fingers and speak.

“I won’t listen to my competitors.”

“Hey, what’s your competitor?”

“I’m not listening.”

“…Yeah, I got it.”

It’s like an agent on the first mission.

This is the typical image of a motivated newbie.

But at the same time, he is very active, perhaps because of such a will.

When I think about it in my spare time and when I play with Junmo, when something comes to mind, I write something down while saying, ‘Ah, memo’.

And then in the evening, I don’t go home right away, and I go through a book while thinking about it.

Even that is not enough, sometimes he asks Seon-hee to draw something that he is thinking of.

Then, I collect pictures and come up with ideas, and I read the man of sincerity several times to understand the flow of the story.

Anyway, seeing how they try to create a story while retaining the original feel as much as possible, I think it’s still pretty good.

I put together a copy of the story that had been hanging on for several days, and sent a parcel to Japan.

I’m curious about what kind of story it will be, but I decided to look at the series and decide. It’s not good for me to go out too far when I’m trying to do something on my own.

And after a while, I got a call from Kido.

Then, a long story goes back and forth with Kyung-hee.

“No, don’t push yourself with passion alone, and use Chiba Ryo well. Yeah, yeah. So, a man’s face is life. Still, hot blood is good too. Yeah.”

“Honestly, Ryo Chiba has a nice face, but as a man, she’s a little less attractive. So, those lines are important. Yeah, no. It’s not greasy. That’s cool.”

The content of the call is intense.

There must be many points of conflict between the opinions of Kido and Kyunghee.

However, when the long call came to an end, something changed.

Kyung-hee’s expression had turned into a gloomy mood for some reason.

However, perhaps because of that, the studio assistants slowly glance at Kyung-hee like that and concentrate on the work without saying a word.

The firebox had completely subsided.

and after a while,

Click.

After putting down the receiver, Kyunghee looked down at her continuity note with a curious face and smiled awkwardly and said to me.

“Hold on for now.”

Having said that, he slapped his palms.

“I forgot my homework. Look at my mind.”

Saying that, he took the notebook and hurriedly left the studio.

Then I hear footsteps going up the second floor through the living room.

The people in the studio started looking into each other’s eyes without saying anything.

No one was able to say anything, and they were just staring at them, and then Silver opened his mouth.

“Because I’m busy, I have to hurry up to work.”

Everyone flinched at those words and immediately went to work.

But then Seon-hee, who was drawing, lifts her head and looks up at the ceiling once.

Is there something called twins?

Seeing that, I stood up.

And then went upstairs.

As I try to pass the central rooms with sliding doors, I see an open door.

And in the room, I see Kyunghee with her head bowed.

She is shrugging her shoulders a little.

“……”

It seems that the first thing I was motivated to do was not work out properly, so I was a little bit discouraged.

It’s probably natural because the tendencies we pursue are different.

However, this is an important moment.

If you overcome this, you will grow one step further, otherwise the story and everything will go away as a simple discord.

After standing in front of the door for a while, he left the place with quiet steps.

After a while, while everyone was working with awkward faces in the studio, Kyunghee appeared.

But her mother’s scarf is wrapped around her forehead.

“Oh yea!”

When he suddenly screams, all the fishermen look at Kyunghee in surprise.

With an expression that did not fully understand what was going on,

Kyung-hee, who looked around at those scenes, shouted once again.

“Let’s do our best!”

Everyone laughed and responded to that.

“cheer up!”

“That’s right, stay strong. We.”

Silver smiles and begins to focus on painting again.(Read more @ wuxiax.com)

Kyung-hee, who had been looking around at these people all the time, approached me.

“I’ll take it.”

“What are you talking about? What do you want me to accept?”

“It’s my brother’s help. I’m still a little lacking, so I’ll accept it.”

Kyung-hee’s words are ridiculous and laugh out loud.

“…is that the human posture for asking for help?”

“Come on, help me with this.”

Saying that, he gently shakes the continuity note.

“Yamma, don’t go overboard!”

Competitors from now on (3)

I looked at the storyline created by Kyunghee from the beginning.

And I think I know why it was rejected.

He tried to keep his original hot-bloodedness well, and the analysis of the character Ryo Chiba was not bad. However, the problem was that the story progressed out of nowhere.

If the story doesn’t go on well, the sense of immersion is diminished.

I frown on the bridge of my nose while looking at the story, and Kyunghee is staring at my expression like that. with a slightly worried expression,

“Is the story strange?”

“Overall it’s fine.”

“Oh, really? But why are you making such a face? No wonder. The story is so much better than I thought, it’s shocking… Ouch!”

I ate honey chestnut, and Kyung-hee frowned, wrapped her head around her head, and gently stepped back.

“I said it wasn’t bad overall. Who said the story was too good?”

“……then?”

“It’s hard to see the young because the flow keeps falling off. Do you think you’ll be immersed in this kind of distraction?”

Then I ask with a surprised expression.

“A lot?”

“Once you sleep a lot and keep breaking like this, you’ll lose your sense of immersion. Then, of course, there’s no fun.”

“Is it okay if I just keep it up?”

“If that’s not enough, it’ll be a lot better than it is now. Now, look. Read this part, the dialogue again.”

“…isn’t that a bit strange?”

“It’s weird. It’s so weird. You’re good at pointing out other people’s things, but you don’t know what your problems are.”

“…that’s what I’m thinking, because I read too many of the same story. I don’t know what the problem is.”

“So you need experience.”

He nodded his head at my words, then smirked and smiled.

“Hey. What are you talking about? Focus on the problem.”

“Okay, okay. But when my brother says that, it’s like some kind of tutor. A gangster tutor who looks scary… ah!”

“Concentration!”

“So….”

Although there were occasional distractions like this, he was a quick-witted guy.

He usually likes books and keeps a diary, so the sentences of his lines are much better than mine.

However, as he has not yet mastered how to make a story properly, the story seems to be moving around a bit.

It’s a very short idea. He is quite good at short stories, but in any case, it was definitely interesting as much as the content of a serious man story.

In a way, it’s a competitive work, but it’s hard because I want to be able to see it so clearly.

Kido wouldn’t like it when he saw it like this?

But now, Kyung Hee is more important than Kido’s voice.

“Oppa, what should I do in this situation…?”

“Worry, worry.”

“…Okay. I’m sorry.”

Of course, I’m never going to do it for you.

only you have to find out Then it becomes blood and flesh.

But suddenly he came up with a good idea, so he hurriedly edits the storyline. Then, with a proud expression, he presented the continuity note to me.

“Come on. Let’s see.”

“……”

Looking at it slowly, it’s definitely going on smoothly.

Thanks to this, the immersion in the story has increased.

I was lost because I didn’t know, but because you taught me, I understood it quickly and put it into practice.

But it’s still nothing special.

It’s good that the story progresses smoothly, but it lacks the popping content that is Kyung Hee’s strength.

Kyunghee looked at my expression and opened her mouth.

“Give me 30 minutes.”

It seems that something came to mind.

When I nodded, excitedly, I went to the table next to me, drew a box on A4 paper, and wrote something diligently.

Are you making a new one?

After a while, he comes back with a few sheets of paper to show that he has finished his work.

“It’s done.”

“Are you going to make a new storyline?”

“No, not that.”

I put the paper I just made between the continuity notes.

“What is this?”

“Ah, I feel sorry for the content. I just added the content that came to mind. It’s not a big deal.”

Did you expand the story?

However, if you stretch it unnecessarily, it will only stretch.

However, I decided to read it once and read only the inserted content again.

It was a smooth, but somewhat boring section, but if it stretches further… …

By the way… … . uh?

When I look at the embedded content, it feels like it suddenly catches my eye.

what the heck It feels like the ingredients of the best taste are mixed with plain food.

If you look at the added scenes separately, it just seems like a story of a sick taste.

However, since this is connected to the story, something feels different.

A meaning was attached to Ryo Chiba’s seemingly meaningless actions. And the added scenes added a charm that had never been seen before.

Although he has been a popular supporting actor for his handsome looks and hot personality, if you look at it calmly, he lacks charm.

what the heck He just looks cool, so maybe he lacks human charm.

It didn’t look like he was worried at all, but his brief lines of complaint make Ryo Chiba more human. It’s short, but the episodes are intense.

In particular, the scene where Kishi Yamato fights in the wind at the beach in the early morning is real… … .

Considering that this is a story that came out of Kyunghee’s head, somehow this is also a bit shocking.

Anyway, it’s pretty good

Even though I’ve been doing some shit, I didn’t know I had such a sense.

But now, my Kyunghee is looking at my expression with her eyes wide open.

“As expected… is it strange?”

“strange.”

“Okay, that’s right. I thought it was a bit strange while I was writing it, but as expected…”

“No, it’s weird, but it’s fun. Of course, it’s Kido who decides the final story. Although I can’t say anything.”

“Are you okay?”

“Yeah, it’s stupid, but it’s fun.”

“What is that?”

Guess what I said was funny, I giggled and laughed.

It must be a unique expression at this time.

“It was also a hwaryong point?”

“It’s not arrogant enough.”

At my words, the arrogant expression on his face changes to a slightly indifferent one.

It’s not a bad story though, but it’s a bit disappointing.

I didn’t want to actively help out for a while, but I can’t help it because I’m still thirsty for blood.

“Let’s modify the contents a little. How about it?”

“Really? Well, thank you, it’s me.”