The charming girl of the farm gate of crossing
Chapter 745 It's So Shocking
Chapter 745 It's So Shocking
The little cousin returned home, and He Xiner was free, devoting all her energy to her novel.
The main characters are almost remembered, and she went through it from the beginning again, feeling more and more that this is a big hole, or she dug a big hole for herself.
Because there are too many fighting scenes in the whole book, Guo Jing and Huang Rong joined hands in the rivers and lakes, experienced countless fights and kills, and even experienced life and death several times. In short, it is dangerous and tortuous.
Hey~
Difficult!
Hey, the left and right cousins are at home on vacation, so let's leave this difficult problem to someone who knows kung fu, haha.
"Xin'er has tidied up?"
Ye Xusheng was very surprised holding a stack of drafts.
"Hey, I only set the characters in the story, the direction of the plot, and the fate of the characters..."
He Xiner pulled out a draft that looked like a ghost drawing, and said with a blushing face, "The male protagonist is Guo Jing. Well, he practices archery skills. He kills two birds with one stone and amazes everyone with his skills. He is proficient in Mongolian wrestling. He has six masters who taught him martial arts. His studies are relatively complicated, he is dull, and his martial arts are not superb, but he is honest and chivalrous, has many adventures, and eventually becomes a master of one by one, and his fellows respectfully call him Guo Daxia."
Ye Xusheng was stunned.
He Xiner rubbed her nose embarrassingly, "I can design a lot of unique skills for the characters in it, such as the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, Kongming Fist, Iron Finger Supernatural Power, One Yang Finger, Nine Yin Scriptures, Orchid Brush Point Hand, Iron Sand Palm..."
"But every fight depends on the big brother's rich imagination~"
"Hehe, hehe..."
With a dry smile, He Xiner felt that her face was going to freeze.
Ye Xusheng didn't show anything on the surface, but he was shocked in his heart.
"Big brother, can you, can you stop looking at me like this?"
He Xiner covered her feverish face and turned her head away, avoiding the big hall brother's eyes that seemed to see through her.
"Oh, big brother is just too surprised. I didn't expect Xin Er to design a story so, so, um, so..."
Ye Xusheng, who had been praised by Zhang Dongqiang for his talent, suddenly ran out of words and didn't know how to describe it.
"Do you think it's possible to write this story?"
Since the eldest brother wasn't making fun of her, He Xiner didn't feel shy, and turned around to ask him with a smile.
"Xin'er has put in so much thought, big brother won't let you down, but I need to ask Uncle Zhang for advice."
He Xiner was overjoyed, "Okay! Okay! It doesn't matter if you have a name. The specific fight is whether you stretch your arms or legs, whether you use a sword or a knife. You have to write in detail. Uncle Zhang has actual combat experience." , can guide the big brother."
"By the way, Guo Jing, as the son-in-law of the Mongolian army and the marshal of the right army, has also experienced many large-scale battles. This involves the battle between the two armies. Uncle Zhang retired from the battlefield. How to describe it? Please ask Uncle Zhang. It couldn't be more appropriate."
Ye Xusheng felt that his brain, which had always been brilliant, was not enough. How could Xin'er come up with so many things?
It's so shocking~
No matter what, he will go all out for what he promised, and strive to live up to Xin'er's hard work.
So, the two of them went through the outline first, and determined the framework of the whole story. This created a sequence, starting from Guo Jing's father's generation, to Guo Jing's birth, growing up, martial arts, returning to the Central Plains, and so on.
He Xiner used the simplest and crudest method to draw a super large figure.
Mark each character's unique skills and weapons, if you really can't think of it, design one with the big brother.
This at least looks simpler.
Then there are the big and small fight scenes.
The two of them simply marked the characters in each fight, who would lose and who would win, who would live and who would die, how you fought and how they won by narrow margins, they could only hand it over to the big hall brother.
Ye Xusheng nodded, full of interest.
Taking advantage of this opportunity, he could have a good discussion with Dong Qiang and Uncle Zhang.
(End of this chapter)
The little cousin returned home, and He Xiner was free, devoting all her energy to her novel.
The main characters are almost remembered, and she went through it from the beginning again, feeling more and more that this is a big hole, or she dug a big hole for herself.
Because there are too many fighting scenes in the whole book, Guo Jing and Huang Rong joined hands in the rivers and lakes, experienced countless fights and kills, and even experienced life and death several times. In short, it is dangerous and tortuous.
Hey~
Difficult!
Hey, the left and right cousins are at home on vacation, so let's leave this difficult problem to someone who knows kung fu, haha.
"Xin'er has tidied up?"
Ye Xusheng was very surprised holding a stack of drafts.
"Hey, I only set the characters in the story, the direction of the plot, and the fate of the characters..."
He Xiner pulled out a draft that looked like a ghost drawing, and said with a blushing face, "The male protagonist is Guo Jing. Well, he practices archery skills. He kills two birds with one stone and amazes everyone with his skills. He is proficient in Mongolian wrestling. He has six masters who taught him martial arts. His studies are relatively complicated, he is dull, and his martial arts are not superb, but he is honest and chivalrous, has many adventures, and eventually becomes a master of one by one, and his fellows respectfully call him Guo Daxia."
Ye Xusheng was stunned.
He Xiner rubbed her nose embarrassingly, "I can design a lot of unique skills for the characters in it, such as the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, Kongming Fist, Iron Finger Supernatural Power, One Yang Finger, Nine Yin Scriptures, Orchid Brush Point Hand, Iron Sand Palm..."
"But every fight depends on the big brother's rich imagination~"
"Hehe, hehe..."
With a dry smile, He Xiner felt that her face was going to freeze.
Ye Xusheng didn't show anything on the surface, but he was shocked in his heart.
"Big brother, can you, can you stop looking at me like this?"
He Xiner covered her feverish face and turned her head away, avoiding the big hall brother's eyes that seemed to see through her.
"Oh, big brother is just too surprised. I didn't expect Xin Er to design a story so, so, um, so..."
Ye Xusheng, who had been praised by Zhang Dongqiang for his talent, suddenly ran out of words and didn't know how to describe it.
"Do you think it's possible to write this story?"
Since the eldest brother wasn't making fun of her, He Xiner didn't feel shy, and turned around to ask him with a smile.
"Xin'er has put in so much thought, big brother won't let you down, but I need to ask Uncle Zhang for advice."
He Xiner was overjoyed, "Okay! Okay! It doesn't matter if you have a name. The specific fight is whether you stretch your arms or legs, whether you use a sword or a knife. You have to write in detail. Uncle Zhang has actual combat experience." , can guide the big brother."
"By the way, Guo Jing, as the son-in-law of the Mongolian army and the marshal of the right army, has also experienced many large-scale battles. This involves the battle between the two armies. Uncle Zhang retired from the battlefield. How to describe it? Please ask Uncle Zhang. It couldn't be more appropriate."
Ye Xusheng felt that his brain, which had always been brilliant, was not enough. How could Xin'er come up with so many things?
It's so shocking~
No matter what, he will go all out for what he promised, and strive to live up to Xin'er's hard work.
So, the two of them went through the outline first, and determined the framework of the whole story. This created a sequence, starting from Guo Jing's father's generation, to Guo Jing's birth, growing up, martial arts, returning to the Central Plains, and so on.
He Xiner used the simplest and crudest method to draw a super large figure.
Mark each character's unique skills and weapons, if you really can't think of it, design one with the big brother.
This at least looks simpler.
Then there are the big and small fight scenes.
The two of them simply marked the characters in each fight, who would lose and who would win, who would live and who would die, how you fought and how they won by narrow margins, they could only hand it over to the big hall brother.
Ye Xusheng nodded, full of interest.
Taking advantage of this opportunity, he could have a good discussion with Dong Qiang and Uncle Zhang.
(End of this chapter)
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