My childhood sweetheart has been a little weird lately
Chapter 45 Reader Group Number, and Sui Sui Nian
Chapter 45 Reader Group Number, and Sui Sui Nian
To be honest, as a new author, I often feel confused, especially when faced with readers' comments.
For example, when I wrote that Su Bai cooks in a non-stick pan, someone commented that a big iron pan should be used, because only a large iron pan has gas.
About "pot gas".
The first time I heard this word was when I was still young, I came to an automobile factory in the Pearl River Delta for an internship. Six yuan, eight yuan with ham.
One day, I ordered a fried rice noodles with ham. The boy who fried the rice noodles had amazing arm strength, and he was dazzled by shaking the spoon. The big black and shiny iron pot complemented the fierce fire on the stove.
An old aunt passing by told me with enthusiasm that this is pot gas.
But the old aunt didn't know that the non-stick pan has an advantage, that is, it is light.
When I was a child, my parents were busy with work, and I was cooking at home alone. I felt a headache for the big iron pot at home. At that time, the wish I made on Christmas Eve was to get a non-stick pot that was light, less oily, and could help me cook easily.
In view of the size of this gift, I specially wrote a note and put it on the bedside, asking Santa Claus:
"Please don't stuff nonstick pans up my socks."
I admit that the big iron pot does have pot gas, but in view of my childhood habit, I wrote that Su Bai cooks in a non-stick pan, and this does not seem to violate public order and good customs, so I personally think that similar plots are appropriate. Related evaluation, I do not make evaluation.
There is also a comment that I have a problem with the emotional relationship or the shaping of the character traits.
Leaving aside the style of writing, this is a very personal thing. I want to talk about what kind of story this is, and also to give readers peace of mind.
As the sentence on the copyright page tells readers:
"In fact, we have been in love for a long time, but we only found out after a long time."
The relationship between Su Bai and Xia Jiangyue was actually no different from that of a couple, except for the physical relationship.Su Bai's subconscious care for Xia Jiangyue, Xia Jiangyue's dependence on Su Bai...they are the people who are most familiar with each other, they understand each other, support each other, care about each other, and regard each other's life as part of their own life plan.
Occasionally there will be a little awkwardness, but it doesn't hurt.
I don't know what you guys think, at least I think that's how ideal love should be.
Then I hope to write their stories. During the hottest season of their lives, they sensed the feelings in their hearts, wanted to confirm each other’s intentions, made absurd guesses and temptations, and took advantage of the opportunity of entering a university campus and living together to create an ambiguous relationship. , Start their love.
As for the flesh and blood part of the work outside the love line, it is some fun college life. From a creative point of view, this is actually a bit laborious. According to my understanding, most authors will create an upgraded main line to fill in outside of love. The content, but I don’t like it, I think the main line of the upgrade stream is not compatible with the style of this book, so it’s better to write the protagonist’s reading honestly, reading is also a main line, right?
Then, I want to say that both Su Bai and Xia Jiangyue are not perfect, but they will gradually get better, no matter it is Brother Xia's awkward thoughts, or Su Bai's heaven-defying little mind.
The writing is ambiguous in the early stage, and the writing is greasy and crooked in the later stage, with interesting daily life throughout.
This is my plan.
Maybe some people don't like this style. It's normal. After all, I'm writing novels, not banknotes. I can't guarantee that everyone will like it.
So, for the comments about the core of the work, for example, the heroine is not good, let me write a straight ball, for example, the heroine is not cute at all, I want to tender her to death, for example, it is unscientific, they are so good Should have a child directly in chapter [-]...
Another example is that some people say that the supporting role is too plump...
I really don't want to argue with them, because no matter how much I explain, they won't give me money, and I will definitely not change it, because obviously someone likes what I wrote, if I change it, it will be a disappointment to them ?
It can only be said that you are not compatible with this book, which is a pity.
I usually don’t reply to them, but occasionally I reply with “You are right”, literature is not a math problem, and there is not only one solution, just be happy.
You are right, I am right, everyone is right, ah yes yes yes.
I sincerely hope that literary critics who have been affirmed by the author can live happily ever after.
Happy to fly forward~
……
Well, that's all for now.
And, don't guess whose vest I am, I'm really an amateur.
……
Also, I'm really a little busy, especially on weekends.Two more per day is a bit difficult, but one is definitely possible.
……
And again, this chapter doesn't count as an update (obviously).
……
And again, I opened a reader group, and added a qq group number to the introduction, everyone is welcome to come and play.
(End of this chapter)
To be honest, as a new author, I often feel confused, especially when faced with readers' comments.
For example, when I wrote that Su Bai cooks in a non-stick pan, someone commented that a big iron pan should be used, because only a large iron pan has gas.
About "pot gas".
The first time I heard this word was when I was still young, I came to an automobile factory in the Pearl River Delta for an internship. Six yuan, eight yuan with ham.
One day, I ordered a fried rice noodles with ham. The boy who fried the rice noodles had amazing arm strength, and he was dazzled by shaking the spoon. The big black and shiny iron pot complemented the fierce fire on the stove.
An old aunt passing by told me with enthusiasm that this is pot gas.
But the old aunt didn't know that the non-stick pan has an advantage, that is, it is light.
When I was a child, my parents were busy with work, and I was cooking at home alone. I felt a headache for the big iron pot at home. At that time, the wish I made on Christmas Eve was to get a non-stick pot that was light, less oily, and could help me cook easily.
In view of the size of this gift, I specially wrote a note and put it on the bedside, asking Santa Claus:
"Please don't stuff nonstick pans up my socks."
I admit that the big iron pot does have pot gas, but in view of my childhood habit, I wrote that Su Bai cooks in a non-stick pan, and this does not seem to violate public order and good customs, so I personally think that similar plots are appropriate. Related evaluation, I do not make evaluation.
There is also a comment that I have a problem with the emotional relationship or the shaping of the character traits.
Leaving aside the style of writing, this is a very personal thing. I want to talk about what kind of story this is, and also to give readers peace of mind.
As the sentence on the copyright page tells readers:
"In fact, we have been in love for a long time, but we only found out after a long time."
The relationship between Su Bai and Xia Jiangyue was actually no different from that of a couple, except for the physical relationship.Su Bai's subconscious care for Xia Jiangyue, Xia Jiangyue's dependence on Su Bai...they are the people who are most familiar with each other, they understand each other, support each other, care about each other, and regard each other's life as part of their own life plan.
Occasionally there will be a little awkwardness, but it doesn't hurt.
I don't know what you guys think, at least I think that's how ideal love should be.
Then I hope to write their stories. During the hottest season of their lives, they sensed the feelings in their hearts, wanted to confirm each other’s intentions, made absurd guesses and temptations, and took advantage of the opportunity of entering a university campus and living together to create an ambiguous relationship. , Start their love.
As for the flesh and blood part of the work outside the love line, it is some fun college life. From a creative point of view, this is actually a bit laborious. According to my understanding, most authors will create an upgraded main line to fill in outside of love. The content, but I don’t like it, I think the main line of the upgrade stream is not compatible with the style of this book, so it’s better to write the protagonist’s reading honestly, reading is also a main line, right?
Then, I want to say that both Su Bai and Xia Jiangyue are not perfect, but they will gradually get better, no matter it is Brother Xia's awkward thoughts, or Su Bai's heaven-defying little mind.
The writing is ambiguous in the early stage, and the writing is greasy and crooked in the later stage, with interesting daily life throughout.
This is my plan.
Maybe some people don't like this style. It's normal. After all, I'm writing novels, not banknotes. I can't guarantee that everyone will like it.
So, for the comments about the core of the work, for example, the heroine is not good, let me write a straight ball, for example, the heroine is not cute at all, I want to tender her to death, for example, it is unscientific, they are so good Should have a child directly in chapter [-]...
Another example is that some people say that the supporting role is too plump...
I really don't want to argue with them, because no matter how much I explain, they won't give me money, and I will definitely not change it, because obviously someone likes what I wrote, if I change it, it will be a disappointment to them ?
It can only be said that you are not compatible with this book, which is a pity.
I usually don’t reply to them, but occasionally I reply with “You are right”, literature is not a math problem, and there is not only one solution, just be happy.
You are right, I am right, everyone is right, ah yes yes yes.
I sincerely hope that literary critics who have been affirmed by the author can live happily ever after.
Happy to fly forward~
……
Well, that's all for now.
And, don't guess whose vest I am, I'm really an amateur.
……
Also, I'm really a little busy, especially on weekends.Two more per day is a bit difficult, but one is definitely possible.
……
And again, this chapter doesn't count as an update (obviously).
……
And again, I opened a reader group, and added a qq group number to the introduction, everyone is welcome to come and play.
(End of this chapter)
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