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Chapter 485 If you don’t like it, you just don’t like it, you need a reason (14)

After reading the script, Shen Changlin thought about it, and then said, "Two suggestions."

"You say."

"First, put the background of the story ten years ago..."

"what?"

Yang Qing didn't understand...

Shen Changlin explained: "Times have changed, let's just say how much money can be contained in a bag, and how much can four people take away?

Nowadays, with the internet and the current economic crimes, no one collects money directly, and they all transfer away with a few numbers on the Internet. At this time, you rush in with knives and guns, and use the primitive violence of cold weapons, it will appear obsolete.From the perspective of human technology, this kind of violence that directly engages in robbery will become less and less common. "

"... "

Yang Qing nodded...

Indeed, robbery itself is a story full of originality. In the 90s and [-]s, a large number of films were shot in the United States, and a large number of films were also shot in Hong Kong.

But when we arrived in [-], when we came to film such a story, he had a sense of dislocation of the times, a sense of logical loss of control, which was actually a sense of dislocation of time and space.

"Second... Your story has too many mistakes in the middle!"

The so-called drop means to let go of energy...

The whole plot of "Chongqing Hot Pot" is based on the idea that a group of people in trouble dig a tunnel to the bank vault, but they did not expect to encounter real robbers.

The main scene is only the bank robbery, because this is the core of the central idea in the play; it is cut into two parts, with the introduction at the beginning and the climax at the end.

The structure setting is pretty good, but the rest of the middle is a bit cold and white, hesitating...

The story is clear, but many scenes make people distracted.

For a long section in the middle, when the tunnel is opened, the energy will be vented.

why?

Because there is no plot point to keep up with, go to the next plot point!

In fact, the introduction of the heroine, that is, the character Xiaohui, took too long and seemed to be muddled;
Moreover, Xiaohui's handling of this character is not very satisfactory, and whenever she appears on the stage, she will definitely lose her energy!
"You let the robbers see the holes in the vault at the beginning, and the audience also knows that their efforts to plug these holes are wasted, so they really want to see how it will develop?
As a result, the plot has not progressed, and in fact it is a bit off track.

Telling a bunch of history... makes no sense! "

"My suggestion is to make Xiaohui a big boss behind the scenes!"

"what?"

"Ah what? She works in a bank and acts as an internal response. The original plan was to come forward and rescue the kidnapped colleagues when the robbers came in. After being kidnapped, the five of them escaped together... But then they met three old classmates. , learned of their plan to dig a hole... She tried to make the two sides meet, and both sides suffered losses, and she escaped with all the money alone... What a perfect plan!"

"... "

Yang Qing froze for a moment, then stretched her thumbs up: "It's still awesome!"

Shen Changlin smiled and ignored him: "Then the heroine is very important, find an actress who is suitable to play the femme fatale... Or she looks very weak, with a face like the Madonna of the Lotus Flower, but when she is ruthless, it makes people shudder..."

"...I want Shi Shi to play the role of Xiaohui!"

"Shi Shi...haven't acted as a villain before, so I'll ask her later."

……

When Shi Shi came over, Shen Changlin and Yang Qing were chatting about the Sichuan Army...

"Our focus is not on war, or five directors, it is impossible to focus on war... My suggestion is, you shoot a piece of Sichuan Army out of Sichuan..."

"Okay, it just so happens that we have a lot of stories over there!"

"Tell me!"

"What impressed me deeply was the story of a Taoist priest going down the mountain to join the army..."

Shen Changlin looked at him...hesitated for a few seconds, then nodded: "...Yes, let's shoot a real Taoist descending the mountain!"

Yang Qing looked at his expression and thought there was something wrong: "...what's wrong?"

"fine…"

Poetry Master... It seems that there is also a "Taoist Down the Mountain", which will be released next year...

If Yang Qing shoots, will it be too slap in the face?

The story Yang Qing told is very simple, that is, a middle-aged Taoist priest goes down the mountain once a month to buy food on the mountain, and every time he has to eat at a breakfast point, and then he learns the news that the Sichuan Army has left Sichuan, thinks for a while, returns to the mountain, and takes his feet. In entanglement, he resolutely went down the mountain to fight against Japan...

Looking at the back of the Taoist priest going down the mountain to resist the war, the little apprentice couldn't help asking: "Master, when will you come back?"

"... Then you might as well film the story of Taoist Li Yuan!"

"Li Yuantong?"

"An anti-Japanese Taoist... very famous..."

"...I'll go back and check the information..."

"Well, it's better to combine the story just now with Li Daochang..."

"what's the topic?"

"It's nothing... Yo, who is this?"

Well, Shi Shi brought another girlfriend...

To be precise, it's not a girlfriend, it's an employee, Kan Qingzi!

"Director Shen...Director Yang...I'm Kan Qingzi..."

Kan Qingzi said hello politely, Shen Changlin and Yang Qing nodded with a smile, and the girl sat down.

"Whatever you want to eat, just order, they pay the bill!"

"…it is good."

Shen Changlin looked at Yang Qing, "Shi Shi, do you have any idea to play the villain?"

"…I?"

Shi Shi was quite surprised...

"Is it a new work directed by Yang Qing?"

"Yes...forget it," Shen Changlin shook his head, looked at Yang Qing, and said, "Let's find an actress who can speak Chongqing dialect...Yang Qing, who is the most famous actress in Chongqing?"

Yang Qing didn't even think about it: "Liu Xiaoqing!"

"(ーー゛)"

Shen Changlin looked at him like this...

Yang Qing was a little embarrassed: "Too old..."

"Actresses from Chongqing: Yin Tao, Chen Zhihan, Huang Xiaolei, Gan Wei, Xiong Naijin, Zhang Xinyu..."

Kan Qingzi on the side took out his mobile phone and searched it, then handed it to Shi Shi, who read it...

"Stop!" Hearing Huang Xiaolei's name, Shen Changlin yelled to stop: "Huang Xiaolei..."

Yang Qing hesitated: "She's a comedian..."

Shen Changlin waved his hand: "...Let me tell you, the best thing about me is my eyesight... If you don't believe me, call her over for an audition, ask her to cut her hair short, and put on that dark lip gloss..."

Shi Shi corrected: "That's not called blackening, it's called black rose color!"

"…it's the same!"

"...Okay." Yang Qing nodded, and continued: "Liu Bo, I want to find Chen Kun, Yu Entai for glasses, and Brother Hu for Xu Dong... What do you think?"

Shen Changlin didn't raise his head: "...Chen Kun is fine!"

"Ah? Chen Kun is from Chongqing!"

Shi Shi interjected: "He doesn't like Chen Kun, change someone else!"

"Chen Kun...why?"

Yang Qing didn't understand, there are still people who hate Chen Kun?
"If you don't like it, you don't like it, do you need a reason?"

Shen Changlin asked back.

Yang Qing was a little embarrassed, Shen Changlin asked back: "You already have Brother Hu, why use Chen Kun?"

"But Xu Dong is the male number two...the male number one must be able to hold him down!"

"It's simple, find Liao Fan or Qin Hao, they will definitely keep Brother Hu at bay!"

(End of this chapter)