After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 141 Many Years Later

"No, it's not good to write like this. Everyone will definitely not be satisfied with this ending, and Yifei won't like it either. How should I change that?"

In front of the computer desk, Chen Tianhong put his hands on the keyboard, but he couldn't fly today, he had degenerated to the speed of coding in the previous life of Kawen.

Chen Tianhong is writing an ending for "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You". He has already changed it back and forth several times, but he is still not very satisfied.

Strictly speaking, this story is the first work he wrote in this world, because almost all his previous works were "borrowed".

In the previous life, there was a work called "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You", and the author's name was Feng Tang.However, this work in the previous life was not a novel, but rather a collection of prose poems.

The story of Qiushui and Xiaohong is actually from another novel by Feng Tang, called "B***J".

For this "B***J", Chen Tianhong would never "borrow" it, and he did not dare to write it, because the original work was too wild, and some of the sentences in it were very sensitive and explicit. It was harmonized by 404.

Moreover, the ending of the story in the original work is sad. Qiushui and Xiaohong were not together in the end, and in fact they never were.

Especially the poem "To the Oak Tree" by Shu Ting, which is not in the original work at all, but it was in the TV series in the previous life, but it is also different from the story Chen Tianhong is writing now.

Strictly speaking, the story he is writing now is brand new, and he only borrows the names of the hero and heroine.Adding "To the Oak Tree" to the storyline is also touched by Liu Yifei's love values, and naturally thinks of this very appropriate poem.

After thinking carefully for a while, Chen Tianhong finally thought of a satisfactory ending.

I have to say that after he came to this world, his writing skills have improved a lot. Firstly, this is due to the fact that he is a writer of novels, and he is regarded as an industry insider. Secondly, his teacher Cao Xingkui will often teach him writing experience. , coupled with Chen Tianhong's own hard work.

Adding all these together, Chen Tianhong's writing skills have fully enabled him to write a story of high quality.

Of course, "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You" can be recognized by many fans, and the two famous poems "To the Oak Tree" and "Broken Chapter" in the previous life also contributed a lot, especially the former, which can be said to be the finishing touch.

Half an hour later, Chen Tianhong put an end to "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You", because the original intention of this story was written for Liu Yifei, so the ending is satisfactory.

The word count of this story is not many, and the complete story is only about 2 words. Chen Tianhong didn't expect to make money, so he published it on the literature forum.

Next, Chen Tianhong logged into the literature forum and edited and updated this post.Then he took out his phone and sent Liu Yifei a message.

"Yi Fei, I finished writing the ending of the story and uploaded it, you can go and read it."

Soon, Liu Yifei replied to the message.

"Okay, Qiushui!"

There is also a loving and mischievous expression on the back.

Seeing what Liu Yifei called him, Chen Tianhong couldn't help smiling.

Liu Yifei likes this story very much, and just told Chen Tianhong that she is not as great as Xiao Hong, but she likes "To the Oak Tree" very much, and thinks this poem is about true love.

Xie Shiqi didn't know how many times she refreshed the post, waiting for the update is the most uncomfortable, especially when she sees something exciting.

Finally, after she refreshed the post again, the post was updated.

"It can be regarded as an update, but there are so few words!"

Xie Shiqi was very happy at first, but when she saw that there were not many words in the update, she pouted again.

And the following plot jumps a lot, and it doesn't continue to write down after the wedding, but directly comes a sentence many years later.

They came to old age together, and Xiao Hong was no longer ordinary at this time. Since the song "To the Oak Tree", she has also become a female poet. became a legend.

On this day, Qiushui and Xiao Hong came to the place where they fell in love at the invitation of their alma mater.

It was April at this time, and the spring color was deep. The flowers in the alma mater were red, willows and green, and the spring scenery was like a tide, and the flowers were like a sea.

Qiushui and Xiao Hong walked hand in hand in this strange but extremely familiar campus, long-lost memories came to mind.

Time flies by, and the trajectory of fate moves forward, but the traces of their youth will always exist.

They walked silently, I supported you, you led me, and walked slowly.

The two finally stopped in front of a lush oak tree.

Qiu Shui turned to look at Xiao Hong, at her strands of temple hair bleached by time, and at the emerald leaves of the oak tree.

"I think of your song "To the Oak Tree". Unfortunately, there is no kapok next to the oak tree in front of us. We are all old!"

Xiao Hong also looked at Qiu Shui, seeing the wrinkles on his face carved by the years, the hand holding Qiu Shui couldn't help but tighten again.

"But we are very happy! Isn't it! Qiushui. I want to hear that song you wrote. Can you still hum it now?"

Qiu Shui was startled, and memories rushed to his face.

I remember that at the wedding that day, when they confessed to each other, Xiao Hong wrote "To the Oak Tree" for him, and Qiushui also prepared a special gift for her.

This gift is also a poem he wrote, and Qiushui found a friend to compose this poem, and sang this love song at the wedding.

The title of this poem is "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You".

"Of course I can! Even if I forget all the poems I wrote, I won't forget this one. I'll hum it to you."

The spring sunshine passed through the branches and leaves of the oak tree and scattered on the two of them, and a song sounded softly.

"Finally I didn't hold onto my loneliness, let my heart quietly unlock,

The tide of heart gradually surges up, like a thawed glacier

I don't know how to describe you, the warmth stays in my heart

Close your eyes tightly and not let go of a trace of sweetness

I don't know how to describe me, only you make me happy

Even in a world of ice and snow, eyes full of spring

I don't know how to find you, spring is already here

I don't know how to describe you, the spring breeze is not as good as you.

During the singing, the two depended on each other.

"Qiu Shui, let's complete that poem!"

"You mean the song "Many Years Later" that we didn't finish?"

"Well, I thought about the follow-up."

"I thought about it too."

The two smiled at each other.

Qiu Shui groaned first.

"In a dusk with lingering afterglow, the clouds made the sky colorful. When we met unexpectedly in a certain place and recognized each other, the calm sea of ​​hearts was instantly turbulent, just like the first time we met."

"Do you remember those past events full of happiness?"

"Do you remember those days when we drove each other out of loneliness?"

"Do you remember the laughter that always echoed in your ears, and the beautiful youth that we wantonly swayed!"

"You suddenly smiled knowingly, and that smile reminded me of your beautiful image when you were young."

"I laughed too, time flies like water, but the light of love is still shining in our hearts."

"I really want to read the world of singing birds and fragrant flowers with you every time the sun rises in the east, and enjoy the scenery of high sky and light clouds together."

"I really want to experience the romance of high mountains and long rivers with you every sunset, and relive the unforgettable memories together."

"Cherish it! Time flies, don't sleep on loneliness and ignore the happiness in front of you."

"After many years, we are all old! If my heart was still beating at that time, I would have a dream, a distant and beautiful dream!"

Qiu Shui read the last sentence.

All of this is like a scene in a dream, I intend to write more, but in the end all the words are merged into one sentence, the life of silence, the life of chic, the life of dullness, the spring breeze is not as good as you, and the youth will live up to you.

The story ended, but Xie Shiqi couldn't calm down for a long time. She had read many novels, but she had never seen such an ending, which ended with two poems.

At this moment, Xie Shiqi just wants to say one thing. Hongwen, you are too romantic!

Especially the last song "Many Years Later" touched her too much.

Who wouldn't want to have such a love?

Who doesn't want to mingle with their lover and grow old hand in hand?
They understand each other deeply. This kind of love can vividly describe all the years in the past, can brighten the whole life, and can look back on the past in the last days without any regrets or regrets.

Because they will always be the same as they were at the beginning, falling in love at first sight.

Xie Shiqi wants to get married!She really wanted to get married, and once this thought arose, she couldn't suppress it any longer.

"Hongwen! Hongwen. This is the love you yearn for in your dreams, and it's not what we yearn for."

But is there a love like Qiushui and Xiao Hong in reality?

Yes, there must be, the story comes from reality, maybe this kind of love is staged in a certain corner of this world.

Although the story of "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You" is over, the popularity it has aroused on literary forums has not decreased but increased, especially the few poems involved in the story.

Some fans have already reposted these poems to the poetry group.

At this time, the first popular post in the poetry group was the one reposted by the first fan.

[A poem that is absolutely incomprehensible without reading the story. 】

At the beginning of reposting, although relying on the title to attract some people's attention, it didn't gain much popularity. It wasn't until Hongwen finished writing the story, and the post owner reposted a few poems, that the popularity rose. , and even professional poets in the circle also commented on the post.

[Dust rises and cities fall]: I didn't expect my post to be the most popular in the group, haha, thank you Hongwen!Dream come true, dream come true.

I saw a lot of people scolding me for the headline party, saying that "To the Oak Tree" can be understood without reading the story.Hehe, of course I agree with this, but who dares to pat your chest and say, you can understand it after just reading it once?Not hazy?Of course, not to mention professional poets!Don’t you all think that this poem is easier to understand when paired with a story, and Hongwen’s "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You" is not good-looking?
[Leaving the rest of the scene blank]: Well said the post owner, I was the first group of people to comment on the post. At first I could understand the general meaning of "To the Oak Tree", but I didn't understand the meaning of the oak tree and the kapok tree. Later, Only after reading the story do I understand.I just want to say one thing now, Hongwen is amazing, his poems and stories are good, and more importantly, his love values ​​are very positive. I like such a writer.

[Listen to the hustle and bustle]: "To the Oak Tree" is very well written, it can be regarded as the main line of the story.But the other poems are also very good!I personally like the song "Many Years Later" at the end. Although the artistic conception is a bit worse than "To the Oak Tree", it is simple and easy to understand, and I think spending the rest of my life hand in hand is more romantic than standing side by side.

[Three good students]: Well, the big brother upstairs said it well. There are four poems written in the story. The one I read most clearly is "Many Years Later". Hehe, the level of the student party is limited. Download the rest of the poems! No need for "To the Oak Tree", I think everyone's analysis is very clear, but the rest is still a bit confused.

[Old Poetry Mo]: Don't say that the student party is limited. It used to be fine, but forget it now!You must know that Hongwen is also a student, and he is really ashamed. The poems written by a student even surpass those of us old people in the poetry world.

Then I will briefly comment on the four-line short poem that appeared in the story. Although it has no name, it has a high artistic conception, and I personally like it very much.

"You stand on the bridge and watch the scenery, and people who watch the scenery look at you upstairs."

The first two sentences make people think of a picture when they look at it. When you stand on the bridge and look at the scenery, what scenery will everyone want to see next?

However, the pen and ink are not swayed in the description of the scenery, but this does not affect our imagination, for example, I will think of the flowing water, the cruise ship, the willow on the shore...

Then in the next sentence, another viewer appears, but he is looking at you, which is very interesting. In the same time and space, the characters and scenery remain the same, but the perceivable status has changed.In the first sentence, you are still the subject, watching the scenery, but in the second sentence, you change from the person watching the scenery to the person being watched. This is a very interesting and dramatic effect.

"The bright moon adorns your window, and you adorn other people's dreams"

These two sentences are the same as the first two sentences, and they are still the exchange relationship between subject and object, but the sentences are sublimated.When you are the subject, the moonlight by the window is the scenery you see, but at this moment, you have already entered someone else's dream and become the scenery she sees.

Generally speaking, these four-line poems give people a strong sense of imagery, as if an ink painting is right in front of our eyes, rich in meaning and delicate emotions,
There is a saying in our poetry circle, "A good poem can be read a hundred times", and these four short sentences are enough for us to read it many times, and it will definitely produce enduring artistic charm.

There are also these four sentences written at the beginning of the story, which are very suitable for the occasion!The male protagonist Qiushui admires the beauty of the female protagonist Xiao Hong by the window, but Xiao Hong is also in love with him upstairs. A few words fully express the deep feelings in the character's heart, and this picture is deeply rooted in our hearts. In the mind, it attracts people's memories and stimulates people's daydreams.What a story, what a poem!

I have already made a suggestion to the chairman of the poetry circle, inviting Hongwen to join our Huaxia poetry circle.

As for the remaining two poems, I will not comment any more!

[Desperate Poet]: Hehe, Lao Mo's eyes are really sly. It seems that you want Hongwen to write poems in the future!I think it's quite difficult. Don't forget that Hongwen is a writer, and Mr. Feng still wants to accept him as an apprentice to write martial arts.

[Old Poetry Mo]: Why not?There is no conflict between writing poetry and writing novels. Are you a down-and-out poet? If you want me to tell you to write poetry well, don’t always think about being new and different every day. You also have a chance to enter the poetry world.

[Desolate Poet]: Forget it, I won't enter, how relaxed I am now. Since you, Lao Mo, have finished commenting on this short poem, let me talk about the remaining two!Those of you in the poetry world are just too cautious, knowing that the following two poems and "To the Oak Tree" are quite different from the four-line short poem in terms of artistic conception, so you don't bother to waste pen and ink.Let me say that judging a poem cannot be so one-sided.

The name of the next poem is "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You", which is the same as the name of the story.It's poetry, but I think it's actually a song.

The whole lyrics are very fresh and romantic. It opens up the love relationship between the male and female protagonists in their youth and can be divided into three sections.

From the initial restlessness of "I don't know how to find you, the fragrance is still in my arms", to "I don't know how to describe you, the warmth stays in my heart", which is throbbing, and then to "I don't know how to describe you, only you let me I am happy", this is the heartbeat.

To put it bluntly, this song was completely written by Hongwen to set off the plot, and it can be seen from the last line "I don't know how to describe you, the spring breeze is not as good as you".

Generally speaking, the lyrics are well written, but they are just lyrics. If Hongwen composes the song and a singer sings it, it may make people feel touched.

Finally, there is the ending "Many Years Later". This is a modern poem. How to say it, the sentences and words in the whole article are not so gorgeous, even most of the writing is very plain, and there is no particularly profound artistic conception in it. .

The meaning I want to express throughout the article can be described in sixteen characters. If you love each other and grow old hand in hand, your original intention will not change, and you will have no regrets in this life.Everyone likes romance, and the way they express romance to their partners is also different. If I ask you, real romance is to grow old with each other.

This poem was written by Hongwen to give a happy ending to the story of Qiushui and Xiao Hong.After many years, they were old, and finally came to the oak tree hand in hand, and the two looked at each other. This scene was just like their first meeting.The two thought of the happy past, the laughter that echoed in their ears, and the beautiful youth that belonged to them.

Although Xiao Hong's face has become old, her smile reminds Qiu Shui of her youthful appearance, and the spring breeze is not as good as your peach blossom smile.

Until the last sentence "I will have a dream, a distant and beautiful dream..."

This is Hongwen's own exclamation. He said at the beginning that this story is a picture in his dream, so he started with a dream and ended with a dream.Hongwen. It's really romantic!

[Feisha Yangqi]: You two are really gods, what you said is really good, I didn't know there are so many layers of meaning without reading your comments.Now I am totally in awe of Hongwen!Cowhide!
[Born in September]: The down-and-out poet said it well. I want to listen to the song "Ten Miles of Spring Breeze Is Not as Good as You". Unfortunately, Hongwen is a writer. It would be great if he could compose music. It's a pity that I can't listen to this song!
[The lights are gone]: Brother, don't ask too much.Hongwen is already a genius enough, if he composes music again, is he still human?It's good to have good stories to read and good poems to appreciate, don't ask for such perfection.But I'm curious, is this really what Hongwen dreamed about?Could it be that this girl really exists?Is Hongwen in a relationship?

[Shadow Wolf's Love]: Damn, your last sentence upstairs is the truth!I also think it's a bit ridiculous, I can dream of stories even in my dreams, and dreaming of such good poems, you must be lying!If Hongwen thought of it himself, I would agree.But if it was really what he thought, then there must be some references, just like the story of Lu Qinyang and Ling Yiyao some time ago was based on the story of Da Lao and Xin'er.

[Oda Yuetang]: Wow!I think what you said makes sense!If this is the case, then Qiushui is Hongwen and Xiao Hong is her girlfriend.Does Hongwen have a girlfriend?Who is so happy!Hongwen, come out and speak!

[Painting Guide]: Hongwen!come out!Satisfy our curiosity.

[Brush and ink]: Summon Hongwen.

　I don’t know if everyone likes the ending I wrote. Don’t tell me if you don’t like it. I quite like it. There is an Easter egg chapter!Thank you for the monthly tickets of Wanyue Hollow and Junmai Daiginjo, and thank you for your subscription support!
　　
　
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