Bright Sword Military System

Chapter 94

Just received a notification that it will be on the shelves at [-] o'clock tonight, and there will be four chapters.

The reason why I use "reflection" instead of "testimonials" here is because of the lessons of the previous book.

I found that writing novels sometimes can't be too indulgent. Occasionally, due to busyness, lack of time, or temporary affairs, rushing to update leads to a decline in quality and found that there is no problem, and then it is easy to lose control of myself.

This may be a kind of inertia of human beings, which is often said "heart is like a wild horse, easy to let go and hard to take".

This directly led to the very serious writing in the early stage of the last book, and in the middle, there were basically no characterizations and they were just talking about things... This way of writing is relatively easy, because you only need to think about how the plot will develop, and you don't need to think about how someone What will his character do and think, how will other people react, and so on.

Therefore, from the very beginning of this book, special emphasis is placed on characterization.

In the future, make a summary for each volume and reflect on it, just like doing a post-war summary, reminding yourself not to relax, and accepting the supervision of readers.

The most distinctive character in this book should be Li Yunlong.

First of all, I should thank Mr. Duliang. This character was portrayed by him, and I just continued to carve according to the model he portrayed... More precisely, the character Li Yunlong was allowed to live in this book.

Although he is the commander of the Eighth Route Army Corps, he only talks about the loyalty of the rivers and lakes and does not follow the rules at all, and even fighting the devils is the kind of loyalty in the rivers and lakes... "Damn, how many brothers and sisters the devils have killed me, we won't follow you Is Dou still a person?"

Because of the loyalty of the rivers and lakes, he took the risk of the reinforcements from the devils to duel with the devils on the battlefield (there is a description in the original book, but in the TV series it was changed to a duel with the officers of the devils observation group).

Because of the loyalty of the rivers and lakes, when Xiuqin was arrested, he took the troops to attack the county without hesitation.

Because of the loyalty of the rivers and lakes, when the monk was killed, he dared to forcibly imprison Kong Jie and drag his troops to beat the bandits who had been incorporated into the Eighth Route Army.

Which of these is not a violation of discipline?
It is a capital offense to snatch any one out.

Especially the last one...

What is the behavior of imprisoning the commander of the Eighth Route Army?
Those bandits have been recruited, which means they are the Eighth Route Army, and Li Yunlong is still taking them away with his troops... What is this behavior?
Therefore, some readers said that Li Yunlong in my writing made some mistakes in what he was doing, ignoring discipline, and didn't have a big view of right and wrong...

If Li Yunlong would care about this, he would not be Li Yunlong.

He even beats the devils because of his "loyalty" rather than because of his "big right and wrong" view, to say "big right and wrong"...Which one is better than bringing soldiers to take down the bandits that have been incorporated into the Eighth Path?
If you do this, how will the Eighth Route Army recruit and negotiate with the bandits in the future?

The front foot had a good talk, and the back foot took over the family's nest. How will the work be carried out in the future?

Li Yunlong is such a person, what rules are right and wrong... I don't want to do this, I just talk about loyalty.

It is Zhao Gang who talks about rules and discipline, and only Zhao Gang can rely on Li Yunlong's character in the direction of rules.

However, Zhao Gang couldn't control Li Yunlong's nature, he could only say that a delicate balance was achieved.

I am also working hard to portray the characters of other characters.

For example, Zhang Wanhe has a plan like an old fox, but he always has a knife and a tofu heart. If someone grinds it for a while, he will let go, so seeing Li Yunlong is like seeing the god of plague.

Another example is the instructor, who always has a subjective tendency and is accustomed to thinking, talking, and doing ideological work on the good side of the image of a good soldier.

The heroine Su Xin, I hope to create a character that is both fragile and strong... Vulnerability is innate. Born in that era, you have to be strong. Although there are contradictions, there is nothing you can do to reflect the cruelty of the war and the environment. Harsh and difficult conditions.

This role may not be obvious until now, because there is not much ink.

There is also a small problem:

I spent a few days thinking about the characters of several supporting characters in the Ministry of Work of the enemy, such as Li Dachui, the old gentleman, the small trumpet, the ugly baby, and the instructor.

Then suddenly the plot took a turn, and the protagonist was about to leave the Ministry of Work of the enemy and go to the combat unit.

I was stunned to find that several characters that I had carefully created after thinking about it for a long time were suddenly obsolete!

This can't be taken away... It's impossible to transfer all the enemy's industrial divisions to the combat troops!
That pity, distressed, distressed ah!

After thinking about it, I finally took away an instructor, so there is a plot of the instructor following in the text.

At the same time, the soldier said one more thing: because the book carefully considers the characters' characters and depicts them carefully, the coding is slow. Soldiers often sit and code for a whole day before writing three chapters. I hope you will understand.

Finally, I would like to thank the editors for biscuits and supper, as well as Eraser and Tian Qi. With the support of all editors, this book can grow smoothly.

Thank you for your support and subscription, and thank you for your encouragement, reward and encouragement!

How about the quality of this book, please see the follow-up...

(End of this chapter)