Reckless man of entertainment who started from a novel

Chapter 374 Picking up the pen and paper again, the senior brother is back!
East China Communication University, Literary Club, since the instructor Pang Feng interpreted Li Xiang's series of literary works,

Not only did he have a large number of fans on the Internet, he became a star teacher, and he also made the literature club more and more famous in Communication University of East China.

Many students joined the literary club admiringly. This year's new club recruits students, and a large part of the new students apply to join the student because of Li Xiang.

For those teenagers with literary dreams, it is a very good thing to join the literature club, get in touch with Mr. Pang Feng at close range, and listen to him explain the profound meaning of Li Xiang's articles face to face.

Therefore, this year's literature club has a breakthrough in the number of students enrolled in previous years, and it has become the club with the largest number of people in East China Communication University.

After the National Day, the first-year freshmen also began to gradually adapt to the life of the university. Of course, they knew that their seniors were making history in the short story activities.

And this period of time is also the time when the literature club holds the most activities. Teacher Pang Feng will hold seminars every now and then.Analyzing track works, many people listened with gusto.

In the lecture theater, there were crowds of people, and there were many students sitting in the aisle. Pang Feng walked to the podium with a thermos cup, turned on the projector, and said to everyone:
"The novel we are appreciating today is the work released by your seniors on the seventh track of the short story event half an hour ago. Its name is Ordained."

Pang Feng said: "I'll give you half an hour, analyze it carefully, and write a review for me."

"The literature club is not strict in recruiting new students, but for you freshmen, I also want to weigh in which range your level is, so that I can explain it more thoroughly."

When Teacher Pang Feng said this, everyone in the audience hurriedly took out their notebooks, clicked on the short story activity website, and read them attentively.

Pang Feng sat quietly on the podium, unscrewed the thermos cup, blowing the hot air, and took a sip of tea.

He is not the kind of person who wants to become famous in the literary world, but he loves literature, so he is willing to be the instructor.

Pang Feng thought that it would be difficult to maintain the literary society as it was, but unexpectedly, under the leadership of Li Xiang, there was a wave of literature boom.

The status of the literature club has also risen, and as the instructor of the literature club, he has been commended by the school leaders many times. He can do what he wants to do, and he can also receive praise and applause. Why not do it?

For the current life, Pang Feng is simply satisfied and couldn't be more satisfied.

【Uncle returned home according to the agreed date, and brought a short shirt with a monk collar that he was wearing himself, and asked Ming Ziniang to make it smaller and put it on for Ming Zi.

Mingzi wore this monk's short shirt, the purple trousers he wore at home, and a pair of new cloth shoes barefoot. He kowtowed to his father and mother, and then left with his uncle.

When he was in school, he gave him a scientific name, Ming Hai.Uncle said, there is no need to change it.So "Ming Hai" changed from scientific name to legal name.

across a lake.What a big lake.

through a county.

The county town is really lively: the official salt shop, the tax bureau, butcher shops with pigs hanging in rows, a donkey grinding sesame seeds, the smell of small sesame oils all over the street, cloth shops, shops selling jasmine powder and hair oil, Those who sell velvet flowers, those who sell silk threads, those who sell plasters, sugar blowers, snake charmers... He wants to see everything.

Uncle pushed him hard: "Go quickly. Go fast."

When they reached a river, a boat was waiting for them.

There was a slender uncle in his fifties on the boat, and a girl about Mingzi's age was squatting on the bow, peeling a lotus pod and eating it.

Ming Zi and his uncle sat in the cabin, and the boat sailed away.

Mingzi heard someone talking to him, it was that girl.

"Is it you who want to become a monk in the water chestnut nunnery?"

Akiko nodded.

"Being a monk requires burning and vomiting. Aren't you afraid?"

Akiko didn't know how to answer, so she shook her head vaguely.

"what's your name?"

"Ming Hai."

"At home?"

"It's Mingzi."

"Mingzi. My name is Xiaoyingzi. We are neighbors. My house is next to the water chestnut nunnery.—Here you are."

Xiaoyingzi threw the leftover half of the lotus pod to Ming Hai, and Xiao Mingzi peeled off the shell of the lotus pod and ate it one by one.

The uncle paddled with one oar, only to hear the sound of the oars splashing water: "Wow--xu. Wow--xu."]

Half an hour passed quickly, and many students wrote seven or eight hundred words of appreciation. They raised their hands to speak enthusiastically with a confident silence.

Peng Feng nodded slightly, apparently very happy with the scene in front of him, he casually named a student in the front row: "It's just you, tell me."

"Yes." The girl with the ponytail stood up, took a deep breath, and expressed her opinion:

"The Ordnance is a prose novel full of poetic flavor. What it expresses is neither a major theme nor a dramatic conflict with ups and downs in the storyline.

The first love between Minghai and Xiaoyingzi has never encountered ups and downs. When Li Xiang described this relationship, he focused on expressing his healthy and clear poetic state through subtle, restrained and interesting details.

For example, it is written that Xiaoyingzi left a series of footprints on the field ridge, "five small toes, the soles of the feet are flat, the heels are thin, and the arch of the foot is missing." After Ming Hai saw it, "I felt itchy in my heart. This string of beautiful footprints messed up the little monk's heart."

Not only does "The Ordnance" have no dramatic conflicts, but it actually doesn't have a complete storyline throughout.

At the beginning of the novel, I write about Minghai who became a monk in the Chuchesis Temple, the local customs related to monks, the process of Minghai becoming a monk, the way of life in the nunnery, the living conditions of Xiaoyingzi’s family, the love between Minghai and Xiaoyingzi, and the "ordination" mentioned in the title. , does not appear until the end of the novel.

This kind of eclectic description of "life flow" seems to have a loose and disordered structure on the surface, but in fact it has its inner order, creating a quiet and poetic literary atmosphere.

In addition, the descriptions of local scenery, scenery, characters, customs and other details of life in the novel are full of appreciation and playfulness. "

Pang Feng waved him to sit down, and said with a smile, "Anyone else want to add?"

"I, I." A teenager with glasses shouted eagerly.

"Okay, then this classmate." Pang Feng waved his hand.

"Thank you, teacher." He adjusted the frame of the mirror, got up and said his opinion: "I think the narration method of this ordination written by Sword God is worth learning.

In terms of narrative, Dao Shen adopts the third-person objective narrative perspective and uses a lot of interludes.

When summarizing other minor characters, the novel adopts the author's perspective, but when focusing on Mingzi and Xiaoyingzi, it introduces Mingzi and Xiaoyingzi's own perspective.

For example, Mingzi went to the water chestnut nunnery with his uncle when he became a monk: "I passed a lake. It's such a big lake..." What Mingzi wrote was what Mingzi saw, heard, and felt in his heart.

Xiaoyingzi sent Mingzi to Shanyin Temple to receive a precept. The description of Shanyin Temple was completely seen from Xiaoyingzi's eyes: "It's such a big temple. The threshold of the temple gate is higher than Xiaoyingzi's arm... Good guy, this is humming The General and the Four Heavenly Kings are more than three feet high, and they are all brand new... Once you enter, it is chilly. There is golden light everywhere."

The tone and tone used to describe the environment here are completely Xiaoyingzi's.

Taking advantage of the change of narrative perspective, the author uses the characters' own actions, feelings, and language without describing the characters' images and personalities in detail, so that readers can appreciate the health, liveliness, and clarity of their hearts. "

"En." Pang Feng nodded uncontrollably, with a hint of admiration in his eyes, he put the vacuum flask on the podium, stood up, and finally asked, "Is there anyone else who has a different opinion?"

"Yes." The classmate sitting in the aisle hurriedly got up: "Teacher, I have something to add."

"Oh?" This kind of classroom atmosphere is simply a kind of enjoyment, Pang Feng loves this kind of life to death.

"Then tell me."

"Yes." The student spread out his handwritten draft and said, "I think the language characteristics of the precepts are also worth discussing.

The language of "The Precepts" is simple and unadorned, concise and lively. Colloquial vocabulary such as "clear and bright", "slippery", "gezhengzheng", and short but precise dialogues enhance the descriptive effect and highlight the character of the characters.

At the same time, the language of "The Precepts" can be subtle and poetic.

The scene description at the end "Yingzi jumped to the middle cabin, and the two oars quickly paddled into the reeds.

The reed flowers just spit out new ears... soft, slippery, like a string of silk threads emitting silver light... some places have knotted cattail sticks, bright red, like small candles.

Green duckweed, purple duckweed... Wild water chestnut has small white flowers with four petals.

Startled a green pile bird, rubbing the reed ears, and flew away from Lulu", the combination of images is like a picture that is freely swayed and has an elegant structure.

"The reed flowers spit out new spikes" symbolizes the hazy love between Minghai and Xiaoyingzi; Lu Feiyuan, on the other hand, expresses the release of the character's mood after he confesses his love. "

The smile on Pang Feng's face could not be stopped anymore. These members of the literature club were very spiritual, which made him happy to see Lie Xin. The students analyzed the meaning behind the precepts.

Coincidentally, not only Li Xiang chooses to describe love when faced with the topic of obscurity, but even Yao Chongguang, who is over fifty years old, chooses to write about love as his entry point.

The title of his short story is Xiaofang.

At his age, he recalled the hazy and sweet love when he was young.

Yao Chongguang's sharp brushstrokes in the past have become gentle, as if a very oppressive mountain suddenly collapsed and turned into a trickle, flowing through the hearts of everyone.

At that time, the sun was just right, the breeze was not dry, he was still young, and the person he liked was by his side.

The beautiful memories, and him in the memories, have fascinated countless readers.

Everyone was surprised that Yao Chongguang's short stories could be written so well. If Li Xiang wrote about the present, then Yao Chongguang wrote about the past.

The good memories are far better than the present.

Because memories have his natural filter.

"Xiaofang" is only tens of thousands of words in length, the storyline is not complicated, and the love of that era is very pure.

hazy?
It is indeed hazy.

In the end, the protagonist didn't even dare to say "I love you".

But is the story good?
Beautiful.

It is so beautiful that everyone haggles over it, and it is so beautiful that everyone is overwhelmed by it.

In a certain period of time, his number of votes even briefly surpassed Li Xiang, ranking first.

That's right.

This is Yao Chongguang's true strength.

Not to be underestimated.

It's a pity that he ran into Li Xiang's trump card.

It happened that Wang Zengqi was ordained.

The killer feature is not just talk.

When the story of the precepts is revealed to everyone, if "Xiaofang" is a trickle, then "The Precepts" is a water town in the south of the Yangtze River.

The reader is no longer a person who experiences it personally, but a bystander.

They witnessed a period of green love.

The votes of the two are increasingly stalemate, but countless netizens on the Internet have very consistent evaluations of the two.

There are almost zero negative reviews on the whole network.

They both boarded the headlines of Weibo hot search list.

In the seventh track, the two are evenly divided, and there are no other people in the eyes of countless readers.

No matter how good their writing is and how novel their angles are, they all look so pale and powerless in front of Li Xiang and Yao Chongguang.

Only then did many netizens discover that Yao Chongguang is the proud disciple of Master Mo Ziyuan. He has been in a high position throughout his journey. Before Li Xiang, he was the leading master of modern poetry in the entire Chinese literary world.

But at his youngest and most frivolous stage, he became famous for his short stories.

When people found Yao Chongguang's articles decades ago from old paper piles, they realized that he is actually very powerful.

On the land of Xiangxi, the red sun is rising, another day of sunrise, and another day of new vitality.

Shen Lian sat leisurely on the rocking chair, breathing in the fragrance of flowers and plants given by this land, the corners of his mouth couldn't stop rising, thinking——his senior brother finally came back.

If a person who only wants to climb up, returns to the right path, picks up the pen, and embarks on the road walked decades ago, how strong will he be?
Nobody knows.

No one knows how much ink Yao Chongguang still has in his stomach.

But just this "Xiaofang" surprised countless people.

Did the short story campaign fail?

In a way, yes.

After all, all the scenery on the stage set up by Yao Chongguang was occupied by Li Xiang.

But did he lose?
Not at all.

At this critical moment, Yao Chongguang stepped forward.

Shirtless.

As soon as "Xiaofang" came out, public opinion showed a reversal trend.

Everyone's evaluation of him was surprisingly high.

He even thought that even if he lost, it would be an honor to lose.

Many netizens left messages on Yao Chongguang's Weibo, hoping that he would continue to write down the unfinished stories decades ago, and put all his complaints into writing.

Yao Chongguang's Weibo account gained more than 300 million followers in three days.

Many netizens broke the casserole and asked the end, wanting to know who Xiaofang is.

Shoujie and Xiaofang have been occupying the top ten most searched positions on Weibo for two full days.

Although the gap in the number of votes between the two gradually widened, Li Xiang still had the upper hand in the end.

The final result was freshly released, just when everyone felt sorry for Yao Chongguang.

Weibo, as if someone had dropped a depth bomb, the trending searches were quickly occupied, and a shocking melon appeared in front of everyone.

(End of this chapter)