Rebirth of the era of struggle

Chapter 129 Listen to me, cut it

Small supermarket.

sushi place.

Honey Snow Ice City.

Braised Chicken and Rice.

Thoughts popped up in Lu Yang's mind, even the massage for the blind popped up.

shook his head.

Lu Yang decided to go back and think about it slowly. After the exams, the winter vacation will be over. Even if he wants to do business, he will have to wait until the school starts next year.

After going to the sales department with Xu Fengnian and signing the contract, Lu Yang now owns the ownership of these two facades. As for other things, let Xu Fengnian do the work. These are the responsibilities that a qualified intermediary should have.

"Congratulations, Brother Lu."

When handing over the key to Lu Yang, Xu Fengnian said the same thing.

"There is nothing to congratulate, just two fronts."

Lu Yang didn't care.

He can't say that looking at the numbers in the bank card is an eyesore, it's too pretentious.

Xu Fengnian didn't know what to say. I'm afraid I won't say such a chic thing in my life. It's just two facades... If I can afford one, I won't be able to sleep for a few days because of excitement.

People cannot be compared with each other.

However, in Xu Fengnian's mind, the idea of ​​hugging his thigh became more firm, as long as Lu Yang thought of him when buying a house, Xu Fengnian had a hunch that this time probably wouldn't be the last time.

After recovering, Xu Fengnian asked, "Brother Lu, do you need decoration? I can introduce it for you."

Knowing that the agency has a lot of resources, Lu Yang hesitated for a moment, and said, "That's fine, I haven't figured out what to do yet, just install the water and electricity, and just do some simple decoration."

"It's simple, Brother Lu, don't worry, the person I introduced must be reliable."

With the idea of ​​holding his thighs tight, Xu Fengnian has no idea of ​​making a profit in this regard.

He picked up his phone and quickly contacted the decoration team.

Three hundred and one square meters, the simplest decoration.

After the two stores are installed, it costs less than 3 yuan, which is too cheap compared to the 10,000+, or even 10,000+ residential decoration.

After signing the decoration contract, Lu Yang gave the deposit and gave Xu Fengnian a red envelope as usual before returning to school.

As for the progress of the renovation, it was only over 2 yuan, and Lu Yang didn't intend to keep an eye on it, but just told Xu Fengnian to go and have a look if he had nothing to do.

In the next few days, Lu Yang seldom went to the company with the excuse of final review.

Although Lu Xiaoyu doubted whether Lu Yang wanted to be a hands-off shopkeeper again, but the end-of-term review excuse was a good one, and Lu Xiaoyu didn't know how to refute it.

He can only take responsibility for the company by himself, and only contact Lu Yang when there are major decisions to be made.

504 in the bedroom.

Lu Yang is giving Zhang Daoming Amway his own website.

"Well, the website I recommend is still useful."

"It's okay, but the content is a little less."

Zhang Daoming sat on a chair, hugged his computer, flipped through the website, and found that there were some comics he had read, he had already read the latest chapters of Return of Cultivation and another Demon King, and was waiting for an update.

"Less now, more in the future."

Lu Yang also looked at the webpage.

have to say.

Lu Xiaoyu is a talent, last time he just mentioned it casually, Lu Xiaoyu didn't know where to find so many foreign cartoons, and didn't know if she used her genius group.

With so many comics, the CC comics platform does not seem so monotonous, and the company finally has something to sell.

A studio that makes comics sounds petty no matter how you hear it, but opening a comic platform sounds lofty.

"Daoxian, I heard that you are writing a novel recently?"

Lu Yang asked curiously.

Zhang Daoming and Lu Feng were in the same class. When Lu Yang played basketball last time, Lu Yang heard Lu Feng mention it once. Lu Yang didn't expect that besides himself, there was another person who wrote web articles in the computer department.

"Yeah, it's updated at Qidian, and it hasn't been signed yet."

Talk about your own novel.

Zhang Daoming is interested.

He logged into the website, opened his author background, and asked Lu Yang to look at the data.

The book is called Universiade Totem, and it already has more than 7 words, but there are only 25 of them in the collection, and there are very few recommendation votes. If the author of an ordinary newcomer is called Pujie, Zhang Daoming is not qualified to be called It's called rushing to the street.

Just a literary lover.

You can't even use the word senior.

Maybe he also felt that his data was too bad. Zhang Daoming said a little embarrassedly: "Readers don't like to read books that have not been signed, and they don't like to vote. They are afraid that they will be cut off at any time."

"Haven't come to the station yet?"

Lu Yang asked.

Zhang Daoming shook his head: "I haven't come all this time. I plan to apply for a contract after writing [-] words. If it doesn't work, I can only cut off and start a new book."

"Oh."

Lu Yang shook his head.

I probably know the level of Zhang Daoming's novel in my heart. Generally speaking, when a novel is written to six or seven thousand words, it will appear on the background of the editor. Several editors cross-review the manuscript. As long as the writing is good, any editor can When it comes to signing a contract, there are very few cases where there will be some secret casting of the pearl.

There are so many words that have not been signed yet. It can only be said that all editors are not optimistic. The probability that this kind of book can be published is one in ten thousand.

Even if you sign the contract with [-] words of consolation, you can't recommend any resources.

"I'll read your book."

Lu Yang used his computer to search for the title of the book, and opened Chapter 1.

After reading the first few lines, he couldn't help shaking his head.

Newcomer.

As expected of a rookie.

Zhang Daoming actually used all of the crucial parts of the opening to describe the background, and the writing was so cloudy and foggy, such as the battle between gods and demons, and the collapse of the earth, which seemed to be inscrutable, but in fact he looked confused.

Then look down.

Seven or eight characters appeared in Chapter 1, and the key has nothing to do with the protagonist.

Who is the protagonist?

Lu Yang didn't know yet.

He went on to click, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4...

Lu Yang finally found the protagonist in Zhang Daoming's book.

"Daoxian, listen to me, cut it."

If there was still a glimmer of hope that he could be rescued, Lu Yang would not say such hurtful words.

"Brother Lu, is it really that bad?"

Well known.

Newcomer Xiaobai writes novels, and he feels that he can subscribe to [-], and beat Wubai, but Daoxian is in a better situation. He has read so many novels in Qidian, and he knows that writing novels is not easy, especially without [-] words. The signing site was short, which took a big blow to his confidence.

"To be honest, you may not be happy." Lu Yang glanced at Zhang Daoming.

Zhang Daoming shook his head: "Brother Lu, tell me, I am already very happy if you can give your opinion."

"OK then."

Lu Yang pointed to Zhang Daoming's book on the computer, and said, "I won't talk about the title of the book. If you read the fire books on the best-seller list, you will know where the difference is. Let's talk about the content, not let you write it. Three golden chapters, what did you do in Chapter 1, such a crucial place, you used it to introduce the background, and the writing was so vague that readers didn't know what to do, how could you keep it?"

"Honestly let the protagonist Chapter 1 appear, isn't it good?"

"Don't use a few sentences in classical Chinese. Novice readers won't be able to understand them, and those who understand them will scold you for using the wrong grammar."

……

Zhang Daoming was dumbfounded.

I didn't expect my novel to be so bad.

But after thinking about it, the problems Lu Yang mentioned seemed to exist.

"Brother Lu, the opinions you just mentioned are very good. If you also write novels, maybe you can become popular."

Zhang Daoming closed his computer.

At first, he was hesitant to cut off his own novel, but after hearing Lu Yang's words, he no longer had any hope.

writing a novel.

It really wasn't an easy task.

But why did Lu Yang know this.

"Ha ha."

Lu Yang didn't say much.

He clicked on the Writer's Center and said, "Look at this."

Zhang Daoming came over and found that the webpage had already jumped to the author's page. Seeing the content inside, Zhang Daoming's eyes widened in disbelief.

"Lu...Brother Lu, did you write the book Returning from Cultivation?"

Zhang Daoming stood up, the computer was almost overturned by him.

"Don't be so excited?"

Lu Yang persuaded.

"I'm just a novel writer, maybe a little better than you."

Obviously, Lu Yang's modesty could not calm Zhang Daoming down. The writer he admired was right in front of him, and he was still his classmate. This feeling can be imagined. After a while, Zhang Daoming came to his senses and said, "Lu Brother, Brother Lu... the deer in the distance, no wonder why... I never thought of it."

"No wonder our monitor still has your book."

Reminiscent of seeing the published book of Return from Cultivation from Chen Qiuyue, Zhang Daoming understood it all at once.

"Daoxian, writing a novel is not an easy task. You can't write it as soon as your head is hot. You must understand the market demand in advance and read more bestsellers."

"You still have some writing skills, but your writing skills are too raw. If you practice more, you will still have a chance. Let's cut this book. If the next book is well written and signed, I can give you a chapter."

Zhang Daoming said excitedly: "Brother Lu, I'll listen to you. After I write the next chapter, I'll show you first and give me pointers."

"Okay, but these days I still focus on reviewing, and the exam is coming soon." Lu Yang did not refuse, this is a small matter, Zhang Daoming is quite a good person, and he has mentioned several times to the CC comics platform in the past few days. recommendations, two of which were adopted.

The exam is less than a week away.

There is one more thing left undone.

I thought about it.

Lu Yang came to the office with his computer.

After searching inside, Lu Yang saw the C language teacher. Although he hadn't attended a few C language classes, it wasn't that he didn't even know what the teacher looked like.

Unlike how he treated Qiao Qiming, Lu Yang did not simply and rudely use gifts to solve the problem. According to his observation, this teacher is a technical geek, and he is not the same person as Qiao Qiming.

You need to do what you like with this kind of person.

Lu Yang walked into the office, came to the C language teacher's desk, and said, "Mr. Yang, hello."

"You...you are..."

Yang Guang looked up at Lu Yang, and found that he didn't know this student.

"My name is Lu Yang, and I'm in the second computer class."

Lu Yang introduced himself.

Hearing Lu Yang's name, Yang Guang's expression changed, and he said in a bad tone: "You are Lu Yang, that student who has never attended a class of mine, what do you come to see me for?"

Seeing that Lu Yang was just holding a computer bag, he was not here to give gifts, otherwise he would definitely drive this student out.

Don't usually go to class, and give gifts when the final exam is coming, isn't this a crooked way?

"Teacher, it's not that I haven't attended your class. I've been to school a few times. You may have forgotten it." Lu Yang didn't care about the change in Yang Guang's expression. There will be a good face.

Generally speaking, as an external teacher, Yang Guang is quite qualified, unlike other teachers who only care about salary and bonus, regardless of whether students learn or not.

"Mr. Yang, this time I'm here, I have a few professional questions I want to ask you."

Lu Yang stated his purpose.

Yang Guang was a little surprised.

In his impression, Lu Yang should be the kind of student who knows nothing.

"what is the problem?"

Yang Guang put away the homework he was correcting and asked.

"Some problems with the SQL Server database."

After speaking, Lu Yang put the computer he brought on the desk.

(End of this chapter)