After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 163 I want to give this composition full marks

Jinling City.

Today's Reunion Hotel is both lively and deserted.

What is lively is that in the first hall, there are dozens of students in school uniforms, full of youthful and cheerful atmosphere.

What is deserted is that in this hall, there are only a few tables of guests, and the rest of the tables are empty.

It's not that the hotel's business is bad, on the contrary, the hotel's boxes and other halls are full of guests.

The first hall was occupied by someone today, and it can’t be said that it was occupied. It was specially explained by the hotel owner, and only these few tables were accepted.

All this is because of one of the students, the student's name is Chen Tianhong, a celebrity in Jinling City.

After the graduation ceremony, Chen Tianhong, Liu Yifei, and their classmates went to the classroom, the playground, and the grove.
Walking around every corner of the campus, saying goodbye to the school where I have lived for three years is also a farewell to my youth.

Then they came to the Zaiju Hotel, together with the class teacher Cao Bing and several substitute teachers, including Liu Desheng, the physics teacher who likes to use a mirror to comb his "science head" before class.

After the graduation ceremony, every graduating class of high school will organize the dinner party for classmates, and class three of high school is no exception.

But the difference is that other classes use the class fees, and this party in class three is paid for by Chen Tianhong himself.

It's not that the students in the third class are rich, but that the consumption of this hotel is a bit high, and their class fees cannot be afforded.

Originally, according to the squad leader's intention, it would be enough to find a common restaurant and book a few tables.

However, Chen Tianhong said, we have been together for so long, and we must have a good meal at the final graduation. It doesn't matter if it is money or not, the important thing is to be happy.

Anyway, no matter how expensive it is, that's all for him. After all, Chen Tianhong has achieved financial freedom now.

In this regard, everyone has no opinion. Who would not like to be able to eat well?
Besides, big family, don't eat for nothing.

So Chen Tianhong found a good hotel in all aspects around Zhenhua Middle School. The point is that the name of the hotel is very suitable for the occasion, let's get together again.

"Tianhong, we're just having a dinner party. Why are you making such a big battle? Knowing that you've made money, you can't be so extravagant! You even booked the entire hall."

Class teacher Cao Bing frowned and preached. Looking at the empty tables in the hall, she really felt that Chen Tianhong was a bit too much.

Chen Tianhong explained to Cao Bing with a wry smile that he knew that the head teacher also had good intentions, but he really didn't blame him for this matter.

He hasn't burnt the bag so much that he has booked the entire hall. If you have money, you can't be extravagant and wasteful. When Chen Tianhong first looked for this hotel, he just ordered a few tables of meals.

Unexpectedly, when Chen Tianhong came, he happened to meet the owner of the hotel at the front desk, and he also forgot to bring his hat and mask.

And this boss is also a person who loves to read novels. The novel he has been following recently is "Knives in the Snow", so he recognized Chen Tianhong at a glance.

When the boss heard that Chen Tianhong was coming to his hotel for dinner, he waved his hand and wanted to give him a free bill. He just told him that after the meal, it would be better to update the snow more.

Chen Tianhong didn't agree, it's okay to update more novels, but the meal money must be given, one yard for one yard, and the boss will change hotels if he doesn't want him.

Under his insistence, the boss had no choice but to compromise, but he still explained to the staff that this hall should not receive guests today, in order to create a good environment for Chen Tianhong and his classmates' reunion.

And Chen Tianhong didn't know until he arrived at the hotel, which made him really embarrassed, but he could only accept the kindness of the boss.

It is estimated that the boss will definitely not want to give more money at that time, so I can only update "Fighting Knife in the Snow" later to thank the boss.

Hearing Chen Tianhong's explanation, Cao Bing didn't know what to say, that's okay
It can also be seen from this that the status of writers in this world is indeed high, their influence is greater than that of celebrities, and they are also more respected.

"Teacher, it's all right. I wouldn't be surprised if he even bought the entire hotel, let alone this lobby. You don't know, Chen Tianhong gave out 10 yuan to his readers during the Chinese New Year. , I bought a whole set of dresses with just the money from the red envelopes."

Wang Shanshan said to Cao Bing while eating the delicious food on the table.

"10 yuan Tianhong, it's better not to be extravagant when spending money."

Physics teacher Liu Desheng also said earnestly.

Several other teachers also spoke immediately, all to persuade Chen Tianhong.
Chen Tianhong glared at Wang Shanshan, it was really hard to explain this to the teachers.

They only know that he has earned a lot of money by writing novels, but they don't know that he now has tens of millions in savings alone, not counting the shares of Li Man and Miao Mingjie's two companies.

It's really not much to send 10 yuan to fans who have always supported me.

"Shanshan, this pork knuckle is delicious, eat more"

Liu Yifei at the side picked up a large piece of meat and put it on the plate in front of Wang Shanshan.

"What are you doing! Yifei, I don't like pork knuckles, it's too greasy, it will make you fat, and there are too many of them."

Wang Shanshan looked at the huge piece of meat on the plate, and raised her mouth.

"Eat more meat! Talk less! If you don't eat, I'll feed you"

Liu Yifei said flatly, but there was an undeniable meaning in her voice.

Obviously, she thinks that Wang Shanshan talked too much just now, hmph, although we are girlfriends, boyfriends come first.

This was what Liu Yifei thought.

Wang Shanshan: "."

"Students, let's give a toast to all the teachers together, and thank the teachers for their hard work teaching us."

The squad leader of class three held a wine glass and said.

Hearing this, the students also raised their cups. Boys drank wine, some girls drank soft drinks, and some drank red wine, depending on their own wishes.

At this time, teachers will not stop students from drinking, as long as they don't get drunk, after all, graduating from high school means they are adults, and college students can also be said to be adults.

Besides, on this occasion, even Cao Bing poured red wine for himself.

Everyone drank it all in one gulp, and the next thing was the friendship exchange between teachers and students.

Everyone chatted about the past on campus, and the teachers also talked about their previous student life
No one mentioned parting, and everyone was enjoying the warmth of the moment.

However, such a good atmosphere was ruined by someone who finished eating his elbows.

The big-mouthed Wang Shanshan suddenly said, why don't you all predict your college entrance examination scores.

Suddenly the scene turned cold, especially the students.

They all stared at Wang Shanshan, really which pot is not open and which pot is lifted, so they can predict the score well!Don't you know everything after a few days when the results are announced, really.
So there was a lot of food on Wang Shanshan's plate again, stacked high enough to burst her belly.

However, being interrupted by Wang Shanshan, Cao Bing remembered something, and she asked Chen Tianhong out loud.

"By the way, Tianhong, how did you choose the questions for your college entrance examination composition?"

Although Chen Tianhong was specially recruited by Kyoto University, so he didn't look at his college entrance examination results, but he still had to take the exam.

Cao Bing's question made everyone at the table look at Chen Tianhong, and everyone was curious about how Chen Tianhong selected the questions and wrote the composition for the college entrance examination.

Considering Chen Tianhong's writing style, this essay should be an excellent one. Maybe this year's essay with full marks in the college entrance examination is his.

The composition theme of this college entrance examination is also very interesting. It is to let the candidates start around the topic of "lie".

"I'm writing a narrative, and the name of the composition is "Two Bowls of Beef Noodles."

Chen Tianhong said truthfully that when he saw the topic of the essay, he directly activated the plug-in and searched for the essay in his mind. In his previous life, he searched a lot of good essays on this topic, and Chen Tianhong could get a high score for any one he chose.

But when he started writing later, Chen Tianhong thought of an article on reading comprehension that he remembered deeply during the senior high school entrance examination in his previous life. The name of the article was "Two Bowls of Beef Noodles".

Strictly speaking, the whole point of this article is about the deep love between father and son, but there are also lies in it, just white lies.

In the end, Chen Tianhong still chose this article. He wanted to see if this article was written in this world, and whether it could become a topic on the exam paper in the future.

As for whether this article can get a perfect score, Chen Tianhong dare not guarantee it, but the score should not be low. After all, this article touched many people at the beginning, and it can be selected as the reading comprehension on the high school entrance examination paper. The article itself is naturally of high quality.

"Chen Tianhong, what kind of composition topic are you talking about! Also "Two Bowls of Beef Noodles", this has nothing to do with the composition topic! I wrote an argumentative essay, and the title is "On the Harmfulness of Lies", which fits the meaning of the topic very well." Bar!"

Wang Shanshan puffed her cheeks and said, her mouth was still full of unchewed food.

"Wang Shanshan, swallow the food before talking, don't choke yourself."

Cao Bing said something to Wang Shanshan angrily.

Then I asked Chen Tianhong.

"Tianhong, tell me."

She is not like Wang Shanshan. The name of the composition sounds very common, but the key to evaluating the quality of a composition is to look at its content.

Chen Tianhong nodded. There was nothing to hide. He said, "I'm writing a story. This story begins when a father and son come to a noodle restaurant to eat noodles."

When Chen Tianhong was having dinner with his teachers and classmates, dozens of marking teachers were busy in the provincial capital, Pingjiang City.

They are the marking teachers of this year's college entrance examination and are responsible for the evaluation of the province's college entrance examination papers.

Of course, this is just a marking point, and they are only one of the many marking groups, mainly responsible for grading the composition in the Chinese test paper.

This world also adopts machine marking, that is, after the college entrance examination papers are scanned, the questions are classified into individual images, and sent to the computer at the designated marking point, and then the teachers at the marking point will review.

And in order to ensure fairness, generally the same type of questions in the same test paper will be graded by several teachers together, and the scores will be scored separately. If the final score difference is not large, the average value will be used. The head of the marking team will decide.

After all, each teacher will inevitably have subjective judgments, which may lead to inconsistencies in the marking standards. This is also to reduce the impact in this regard.

Huang Fusheng is a marking teacher. At this moment, he is staring at the computer screen, looking at the candidates' compositions on the screen.

"The topic of the essay was good, but the content was not satisfactory. How can I write an argumentative essay without knowing the central point? In the end, I even overturned my own point of view."

Sliding the mouse, Huang Fusheng gave the essay he was reading a score of 20. He has always been strict in grading papers, and the polarization is very serious.

For a good composition, Huang Fusheng can directly give a score of nearly full marks. If the composition is poor, he can give it a score of 0.

Then I changed to another test paper. This composition was well-written, with no special highlights and no major problems. Huang Fusheng gave it 40 points.

After reading several articles in a row, he didn't give a score of more than 45 points. The full score of the essay in the college entrance examination is 60 points. Generally, more than 45 points are considered high-quality essays. At least Huang Fusheng thinks so.

"Huh? What kind of composition topic is this, "Two Bowls of Beef Noodles", isn't it just another examinee who went off-topic? Alas, you can't let me meet a good composition!"

After Huang Fusheng saw the composition topic of a new test paper, he let out a long sigh.

"Ms. Huang, don't be so harsh. After all, they are all students. Do you think every student is a genius like Chen Tianhong!"

A marking teacher next to him heard Huang Fusheng's sigh, and he said something jokingly.

"You're right. I don't mean to be harsh. Good is good, and bad is bad. Actually, I'm really curious about how Chen Tianhong will write this composition. I think it must be a good one at his level." Articles, I just don’t know which group can meet them.”

After Huang Fusheng replied, he continued to read this composition that might be off topic.

"When I was in high school, every weekend, I worked in my aunt's small restaurant, not for a living, just to hone myself and experience life."

In my memory, on a chilly spring evening, a pair of special guests came to the shop. They were father and son. They said they were special because the father was blind.
The boy who supported him by his side looked to be in his twenties, dressed in plain and shabby clothes, but with a quiet bookish air, he was a student studying.

"Huh? This is a narrative, using the No.1 name, but the story told is not about me, but the customers who came to eat noodles in the store, father and son. It's a bit interesting. The narrative ability of this paragraph is not bad, and the language description is also good. , it just doesn’t match the theme of the composition!”

After reading the first paragraph, Huang Fusheng gave an evaluation, a little above average, but it didn't fit the theme.

Then look down.

"Two bowls of beef noodles."

The boy spoke loudly.

I was about to make an invoice when he suddenly shook his hand at me again, smiled apologetically, then pointed to the price list behind him, and told me in a low voice: there is only one bowl of beef noodles and the other bowl of clear soup noodles.

I was startled for a moment, and then it suddenly dawned on me that he ordered two bowls of beef noodles for his father, but in fact he was short of cash and didn’t want his father to know. "

"This paragraph is a bit... not bad! The boy deliberately asked for two bowls to reassure his father. In fact, he deceived his father. In order to save money, he asked for another bowl of cheap noodles in clear soup. But this is a bit of a lie, but Let’s count.”

Although he said so, Huang Fusheng was still a little attracted by this story, and he wanted to know the follow-up.

The boy moved the bowl of beef noodles in front of his father, and greeted carefully: "Dad, the noodles are here, be careful not to burn them."

He was holding the bowl of clear noodle soup.

The old man was not in a hurry to eat first, he fumbled around with his chopsticks in the bowl, finally caught the beef, and then hurriedly put it into his son's bowl.

But the boy did not stop his father's behavior, he silently accepted the slice of meat his father had brought, and then carefully put the slice of meat back
Again and again, the meat slices in the father's bowl seem to never be enough.

"This restaurant is really kind, and there are so many slices of meat in the noodles."

The old man sighed.

In fact, it's just a few slices of meat as thin as cicada's wings.

The boy took the opportunity to answer: "Dad, eat quickly, I can't even fit it in my bowl."

The old man finally picked up a piece of meat and put it in his mouth, chewing slowly.

"It's well written, it's really good, yes, it's a lie, a white lie, and it fits the theme. It's good to write a story about the relationship between father and son with lies."

Huang Fusheng was finally happy seeing this. To be honest, he liked the composition very much after reading the first two paragraphs, but he couldn't give a high score. The first lie was a bit far-fetched to be honest.

But after reading the third paragraph, it's different. Currently, the score Huang Fusheng wants to give is 50 points, which can be regarded as a high score.

However, the composition is not over yet, and there are follow-up stories.

"I don't know when my aunt also stood by my side, staring at the father and son quietly.

At this time, Xiao Zhang from the kitchen brought a plate of dry cut beef, and put it on the table of the father and son under the gesture of his aunt's eyes.

The boy hurriedly reminded: "Did you misplace it? We didn't ask for beef."

The aunt smiled and said, "That's right, today is our opening anniversary, and the beef is a gift from us."

The boy just smiled and stopped asking questions.

He picked up a few more slices of beef and put them in his father's bowl, then put the rest in a plastic bag.

We watched them finish eating quietly like this until we watched them go out.
"This is the third lie! Three lies in one story"

Huang Fusheng murmured, he can naturally see that there are three deceptions in the text.

The first one is that the boy deceived his father and deliberately called out two bowls of beef noodles. In fact, he ate noodles in clear soup. This was because the boy was short of money and he didn't want his father to worry.

The second one is that the boy cheated his father, just a few thin slices of beef, he naturally wanted his father to eat. However, he did not refuse his father's act of sandwiching the meat for himself, which was to make his father happy.

As for the third one, the shop owner was moved by the loving father and filial son, and used the opening ceremony to trick the boy into accepting his own gift. He said this because he was afraid of hurting the boy's self-esteem.

Three deceptions, three lies, all are white lies, absolutely closely related to the theme of the composition, and more importantly, this story is very touching to read.

Whether it is the deep love between father and son, or the kindness of the shopkeeper, it is full of emotion. Sometimes these white lies are needed in life, because it is kind and beautiful.
"I want to give this composition a full score! But I still feel that there is something missing. Huh? There is one more page behind, so this is not the end."

Huang Fusheng slid the mouse and clicked on the next page.

There are not many words on the next page, only a few crosses.

"When Xiao Zhang went to clean up the bowl, he suddenly called out softly.

It turned out that there were several banknotes pressed under the boy's bowl, a total of 18 yuan, which happened to be the price of a plate of beef on our price list.

For a moment, only a silent sigh echoed quietly in everyone's heart. "

End of article.

Huang Fusheng didn't speak. Like the people in Wenzhong's small shop, his silent sigh echoed in his heart, and even his nose felt a little sour.

Huang Fusheng is also an old teacher, and he has participated in the evaluation of test papers for more than a year. He has seen well-written compositions before, but he has never touched him so much like this one.

Only now did he understand why the name of the composition was called "Two Bowls of Beef Noodles".

"Full marks! This kind of composition will not be given full marks, but what kind of composition will be given full marks."

Huang Fusheng stood up and said to the leader of the marking team.

"Group Leader Lu, I found a good composition here, and I want to give it full marks."

The silent grading room suddenly became lively, not only the team leader Lu, but also other teachers in front of the computer got up and walked over.

It is not easy to give a perfect score for an essay. If a grading teacher can say this, especially if Huang Fusheng, who has always been strict in grading, can say this, it must be a good article.

So everyone is very curious.

Huang Fusheng moved aside. It is not enough for him to give a full score to one person. It needs the approval of multiple teachers and review team leaders. After all, this is a college entrance examination, and it must be fair.

But he wasn't worried at all, he was the first to refuse to give full marks to such a composition.

"Ugh"

A few minutes later, a long sigh sounded in the marking room.
Then came the voice of Team Leader Lu.

"I agree with Mr. Huang's opinion. Give full marks, what's everyone's opinion?"

"I agree!"

"I agree."

"I have no opinion."

　This story has been deleted and changed a bit. There are too many original texts, so everyone should be familiar with it. I added some of my own understanding to the reading comprehension on the test papers in middle school.Don't spray if you don't like it!I've run out of numbers.Thanks to Huihuiyang, gasboy for their monthly ticket support, thank you for your recommendation tickets and subscription support!
　　
　
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