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Chapter 1885 Change the script

Fan Keqin went on to say: "Use lies to verify lies, and what you get must be lies. So whether the life verified by conspiracy or justice, is it really justice? If Director Zhan wants to express a similar It’s a kind of thinking. I think this door is still too abrupt. There is no prefix in the whole article. It’s just that it came suddenly at the end, a bit too... dry. It’s a very reckless feeling. This is my opinion , I hope Director Zhan doesn't mind."

The boss of the company, Zhang Shan, was a little unbelievable, because he really didn't know that Fan Keqin knew movies.Anyway, I know better than myself.Before that, he actually read the script of the dead end, and he thought it was quite interesting.But at this time, after hearing Fan Keqin finished speaking, I felt, um, it seemed to be the case.

Zhan Ruide digested it for a while, and after Fan Keqin finished speaking, he really felt quite uncomfortable.After all, I made up the script by myself, so now that someone says that, I feel very uncomfortable.But for the same reason, this guy is a very pure director, and he really wants to send out a good film, so he asked: "This book has not been fully finalized yet. Teacher Wan, can you give me some more specific opinions?" , how do you think it should be changed? Or, in which direction should it be changed?"

Fan Keqin observed the other party's expression, he understood that Zhan Ruide seemed to be asking himself humbly.So I lit a cigarette, thought for a while, and said: "First of all, we must set the general tone of this story. I think the book of the dead end is okay in terms of conception. There are some human thoughts mixed in the conspiracy. Then seal the The setting of the space can also be completely preserved. This is a genius idea.

But the way the characters appear on the stage can be modified. After all, the movie Director Zhan wants is a thriller and horror movie.So how can you catch people's attention in the first place.It is not important to let the audience have a sense of substitution.I think we can reset the way the characters appear on the scene.

Say, for example, the doctor and the detective, waking up in the water room of a closed, abandoned slaughterhouse.One is on the far left side of the room and one is on the far right side of the room.But when they woke up, they found that they were completely locked by metal chains.Then, they found a corpse with a hole in its head lying face down on the floor in the middle of the water room. A revolver was not far from the corpse's right hand.

In this way, as soon as the show starts, it will completely catch the audience's attention and give the audience an excellent sense of substitution..."

Fan Keqin talked about the setting and modification of the beginning. Zhan Ruide's eyes lit up, he nodded again and again, and said, "Yes, that's good. After all, this is a thriller and horror movie, and the beginning is very important. It is indeed very attractive, but, Mr. Wan It deleted the murderer and turned it into a confrontation between two 'good guys'. Well, this is more interesting. But with one less person, the plot may be weaker."

"No." Fan Keqin said: "We can set up various links throughout the film to mobilize the audience's emotions up and down. In addition, I did not delete the murderer, he still exists."

"Ah?" Zhan Ruidnahan said: "Oh, yes, there is a dead person on the ground, so there is a murderer outside this water room. I don't know when he will come in, right? This is more conducive to suspense. manufacture."

"Hey!" How should I put it, Fan Keqin felt that the other party's thinking was indeed okay.But the movie I was talking about has completely turned into two stories.How can it be?If it weren't for it, my own soundtrack would not be able to copy the original.Therefore, Fan Keqin began to be persuasive, saying: "No, actually, this murderer is the dead man with a blown head. He gave himself a tranquilizer, which made his heartbeat and pulse seem very weak.

But from your reaction, I can see that I set it up like this, and the modification is successful.Because you didn't guess it, it is naturally impossible for the audience to guess it.

My idea is that after this scene is shown at the beginning of the movie, the two people who are locked up, start introducing themselves to each other and trying to find a way to get out.Then in this enclosed space, set up various hints and clues.The two people assisted each other, discussed with each other, and passed the same clues, making them seem to be actively looking for a way to really get out..."

That's right, the script Fan Keqin mentioned is actually a famous series of horror thrillers in later generations called Chainsaw.This horror film is definitely famous among horror film fans.All kinds of suspense, all kinds of clues, conflicts, rhythms, and the big reversal at the end will definitely make horror movie lovers shout wonderful.

The script is a three-stage structure of a collection of commercial films, and it is also the best commercial film narrative mechanism summarized by the world until Fan Keqin's time travel.In every paragraph, there must be ups and downs.Therefore, Fan Keqin just told the general plot, and after finishing speaking, Zhan Ruide was very excited to hear it.Although the script seems to have been changed beyond recognition, it is undoubtedly more exciting to shoot according to what Fan Keqin said.In addition, the basic setting is still my own creativity.

He is like this, let alone Zhang Shan.After listening to it, I feel refreshed.it is good!it is good!His own company is indeed about to turn around.After Fan Keqin finished speaking, Zhan Ruide had already taken the pen and paper, and discussed with Fan Keqin to fill in the content of each section, such as what kind of clues should be given to several people in the story.Then after discovering the clues, how can we create suspense and so on.

In the end, Zhang Shan heard two people discussing that using electric speakers and gramophones, he completely created a murderer with a very strong IQ, and finally closed the door. When the game was over, the feeling was simply trembling.

After the discussion was over, Zhan Ruide also showed a smile on his face, and said: "I feel very much about Teacher Wan's guidance. I have learned a lot, and there are still some details. I will go back and revise it. I believe it will be finished in a few days. It's time to trouble Teacher Wan again."

"Don't dare to take it." Fan Keqin said with a smile: "If you need it, come to me anytime."

"Okay, then I won't bother Teacher Wan." Zhan Ruide stood up after saying that, only then did he remember that the boss of the company, Zhang Shan, was still there.So he said: "Boss, can you send me a car to take me back, I want to revise the script immediately..."

(End of this chapter)