After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 188 Be a thief, not guard against thieves!

"Su Muzhe, the original meaning of the name"

Several old people in the box read softly.

Although they are not members of the Poetry Association, they are all masters of martial arts novels, they can be regarded as high-level intellectuals, and there is a lot of knowledge required to write novels, so they understand a little bit.

[Su Muzhe] is the name of the Cipai, with seven sentences in the front and back paragraphs, four square rhymes, and double tones, with a total of 62 characters.

In terms of rhyme and rhythm, this poem is correct, but it doesn’t feel as rhyme-like as their usual [Su Muzhe] poems, which is just the line that Liu Sheng praised just now [Although there are thousands of people, we are] Let's go] It's a little taste.

But it's not bad, there are not many poems written by them in martial arts novels that can catch up with this one.

As for the following [original meaning], as the name suggests, it refers to the original idea or intention, and there is no special meaning in calling this name, it is that the chapter table of contents corresponds to the content of the text, nothing more!

Relatively speaking, they prefer the first song "Youth Tour", except for Yagyu, because some lines in this poem are very heroic, so he naturally likes this one given his personality.

It's a pity that Liu Sheng likes it. He hasn't read the content of the subsequent chapters, and he has a little knowledge.

So he spoke.

"Old Feng, it's okay to simply be idle. You can tell the stories of [Hu Han's Enmity, Heroes' Tears] and [Although there are thousands of people, I will go], we will help you to check it out."

"I said Lao Liu! If you want to know the follow-up, ask Lao Feng in private after drinking tea. We don't want to know now."

As soon as Liu Sheng finished speaking, the overweight old man spoke up.

This old man has a good relationship with Sima Beijie, so he doesn't want to mention "Dragon Babu" too much.

Immediately, two people echoed.

"What do you mean I want to know the follow-up. I'm worried that Lao Feng's apprentice wrote something wrong. Recently, there has been a lot of trouble online. You old antiques don't usually go online. What do you know!"

Liu Sheng stared, and directly turned back. Since the "Wang Teng" incident last time, Liu Sheng would also pay attention to the news on the Internet from time to time.

"Online? What's the trouble?"

The overweight old man doesn't usually surf the Internet, so he didn't understand what Liu Sheng said.

"He should be talking about that post. Many people on the Internet say that the protagonist of "Dragon Ba Bu" is not Duan Yu, but Murong Fu. Isn't that right, Liu Sheng?"

A delicate and soft voice came, and Mo Yue spoke.

Apart from Feng Zijie and Liu Sheng, she should be the third person in this box who frequently surfs the Internet, so she knows about the popular post on the literature forum.

Liu Sheng smiled awkwardly when he heard this, and didn't continue to answer the conversation.

This is exactly what he was referring to, and it was just about the protagonist of "Dragon Ba Bu". Yagyu's opinion was different from that of the readers on the Internet. Murong Fu could not be the protagonist.

To ask why, it is very simple, the eyes of veteran writers.
Because no matter in terms of plot direction, characterization, or foreshadowing, Duan Yu is currently the number one protagonist.

Liu Sheng said that he was worried that Chen Tianhong's writing was biased. In fact, it was just a pretext, and it could also be understood as a step.

It's a pity that this step of his is destined to fail.

"When did you, Liu Sheng, worry about eating carrots so salty? How could that kid make such a low-level mistake, but some people are old and dim-witted, and their thinking is slow, so it's normal to think so."

As soon as the sound came out, the whole room was silent, and even Liu Sheng forgot to turn back.

Everyone looked at Sima Beijie with weird faces, he was the one who said that just now.

The meaning of Sima Beijie's words is easy to understand, it's purely mocking Liu Sheng, which is nothing, as it's a common thing for the two of them to fight each other every day.

The point is that apart from ridiculing Liu Sheng, this remark reveals his approval of Chen Tianhong.

This surprised everyone, they all know Sima Beijie's character, with eyes above the top, arrogant and less courteous, especially for those who offend him, that's hardly false rhetoric, not to mention approval, it's a shame for his works Spray from beginning to end
But now not only is there approval in the words, but they have been talking about "Tian Long Ba Bu" for so long, and Sima Beijie still hasn't criticized the book.
So just an explanation, he accepted it!Conquered by "Tian Long Ba Bu".

After Sima Beijie said this, he immediately regretted it.

He was really just used to it, he habitually wanted to piss off his old enemy, but forgot that he was not suitable for talking at the moment.

There's no way, it's really what Liu Sheng said that hit his itching spot.

Duan Yu is not the protagonist?nonsense!
Not to mention anything else, let's just talk about the latest two chapters. The hero who was hailed as North Qiaofeng by the people in the world has sworn brothers with Duan Yu, which indirectly proves Duan Yu's identity as the protagonist.

If it's really a supporting role, will they be sworn brothers?
What other character design, hammer, brother who can be recognized by this hero, what problems can there be with the character design.

I'm sorry for his intelligence.
In fact, Sima Beijie also really wanted to find out the faults of "Tian Long Ba Bu" and criticize and ridicule him, but after following this road, his thoughts have been withdrawn a little bit.

The scene was so awkward, everyone was a little uncertain about Sima Beijie's pulse, and it was difficult to speak.

Liu Sheng thought about it, but he didn't know how to refute it. Sima Beijie could see it, so naturally he could too.
In the end, it was Feng Zijie who said something, and his words were like a thunderbolt on the ground, making everyone in the room anxious and tender.

He said so.

"Old Liu was right to be worried. My apprentice did write something wrong. He left the main line of Duan Yu without writing, but he actually created a new main line. The chapters in the second half of the book are about this new line. Mainline."

"What? New main line? Really changed the protagonist? Could it be really Murong Fu? Old Feng, I didn't blame you, so you collapsed in the later stage. Why did you become a master? Didn't you remind that child, can you do it? No, let me come."

Liu Yu was the first to speak.

"No wonder the styles of the two poems are different, one graceful and the other heroic. It turned out that the main line was changed and the protagonist changed. But with two protagonists, it is difficult to control in the later stage! How to set up the plot structure, who is higher and who is lower? You can't chew as much as you want."

Mo Yue looked worried, she quite liked Duan Yu's line.

"Old Feng, young people have a lot of ideas and can understand, but you have to dissuade them! You have to eat food one bite at a time, and you have to walk step by step on the road."

A mature and prudent old man also spoke.

Sima Beijie was also full of surprise. It's strange to say that he should be happy, but ... the same thoughts as Liu Sheng and Mo Yue had arisen in his heart, and he wanted to dissuade them.

Fortunately, he held back in time, otherwise he would put himself in an embarrassing situation again.

"Hmph, don't be fooled by this old guy, Old Feng. Look at the smug look on his face. His apprentice is really going to collapse. How can he do this? I said, Old Feng, what are you trying to do? There are no outsiders here. It doesn't matter if you talk about it, we can still go out and talk nonsense."

Someone broke the secret with one word.

Everyone turned to look at Feng Zijie, and sure enough, they saw that he had returned to the appearance of reciting poems just now, with his chest straightened, his beard stroked, and his face full of complacency.
However, Feng Zijie sold out enough, but in the end he only said eight words.

"The Buddha said, don't say it, don't say it."

"why?"

Just when everyone was about to scold Feng Zijie for being an old man, and deliberately teasing people, Sima Beijie subconsciously said three words, which turned the scene down again.

As the saying goes, the circle is not big, don't talk nonsense, subconscious talk is the easiest to embarrass
Ten seconds later, Liu Sheng said something faintly.

"Don't you know why? There are bad people among the masses!"

It means something. Everyone understands!

"Old thief Yagyu, this old man will fight with you"

"Old Duan's words are so familiar! I seem to have heard them before."

This idea flashed through the minds of several people in the box.

But the reality of the situation has not waited for them to think about it, because Sima Beijie and Liu Sheng have already started a full-scale martial arts and they are about to get up to fight.

Leaving aside Sima Beijie and Liu Sheng who will win this time, Chen Tianhong has already typed the last word on the high-speed rail, because the train is about to arrive.

Excluding the 13-word draft of "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", he coded another [-] words on the car, and he wanted to update [-] words at a time.

Although the number of words is not as good as that of a Supreme Being, it is still close, but it is!The patron's father didn't say that he wanted to add updates, he took the initiative, and I think book fans won't make irresponsible remarks.

At this time, the notification that the train was about to arrive sounded, and Chen Tianhong hurriedly logged into the author's background and uploaded the manuscript.

Just after uploading, Chen Tianhong received a call from his father, asking if he had arrived at the station.

His father, Chen Zhide, came to pick him up, and the reason why Chen Tianhong asked his father to pick him up was not because he was more expensive, but because there were too many things that he couldn't finish by himself.

The love of the folks is very thick!
When Chen Tianhong finished uploading "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals", in a smoky office, a man in his thirties was smoking cigarettes one after another. Judging from the expression on his face, He is a little irritable.

The man's name is Min Daming, and he is a small owner of a decoration company. The company is not big, not even considered medium, but the annual income of one million is still acceptable.

Min Daming is one of the representatives of that kind of grassroots counterattack. He used to be just a decoration worker. With hard work and a slightly smart head, he finally became what he is now after more than ten years of struggle.

The reason why Min Daming is said to be a little smart is because he suffered a lot on the way from worker to boss, was deceived many times, and was deceived again and again.

He was born as a farmer and was too simple. Even though he experienced severe beatings from the society and became a small capitalist, he still retained a little bit of his original intention.

Just like now, he is caught in a dilemma again.

The cause was a project, which was supposed to be picked up by his company, but it was robbed by another decoration company. Min Daming didn't say anything, the boss used to be his partner, but later because of the relationship of interests The two parted ways.

Min Daming still cared about his affection, but told himself in his heart that this was the last time he gave in, because it was not the first time
However, the boss finished half of the project, but the workers quit because they were in arrears of wages.Originally, it was enough to make up the salary, but he invested in other projects again, which caused problems in the capital chain and temporarily could not pay the salary.

And because of his character, almost no one was willing to lend him money, so the call came to Min Daming.

According to the rules of the shopping mall, not only could Min Daming not borrow the money, but he had to dig out the bottom line and poach the workers.

Shopping malls are like battlefields, and the morality of shopping malls is reserved for true friends, not for such people.

However, Min Daming still misses the friendship he once had, so he is very entangled.

The notification sound of the mobile phone rang, not the ringtone of the phone, but the news of the update of the books on the bookshelf.

Min Daming ignored the first sound, he knew that "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" had been updated, because there was only this book in the bookshelf.

It's just that he's not in the mood to watch it now, and then there's the second, third... non-stop ringing for a whole few minutes.

Min Daming finally couldn't bear it any longer, swiped open his phone, and opened the bookshelf.

"Damn, more than 40 chapters have been updated. Today is Chinese New Year. Is the author crazy?"

Seeing a whole row of newly added chapters in the message prompt, Min Daming burst into foul language.

For book fans, nothing makes them happier than seeing such an update. Min Daming decided not to worry about whether to help or not, but to finish the book.

Unlike Wu Wenyi, Min Daming has been chasing updates, so he is chasing the latest chapter of mortals, which is the chapter on the spiritual world.

The plot in the current book is at its climax, the demon world invades the spirit world, and the battle begins in Abyss of Heaven City where Han Li is located. At this time, he is already a monk at the fusion stage, and he is also a top monk in the spirit world.

The plot of this update is that after the outbreak of the Great War, Yitian City near Tianyuan City has been taken care of by the Demon Realm and has fallen into crisis.
Hmm. In fact, it was based on the principle that Han Li and another female cultivator at the fusion stage supported Yitian City. On the way, they almost single-handedly killed three demon masters of the same realm, and obtained the demon lock (foreshadowing).

"Tsk tsk, after the advanced fusion, the old devil Han's ability is good! With the gold-eating worm in hand, I have it in the world! Just don't turn into a monkey at every turn, it looks a bit inhuman"

Min Daming was very happy to watch this part of the battle. It is rare to see the protagonist Han Li show off his supernatural power in the book.

The plot in the book continues. After successfully arriving at Yitian City, there is still a big battle. Han Li kills Venerable Yan in a second, leads out the Yin and Yang two brakes, kills the Yin brake again, and then breaks out of the colorful light tower. He is about to continue the battle. When I was no one else, the ancestor of the Mahayana period of the demon world was bloody, and he came to the spirit world in an incarnation.

Like the Nascent Soul stage monks in the human world, the Mahayana stage monks belong to the ceiling of combat power in the spiritual world.

Although Han Li is only one level behind the Mahayana stage, he is absolutely invincible, even if he is an incarnation.

Fortunately, in the previous battle, he got the Demon-Suppressing Lock, which sealed an old devil Che Qigong. After Han Li asked for advice, he temporarily repelled the bloody light, used his natal skills to run away, and escaped the danger.

"Sure enough, it's such a routine, MD, I'm always handsome, but I have to run away in three seconds. I'm really convinced. I ran from the human world to the spirit world. Does it mean that I have to run after I reach the fairy world and become a fairy? You can't pretend too much. for a while"

It didn't take long for Min Daming to have a toothache again after reading it, but the old book fans are used to it. Anyway, after running away, there must be a plot to continue pretending to be X.

On the way, Han Li also helped Master Heiyu capture the Huangliang Stone Spirit. However, misfortunes never come singly. He also met another incarnation of Yuansha, the ancestor of the demon world. Han Paopao couldn't resist anymore.

At a critical moment, he met his friend Lei Zhenzi, who was also an escape expert who was not inferior to Han Li. The two of them combined, and they were number one in the world. They successfully ran with double thunder arrays, and finally returned safely to Tianyuan City.

The running scene described in this paragraph, the atmosphere is rendered very well, especially when Yuan Sha and Xue Guang teamed up to hunt down and kill, Min Daming felt a sweat watching it, for fear that the protagonist Han Li would capsize and lose himself The huge name of running No.1.

"Well, I succeeded in running away, so I should let it go for a while! I don't know how the author will write this time."

Min Daming clicked on the next chapter with great anticipation.

However, after Han Li successfully returned to the city, he got bad news. In Yitian City, where he went to rescue, two people also escaped from the war, and one of them, named Qinglongshanren, broke his mind. On the body of Han Li's friend Bingfeng.

The yin qi of Bingfeng can help monks increase the chance of breaking through the realm, which is a great temptation for any immortal cultivator.

In fact, Master Qinglong was not an idiot either. He didn't dare to offend Han Li easily, but almost no monks could escape from the pursuit of monks in the Mahayana period. He thought that Han Li had fallen, so he moved his mind.

However, Master Qinglong didn't know that Han Li would definitely rank among the top three in the spirit world when it comes to running skills. He really kicked the iron board this time.

Han Li was able to keep Bingfeng by his side for protection. Firstly, it was because the two of them were good friends in the human world, and there was a bond between them. Secondly, this was the main point. Bingfeng's primordial yin energy could also help Han Li break through the realm.

For Han Li, who valued profit very much, Master Qinglong's operation undoubtedly stimulated his sensitive nerves.

"Master Qinglong is really shameless. He just saved your life. If you don't want to pay back, it's fine, and you still want to steal his things. The world of cultivating immortals really comes first. Benefits come first. What kind of life-saving grace is in front of benefits? not worth."

After Min Daming scolded the characters in the book for a while, he suddenly froze. This Master Qinglong looks like his former partner.
To be exact, Min Daming had lent him money more than once to tide him over, but he would still grab projects that belonged to Min Daming.

As the plot continued, Han Li rushed to Douyuan Pavilion and rescued Bingfeng.Master Qinglong saw that Han Li was not dead, so he naturally lost his mind. However, Han Li's character could not bear it so easily. He wanted to practice alone with Master Qinglong.

When the cool point came, Han Li shot with all his strength, turned into a monkey again, and defeated Master Qinglong within three moves.

In fact, with his strength, he could completely kill Master Qinglong.But because it was not good to be in front of everyone in the city, he spared Master Qinglong's life for the time being, and gave him three days to leave, otherwise he would be ready for ashes to ashes and ashes to ashes.

"That's not right! With Old Devil Han's character of vengeance, how can he be so talkative? It's possible that he has changed his nature, shouldn't it!"

After reading this paragraph, Min Daming felt that he had missed something.

So he read this chapter again, and finally read the foreshadowing
There is such a paragraph in the original text.

With a loud "boom", the golden shadow of the fist brushed past Master Qinglong's ear, and hit the open space on the stone platform.

What no one noticed was that the moment the golden fist shadow flashed by, a slender thing like a hair shot out from it, it fell into Master Qinglong's ears, and disappeared in a flash.

The next chapter once again highlights the iron rule for Han Li to survive among the cultivators, that is, to cut the weeds and root out the roots without leaving any future troubles.

At the same time, it proved that Han Li's IQ was online
It was not easy to make moves in the city, so he forced Master Qinglong to leave, and because Han Li himself was not good at making moves. After all, he is also a human race. does not exist.

So he arranged for his spirit beast to follow Master Qinglong out of the city secretly, and kill him after he left the city.

The spirit beast raised a question. It is not as abnormal as Han Li. It can kill enemies at the same level.

Han Li told the spirit beast that he had tampered with the Qinglongshanren in the third move, so that it could rest assured.

As a result, just as Han Li said, the spirit beast hadn't fought against the Azure Dragon Master outside the city for long, and the slender hair-like thing left by Han Li had an effect, and there was no more Azure Dragon Master in the world.
Seeing this is only half of the updated plot, but Min Daming did not choose to continue reading. He looked at the beginning of this chapter and was dazed.

The beginning is a dialogue between Han Li and Bingfeng.
"Master Qinglong will be extremely resentful towards fellow daoists from now on. Brother Han will have to be more careful in the future. Of course, Brother Han himself doesn't have to be afraid of this person, but he still has to tell his disciples to be careful."

After Bingfeng thought about it, she reminded a few words.

"Don't bother, his heart is very small! Now that we have formed a grudge, we can't keep this Master Qinglong in the world. There is only one thousand days to be a thief, how can there be a thousand days to guard against a thief!"

Han Li exhaled lightly, and said in a cold voice.

"There is only a thousand days to be a thief in the world, how can there be a thousand days to guard against a thief."

Min Daming repeated this sentence repeatedly, and he substituted this sentence into reality.
In the shopping mall, the competition among peers is very fierce, because the plate is so big, if you share more, you will have less, so for the sake of profit, sometimes morality really rarely exists.

And Min Daming's partner is a typical mercenary.

Min Daming also knew in his heart that even if he borrowed money to help him tide over the difficulties this time, he would still grab his own project when he got there.

He may be scruples about affection, but Min Daming also thinks about his workers. The workers are not dependent on their families, and they don't want to earn more money.

Instead of preventing him from robbing his own project at that time, it is better to watch him go bankrupt this time, so that he has no chance to rob his own project.
After all, he did all of this by himself. Min Daming's help is due to love, and it is his duty not to help.
"Hey, keep reading! Leave him alone."

Min Daming finally made a decision.

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