After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 156 Young and promising, not frivolous
The ancients once said that there are four great joys in life, as evidenced by poems:
Long-term drought meets sweet dew, encounters old acquaintances in other lands, wedding night in the bridal chamber, and time of title on the gold list.

There are four joys, and there are naturally four sorrows, as evidenced by poems:

The widow and her son are sad, the general is captured by the enemy, the court lady who fell out of favor tears, and the son is heartbroken!
And for readers who like to read novels on the Internet, they also have four joys and four sorrows when they read books.

Leaving aside the four great joys, we can still talk about the four great tragedies.

The first tragic thing is to wear a cuckold at the beginning, whether it is a male or female channel, the plot of the cuckold is definitely the most poisonous point.Everyone reading a book must be substituting the protagonist, and the protagonist being green, this is the same feeling as his wife and husband being crawled by a dog outside, but any normal reader can't accept it.

The second tragedy is that when the plot is progressing, important people around the protagonist, or important characters die one after another, especially those characters who are portrayed very successfully, which will definitely arouse strong resentment from readers, although this can also reflect A kind of pathetic touch, but after the touch is over, the blade should still be sent.

The third tragedy is hydrology and breaking changes. The combination of these two is called tragedy.There is a doggerel in the online literature world, it is about the author, and it is called nine waters out of ten authors, and one is Duan Geng.

Hydrology does not just refer to the number of water words, but also the water plot, how to reflect it specifically!
For example, if the protagonist wants to eat, he can finish it in one sentence.You can also write tens of thousands of words. For example, start with the same introduction of the dishes you eat, and then talk about how the protagonist eats, who you eat with, and conversations with other characters.

The water plot is simpler. You can copy and paste the plot of the previous novel directly, change the environment, change the characters, and you can use it wirelessly.

For readers, the words about hydrology are acceptable for the time being, and they can persist in breaking updates!If the two are added together. Sorry, bye!
As for the last tragedy, it was a bad ending!I don’t want to go into details on this one. Just to give you a simple example, it’s like you enjoy a big meal, and when you take the last bite, you find a cockroach at the bottom of the bowl, which can make you spit out all the food you ate. go back.

But for the current Li Daoran, he encountered one of the four major tragedies. His favorite supporting roles were killed one after another by unscrupulous authors.

That's right, it's consecutive!

First, Jian Jiuhuang, who carries his dream of six thousand miles, has just appeared in a few chapters, and everyone will receive a lunch box after leaving a word.

Then there was the teacher Wang who pointed at Duanjiang. Before Li Daoran could see Duanjiang's demeanor, he gave the protagonist a wave of benefits and all descendants disappeared.

After finally looking forward to the old sword god Li Chungang, the curtain finally came to an end. Although the curtain ended in glory, he still left.

What made Li Daoran even more angry now was that he had already recovered, but Hongwen had to remind him again.

Or when he had just rewarded Supreme Supreme, it was tolerable and unbearable.

Hongwen stabs people's hearts again and again, uncovering readers' scars back and forth. Is there any author who treats fans like this?

"Daoran, what's wrong with you? Why give back your supremacy, you won't regret it, will you?"

Du Huaiwen saw that Li Daoran's expression was not right, and heard his gnashing of teeth, he asked inexplicably.

"Look at the chapter title of Chapter 1 updated by Hongwen."

Li Daoran said this.

"What happened to Chapter 1?"

Du Huaiwen muttered and clicked to open the text, but he really didn't pay attention to the chapter name.

Then the words Li Chungang came into his eyes.

"Fuck me! Hongwen took out the old sword god again to play the sad card. What on earth is he trying to do! Otherwise, he can revive the old sword god quickly, or don't mention it again."

"Daoran, I support you! This wave must refund the money, unless he resurrects the old sword god. Huh? Daoran, sir!"

Du Huaiwen was even more excited than Li Daoran when he saw the title of the chapter. This guy liked the old sword god very much from the very beginning.

However, at the end of the complaint, Du Huaiwen found that his good brother had already buried his head in his phone and ignored him at all.

Well, one can tell at a glance that Li Daoran chose to forgive in the end.

That's all, let's continue reading, Du Huaiwen is very curious about Li Chungang's two wishes mentioned in the title of the chapter.

Thinking about it with the spirit of the old sword god, these two wishes should be technical tasks that cannot be rewarded!
Du Huaiwen clicked to open this chapter, and read almost half of it. He still didn't see the two wishes of the old sword god Li Chungang. Instead, he saw all the foreshadowing and ending of the protagonist Xu Fengnian's three travels.

Xu Fengnian left Liangzhou on a white horse and entered Beimang alone. This experience is his real self-sharpening and the official start of his journey as a protagonist.

Before the trip, Xu Fengnian set himself the goal of this trip, planning to kill several second-rank warriors from Beimang, three from the Diamond Realm, and one from Zhixuan.

The realm of martial arts in Xuezhong is the ninth rank system, the ninth rank is the weakest, the second rank is a small master of martial arts, and the first rank is divided into four realms, namely King Kong, Zhixuan, Tianxiang, and Earth Immortal.Upwards of the first grade will either shatter the void, or open the gate of heaven with a sword, or lift the clouds to fly up.

Ascension is a celestial being, who can live forever, and staying in the lower realms is a terrestrial deity, who still has birth, old age, sickness and death, such as the old sword god Li Chungang.

When entering Beimang, the protagonist Xu Fengnian was a second-rank junior master.

After entering the Beimang Jianghu, Xu Fengnian first killed the Beimang military general Tao Qianzhi and the Jianghu demon leader Xie Ling, who were monks of the same level as him.

Then because of kindness, he rescued the herdsmen among the wild cattle, and was praised by the holy monk Nagarjuna: This son is very kind, and he donated the blood of the Vajra, and Xu Fengnian was successfully promoted to the first-rank Vajra realm.

Later, in order to protect the herdsmen, he fought against Tuoba Chunfalcon and two masters of the Vajra Realm, but he was outnumbered. At the critical moment of life and death, Xu Fengnian finally said what he had always wanted to say in his heart, Jiang Ni, I like you!

So far, it has been proved that Bai Yu and Feng Zijie's previous predictions have guessed one more foreshadowing.

On the verge of death, Jiang Ni was rescued by Yu Jian. During Xu Fengnian's second trip, Jiang Ni was rescued by Cao Changqing, a minister of the old country. This time he came to Beimang to discuss the restoration of the old Chu. They are here to save the protagonist. I have to say that these two really love and kill each other.

After the two separated again, Xu Fengnian came to Dunhuang City in Beimang, and met Sweet Potato (Beiliang Anzi, one of the heroines). At this time, Sweet Potato was already the lord of the city. During this period, Sweet Potato put on a dragon robe, and the protagonist sat on the Dragon Chair, had a great time.

After the embarrassing thing was done, Xu Fengnian left the city, not wanting to rebel in the city at this time.He was not a man who wouldn't recognize anyone when he put on his trousers, so Xu Fengnian rode back to the city alone, facing [-] cavalry each with a knife and a sword, guarding the city gate for his woman alone.

After Sweet Potato quelled the rebellion in the City Lord's Mansion and ordered the city gates to be opened, no enemies outside the city could be seen. Only Xu Fengnian, dressed in blood, dragged his sword into the city.

Although everything subsides, Luoyang, No.1 in the Demonic Way, known as the fourth in the world, came to intercept and kill the protagonist. The grievances and hatred between the two have to start from the previous life. I won't waste more words.

In fact, Luoyang came this time for another purpose, to force the Peach Blossom Sword God Deng Tai'a to show up for a fight, and to compete with him for the third place in the world.

Because Deng Tai'a was favored by the protagonist's mother when he was young, he took good care of the protagonist. He once helped Xu Fengnian climb the city wall of Emperor Wu, threw wine to respect Huang, and gave him twelve flying swords as a repayment of his kindness.

At that time he said, Fengnian!I can help this time!

So he got a nickname, and he helped Deng Tai'a once.

But this one is really just talking.

This time he made another move and fought against Luoyang. As a result, the third place in the world was still the third place in the world, and the fourth place was still the fourth place.

Luoyang lost!

Xu Fengnian continued to travel north, and finally met Xu Huainan, the target of the trip, and returned to the south with his grandson Xu Beizhi. On the way back to Liang, he met the biggest opponent of the trip, the fifth raccoon, a master of the mysterious realm called Bei Mang.

With an unsheathed Chunlei Knife in his hand, it poured out like a flood out of a lake. Jian Jiuhuang's Six Thousand Miles and Li Chungang's Sword Breaking through Thousand Armors emerged one by one in Xu Fengnian's mind.

Da Mang Swallows the Dragon!
In the end, at the cost of six years of Yangshou and Da Huang Ting, he used his own Vajra Realm to forcibly kill the fifth raccoon finger Xuan.

But his head was full of blue hair, his hair was as white as snow in an instant, his realm fell to the pseudo-xuan realm, and at the same time he uttered that famous sentence in the snow that belonged to him.

"I used to whip famous horses when I was drunk, and I used to spend a lot of money when I was young. I used to exchange spring and autumn for spring thunder, and I once killed Zhixuan at Xidi!"

So far, Xu Fengnian's third tour is over.

Black hair goes to Beimang, white hair goes to Beiliang!
The protagonist Xu Fengnian's trip this time, because he killed many Beimang masters alone, completely got rid of his identity as a playboy, and truly won the approval of Beiliang's cavalry, and also changed the image in the hearts of Xuezhong fans.

Before, because Xue Zhong's other characters were portrayed too successfully, it seemed that the protagonist Xu Fengnian was not so outstanding, and Bei Mang's line of work was regarded as his turnaround!

"Daoran, have you finished this chapter? Have you written about the old sword god? It's been a thousand words, and it's still about Beimang. This Hongwen won't be a headline party!"

This chapter is a big one, and Du Huaiwen only read half of it after seven or eight minutes.

"I haven't finished it yet, I just saw Wen Hua go to the capital to compete with others."

Li Daoran raised his head and replied, he also felt that the writing of this chapter was a bit messy, it seemed to be an excessive chapter, and it didn't match the chapter name at all.

"Wen Hua? Hey, my brother!"

Hearing that he was educated, Du Huaiwen's interest was raised again. He laughed a few times and continued to read with his head down.

Li Daoran was speechless. Sure enough, the smell was the same.

But it was said that after Xu Fengnian's tour ended, he entered Beijing at the order of the Liyang court, and his good brother Wen Hua also entered Beijing at this moment.

This down-and-out poor ranger has had a turn of luck recently. When he was traveling around the rivers and lakes, he met a yellow dragon warrior who counted his age.

Like Tang Seng in "The Legend of Wukong", Huang Sanjia relied on one mouth to lobby the world and provoke the Spring and Autumn Nine Kingdoms War. Even the protagonist's father Xu Xiao was once a pawn on his chessboard.

This time Huang Sanjia took a fancy to Wen Hua, but in fact, he also wanted to drop another pawn.He told Wen Hua that he could teach him two sword moves at the price of killing one person for him after learning.

These two sword moves are unknown, and Wen Hua needs to comprehend them on his own. After the two swords are combined into one sword, he can become a land god.

Wen Hua agreed to this condition. Although these two sword moves were taught by others, the sword intent was his own after all. In the following days, he practiced sword frantically, and after some success, he followed Huang Sanjia to the capital to compete in swords.

During this period, he played three matches in a row, first defeating Cuihua, the sword attendant of the Wu family's sword mound, then Qi Jiajie, the number one swordsman in the capital, and three defeats at Dongyue Jianchi Baijiang Mountain.

"Haha! My brother is famous in the capital, it's you! Wen Hua, I'm so warm, I'm dying of laughter! Dao Ran, this guy is definitely a talent, I'm so happy."

Seeing Wen Hua's sword competition with others in Kyoto, Du Huaiwen patted his knees and laughed loudly. At this time, he had forgotten about Li Chungang's two wishes.

The wooden sword ranger, who had three sword fights and lost three times, blamed himself and said, "I thought it was Wen Hua's turn to be elated when I came to the capital, but I didn't expect it to be bad luck for eight lifetimes. Two days ago, we went to the river to steal fish and give it to the patrol. A city soldier bumped into me, and when he saw me, he asked if it was that warm, old man who couldn't beat you."

Li Daoran didn't answer, but he saw Wen Hua's confession in the book, and a smile appeared on his face
In the early days of Xuezhong, Li Daoran was a little puzzled by Hongwen's spending so much ink on this little character, because Wen Hua appeared more times in the book than Jian Jiuhuang, and he was definitely a swordsman genius.

You must know that the two sword moves taught by Huang Sanjia are not something ordinary people can comprehend, but he can realize his own way of swordsmanship from them.Although he lost three consecutive sword games, the people he lost to were all masters of swordsmanship, and all of them were well-known people in the Jianghu.

Although the book does not specifically describe Wen Hua's current martial arts realm, judging from the few times he has made moves, it must be at least the realm of a second-rank junior master. You must know that he has only started practicing swords for a few months. And he is not like the protagonist. , There are golden fingers like Dahuangting.

Judging from this plot, this wooden sword ranger should be an important supporting role.

Or continue to look down!
This chapter is coming to an end soon, and the old sword god's two wishes should appear soon!If it really didn't come to the end, Li Daoran would have to ask Hongwen to refund the money, and settle the old and new grudges together.

The following plot is still Wen Hua's chat with a young man named Liu Chuan and the man's sword servant Cuihua. The topic of the chat is borrowing money.

There are two reasons for borrowing money. One is to buy good clothes. In a few days, he will have to compete with a sword master, Tangxi Sword Immortal. There will be a lot of onlookers. Come.Wen Hua is a face-saving person, so of course he can't dress in tatters like now.

The second reason is for travel expenses. After the sword competition is over, I will leave Kyoto and go to Beiliang to find my good brother Xu Fengnian. I want to give my good brother the whole set of erotic palace pictures that he has worked so hard to save money to buy.
This is also what Wen Hua promised to his good brother Xu Fengnian when the two traveled together. Wen Hua is a slippery man, so I must remember what he promised his brother.

It's just that the fact that the gift was sent made people feel a little awkward.

After watching this episode, Du Huaiwen suddenly raised his head again. He first looked at the door of the box and saw that it was tightly closed, then turned to look at Li Daoran.

"Daoran, I suddenly remembered something. You promised me when you were in junior high school, but you haven't given it to me until now. You owe it to me for many years."

"What's the matter? No! I have no impression!"

Seeing Du Huaiwen's serious expression, Li Daoran put down his phone and thought about it carefully in his mind, but he really didn't remember what he promised Du Huaiwen at that time. He only remembered that Du Huaiwen often asked him to borrow money when he was in junior high school
Du Huaiwen has been in love since junior high school, and his little girlfriends changed one after another, because he wanted to invite his little girlfriends to eat and play, and he didn't have enough pocket money, so he could only rely on Li Daoran.

"I knew you forgot, you're not as good as Wen Hua! You see how clearly he remembers. Let me remind you, in our second year of junior high school, two days before my birthday, you asked me what birthday present I wanted , the one I told you."

When he said this, Du Huanwen's eyes revealed a mean light. If there was a woman at the scene, he would definitely yell pervert, catch the gangster!

Hearing those key words in the words, and seeing Du Huaiwen's mean eyes, Li Daoran finally remembered.

Du Huaiwen was right, he did agree to one thing, and because of this, he was the one who lost his boss.

Just like Wen Hua's gift to Xu Fengnian, Du Huaiwen's birthday gift was also a book, but it was not a erotic palace picture, but a novel.

He still remembers the name of this novel clearly, it is called "The Golden Scale Is Not a Thing in the Pool".

At that time, Li Daoran thought it was a fantasy novel, so he didn't think much about it.Until he went to the bookstore to buy a book, he went to several bookstores but couldn't find the book, and then he asked the bookstore owner
Li Daoran still remembers the expression of the bookstore owner at that time very clearly. He first glanced at it very strangely, and then said righteously, our bookstore is regular, how could there be such colorful books.

Li Daoran was so embarrassed that he almost didn't find a crack in the ground to get in.After he came back, he beat up Du Huaiwen crazily, because Li Daoran only started reading novels, and he was afraid that Du Huaiwen would cheat him again next time.

Once you enter the Internet, your texts are as deep as the sea, and you will be free and irrelevant from then on.

"You still dare to mention this matter, does it still hurt if you touch the back of your head!"

"Hey! Stop talking, stop talking, read a book!"

The chapter has come to an end.
Wu Liuding said in a rather helpless tone, "You seem to be someone who borrows money?"

Wen Hua rolled his eyes and said: "Your maid still uses the two-sleeved green snake she stole from the old sword god to deal with Lao Tzu, is that kind?"

Cuihua, whose name is very vulgar but has a good swordsmanship, asked calmly, "Do you know that Li Chungang has two wishes?"

Wen Hua, who always speaks out of shape and likes to chatter, is rare not to answer immediately.

He suddenly fell back on the ground, looked at the sky and said softly: "Naturally, the old man knows that for the future generations, the old man meets mountains and opens mountains, and meets water to open water."

Li Chungang hopes that every sincere swordsman in the world will be a green snake with two sleeves.

Li Chungang hopes that the world will be amazed and everyone in the younger generation can open the gate of heaven with a sword.

"Daoran, the old sword god's two vows have finally been written. It took thousands of words and ended up with the last two sentences. I really want to kill Hongwen. But these two sentences are very distracting! Alas, No one can surpass the status of the old sword god in Xue Zhongli, even the protagonist... at least the current protagonist cannot compare."

Seeing the two wishes at the end of the chapter, Du Huaiwen was both entangled and emotional.
Li Daoran didn't speak, just sighed, he could see that this should be the last time the old sword god appeared in the book.

Thinking about the next plot, it should be this wooden sword Wenhua!I just don't know how Hongwen set up this character in the follow-up.

When Li Daoran and Du Huaiwen had a lot of feelings, in the bedroom, Chen Tianhong was typing the manuscript.

But this time his speed of typing is much slower than in the afternoon, and after typing for a while, he has to stop and look before continuing, with a tangled look on his face.

Li Daoran's guess is correct, the follow-up plot is indeed related to Wenhua, it is still a climax, and it can't be said to be a climax, it should be said that the tear-jerking point is more appropriate!
What confuses Chen Tianhong is Wen Hua's plot, he is thinking about whether to change the original.

When watching "Fighting Knife in the Snow" in the previous life, Chen Tianhong's favorite characters in the book, one is the old sword god Li Chungang, and the other is the wooden sword ranger.

"Do you want to change it? I always feel that Fenghuo is a bit too cruel to Wenhua."

While typing on the keyboard, Chen Tianhong was thinking about the plot in his mind.

To be honest, he is a little bit flustered now, and the readers of "The Story of Wukong" written some time ago received good reviews, which gave Chen Tianhong a lot of confidence.

So I cultivated him to make up for some regrets in the previous life when "borrowing" books now, thinking about making up for them in this world.

"It's better to change it."

Chen Tianhong made a decision in his heart, before he could revise the manuscript.

The phone rang, and the call was from teacher Cao Xingkui.

"Tianhong, what are you doing this weekend?"

As soon as he got on the phone, Chen Tianhong heard the teacher's question, and the tone of the words did not seem to be a word of concern.

"I didn't do anything! I just went out to play with my classmates, and then coded and wrote novels."

Chen Tianhong said honestly.

"That means you have free time, right?"

"Yes"

"Then let me ask you, the Poetry Association invited you to the Kyoto headquarters to join, why didn't you go? Do you feel that you have written a few novels and poems, and you are arrogant? The Poetry Association is also a member of the Writers Association. Letting you join is a recognition of your kid, but you put on airs instead, don't you even look down on the Writers Association now?"

Cao Xingkui's words on the phone suddenly became very serious. When he was chatting with his friends from the Poetry Association just now, the friends joked that his old Cao's apprentices are amazing now, which means he is a little young and frivolous.

Cao Xingkui was at a loss for what he said, and after asking in detail, he found out that the Poetry Association invited his apprentice to the capital, but Chen Tianhong did not go.

After hearing this, Cao Xingkui became angry immediately, and immediately called Chen Tianhong.

And he spoke so harshly for the good of Chen Tianhong. The Poetry Association belongs to the Writers Association. The members of the Association are actually members of the Writers Association. The Association has always rejected others. No writer or poet would reject the Association.

But Chen Tianhong didn't go. Almost no one in this world dares to do that. If you refuse the invitation of the Writers Association, it is equivalent to rejecting the entire country's literati.

Because being able to enter the Writers Association is the dream of all literati, which is a great honor.

"Teacher, I didn't, how could I refuse! I agreed to join, but they said they would come to the headquarters in Kyoto, what kind of ceremony is needed. They told me this Friday, I didn't go when I was in school, today I made an appointment with my classmate again, so I"

Chen Tianhong hurriedly explained that there are rules in this world, how could he not abide by them.

He thought that going to the capital was just an initiation ceremony, and that he would be fine a few days later. Unexpectedly, Cao Xingkui called after only one day.

"They value you more. You directly entered the headquarters of the Poetry Association, which is equivalent to entering the headquarters of the Writers Association. Naturally, you have to go to Kyoto. I originally thought that I would wait for you to go to college, to hone it, and then write A few articles like "Country Teacher" introduced you to the headquarters of the Writers Association, I didn't expect you to be so talented in writing poetry. Not bad, not bad."

After Cao Xingkui heard Chen Tianhong's explanation, his voice softened, but at the end he was very happy. The apprentice is capable, and the master's face is also bright!
"Go to Kyoto with me tomorrow! I'll take you to the headquarters of the Poetry Association! That's it, let me tell those old guys first."

The phone hangs up.

This phone call also woke up Chen Tianhong. He also felt that he was a little drifting now, and just now he was thinking of revising the text written by the great god in his previous life to affirm its truth.

It cannot be changed in the snow. It must follow the original text.

Also, even if you are young and promising, you must not be frivolous, and you must follow the low-key principle of the Great Chinese in your previous life.

However, unless someone is deliberately looking for trouble, it's another matter.

　This chapter was quite uncomfortable to write. After reading it all afternoon, I sorted out the plot several times. It is difficult to write in the snow!Wen Hua will be written in the next chapter, and it may be interrupted later, and there should not be a few chapters. The next chapter will describe the protagonist's upgrade route, so hurry up to the university.Everyone has suggestions!Just scold lightly!Thank you for squatting and chewing on the novel, the monthly pass of Fengguowuhenhu, thank you for your subscription and support!

　　
　
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