After I was reborn, I became a great writer

Chapter 74 The First Expert Showdown in the Snow

Qingfeng Fuliu looked at Baiyu Feng Zijie's comment post on the literary forum, and he scored 2 points to 8 points. This was really hard for him to accept. Can't come up with good language.

So he re-read the published 11 chapters of "Fighting Knives in the Snow" several times, trying to find the bright spots.

However, in the end, he found that apart from the good writing and the portrayal of the characters, there were really no bright spots.

To be honest, if he didn't know that this book was written by Hongwen, these few chapters alone would have persuaded him to quit, which meant that the comment post said there was no problem.

"Is it true that Hongwen didn't conceive the plot of the novel just for the sake of writing style? But in this way, no matter how good the writing style is, "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" won't be popular if it doesn't have quality, let alone go with "Questioning Immortals". Competitive. Well, maybe we expected too much from him."

Qingfeng Fuliu and others closed the computer, and didn't read the posts on the literature forum.

There are many people who have the same idea as him, and most of them are fans of "Shading the Sky".Everyone wants to say some praises for "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow", but the fact is that the quality of "Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" is really not as good as "Question" at present!
"Mom. I'm back! Don't cook dinner for me. I've eaten outside."

When Chen Tianhong returned home, he called out to his mother, Liu Yanhong, who was cooking in the kitchen.

"You child, my meal will be ready right away. Didn't I just watch a movie? Why did you come back so late?"

Liu Yanhong came out of the kitchen, and said to her son dissatisfied.

"After watching the movie, we went shopping. Mom, here, my daughter-in-law picked it out for you."

Chen Tianhong handed the small bag in his hand to his mother.

"Qiming Jewelry Store? The jewelry you bought?"

Seeing the five golden characters on the bag, Liu Yanhong was startled.

She carefully opened the packing box in the bag, and a green jade bracelet came into view.

"Emerald Bracelet!"

Seeing the bracelet, Liu Yanhong first yelled in surprise, and then closed the box again.

"Tianhong, what kind of family is this girl? She gave away such a valuable thing as soon as she made a move. Mom can't take it, so take it back."

Although Chen Tianhong handed over half of the manuscript fee to his family, it was a huge sum.However, because of the long-term living habits, their family's life has not become extravagant.

In Liu Yanhong's words, it's better to save the money and wait for Chen Tianhong to marry a wife later.

As for this jadeite bracelet, it cost tens of thousands of yuan at first glance. It's okay to accept the pie from that girl last time, but this bracelet is absolutely unacceptable.

Seeing his mother's serious face, Chen Tianhong
I had no choice but to say: "Mom, although she chose this, I paid for it! You can take it with confidence."

"The money you spent? Where did you get the money? Didn't you hand in all your manuscript fees? You kid even hid it."

Chen Tianhong suddenly felt that buying a bracelet for his mother was a mistake.

"Dad, Mom has something to do with you."

After Chen Tianhong yelled loudly towards the study, he slipped back directly to his bedroom, entered the room and locked the door very skillfully.

"What's the matter? Yanhong? What are you looking for? I'm reading a book."

Chen Zhide came out in a daze, seeing his wife's brows upside down, he felt a little uneasy, he probably didn't do anything.

"Chen Zhide, take care of your son. He even hid his private money. Tell me, did you hide it too? I think I must have learned it from you."

"Private money. Absolutely not! I don't have any private money."

Chen Zhide felt a little guilty, there was indeed private money hidden in a certain thick book in his study.

"Yan Hong. My son's current income is not all the author's fee. Last time, the novel was adapted into a TV series. This one also has copyright fees. Besides, a man can't live without money, so don't worry about it."

"I don't want his money, it's this brat who wasted money recklessly. Look, he bought me a jade bracelet, which cost tens of thousands of dollars. Do you think he's a little lost now! How can money be spent so much?" of."

Liu Yanhong opened the boutique box, carefully put the jade bracelet on her right wrist, and replied while admiring it.

"My son bought it for you? Brat. Why doesn't he want to buy a gift for his father. I even fell in love with a watch some time ago."

Looking at the exquisite jadeite bracelet on his wife's wrist, Chen Zhide felt sour in his heart. Maybe he should have had another daughter in the first place, and the daughter is his father's little padded jacket.

"Huh? Old Chen, what did you mean by that last sentence? A man can't live without money? Do you dislike me for giving you less living expenses?"

Liu Yanhong suddenly remembered something, and scratched her husband with her eyes.

"Absolutely not. The living expenses you give are enough, enough."

Chen Tianhong returned to his bedroom and opened the literature forum. He planned to see how "Fighting Knife in the Snow" was evaluated on the Internet.

When he saw that Bai Yu Feng Zijie's review post was only given 2 points, the corners of Chen Tianhong's mouth twitched.

"Excessive!"

Although the early stage of Xuezhong didn't start like "Zhou Tian", it was a king bomb, and the main line was even a little unclear, and the protagonist was not likable at the beginning.But it's not enough to just give 2 points, and even 1 point is for my own impression.

"It seems that I have to write to the mid-term as soon as possible, otherwise this score will disappoint the fans."

The brilliance of "Fighting Knife in the Snow" starts from the middle stage. Generally, readers who can persist in reading the middle stage will definitely fall in love with this book.

Then Chen Tianhong opened the word document, let's add an update today.

"Aunt Zhang, why is there a bottle of wine here! I don't drink at night."

Miao Mingjie saw that there was a bottle of white wine on the dining table, and even a small wine glass was prepared for him, he said dissatisfied.

"Boss, didn't you tell me? I will prepare a bottle of wine when I eat in the future."

The nanny felt a little aggrieved.

Hearing this, Miao Mingjie was startled.Yes, he said that a few days ago.It was influenced by Hongwen's sentence "I have a jug of wine, which can comfort my whole life", and Hongwen said that it would be better to watch "The Sword in the Snow" with wine.

As a result, these updated chapters in the book made Miao Mingjie drink happily, he even wanted to throw the wine bottle in Hongwen's face.What kind of fairy tale novel is this? There is nothing commendable except for the writing style.

"Take the wine down, and don't bring it up during the meal in the future."

The nanny hurried forward to remove the wine.

"Look at "Shading the Sky", I don't know if it has been updated today."

Miao Mingjie has now formed the habit of reading novels while eating.

When he took out his mobile phone and opened the bookshelf, he found that "Covering the Sky" hadn't been updated, but "Swords in the Snow" had been updated with a few more chapters. After hesitating for a while, Miao Mingjie clicked on the latest chapter.

"Hongwen, can you give me some help. I'll read the last few chapters, but if it doesn't work, I really want to cancel the bookmark."

Chapter 12 There is an old man at the bottom of the lake
Xu Fengnian held his breath and floated under the water. The scene in front of him is enough to write into any novel about ghosts and monsters that would shock the common people in the market: a "Shui Kui" who is about ten feet tall sits cross-legged in the mud, with white hair like water plants, Slowly swaying, Shui Kui is physically strong with his eyes closed. With the light from the goose egg-sized luminous pearl, it can be vaguely seen that Shui Kui's left hand and feet are imprisoned by three arm-thick iron chains. A heavy iron ball.

Is there a prison in the world that is more unbelievable and cruel than this?
Shui Kui opened his eyes, without any emotion, and looked at the only living person he could see in more than ten years.

"It's kind of interesting, it finally tastes like a fairy tale novel, is this a ghost?"

For the first time, Miao Mingjie became interested in the follow-up of this novel, and then he saw that the old man was not a ghost, but a martial arts master.

Then read the next chapter.

Chapter 13 Old Kui with a Knife, Old Huang with a Back Box
I saw that the old man didn't pay any attention to the servants who guarded the pavilion. He dared to look into the universe, and there were few opponents he could value. He just roared: "Then Huang Laojiu, come out and die!"

The groom who was called "Huang Laojiu" by Lao Kui and called "Jian Jiuhuang" by Li Yishan smiled slightly. At that moment, Xu Fengnian's eyes seemed to be shaken. I can't explain what it means to be unclear, but I just feel that the old servant who is as immobile as a mountain is actually more arrogant than the old man with a knife.

"Could it be that this toothless and wretched groom is actually a master? This contrast is a bit unacceptable."

Miao Mingjie understood now that the groom next to the protagonist should be a master of concealment.

I don't see how Lao Huang moves, the wooden box trembles like a dragon's buzzing, humming, not harsh, but shocking.

"Sword One."

The upward end of the red sandalwood box was opened, and a long sword rushed out.

Da Zhuguo, who stood up on the top of the mountain, and Li Yishan, who was in the Tide Tide Pavilion, said at the same time: "Sword One, Dragon Snake.

Da Zhuguo forgot to drink, held his glass and sighed softly, "Jian Er."

Listening to Li Yishan slowly spit out two words in the Chao Pavilion: "Bingdilian."

The two on the mountainside obviously had a tacit understanding.

One sword becomes two swords, and two swords become three swords.

"Sword Three."

"Three catties."

The three swords are already full of sword light, covering the sky and the earth.

Lao Kui with two swords and Lao Huang with three swords.

It's just a demigod.

Xu Fengnian sat down on the boat and said with a smirk, "It deserves a reward, it's a damn high-tech job!"

"Damn, Cowhide! Sword Immortal, this is Sword Immortal! This paragraph of Hongwen is well written! This is the scene of masters duel, not throwing magic weapons at each other.

No, these two are just martial arts masters, not immortals, what kind of battle between immortals will be like, I'm looking forward to it!Haha, let me just say, the novel written by Hongwen must be worth reading, not bad, not bad, just relying on this scene is enough to make it clear, Aunt Zhang, bring me back the wine. "

As soon as the nanny put the wine back in the wine cabinet, she heard the boss yelling for wine again. This wave of operations really made her unable to do so.

　The specific fighting plot. I deleted a lot. I originally wanted to delete it again.. But that will affect friends who have never seen Xuezhong!

　　
　
(End of this chapter)