Cannon fodder female monk
Chapter 523 Recommendation Failure
Chapter 523 Recommendation Failure
Li Dai is really out of luck. Judging from the ingredients in the alchemy room she is in, it is the main medicine of the extremely rare eighth-grade pill Nirvana Pill. It is said that this Nirvana Pill is rare because the Fengling flower for refining it is rare, and it is difficult to refine it. The difficulty to complete is also very high, belonging to the very difficult pill among the eighth grade pills.
And the effect of Nirvana Pill is also obvious, Nirvana Nirvana, people eat it like a phoenix Nirvana and rebirth, it has the same effect as Xisui Pill, but Xisui Pill is aimed at healthy people, while Nirvana Pill is aimed at people with severe physical injuries injured person.
To achieve Nirvana, the process is of course extremely painful, and few people can endure the pain.
Not to mention that, even Master Li himself is not sure that the refining of Nirvana Pill can be 100% successful. It is purely accidental that this topic is added this time. Anyway, no one will succeed in refining it, and there is only one Fengling flower left Even if he came to practice, he would not be able to succeed, so he came up with this topic on a whim.
That's right, at least two Fengling flowers are needed to refine a furnace of Nirvana Pill, and it is impossible to successfully refine one.
He also didn't expect that this impossible question was really drawn by someone. It can be said that this female nun not only said that she was unlucky as Cheng Feng said, but it was quite bad.
Of course, he came up with the topic, so he didn't want to change the topic for Li Dai. If Li Dai didn't succeed in refining, it can only be said that she was unlucky. In the cultivation world, luck is also a part of strength. She failed the assessment this time. Three years later You can do it all over again, so in Master Li's opinion, it's not a big deal.
Knowing Li Dai's destined ending, Master Li didn't have much interest in continuing to watch it. He clicked on the other light spots in the high-level alchemy room, Li Dai was switched, and a new picture appeared on the projection screen.
On the screen, the female cultivator who is trying to make alchemy is not Fang Aling.
"This female cultivator's skills are good, and it seems that what she's going to practice this time is also an eighth-grade pill." Qian Chengfeng said with a smile.
"Yeah." Li Ye narrowed his eyes, the female cultivator's fire seemed to be a little abnormal, like, like the fire of chaos!After a flash, the fire changed color again, without any sense of chaos, Li Ye frowned, maybe he had misread it.
Since Fang Aling's alchemy rhythm is quite good, Li Ye paused in her alchemy room for a long time before switching.
"Heh, Xiaojiu from the Gui family is not bad either. If I read correctly, what he made is the most difficult soul-purifying pill among the seventh-rank pills!" It can be said that as long as the pills are related to the soul, they are not so good. Refining is more difficult than ordinary pills, and this soul-purifying pill is also very much needed by high-level monks. It cleanses the filth of the soul and reduces the demons. Dan directly breaks out the inner demons, and is more domineering, without the gentleness of Dihun Pill.
Seeing Gui Sewen's performance, all the elders of the Danmeng nodded with a smile, and praised: "He is a good seedling!"
The screen switched again, and this time it was a girl in a crescent white gauze with small emerald flowers printed on the edge of the gauze. Her eyebrows like distant mountains were full of softness, and a pair of beautiful eyes focused on the pill furnace. Her jade hands gently twisted the elixirs, and put them into the cauldron one by one. She looked as beautiful as dancing, as if she felt someone was watching her, and her every move became more graceful.
"This female cultivator is not bad. I met her on the road. At that time, she was distributing food to a group of beggars. She was very kind. If the brother wanted a female disciple, she was very good. She became a high-ranking monk. Forget your roots and help those who need it." Luo Shui Xin who had been silent for a long time suddenly spoke again, and as soon as he spoke, he was full of praise for Wan Qingyao on the screen.
After talking for a long time, seeing that Li Ye didn't respond, Luoshuixin's delicate eyebrows frowned, feeling unspeakably sad. Looking at Wan Qingyao, who made alchemy movements like dancing, she continued: "Not only is she a good character, she is also very good at alchemy. That's right, without any background, without any powerful leader, but he is already a sixth-rank alchemist."
"Hehe, it seems that Shui Xin likes her very much! Since she is only a sixth-rank alchemist, why did she have the courage to participate in the advanced assessment of seventh- and eighth-rank?" Wan Qingyao is not familiar to others, but he is very familiar with it At this time, Qian Chengfeng opened his mouth because he thought that Luoshuixin had been deceived by that female cultivator surnamed Wan who was good at disguising, so he couldn't help but ask a little ironically.
But Luoshuixin's eyes lit up when he heard Qian Chengfeng's words, he didn't seem to hear the sarcasm in his words, looked at the crowd and said: "This good girl, I asked her the same question, senior brother, guess what she is?" How to say?"
Li Ye looked at the screen without turning his head, as if he didn't hear Luo Shui Xin's words, nor did he answer.
Luo Shui Xin seemed to be used to this kind of Li Ye, and said with a subtle smile: "That silly girl, you say that you have a lot of admiration for your brother, and your biggest wish is to be your first son. No, for this, she is also working hard." She has done her best and participated in the assessment of advanced alchemy, she believes that she will be able to break through the seventh rank in the assessment, and she can be considered as an advanced alchemist."
"Haha."
It's just that as soon as she said this, Li Ye didn't change her expression, but Qian Chengfeng laughed out loud regardless of her image, "This is an interesting statement. If we want to say that there are many people who worship Master Li , There are not many people in Cangyun Continent who do not worship Master Li. Your senior brother wants to choose a female disciple, so you can’t give her a convenient door just because of this, right? That would be too unfair to other people, Brother Li, are you right? "Qian Chengfeng has no scruples in speaking, although he is young, he is absolutely strong in alchemy and cultivation, otherwise he will not be able to sit in the position of the second in command of the alchemy alliance. Of course, he can take this position because he is older than him. Li Ye, who has known countless Lun, is a friend of Wangnian, which makes him have a lot of supporters.
Therefore, he is grateful to Li Ye, and does not allow anyone to make a decision for Li Ye.
That's right, even if Luoshuixin is Li Ye's junior sister, even if what she says seems to be for Li Ye's good, but after all, it's her fault that Li Ye chooses to be the second son, and she shouldn't make the arrangements, let alone her recommendation Wan Qingyao, who he is very familiar with, is not a good person at all, as can be seen from the fact that she can get mixed up with his half-brother Qian Kui.
As for whether the drowning heart knows her true nature, that's not important.
After listening to Qian Chengfeng's words, Luo Shui Xin was so angry that she was dying, but on the surface she remained calm, smiled softly, and said no more.
She has already said what should be said, if Wan Qingyao still can't win this opportunity, she can die.
While thinking like this, there was a loud bang on the screen, and Wan Qingyao exploded.
"Haha." Seeing this, Qian Chengfeng couldn't help laughing again, "It seems that this beauty is going to live up to your expectations, Shui Xin, if I remember correctly, the alchemy room where she is It is the seventh-rank Peiyuan pill, the refining method of Peiyuan pill is not difficult, and the low-grade Peiyuan pill is in great demand, so this Peiyuan pill must be very familiar to many alchemists, and the seventh-rank, in addition to the elixir compound The ratio has increased, but the others have not changed, this is one of the simplest elixirs in the Qipin elixir, she has exploded the furnace, so it can be seen that the breakthrough has failed, and your painstaking efforts are really wasted."
The last sentence he said made Luoshuixin's face change, and he was even more displeased with Qian Chengfeng.
None of the people present were stupid. After listening to him say so much about Qipin Peiyuan Pill, and adding that sentence at the end, everyone instantly realized the meaning of that "hard work". It was not her recommendation to say good things, but secretly He pointed out that she had tampered with and specially arranged the simplest advanced examination room for Wan Qingyao.
Luo Shui Xin pursed her lips tightly, showing a little grievance like a little girl, looked at Li Ye, admitted her mistake, and said, "Brother, don't you blame me, I just like that kind child and want to help her, so... "
"I don't blame you!" Li Ye said without emotion, and switched the screen again.
Luo Shuixin secretly heaved a sigh of relief, annoyed at Qian Chengfeng's cynicism, hating Wan Qingyao's failure to live up to expectations, what a waste.
"Hey! More than 20 years have passed, brother Li, if your eldest disciple is here, he may have reached the level of a high-level alchemist. After all, he broke through to the fifth rank at that time. After passing this news to you, he suddenly disappeared. I don't know where he went." Qian Chengfeng sighed suddenly.
Although he is much younger than Li Ye, he is still two or three hundred years old. Compared with Ruo Yunzhuo who is less than fifty, he is considered half an elder. What to learn, the last time he appeared in Shifang City in Dongling, after he left, there was no more news, even if Li Ye spent a lot of contacts to find it, it was useless, that's why he wanted to accept a female disciple idea.
At the beginning, disciple Ruoyun hurriedly said that he wanted a junior sister, and that he would recommend someone who was especially good at alchemy. Unfortunately, before that person was recommended, he disappeared by himself. Li Yi said that he was not sorry, but it was a lie , I finally met someone in their twenties who can refine fifth-rank alchemy, and the success rate and quality of alchemy are extremely high. It's not like Wan Qingyao, who only breaks through sixth-rank at the age of one or two hundred, still has to bet on luck to refine the alchemy people can compare.
That's right, even though Shangling Wanqingyao and even Mu Qiantian can make sixth-grade alchemy (Mu Qiantian hides her true level, she is not a fifth-rank alchemist), but they are not young, Shangling is 150 years old, Wanqingyao is 180 years old Mu Qianqian is 130 years old, they look young, it's not bad to be able to refine the sixth-grade alchemy talent at less than five hundred years old, but that's all.
The talent of an alchemist is not judged by how many grades of pills can be refined, but more by the quality and success rate of pills.
What's more, they are all intermediate alchemists who have not broken through to the seventh rank. Breaking through from the intermediate level to the advanced level is a hurdle, a big cut, and 90.00% of the nine alchemists will not be able to cross it, and they will not be able to break through in a lifetime.
Therefore, listening to my junior sister saying that Wan Qingyao wants to break through in the assessment, it is like a dream, it is impossible to succeed.
The breakthrough from the sixth rank to the seventh rank is as difficult as the eighth rank to the ninth rank, and the ninth rank to break through to the spirit alchemist. Every step, it feels like ten thousand steps, which is not so easy.
Wan Qingyao's failure was expected, and more than one person had the same idea as Wan Qingyao, so no matter whether Shang Lingmu Qiantian was familiar with the sixth-rank pill or not, no matter whether the seventh-rank pill they drew was simple or not. , without exception, all 'boom bang bang' fryers failed.
Qian Chengfeng calmed down after watching the frying furnace a few times, and he also understood the thoughts of these people. Obviously, he could only barely refine the sixth-grade alchemy. Yes, in the final analysis, it is too tempting to become the only female disciple of Master Li. After becoming the second son of Master Li, there is no one in the Cangyun Continent who does not give face. After all, Master Li is the most powerful ninth-rank alchemist so far. Grandmaster.
If Li Dai was aware of these situations, she would be shocked by the backward level of alchemy in the Cangyun Continent, which is far incomparable to the continent where the Tai Luo family is located and the four continents on the Promise Sea where she strayed into.
Leaving aside those things, Li Ye was in a daze when he heard Qian Chengfeng mentioning his apprentice, and his interest in continuing to watch alchemy was gone. Looking at the picture of the fryer, he casually pressed down on a spot of light in the corner But what appeared was an extremely mysterious male cultivator.
That miraculous alchemy technique immediately caught everyone's attention.
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The following is the author’s words, which are a bit too much. I can’t post them in the postscript alone, so I will write them in the main text. It may cost everyone a penny or two, haha, but this is only this time, everyone understands, thank you!
Regarding Tucao, there is much to say.
To be honest, it’s been a long time since I wrote an article. I’m no longer glass-hearted. I’m not afraid of everyone’s complaints.
Everyone has read the article carefully, and is very happy to say it well, and carefully correct the deficiencies, so as to strive for better writing in the future.
Da Da thinks that the logic of the writing is relatively rigorous, one step at a time, one pit, remember to fill in each pit, each character has its own meaning, and there is no rambling and forgetting the front, and it’s okay for everyone to complain.
However, there are some concepts, what you say is different from what you think, naturally there are conflicts and contradictions, and you are not happy when you make complaints out of context. It is not easy to write an article, because your point of view or idea thinks that this is not good and that is not good. Affecting everyone's mood when reading the article, such complaints will be cleaned up, or else they will be kept for the New Year?right?
To put it in general terms, let me give you an example, just like a certain relative today, who said that at the beginning of Wenwen, the heroine is selfish if she does not take her mother with her. Is it really selfish?
If it is written that the heroine is still a weak chicken, does not know how to judge the situation, gives up the opportunity won by the original owner's mother, goes back to work hard, and then dies with the original owner's mother, isn't it selfish and great?
If you really write like that, everyone should say that the heroine has no brains, she is brave enough to travel through time, and she is a fool and a saint for the mother of the original owner who has no deep feelings. Do you want such a heroine?I don't want to write much, sorry.
The concept is different. If there are relatives who think that the heroine is selfish and should live and die with the original owner's mother, then there is no way.
Let's make fun of everyone in the future.Ha ha.
ask for a ticket
The heroine in these two chapters has less roles, but it will be fine later, okay?
3975 words, 3800 words are charged. This was the case in each chapter before, so today some words have to be sent to the main text. Don’t feel that you are at a loss. Later, you will send more chapters with 199 as compensation.
(End of this chapter)
Li Dai is really out of luck. Judging from the ingredients in the alchemy room she is in, it is the main medicine of the extremely rare eighth-grade pill Nirvana Pill. It is said that this Nirvana Pill is rare because the Fengling flower for refining it is rare, and it is difficult to refine it. The difficulty to complete is also very high, belonging to the very difficult pill among the eighth grade pills.
And the effect of Nirvana Pill is also obvious, Nirvana Nirvana, people eat it like a phoenix Nirvana and rebirth, it has the same effect as Xisui Pill, but Xisui Pill is aimed at healthy people, while Nirvana Pill is aimed at people with severe physical injuries injured person.
To achieve Nirvana, the process is of course extremely painful, and few people can endure the pain.
Not to mention that, even Master Li himself is not sure that the refining of Nirvana Pill can be 100% successful. It is purely accidental that this topic is added this time. Anyway, no one will succeed in refining it, and there is only one Fengling flower left Even if he came to practice, he would not be able to succeed, so he came up with this topic on a whim.
That's right, at least two Fengling flowers are needed to refine a furnace of Nirvana Pill, and it is impossible to successfully refine one.
He also didn't expect that this impossible question was really drawn by someone. It can be said that this female nun not only said that she was unlucky as Cheng Feng said, but it was quite bad.
Of course, he came up with the topic, so he didn't want to change the topic for Li Dai. If Li Dai didn't succeed in refining, it can only be said that she was unlucky. In the cultivation world, luck is also a part of strength. She failed the assessment this time. Three years later You can do it all over again, so in Master Li's opinion, it's not a big deal.
Knowing Li Dai's destined ending, Master Li didn't have much interest in continuing to watch it. He clicked on the other light spots in the high-level alchemy room, Li Dai was switched, and a new picture appeared on the projection screen.
On the screen, the female cultivator who is trying to make alchemy is not Fang Aling.
"This female cultivator's skills are good, and it seems that what she's going to practice this time is also an eighth-grade pill." Qian Chengfeng said with a smile.
"Yeah." Li Ye narrowed his eyes, the female cultivator's fire seemed to be a little abnormal, like, like the fire of chaos!After a flash, the fire changed color again, without any sense of chaos, Li Ye frowned, maybe he had misread it.
Since Fang Aling's alchemy rhythm is quite good, Li Ye paused in her alchemy room for a long time before switching.
"Heh, Xiaojiu from the Gui family is not bad either. If I read correctly, what he made is the most difficult soul-purifying pill among the seventh-rank pills!" It can be said that as long as the pills are related to the soul, they are not so good. Refining is more difficult than ordinary pills, and this soul-purifying pill is also very much needed by high-level monks. It cleanses the filth of the soul and reduces the demons. Dan directly breaks out the inner demons, and is more domineering, without the gentleness of Dihun Pill.
Seeing Gui Sewen's performance, all the elders of the Danmeng nodded with a smile, and praised: "He is a good seedling!"
The screen switched again, and this time it was a girl in a crescent white gauze with small emerald flowers printed on the edge of the gauze. Her eyebrows like distant mountains were full of softness, and a pair of beautiful eyes focused on the pill furnace. Her jade hands gently twisted the elixirs, and put them into the cauldron one by one. She looked as beautiful as dancing, as if she felt someone was watching her, and her every move became more graceful.
"This female cultivator is not bad. I met her on the road. At that time, she was distributing food to a group of beggars. She was very kind. If the brother wanted a female disciple, she was very good. She became a high-ranking monk. Forget your roots and help those who need it." Luo Shui Xin who had been silent for a long time suddenly spoke again, and as soon as he spoke, he was full of praise for Wan Qingyao on the screen.
After talking for a long time, seeing that Li Ye didn't respond, Luoshuixin's delicate eyebrows frowned, feeling unspeakably sad. Looking at Wan Qingyao, who made alchemy movements like dancing, she continued: "Not only is she a good character, she is also very good at alchemy. That's right, without any background, without any powerful leader, but he is already a sixth-rank alchemist."
"Hehe, it seems that Shui Xin likes her very much! Since she is only a sixth-rank alchemist, why did she have the courage to participate in the advanced assessment of seventh- and eighth-rank?" Wan Qingyao is not familiar to others, but he is very familiar with it At this time, Qian Chengfeng opened his mouth because he thought that Luoshuixin had been deceived by that female cultivator surnamed Wan who was good at disguising, so he couldn't help but ask a little ironically.
But Luoshuixin's eyes lit up when he heard Qian Chengfeng's words, he didn't seem to hear the sarcasm in his words, looked at the crowd and said: "This good girl, I asked her the same question, senior brother, guess what she is?" How to say?"
Li Ye looked at the screen without turning his head, as if he didn't hear Luo Shui Xin's words, nor did he answer.
Luo Shui Xin seemed to be used to this kind of Li Ye, and said with a subtle smile: "That silly girl, you say that you have a lot of admiration for your brother, and your biggest wish is to be your first son. No, for this, she is also working hard." She has done her best and participated in the assessment of advanced alchemy, she believes that she will be able to break through the seventh rank in the assessment, and she can be considered as an advanced alchemist."
"Haha."
It's just that as soon as she said this, Li Ye didn't change her expression, but Qian Chengfeng laughed out loud regardless of her image, "This is an interesting statement. If we want to say that there are many people who worship Master Li , There are not many people in Cangyun Continent who do not worship Master Li. Your senior brother wants to choose a female disciple, so you can’t give her a convenient door just because of this, right? That would be too unfair to other people, Brother Li, are you right? "Qian Chengfeng has no scruples in speaking, although he is young, he is absolutely strong in alchemy and cultivation, otherwise he will not be able to sit in the position of the second in command of the alchemy alliance. Of course, he can take this position because he is older than him. Li Ye, who has known countless Lun, is a friend of Wangnian, which makes him have a lot of supporters.
Therefore, he is grateful to Li Ye, and does not allow anyone to make a decision for Li Ye.
That's right, even if Luoshuixin is Li Ye's junior sister, even if what she says seems to be for Li Ye's good, but after all, it's her fault that Li Ye chooses to be the second son, and she shouldn't make the arrangements, let alone her recommendation Wan Qingyao, who he is very familiar with, is not a good person at all, as can be seen from the fact that she can get mixed up with his half-brother Qian Kui.
As for whether the drowning heart knows her true nature, that's not important.
After listening to Qian Chengfeng's words, Luo Shui Xin was so angry that she was dying, but on the surface she remained calm, smiled softly, and said no more.
She has already said what should be said, if Wan Qingyao still can't win this opportunity, she can die.
While thinking like this, there was a loud bang on the screen, and Wan Qingyao exploded.
"Haha." Seeing this, Qian Chengfeng couldn't help laughing again, "It seems that this beauty is going to live up to your expectations, Shui Xin, if I remember correctly, the alchemy room where she is It is the seventh-rank Peiyuan pill, the refining method of Peiyuan pill is not difficult, and the low-grade Peiyuan pill is in great demand, so this Peiyuan pill must be very familiar to many alchemists, and the seventh-rank, in addition to the elixir compound The ratio has increased, but the others have not changed, this is one of the simplest elixirs in the Qipin elixir, she has exploded the furnace, so it can be seen that the breakthrough has failed, and your painstaking efforts are really wasted."
The last sentence he said made Luoshuixin's face change, and he was even more displeased with Qian Chengfeng.
None of the people present were stupid. After listening to him say so much about Qipin Peiyuan Pill, and adding that sentence at the end, everyone instantly realized the meaning of that "hard work". It was not her recommendation to say good things, but secretly He pointed out that she had tampered with and specially arranged the simplest advanced examination room for Wan Qingyao.
Luo Shui Xin pursed her lips tightly, showing a little grievance like a little girl, looked at Li Ye, admitted her mistake, and said, "Brother, don't you blame me, I just like that kind child and want to help her, so... "
"I don't blame you!" Li Ye said without emotion, and switched the screen again.
Luo Shuixin secretly heaved a sigh of relief, annoyed at Qian Chengfeng's cynicism, hating Wan Qingyao's failure to live up to expectations, what a waste.
"Hey! More than 20 years have passed, brother Li, if your eldest disciple is here, he may have reached the level of a high-level alchemist. After all, he broke through to the fifth rank at that time. After passing this news to you, he suddenly disappeared. I don't know where he went." Qian Chengfeng sighed suddenly.
Although he is much younger than Li Ye, he is still two or three hundred years old. Compared with Ruo Yunzhuo who is less than fifty, he is considered half an elder. What to learn, the last time he appeared in Shifang City in Dongling, after he left, there was no more news, even if Li Ye spent a lot of contacts to find it, it was useless, that's why he wanted to accept a female disciple idea.
At the beginning, disciple Ruoyun hurriedly said that he wanted a junior sister, and that he would recommend someone who was especially good at alchemy. Unfortunately, before that person was recommended, he disappeared by himself. Li Yi said that he was not sorry, but it was a lie , I finally met someone in their twenties who can refine fifth-rank alchemy, and the success rate and quality of alchemy are extremely high. It's not like Wan Qingyao, who only breaks through sixth-rank at the age of one or two hundred, still has to bet on luck to refine the alchemy people can compare.
That's right, even though Shangling Wanqingyao and even Mu Qiantian can make sixth-grade alchemy (Mu Qiantian hides her true level, she is not a fifth-rank alchemist), but they are not young, Shangling is 150 years old, Wanqingyao is 180 years old Mu Qianqian is 130 years old, they look young, it's not bad to be able to refine the sixth-grade alchemy talent at less than five hundred years old, but that's all.
The talent of an alchemist is not judged by how many grades of pills can be refined, but more by the quality and success rate of pills.
What's more, they are all intermediate alchemists who have not broken through to the seventh rank. Breaking through from the intermediate level to the advanced level is a hurdle, a big cut, and 90.00% of the nine alchemists will not be able to cross it, and they will not be able to break through in a lifetime.
Therefore, listening to my junior sister saying that Wan Qingyao wants to break through in the assessment, it is like a dream, it is impossible to succeed.
The breakthrough from the sixth rank to the seventh rank is as difficult as the eighth rank to the ninth rank, and the ninth rank to break through to the spirit alchemist. Every step, it feels like ten thousand steps, which is not so easy.
Wan Qingyao's failure was expected, and more than one person had the same idea as Wan Qingyao, so no matter whether Shang Lingmu Qiantian was familiar with the sixth-rank pill or not, no matter whether the seventh-rank pill they drew was simple or not. , without exception, all 'boom bang bang' fryers failed.
Qian Chengfeng calmed down after watching the frying furnace a few times, and he also understood the thoughts of these people. Obviously, he could only barely refine the sixth-grade alchemy. Yes, in the final analysis, it is too tempting to become the only female disciple of Master Li. After becoming the second son of Master Li, there is no one in the Cangyun Continent who does not give face. After all, Master Li is the most powerful ninth-rank alchemist so far. Grandmaster.
If Li Dai was aware of these situations, she would be shocked by the backward level of alchemy in the Cangyun Continent, which is far incomparable to the continent where the Tai Luo family is located and the four continents on the Promise Sea where she strayed into.
Leaving aside those things, Li Ye was in a daze when he heard Qian Chengfeng mentioning his apprentice, and his interest in continuing to watch alchemy was gone. Looking at the picture of the fryer, he casually pressed down on a spot of light in the corner But what appeared was an extremely mysterious male cultivator.
That miraculous alchemy technique immediately caught everyone's attention.
###########
The following is the author’s words, which are a bit too much. I can’t post them in the postscript alone, so I will write them in the main text. It may cost everyone a penny or two, haha, but this is only this time, everyone understands, thank you!
Regarding Tucao, there is much to say.
To be honest, it’s been a long time since I wrote an article. I’m no longer glass-hearted. I’m not afraid of everyone’s complaints.
Everyone has read the article carefully, and is very happy to say it well, and carefully correct the deficiencies, so as to strive for better writing in the future.
Da Da thinks that the logic of the writing is relatively rigorous, one step at a time, one pit, remember to fill in each pit, each character has its own meaning, and there is no rambling and forgetting the front, and it’s okay for everyone to complain.
However, there are some concepts, what you say is different from what you think, naturally there are conflicts and contradictions, and you are not happy when you make complaints out of context. It is not easy to write an article, because your point of view or idea thinks that this is not good and that is not good. Affecting everyone's mood when reading the article, such complaints will be cleaned up, or else they will be kept for the New Year?right?
To put it in general terms, let me give you an example, just like a certain relative today, who said that at the beginning of Wenwen, the heroine is selfish if she does not take her mother with her. Is it really selfish?
If it is written that the heroine is still a weak chicken, does not know how to judge the situation, gives up the opportunity won by the original owner's mother, goes back to work hard, and then dies with the original owner's mother, isn't it selfish and great?
If you really write like that, everyone should say that the heroine has no brains, she is brave enough to travel through time, and she is a fool and a saint for the mother of the original owner who has no deep feelings. Do you want such a heroine?I don't want to write much, sorry.
The concept is different. If there are relatives who think that the heroine is selfish and should live and die with the original owner's mother, then there is no way.
Let's make fun of everyone in the future.Ha ha.
ask for a ticket
The heroine in these two chapters has less roles, but it will be fine later, okay?
3975 words, 3800 words are charged. This was the case in each chapter before, so today some words have to be sent to the main text. Don’t feel that you are at a loss. Later, you will send more chapters with 199 as compensation.
(End of this chapter)
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