After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 192 Excellent People Are Always Busy

The Buddha said that all living beings are equal, and the Tao said that everyone can do something. Of course, everyone's soul is noble. But in real life, there are still differences between people.

This is the same as playing online games, there is also a disparity in rank, and this disparity is like the altitude hidden in the heart, which is insurmountable.

For example, in the box now, the old people present are all great writers in the martial arts circle, but there is still a gap between them.

Zhao Shousheng is their ceiling, he has long stood on the top of the mountain, condescending, and has a clear view.
So they were not sure who the second protagonist of "Tian Long Ba Bu" was, but for Zhao Shousheng, he was basically sure that it was almost the same. After all, with his vision and decades of experience in martial arts novels As far as it is concerned, it is really not difficult.

"Hu Han's grievances, you must shed heroic tears, Mr. Zhao, you mean that Qiao Feng is the second male protagonist, but he is obviously a tragic setting! In just one chapter, he has experienced From the leader of the largest gang in Jianghu, the famous "Northern Qiaofeng", he was reduced to a barbarian who betrayed his relatives"

Liu Sheng expressed his doubts, which did not conform to the plot logic of normal martial arts novels.

"Old Zhao. How about you give me a comment."

Someone also asked.

They didn't doubt what Zhao Shousheng meant, because when he said that, everyone saw the shock on Feng Zijie's face, which proved that what Zhao Shousheng said was correct.

It's just that they don't understand, they really don't understand how martial arts novels can set the protagonist as a tragedy?

It's not that martial arts novels can't set the protagonist to be very miserable. Many protagonists' parents and relatives have already "sacrificed to heaven" at the beginning of the chapter, and Sima Beijie's "The Lonely Star" is like this.

But the character setting of the protagonist and the subsequent plot trend are not tragic, and the ending will definitely not be "death" or "retirement".

But Qiao Feng's follow-up plot will most likely be tragic in the end, and Yagyu is certain about this. After all, he is also a martial arts master, and the character setting can still be seen.

Zhao Shousheng pondered for a few seconds, opened the martial arts magazine in his hand again, and spoke.

"Old Liu is right. Judging from the current plot, the character Qiao Feng is a tragic hero. From Chapter 1 [The Cause of the Past], we can see that yesterday he was a high-ranking and powerful hero, and now he is a barbarian of a different race. Others are relieved when they are relieved of their responsibilities, but he is heavy on both ends.”

"It can be learned from this that Qiao Feng's follow-up portrayal must be inseparable from the grievances and entanglements with the beggar gang and the Central Plains martial arts. His psychology is contradictory. He has to care about the kindness of nurturing himself to become a talent. He must also distinguish between right and wrong, and find out who killed himself. The enemies of the biological parents then took revenge.

From Lao Feng's follow-up sentence [Hu Han's grievances, heroes must shed tears], Qiao Feng's ending can already be determined. "

"That's right! Mr. Zhao, how can you say that Qiao Feng is the hero, a character destined to end in tragedy?"

The more Liu Sheng listened, the more confused he became.

"Is that what you all think?"

Zhao Shousheng didn't answer immediately, instead he asked the people in the box.

Everyone nodded in agreement.

"Oh, this is a misunderstanding of thinking! You always remember the inherent style of martial arts novels, and evaluate works based on the existing circle. This is the same as drawing a circle with a compass. No matter how big your circle is, the origin is still in the In the circle, if you don't let go of your thinking, how can you understand this kid's innovative works, you guys... your thinking is rigid!"

Zhao Shousheng shook his head and sighed, the disappointment on his face could no longer be concealed.
Although today's martial arts novels are prosperous, they are full of stagnation. The styles of their works are stereotyped. The great writers continue their own style, and other writers imitate the style of the great masters. During the period, there are occasional authors who innovate, but they can't escape the inherent pattern. It's nothing more than replacing the old with the new clothes.

"Innovation? Mr. Zhao, you mean that the style of "Dragon Babu" is different from the current martial arts novels, and there are new things?"

An old man keenly grasped the sensitive words in Zhao Shousheng's words, and he even stood up excitedly.

"Is there? Didn't Mr. Zhao say earlier that it is still a tragic hero's plot? I didn't see anything new in "Dragon Babu"!"

Some people are excited, while others are puzzled.

After Feng Zijie heard Zhao Shousheng's words, his face was also excited. He had read the follow-up script, and besides Chen Tianhong, he had the deepest understanding of the direction of the plot.

He also felt the extraordinaryness of "Tian Long Ba Bu", to be exact, it is a new path, but he has only watched half of the plot, so he is not too sure.

"Let's listen to what Mr. Zhao said first. If this is the case, even if you offend Mr. Cao, you must let Tianhong follow the path of martial arts novels."

Feng Zijie secretly thought in his heart.

Zhao Shousheng continued to speak.

"Let's talk about Chapter 1. The beginning of this chapter is the verbal conflict between Qiao Feng and the beggar gang. The dialogue alone has written most of the chapter, which is a bit long-winded, but if you read it carefully, you will find that in these dialogues, there are more It perfectly complements the character of Qiao Feng.

For example, Qiao Feng's sentence [Mrs. Ma, with Qiao's skills, if I want to go to your house to get something, I will never return empty-handed, let alone lose any belongings.Not to mention that there are only three or two women in the house, even the inner courtyard of the imperial palace, the commander's tent in the prime minister's mansion, among thousands of troops, it is not necessarily impossible for Qiao to get anything. 】

This sentence alone has established Qiao Feng's image, and this style of writing does not focus on the level of martial arts, but only relies on the momentum of the language to convince people. This kind of writing style is very characteristic because young people have a lot of ideas. ! "

Zhao Shousheng pointed to the fragment of the chapter in his hand and said this first.

Everyone can understand, that's right, Qiao Feng is a great hero, a great hero, he can be called the protagonist, and he is more deeply rooted in the hearts of the people than Duan Yu's character design.

"In addition to setting off the character of the characters, there are also great principles in the dialogue, such as Zhao Qiansun's sentence [Han people are not necessarily superior to others, and Khitan people are not necessarily inferior to pigs and dogs!] There are also some "politically correct" words (political words are not necessarily inferior to others!) Intercepted) This kind of discourse is the most provocative.
It can be said that this is a kind of innovation, which is reflected in the details and in the grasp of the size of the characters. It is undoubtedly a new way to throw away the pretentiousness of the plot and add philosophical thinking about ancient history and social "politics". This child writes like this, not only is the writing skillful. "

This passage was very long. Zhao Shousheng picked up the tea on the side, took a few sips, and then continued.

"The same is true for the latter chapter. It is relatively more bitter to read, and it also confirms the beginning of Qiao Feng's sadness. From the foreshadowing left in the paragraph, combined with Lao Feng's review of the second half of the chapter, the following The story should be the development of Qiao Feng looking for the enemy, this kind of plot is somewhat limited, and cannot escape the setting of the tragic hero. But it is not impossible to complete the turning point."

For example, the chapter "Although there are thousands of people, I will go", I think it should be the sublimation point of Qiao Feng's character, and it is also a turning point in the development of the subsequent plot.

But what makes me more curious is the plot in the future, Hu Han's enmity!Hu Han Enmity!Song and Liao, Xixia and Dali, the Central Plains and foreign countries haha, the conflict of national righteousness, what a courage, what a young man haha”

In the end, Zhao Shousheng's voice became more and more loud, and the smiles on his face became more and more, and finally turned into a hearty laughter, which was full of refreshing
Such a scene fell in everyone's eyes, making them a little dazed. Zhao Shousheng hadn't laughed so loudly in his memory for a long time, and even at his birthday banquet yesterday, he had never seen him so happy.

And they also understood the meaning in Zhao Shousheng's words, "Tian Long Ba Bu" is a new style of martial arts that is different from the current martial arts novels
"Sure enough, Mr. Zhao can also see that the follow-up plot has national righteousness. No, I have to call Tianhong. Such a structure requires a lot of writing skills. He is still too young. He has to hurry up and let Tianhong see him. Old Zhao."

Thinking this way, Feng Zijie called Chen Tianhong.

Kyoto University, in Dormitory 404.

"Tianhong, just tell me, is that Western Xia warrior really Murong Fu? Is he the main character? Han Li, will you write the Immortal World chapter?"

Gao Wanfeng was still asking.

"Student Chen Tianhong, I think "Country Teacher" can be written as a follow-up. Do you plan to write a follow-up? There is also a literary competition. What kind of genre do you plan to write?"

Yu Zhijie was also asking.

"Chen Tianhong, do you have other hobbies besides writing? Do you like playing games? Do you like cars?"

This is Ximen Xue. He can't get involved in discussing novels, but he can find common topics from other aspects.

Chen Tianhong: "."

As the saying goes, three women are equal to 1500 ducks, and now Chen Tianhong feels that three boys are not far behind.

It's not that he doesn't want to answer, but that after he answers, there will be new questions. His three roommates are like a hundred thousand whys.

Chen Tianhong pursed his lips, turned to look at Xiao Guojian.

He wanted to say: "Uncle Xiao, otherwise, I'd better live in that single room. I decided to enjoy special benefits."

At this time, the phone rang, and the loud ringtone used to be no less than a fairy sound to Chen Tianhong now.

Because he finally has a reason to temporarily escape from 1500 ducks.

After saying sorry to the three of Gao Wanfeng, Chen Tianhong took his mobile phone to the balcony of the dormitory.

"Tianhong, your report is over? I was rehearsing a drama just now. I didn't see the message on my phone, sorry!"

The call was from Liu Yifei.

"Well. It's over, you are rehearsing a play, what play?"

"It's about campus life of college students. This program will be performed at the freshman party. After changing several scripts, the teacher is still not satisfied."

There was exhaustion in Liu Yifei's voice, and she only talked about such small complaints with people close to her.

"Campus life for college students? Short stories?"

"Well, a short story, within 20 minutes."

"That's easy, I'll write one for you tonight! Make sure your teacher is satisfied."

"Do you have time? Didn't you just report a lot of things. I have to study at night."

Although Liu Yifei believed that Chen Tianhong could write a good script, she was still afraid that Chen Tianhong would be too tired.

"It's okay, it won't take much time."

Chen Tianhong said nonchalantly, once the brain plug-in is activated, he doesn't need to think at all, he just needs to find a good short drama and code it out, and it will definitely not exceed an hour before and after.

Afterwards, they chatted for a few more words, and agreed to meet each other on the weekend, and Liu Yifei went on to get busy with rehearsals.

As soon as the phone was hung up, Chen Tianhong's phone rang again, it was his teacher Cao Xingkui.

"Tianhong, have you gone to Kyoto University?"

"Well, teacher, I'm here, I've reported it, and I'm chatting with my roommate in the dormitory."

"You have nothing to do this afternoon?"

"It should be fine. We only have evening self-study and class meetings at night."

"That's just right. In the afternoon, you go to the School of Physics and find the dean of the School of Physics, Ji Taidong. I have already agreed with him. From now on, you will spend time every week to learn physics knowledge from him."

"Ok."

Chen Tianhong fully agreed that he can get it now, as long as he doesn't stay in the dormitory.

Besides, being able to meet a dean is a good thing, and learning physics knowledge is extremely beneficial to his development. It just so happens that the literary competition is about to start, so he doesn't have to worry about writing science fiction.

The phone hung up, and before Chen Tianhong could walk out of the balcony, the phone rang again, it was Li Man's.

"Tianhong, have you arrived in Kyoto?"

"It's here. Sister Man."

"Do you have time at noon? I want to invite you and your uncles and aunts to have a meal. It's near your school, so it will be convenient to go back to school."

"It might not work at noon, we have an appointment with someone."

"That night? Night?"

"In the evening, I'll ask my parents later, and I'll call you back later."

Chen Tianhong thought for a while, and replied like this.

He knew that Li Man had good intentions, but it depended on his parents' wishes. They were going to have dinner with Xiao Guojian at noon, and there might be arrangements in the evening.

"How do you feel, today will be very busy?"

Chen Tianhong muttered.

The phone continued to ring and this time it was Feng Zijie's turn.

"Tianhong."

"Old Feng, I'm in Kyoto, and the report is over."

Chen Tianhong rushed to answer directly.

"Hehe, you boy, I haven't even asked yet. That's right, I'm also in Kyoto. Do you have time this afternoon? Elder Zhao wants to see you."

Hearing Feng Zijie's words, Chen Tianhong wanted to say that he didn't have time, but when he heard that Mr. Zhao wanted to see him, Chen Tianhong couldn't refuse.

He naturally knew who Feng Zijie was referring to as Mr. Zhao. In fact, Chen Tianhong was also very curious about Zhao Shousheng. He really wanted to meet the "master of martial arts" in this world.

He read the book "Kunlun", it can be said to be the pinnacle of the old school martial arts... In the previous life on the earth, it can be said to be a masterpiece.

"Old Feng, please send me the location."

Chen Tian decided to go to see Mr. Zhao first, and then go to see the dean of the School of Physics when he came back. After all, they are all in Kyoto University, so it is more convenient.

The phone finally calmed down, and no one called again.

Chen Tianhong breathed a sigh of relief, he calculated the time in his mind, and felt that he could still be busy.

After walking out of the balcony, he found that there was an extra person in the dormitory. She was a woman about 30 years old. She was of medium build, slightly fat, and had very fair skin. Her appearance was not stunning, but her eyes were very friendly.

After seeing Chen Tianhong, the woman showed a gentle smile on her face, and took the initiative to take a few steps forward.

"You are classmate Chen Tianhong! I am Tang Huiru, the counselor of Huaxia Literature Class One."

"Hello, Teacher Tang!"

Chen Tianhong immediately replied politely.

The major he applied for was Huaxia Literature, and he was in the same class as Class One. It could be said that Tang Huiru was his counselor.

Tang Huiru looked at the most famous student in her class, and said with a smile on her face.

"Student Chen Tianhong, I have a task for you. Tomorrow at the opening ceremony for new students at noon, the school leaders decided to let you speak on behalf of this year's freshmen. You must prepare your speech. I think you don't need the help of the teacher. "

"No, no. Don't worry, Teacher Tang, Tianhong can handle it by himself, right, Tianhong."

Mother Liu Yanhong agreed on her son's behalf. In her opinion, this was a very revealing thing. Besides, since her son is already a writer, it is not difficult to write a speech.

Chen Tianhong smiled wryly. If it was possible, he really wanted the teacher to write it as a ghostwriter, and he could just add what he wanted to say.

It's not that he doesn't want to write, but that he's a bit busy today.

"No problem, it's no problem, it's Teacher Tang, I'm going to ask for a leave of absence in the afternoon and go out for a while."

Now that the counselor is here, Chen Tianhong decides to tell Zhao Shousheng about going to see him in the afternoon. The school's rules and regulations... still have to go.

"Going off-campus? What's the matter!"

Tang Huiru asked.

"Tianhong, the school leaders are going to see you this afternoon. You're fine, so don't go out yet."

Xiao Guojian said this.

Chen Zhide and Liu Yanhong also looked at their son.

"School leader, one more job! Sure enough. Excellent people are always busy."

Chen Tianhong said something in his heart mocking himself.

"Mr. Zhao Shousheng wants to see me"

Just as Chen Tianhong finished speaking, a thunderous roar sounded in the dormitory.
"What! Old Mr. Zhao! Zhao Kunlun!"

Needless to say, Gao Wanfeng was the only one who could make such a sound.

It took more than ten seconds for everyone in the house to react after being shocked
Xiao Guojian's expression was complicated, Tang Huiru was smiling, Yu Zhijie and his father began to push up their glasses again, their eyes were staring round, Ximenxue was a little confused.

As for Chen Zhide and Liu Yanhong, their faces were nothing but pride.

"Then go! It's important to meet Mr. Zhao first."

(End of this chapter)