I am the king of hard rice

Chapter 288
One or two winds in the world: "Requesting the manuscript again? Are you kidding me? Didn't I send it to you five or ten minutes ago? Brother, you remind me every five or ten minutes? It's too much. If you do this again, I will be blocked!"

One or two winds in the world: "Speaking of which, you haven't given me any suggestions after reading it. How is the writing, please comment?"

Xia Sheng didn't reply, because he didn't know how to evaluate it better, so he started to seek help, entered the men's channel editor group, and asked about their impressions after reading the first draft of "The Chronicle of Sword and Law".

"Let's talk about it, everyone. Don't think about the platinum status of one or two winds. His platinum status came from the female channel. Now he has switched to the male channel. There is basically no reader accumulation on this channel. You just think of him as a newcomer to the Internet. Let me comment on this opening chapter of "Sword and the Law" and talk more."

[-] words is just the beginning of a web article.For the fast pace of the market visible to the naked eye, this opening chapter is even shortened.

After reading the [-] characters of the first three chapters of a novel, and then carefully looking at the title and introduction, the editor can basically decide whether the novel can be signed, and it has a high probability of determining the life or death of the work.

"The Chronicle of Sword and Law", is there any problem with the title?Directly pointing out the subject matter, 'Sword and Law' is concise, and 'Chronicle' brings a sense of seriousness and orthodoxy to the work.

Although there is no explosive point, it is not poisonous either.At first glance, it is a serious path. Basically, no one will stop clicking this work because of the title, and that is enough.

If the title of the book is made to be weird, it may attract the attention of many people, but it will also offend many people and indirectly lose some readers.

Looking at the introduction of "Sword and Law" again, it clearly describes what type of story this book is, "crossing another world", "big scene", and pointed out the protagonist's golden finger "I have dreamed countless times See it", you should know this alien world very well.

And with fluent and aesthetically pleasing words, it tells readers the background of this alien world, materialism and idealism, magic and science, theocracy and kingship, empire and communism...

Cut, hodgepodge?Can you write well?
Readers are half-believing and half-doubting, and their sense of anticipation has slightly increased.

Afterwards, the protagonist "I" made an impassioned speech. There are many ambitious goals in the book, and the dilemma at the beginning of the book is also mentioned.

"But before that, I want to drive a lone boat on the sea of ​​darkness to survive..."

Yo, survive on the sea in a small boat?Are you going to die?
The readers' sense of anticipation has risen again, and they subconsciously want to see how he survives.

The last sentence of the introduction; "This is a story that happened 200 billion light years away. This is the chronicle of the real existence of a certain fantasy planet."

What are you bragging about?Bad writing will kill you!
This sentence will once again raise readers' expectations. I believe that many people will click on the catalog of this book and start reading it officially.

As for the text, is the beginning of "The Chronicle of Sword and Law" qualified?

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 2) Treasure Sword: "It's a record break. Don't talk about heroines in the first sixteen chapters. Except for the protagonist, no intelligent creature has really appeared!"

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 6) Peanut: "Nonsense, the dolphin that made friends with the protagonist is intelligent and has a simple civilization, didn't you notice?"

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 2) Baodao: "Without words, it is not considered civilization. But I am not saying this in a derogatory sense. Although there are no supporting characters, the opening elements are complete. The golden finger, world view, and protagonist image have all come out, and countless arrangements have been made around survival. The small conflict was resolved smoothly in the end, and the landing on the island leads to the next plot... There is no problem."

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 2) Baodao: "I have been thinking about what kind of story Yiliangfeng will start with, which can explain the huge world background more naturally, and mobilize readers' emotions to generate expectations, instead of being swayed by complicated backgrounds and awkward words. The name persuades you to quit. For example, "The Lord of the Mysteries", it is a beginning that has been proven to be effective. The protagonist is in the "center of the storm" and comes back to life after committing suicide. He bury the main line through the diary, leaving a sense of suspense Attract readers to read it. But there are still thresholds, the setting is very blunt, the description of the environment and life details is too long and other shortcomings, which are unavoidable in order to make the world more real. I thought that one or two winds would use this similar The method and style of writing, but unexpected, completely different and amazing. To sum up this beginning, the monk's house-wonderful!"

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 9) Yy: "Because the protagonist is in a desperate situation at the beginning of the book, the rhythm of "Sword and the Law" is faster and can mobilize readers' emotions. Through the different celestial bodies, physical rules, different marine life and sky The flying birds and various natural wonders allow readers to be brought into the book. The rhythm of the story is tight, there are urgency and slowness, the world is set without leaving traces, facing the weird natural conditions and magical creatures in other worlds, it is easy to be in people's minds It left a strong sense of suspense, giving people an idea of ​​wanting to continue reading, to see what new things the author can make up, and thus generate the expectation of following the protagonist to continue exploring the world in the book... The shortcoming may still be a bit foreshadowing It’s long, I didn’t realize it when I read it, but after reading it, I suddenly realized that it’s [-] characters, it seems like I’ve just entered the main storyline! This progress is a bit slow... Hurry up and let Yiliangfeng write it!!”

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 7) December: "The text is concise and razor-like, which is rare in online texts. It is also different from the style of writing before one or two winds. I saw the clip of the protagonist fishing while manipulating the sail to escape the storm. I thought I read the magical version of "The Old Man and the Sea". Then I discovered that the writing style of "Sword and the Law" is different from that of online and traditional literature. There are few rhetorical characters in the language of the characters, and only the scenery and creatures in other worlds are written. Only when it is time to read, will you be willing to show gorgeous brushstrokes, read like a poem, and double the look and feel with illustrations!"

(Editor-in-Chief of Team 1) Lemon: "(Picture) I like this one the most. The dark moon rises in the dark night, and the cold stars quietly appear in the sky. The storm under the water ice cloud not far behind the protagonist is brewing huge waves. He is preparing to go back He ran for his life in the direction, but was too tired to hallucinate. He saw a nebula suspected to be the shape of the Milky Way galaxy in the night sky, so he immediately decided to drive a lone boat, crossing the waves in the direction of the nebula, roaring; fuck you, I want to go home ...It's funny but also a little bit sad, with this painting that faithfully represents the spectacular scene at that time, the artistic content is full!"

(Editor-in-Chief of Group 6) Peanut: "Did Yiliangfeng draw these paintings by himself or someone else?"

Sheng Xia: "He drew it himself. But can you talk about the shortcomings, he is waiting for my review and evaluation."

There was a moment of silence in the group.

Baodao (Editor-in-Chief of Group 2) made a speech: "With years of experience, I really feel that this book has an atmosphere of 'asking the highest', so I can only give one comment; more codes!"

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……

"Got it, I'm coding. I will try to save a manuscript of 10,000+ words and post it."

In fact, Li Peifeng knew how many strokes there were in the word "diligence" without being reminded by the editor. When Sheng Xia called after finishing the draft review, he was sitting in front of the computer and typing, pausing occasionally because he was thinking about it.

It has been seven days since the Baoyu community was banned, and if there is no accident, there will be at least seven more days.

Halfway through the lockdown period, many residents in the community couldn't bear the anguish of being grounded, and they signed up as volunteers one after another. It is not ruled out that they have dedication, but more because it is really uncomfortable to hold back at home for so long, and they want to take advantage of the convenience of work. Walk around the building.

Therefore, there are more and more volunteers in Baoyu Community, but the workload is only so much. Everyone is rushing to do it, and Li Peifeng also has more time to code in the attic at home.

And except for the necessary meals, he basically didn't go downstairs, and reduced the meeting time with the three girls, and instead got along harmoniously, unlike the first few days when there were often turmoil or cold wars at every turn.

Li Peifeng is also more focused on creating, and when he encounters a lack of inspiration, he chats with three girls at the dinner table about things in dreams, and his thoughts gradually become clearer.

In this state, Li Peifeng felt that being banned might not be without any benefits.

It was five o'clock today, and Li Peifeng was dizzy from typing. He looked at the time and went downstairs to cook as usual, but found Wu Wenyue and Huang Tianxuan busy in the kitchen, and Zhao Qingge sitting at the dining table and picking vegetables.

"Don't you need me to cook today?"

Li Peifeng asked casually, and Wu Wenyue waved his hand: "Go and code, I'm dating Sister Tianxuan."

Eh, it's comfortable.

I can live my whole life in such a small life surrounded by beautiful people at home and opening my mouth to eat by myself!

Li Peifeng smiled inwardly, looked around, and sat next to Zhao Qingge, helping her pick vegetables together.

After dinner, everyone cleaned up the tableware together. Li Peifeng planned to go upstairs after washing the dishes. Just as he sat down in front of the computer, his cell phone rang.

A three-person WeChat group called [Auspicious Three Treasures] popped up on the screen, and Xu Manning initiated a video call.

The members of the group include Li Peifeng, Wu Wenyue, and Xu Maning. This is the X group formed by President Xu in recent days after the [Happy Family] and [Happy Family] were disbanded one after another. WeChat group of three people.

The function of the group is for three people to chat, or phone sex...

As for the name of the group, it was naturally proposed by Xu Manning. Li Peifeng proposed to modify it several times, but he gave up without getting approval.

"Manning?!"

"You're back! Didn't you say two days ago that you might be returning to Beijing a few days later?"

During the video call, Wu Wenyue and Li Peifeng were each in their bedroom, both with surprised expressions on their faces, because Xu Maning seemed to be outside the capital airport, and she made this call to them.

"The matter was resolved smoothly, and we returned as scheduled!" Xu Manning's tired face was filled with a happy smile, but Wu Wenyue was hesitant: "But do you want to..."

Xu Maning immediately lost face: "Yes, like you, I also need to be quarantined at home!"

The two smiled when they heard the words, and each offered words of comfort.

Even if Xu Maning returned to Beijing, she would not be able to visit them in the Baoyu community during the lockdown period, because she would also be quarantined for [-] days. When the Baoyu community was unblocked, the three would have the possibility to meet.

Therefore, Miss Xu's return did not affect the lives of the four people in Baoyu Community.

The days passed by day by day, and occasionally He Yimeng would send Li Peifeng a WeChat message, saying, "Yesterday, I made an emotional trash can for another day, and I am under a lot of psychological pressure." Come here quickly, someone gave me a box of soda, do you want to want? '

Li Peifeng's answer is of course no!
At the beginning of the ban, supplies were relatively scarce. For the sake of his family and the happy life of the three women, he had to adopt the method of exchanging labor for goods, and got some fruits from He Meng.

Now that the lockdown is over halfway, the supplies provided by the community have followed suit, and some snacks and fruits are often given out. No one in the community is short of surplus food. Naturally, Li Peifeng will not sell his body for mere supplies!

Although the things He Yimeng gave him in the past were all converted into money by the system, which was helpful for getting lucky draw opportunities, but Li Peifeng was rich and not lewd, and Li Peifeng was mighty and unyielding, so he was definitely not bewitched by He Yimeng...

"No, keep it for yourself!"

Li Peifeng couldn't help but typed another line: "I just had breakfast in broad daylight, you should be more restrained, even at night?!"

He Yimeng: "I'm looking for you at night, and you can't come out. It just so happens that the fifth round of supplies will arrive soon, and all groups of volunteers will come out to work. You can also have an excuse."

Li Peifeng: "I won't go, I have to go home and code after work."

He Yimeng: "Just chatting and nothing else. Yesterday I adopted a puppet cat from a visitor. It's very good. It's only a few months old. Why don't you come and see it?"

Li Peifeng: "Consultants can't accept gifts from visitors, can you do this?"

He Yimeng: "It's not a gift, come here and I'll explain it to you."

"Ding~"

The WeChat group of volunteers in the community was calling for people to gather again. Li Peifeng replied, "See you at the property management office." Then he hurriedly changed his clothes and went downstairs to work.

In 10 minutes, a group of volunteers unloaded the supplies from the car and sent them to the residents of each unit building.

There are many people and strength, and everyone's experience is much more proficient than before. This kind of routine work is done very quickly.

After Li Peifeng finished his work, he took his share and prepared to go home, but when passing by Building No. [-], he saw He Yimeng greeting him.

"Go, go to my house."

Li Peifeng stopped in his tracks, thinking about the WeChat chat with the other party just now, frowned and said, "What kind of cat do you have in this situation? Are you free? Is there any cat food or litter?"

"Then you don't have to worry about it." He Meng smiled, "I just want to ask, don't you want to pet the cat?"

Most people can't control their favorite furry animals like cats, especially Bullingling's puppet cat, which is known as the fairy among cats and is responsible for its beauty!
Strange to say, since ancient times, literati both at home and abroad have had a unique preference for cats, and there are countless senior cat slaves who are also writers.Such as Hemingway, Borges, Kerouac, Hermann Hesse and so on.Qian Zhongshu and Lin Huiyin also had conflicts because of their cats fighting.

Nowadays, there are not a few online writers who keep cats. Perhaps because of cats' aloof, arrogant but naturally cute personality, many literary and artistic creators have found resonance or inspiration in cats.

Li Peifeng originally wanted to raise one, but after thinking about it for a long time, he still found it troublesome. He thought that small pets such as cats and dogs are always cute in other people's homes, and his own is just a manure-making machine...

"Just chatting and looking at the cat?"

Li Peifeng was a little moved, but obviously worried.After all, Wu Wenyue and the others were all in the same community, if he communicated frequently with He Yimeng, sooner or later his secret would be revealed, and he would be in trouble again.

"Love will not come."

He Yimeng rolled his eyes, as if he was too lazy to talk, turned around and left.

"Then take a look at the cat, and I'll leave after petting it for a while."

Li Peifeng thought for a moment, and decided to follow.

After a dozen or so steps, the two entered the corridor and arrived at He Yimeng's home.

"Crack~"

Li Peifeng put down the supplies box in his hand, looked around the living room that hadn't changed, and suddenly felt something was wrong.

"Where's the cat? You don't even have a cat food bowl. Where did you raise it?"

He Yimeng also put down the supplies in her hand, shook her head slightly, took off the mask, her white hair fluttered gently, she stared at Li Peifeng with a smile, and said softly: "Meow~"

Delicate, soft.

Li Peifeng's expression was stiff, as if touching a ten-amp switch socket, his eyebrows trembled: "Mengmeng, what the hell are you doing..."

He understood, where are the cats!Or is the woman in front of her a cat? ! !
He Yimeng smiled even more, and approached Li Peifeng, his eyes were shining with hot and thin light, and his hands and fingers were put on his mouth like a cat's whiskers, and then he puffed his mouth into a cute gesture: "Meow? Meow! Meow~ "

"..."

Seeing that Li Peifeng was not moving, He Yimeng was a little dissatisfied, so he stretched out his hand and brushed his fingertips lightly over his face, ordering: "Hurry up, lick the cat, meow~~"

(End of this chapter)