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Chapter 65 Say something
I have been sprayed so badly recently that I almost want to give up. After thinking about it, let me say a few words.

I am a novice, and this is my first novel, so it is certain that my level is not as good as that of a veteran.

Sometimes I want to explain everything clearly in a chapter, and sometimes I feel that if I write it this way, it is different from the manual.

So the writing is a bit messy and inappropriate.

Sometimes I see comments saying that your book is not read by women, so I thought about writing about women.

As a result, it was said later that you, a woman who can't write well, don't write. . .

It is also said that your writing of dialogue with the ancients is too poisonous and a big failure.

He also said that your time-traveling plot is too messy and boring.

In addition, others said, why is your protagonist like Shabi, brainless and cowardly, and you haven't figured out the golden finger in dozens of chapters. . .

I accept these criticisms.

Not only accept, I also hope that old readers will give you some suggestions.

Because as a novice, there are no writers in the circle around me, so I really don't know much about writing books.

I have never written a novel, so any element in the book is a first for me.

I may be better at some elements, but I can't grasp that point when I write some elements.

But the problem is that I don’t know what I’m good at, so I have to write it all before I can see the problem. Anyway, it’s the first book, and I’ll know where I’m good and what’s bad after reading it.

At least now, I know I'm not good at writing about women. . .

Also, I'm actually sorry that these comments came a little too late.

I wrote the book on a single computer, and the manuscript was saved until Chapter 10, and the text was uploaded to Chapter [-] before I got the first comment.

It was only after uploading to Chapter [-] that the first person sprayed me, and the spray was very ruthless, and the spray was not correct.

By this time, the stand-alone career was almost over, and I also realized that my book had so many problems.

Of course, in addition to spraying, I also gave a lot of suggestions, such as how to write this sentence, and where it can be changed to what would be better.

Hey. . .I wish someone had said that in the first place, that would be great.

I am very grateful to everyone who provided criticism and suggestions, and I sincerely hope that I can give more advice in the future (literally, no sarcasm).

I will try to improve next.

Now, it has been written here, and the previous ones cannot be changed.

I don't want to change either.

Just treat it as black history, put it there, and when you drift away in the future, look back and take history as a mirror.

. . . . .

Also, let’s talk about the plot so far.

The protagonist was reborn, and accidentally got the dumb golden finger. After the first time travel, he got three kinds of rewards: acting skills, wealth, and skills.

Relying on some acting skills, the protagonist gained some favor, won the next small role, and won the next time travel opportunity.

After the second time-travel verification, the protagonist chooses to embrace wealth and skills, that is, profit, and has abandoned fame subjectively.

Benefits are all the behavior guidelines of the protagonist in the future. He doesn't mix in the entertainment industry anymore, he just uses the crew.

When "Little Li Fei Dao" came, he found that wealth could not satisfy him, so he chose to embrace the extraordinary.

Seeking the extraordinary becomes the guideline of all subsequent actions.

In order to be extraordinary, the protagonist can pretend to be a grandson, get in touch with people he doesn't like, and flirt with anyone who can help him achieve his goal.

At the same time, because Goldfinger is dumb, the protagonist has to do experiments again and again, and finally understand the mechanism of Goldfinger.

So up to here, after a month, the protagonist managed to understand cheating within limited conditions and time. I think the logic of the plot is still reasonable.

And the logic of the behavior is also reasonable. After all, if I write that the protagonist gives up the supernatural and chooses to embrace the interests, then I will probably be sprayed even worse.

In fact, in the final analysis, I think it is still a matter of writing skills. What I want to write and stand out are not written, and what should not be written are written clearly in a daze.

Sometimes it should be written in a different way, so as not to discourage readers so much, but unfortunately, the writing power is limited.

But still the same sentence, even if the level is higher in the future, I will not come back to change it, it is meaningless.

So new readers, if you don’t want to be poisoned, then skip the first sixty chapters.

Finally, what to write next.

The goal of the protagonist is still to become a god, and I don’t want to explore cheats anymore, so next the protagonist will have a clear purpose, in order to become a god, rely on cheats, accumulate capital and backstage, rush to the entertainment circle, embrace fame and fortune, One word: indiscriminate killing.

This is roughly the case, if it is written well, you will give a vote.

If the writing is not good, just scold a few words, and I accept it.

Anyway, I am a novice, there is still a long way to go, right?

(End of this chapter)