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Chapter 314 Blood pressure is up (23, please recommend a ticket, ask for a monthly ticket)
"Isn't this considered a debut? Brother Qian, you've released a bunch of songs, and even held your own fan meeting."

"Yang Qian is very popular. From last year to now, how many times has he been on the hot searches?"

"His songs are often on the search charts of Music Cloud!"

Huo Bo, who changed his tune, and several other players who knew about Yang Qian complained about Yang Qian's modesty.

"Actually, strictly speaking, I didn't make my debut, because I haven't been on a show or released an album."

Yang Qian smiled helplessly.

In fact, he also knew that these contestants who liked his songs didn't have any malicious intentions, but he wanted to keep a low profile, but in the end he was still roasted by them.

"It doesn't mean that I made my debut when I appeared on the show! According to this, I made my debut when I appeared on "The Future of Stars" the year before last? But I am also a second-round tourer, and I can't even be famous, and no one knows me when I walk on the street. , Compared with Yang Qian, you are far behind."

Dong Huanyu spread his hands and complained in a sour tone.

"The Future of Stars" is an idol audition program. Like many idol audition programs, there are many trainees competing together. Because Dong Huanyu has studied professional music singing at the Conservatory of Music, his vocal performance is not bad. It's okay.

But after all, he lacked some dancing skills. In the end, Dong Huanyu was eliminated after only the second round of tours. Later, he returned to the company to continue working as a trainee, and he also accepted some online variety shows one after another, trying to find some opportunities to become popular. .

He didn't really walk on the street and didn't know each other. Dong Huanyu still gained some diehard fans because of "The Future of Stars".

And before Yang Qian came, even if he was the most experienced among the dozen or so contestants gathered to participate in the blind selection, Dong Huanyu still felt that he was the one who attracted the most attention...

Yang Qian's arrival and his current popularity made him somewhat disappointed.

But fortunately, Dong Huanyu was just a little bit jealous and didn't want to be an enemy of Yang Qian.

After all, Yang Qian is too strong!

In fact, Dong Huanyu is a very smart person, from the very beginning when he came up with Huo Bo and greeted Yang Qian, it was obvious that he wanted to befriend Yang Qian.

"Yang Qian, I actually wrote some original songs, can you please read my songs for me?"

Dong Huanyu moved a chair over and sat beside Yang Qian. When he was free, he came up to him and wanted to ask him about music creation.

"Okay, are you going to sing original songs on stage?"

Yang Qian couldn't refuse, so he took his mobile phone, plugged in his earphones, and asked.

"Yes, to tell you the truth, I actually participated in "The Voice in Chinese". I dare not think about winning the championship. I know how much I am. My main purpose is to promote, show my works, and let more people People like my work."

Dong Huanyu spoke frankly in front of Yang Qian.

He is really smart, he knows that he looks like a scheming man and is easily jealous of others, but he is so frank that Yang Qian really has a good impression of him.

Of course, original singers still have to use their works to speak for themselves!

After Yang Qian nodded to him, he began to listen carefully to the song he asked him to listen to.

The song is called "Leaving Home".

Looking at the title of the song, we all know that this is a song about missing my hometown.

While listening to the flickering prelude, Yang Qian slid the software's lyrics subtitles, wanting to see how Dong Huanyu's lyrics were written.

For him now, what he is best at is not composing and arranging music. He may not be very sure about originality, but writing is his old profession. Therefore, every time Yang Qian listens to a song, he always I want to read the lyrics first.

The lyrics are written very straightforwardly, and the level of rhyme is unacceptable in Yang Qian's opinion, because the rhymes are always "I, Le". , at this rhyming level, the poems written by elementary school students may be better than him!
And there are some inexplicable words, such as "sanctified", can this word be used on yourself?Expressing his perfunctory and impatience towards his parents, using casual and indifferent, Yang Qian felt that it was more in line with the context.

But is the lyrics of this song just a matter of one or two words?
Yang Qian felt that there was something wrong with the whole poem, and even Yang Qian felt that the front part was very emotional, but the latter part was filled with some inexplicable sentences and vocabulary for the sake of rhyming and complaining.

Of course, when Yang Qian heard Dong Huanyu start to rap later, he understood why there were so many moaning and clueless sentences.

Understanding does not mean understanding!

what the hell!

I want to lose my phone to you!

After seeing too many amazing lyric works, Yang Qian can't stand or listen to such works!

But he couldn't stop watching...

When others ask you for advice sincerely, you can't say that the other party is useless, right?

Still have to pick some good things to say, and give the other party some positive encouragement.

such as:

Emotional sincerity - very straightforward to analyze that I cheated my parents, and I was heartbroken, isn't it sincere?
Express directly - the whole vernacular...

And... no more!

Yang Qian couldn't think of how else to praise, because he really couldn't listen to this song!

Not to mention the lyrics, even the singing skills, Yang Qian can pick out many faults.

His breathing was unsteady, he was panting heavily, and the feeling of taking a breath almost jumped out of the earphones and fell on Yang Qian's hair.

The switch between falsetto and real tone is very blunt, just like the feeling of several people singing in a boy group, each in a different tune.

Articulation...Yang Qian doesn't even know how to complain about this articulation!
He felt that the singing was messed up.

Even for some raps, he didn't sing all the words in the lyrics, and he sang several words in one sound, and he couldn't hear clearly.

The most outrageous thing is that the word "Parent" is in the rap, and Yang Qian heard him sing "Papa"!
Although he tried his best to turn it around, Yang Qian felt that his tongue was tied...

Good at singing!
Yang Qian seems to have turned Dong Huanyu to Bowen School of Jincheng Middle School, and asked him to follow those children to learn singing skills for a few years and then let him come back.

What is "Chinese Voice" at this level?
Yang Qian is very entangled now, Dong Huanyu asked him to give guidance, he doesn't know how to give guidance tactfully.

"How is it? Is the writing not very good? Problems with the composition? Or the lyrics? Teacher Yang, just say it, it doesn't matter!"

Seeing Yang Qian's frown slightly, Dong Huanyu asked nervously.

Yang Qian took a deep breath.

Blood pressure is a little high.

Is it just poorly written?
Is it just a problem somewhere?
Do you really want me to just say it?

(End of this chapter)