After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 72

Jinling Hengdu Cinema.

A beautiful girl with a very delicate appearance has attracted the attention of many male compatriots.

Even if the girl is wearing a bloated down jacket, she can't hide her beauty, especially the side face gives people a sense of surprise that charms all living beings.

It's a pity that most of the people who come to the cinema to watch movies are couples. Even if these male compatriots want to strike up a conversation, they still have to take care of the girlfriends around them.

Moreover, this beautiful girl was holding two cups of milk tea in her hands, staring at the elevator with her big beautiful eyes, looking forward to it, it was obvious that she was waiting for someone.

And this girl is none other than Liu Yifei.Today she and Chen Tianhong met to watch a movie, Liu Yifei came 10 minutes earlier, and Chen Tianhong just got on the elevator at this moment.

"What kind of movie should I choose to watch later? I usually choose a sweet love movie when I watch it with girls, but the relationship between Yifei and I no longer needs this kind of love movie to imply it. I should choose a movie that can enhance the relationship. movie. Choose Hanna.”

Chen Tianhong was thinking in his heart, and soon the elevator ding-dong signaled that it had arrived.

As soon as he stepped out of the elevator, he saw Liu Yifei waiting for him at the ticket office, holding a cup of milk tea in each hand.When he saw himself, an intoxicating smile instantly appeared on his face.

"Milk Tea Sister? No. Much prettier than Milk Tea Sister."

Chen Tianhong walked forward quickly, muttering, "Yifei, why did you arrive early, didn't you wait too long?"

"No, I just arrived too. Someone has to come first, hee hee, milk tea, hot."

Liu Yifei raised her small face, her misty eyes were full of joy.

She put the milk tea in Chen Tianhong's hand, during which time her fingers touched Chen Tianhong's palm, and she immediately shrank back in surprise
Seeing Liu Yifei's actions, Chen Tianhong finally knew what movie to watch today.

You must choose someone who you can get in close contact with, and you can't make Yi Fei Zai so shy.

"What movie are we watching?"

Chen Tianhong looked at the LED screen displaying movie information on the service desk, pretending to look at it carefully, but in fact he had already made a choice in his heart.

"Anything is fine. Otherwise, let's choose a short one, and you will have to update the novel later! Hmph, that Xiang Anran is really annoying."

When it came to the end, Liu Yifei puffed up her face and was a little annoyed.

These two days, Chen Tianhong and Xiang Anran were competing, and Liu Yifei didn't want Chen Tianhong to fight. When she heard the news, she made a special phone call.

It was not because she was afraid that Chen Tianhong would lose to Xiang Anran, but because she felt distressed. Liu Yifei was worried that Chen Tianhong would stay up late again, which would damage her body too much.

"It's okay, I have one day today. I finished the manuscript of the novel yesterday and sent it out before I came here. I only update [-] to [-] words every day, so there is not much pressure. I want to live our two-person world with you. "

Playing PK with Xiang Anran this time, the pressure on updating is basically zero.Chen Tianhong also updated according to the previous rhythm at the beginning, except that he uploaded 5000 words on the first day, and directly updated 3 words on the second day.

Then he found that Xiang Anran updated 2000 words in one day, that's right, 2000 words in a whole day, and just added punctuation marks.

But for this kind of update that is not as good as salted fish, no one said anything on the Internet.The readers even explained for Xiang Anran that it's okay to update the good articles slowly, as long as they don't stop updating.

This made Chen Tianhong unable to adapt to this rhythm for a while, and even his fans left a message saying, let him write well, don't need to update so much, conceive well, and modify more.

Even the fans of "Shading the Sky" stopped shouting and urging him to make a good preparation for "Swords in the Snow".

What's interesting is that the original words of fans of "Shading the Sky" are "Boss, please help your friends, if "Shading the Sky" can be updated, it can be updated, and if it can't be updated, it can be stopped for a while."

Chen Tianhong was stunned for a while when he saw the fan's message, my friend?What a friend!
After reacting, he sighed: The fans in this world are so cute, the performance that should cooperate is really cooperative!
Hearing the phrase "world for two" from Chen Tianhong's mouth, Liu Yifei blushed again. If it was in the past, she would definitely have to spit it out, but now she feels very sweet in her heart.

"Or let's watch this!"

Chen Tianhong pointed to the second movie message on the LED screen and said.

""Don't Look Back at Midnight", this is a horror movie!"

Liu Yifei read out the name of the movie, she was a little hesitant, shouldn't the two of them watch some sweet movies on a date, why would Tianhong choose to watch horror movies, maybe he likes it better.

This was what Liu Yifei thought.

"Okay, listen to you."

"Beauty, help me get two tickets for "Don't Look Back at Midnight"."

Seeing that Liu Yifei agreed, Chen Tianhong showed a smile of success in his plot. He had already imagined the scene where Liu Yifei curled up in his arms because of fear later.

The movie ticket seller was a young lady. Hearing that Chen Tianhong wanted to buy a ticket for a horror movie, he looked at Liu Yifei, who was well-behaved and stood beside him.

This young lady is in a bad mood, and there is nothing good about men.

"Aren't you thinking about it? This movie is pretty scary."

The young lady didn't immediately get the ticket for Chen Tianhong, but instead asked Liu Yifei, she specially emphasized the word "scary".

"If you don't change it, let's just watch this."

Liu Yifei said it without hesitation, and she took out cash from her wallet and handed it to the conductor.

"Give the money!"

The conductor did not take Liu Yifei's money, but turned to Chen Tianhong and said.

Chen Tianhong took out the money, and he understood that this young lady must have thought that she was plotting against Liu Yifei.

When Chen Tianhong and Liu Yifei were watching a movie, there was also a debate on the literature forum because of the PK between Xiang Anran and Chen Tianhong.

In fact, when Chen Tianhong first published Chapter 1, many people had already commented on "Ask the Immortal" and "The Sword in the Snow".

But so far none of the comments on the posts have been recognized, and even the comments on some posts by the great gods of Xianxia and Internet literature are also controversial.

However, with regard to the controversy over the reviews of these two books, today there is finally a review post that has won the approval of almost everyone.

This is because the person who posted this post is an insider in the literature forum, to be precise, he is a well-known writer.

His ID on the literature forum is Bai Yu, and the owner of this ID is Dongfang Baiyu Feng Zijie, one of the four great gods in the martial arts world.

With this ID alone, no one will question the gold content of this post.

The name of the post is "A Brief Introduction to the Culture of Xianxia, ​​and Comments on "Ask the Immortal" and "The Sword in the Snow" by the way."

"Recently, our literary forum is very lively! Actually, I knew that the author of "Ask the Immortal" was Xiang Anran, and I was the one who invited him on behalf of the Writers Association. As for the reason why Xiang Anran didn't join later, I hope This young man should pay more attention to his private life.

Let me briefly talk about Xianxia culture first. As we all know, Xianxia novels are more illusory and ethereal than traditional martial arts novels.In Xianxia works, there are often gods, immortals, humans, demons, demons, and ghosts.

The content of current Xianxia novels is relatively illusory. The characters in the book are basically fighting monsters and upgrading.

But this kind of novel has no inner substance and spirit, and you may forget it after a while after reading it.And the real fairy-xia cultural novels must have thought.

However, the ideas of works about immortals have always been vague, unlike martial arts novels that have had relatively mature schools of thought since a long time ago.

Xianxia culture has not been until modern times. The predecessors used the Taoist theory of being born to become an immortal, supplemented by metaphysics and Tai Chi, and then borrowed from the chivalrous way in martial arts novels, which injected soul into Xianxia novels.

The success of the novel "Questioning the Immortals" is that it draws on the chivalry of martial arts and combines some Taoist thoughts of cultivating Taoism. I still remember it for a long time.

As I get older, I become a little more verbose.Next, let me talk about the two books "Ask the Immortal" and "The Sword in the Snow".

I don’t talk about the data, because it’s not fair to compare the data. “Ask the Immortal” already has 50 words, and it is very well-known in the Xianxia circle. “The Sword in the Snow” is currently only 5 words. Up.

I will talk about my opinion from the content quality of the current two books.

Let's talk about "Questioning the Immortal" first, the writing skills are not good, Xiang Anran's writing skills are not inferior to those of us old guys.

The main line of the novel is the protagonist Ye Liufeng's road to immortality, which is different from the monster fighting and upgrading in other fairy tales.Although there is a struggle, it is also mixed with the protagonist's thinking about his own way of cultivating immortality, and the questioning and refining of his heart in the world of mortals.

The chivalrous spirit in it is still borrowed from martial arts novels. Although there are some new things, it has not created a new genre, and it is still the routine of classical fairy tales.But it is undeniable that Xiang Anran still wrote out the main idea of ​​Xianxia culture.

I currently rate this book 8 points out of 10 points. I will re-evaluate and score the second half of the novel after it is updated.

Let's talk about "Fighting Knife in the Snow", the author of this book is called the chief eunuch.But I think everyone knows who this is, but I didn't admit it, so I'll call it by this pseudonym.

To be honest, I don’t understand why this book is called this. If martial arts novels are called by this name, it is understandable, but fairy tale novels are not suitable.

The author's writing style is not bad, and the sentences are sonorous and powerful. Compared with ordinary Xiaobai essays, the language in the book is more literary and beautiful.

Although it is worse than Xiang Anran, but this is only tens of thousands of words, if it can be maintained in the future, there will be no difference.After all, the more words there are, the higher the requirements to test the author's skills.

I really haven't figured out the main line of the book so far, the protagonist should be Xu Fengnian, the son of Beiliang.I believe that many readers and friends are not used to this protagonist. A typical playboy, in our modern terms, is a prodigal son.The protagonist is such an image that many people can be dissuaded at the beginning.

However, after I read it carefully, the first few chapters still have some foreshadowing. The protagonist should be hiding his strength and biding his time. For specifics, we still need to continue reading. The number of words is still too small.

The main line of this book is not clear at present, it is not a fairy tale novel, nor is it a martial arts novel, and it has no main idea.

At present, I can only give 2 points, 1 point for the writing, and 1 point for the author's impression.

(End of this chapter)