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Chapter 201 I am the same (6k words)
At this moment, after Zhu Xiaoce heard Tian Yunxiao's question, he scratched his head in embarrassment, and said with an apologetic smile:

"Tian teacher, you can see that, yes, your original work is called No.1, and there is no name of the protagonist in it, so I decided to give the protagonist a name, called Liu Qi.

Then the protagonist's father also named him Liu Peiqiang, and as for this Han Ziang is my own original character..."

Tian Yunxiao was noncommittal, did not respond, and continued to read.

"...carrier cab/(Didu No. [-]) engine flood embankment (outside the elevator) parking lot - Ri Liu Qi and Han Duoduo entered the cab, and the huge roar of the engine was blocked.

Liu Qi picked up Han Ziang's ID card and started the delivery vehicle.

Vehicle Control System

(speaker)
Han Ziang, senior driver.The Transportation Committee of the Third District of the Imperial City reminds you: there are tens of thousands of roads, and safety is the first; the driving is irregular, and the tears of relatives..."

Seeing this, Tian Yunxiao couldn't help laughing out loud.

Seeing Tian Yunxiao's reaction, Zhu Xiaoce next to him felt even more uneasy.

Although he can be regarded as successful and famous now, he can already be regarded as one of the best directors in China.

But in his heart, he always believed that his achievements were completed under the guidance of Mr. Pei.

He doesn't think that these achievements are achieved by his own ability. In his heart, he always believes that his achievements can be achieved by pulling a dog under the guidance of Mr. Pei.

So at this time he was in a very uneasy mood, especially after Tian Yunxiao laughed and continued to straighten his face.

Even more apprehensive.

At this time, Tian Yunxiao continued to look down.

"Scene: Luxurious Suite in the Center of Shanghai - Day

Liu Qi:

old stuff!Where the hell are you!Han Ziang leaned on the wall and walked towards the window.

The oxygen warning sound in Han Ziang's helmet became weaker and weaker, and the surrounding area became silent.

Han Ziang glanced at the oxygen reading, only 1% left.He took off his helmet with great effort, and a thin layer of frost instantly covered his face.Next, he went to get out his old cell phone.

Han Ziang recalled the scene: the radio hostess (outside the camera)
...Today is July 2017, 7. My friend with the tail number 17 ordered a very special song for his girlfriend. Please listen to it...

(The time goes back to 2017.) The mobile phone was pulled out, and it was a brand new mobile phone. A sweaty young man was wearing overalls (construction worker) and a hard hat standing in a luxurious room.

The decoration in the room has not yet finished, the decoration materials are piled up on the floor, and a dilapidated radio is placed on it, playing "The Old Driver Take Me" on the radio.The worker took the lunch box and greeted the young man.

a few coworkers
The meal is here, let's go!

The young man (18 years old) stood in front of the floor-to-ceiling windows, and outside the windows were rows of mansions in the magic capital, and the sun was shining brightly.

lad (18 years old)
I brought it!
On the table in front of the young man, there was a bowl of hot noodles with scallion oil.

Seeing that everyone around had left, looking at the tall buildings in front of him, the young man sat down on the luxurious sofa facing the floor-to-ceiling windows, even though the sofa was still covered with plastic film.

The screen of the mobile phone was filled with the young man's happy smile, and the "click" sound of taking pictures sounded.

Han Ziang (narrator):
...Here, I can see her again...

The young man on the screen gradually turned into an old man, and the background environment changed from a bright construction site to a luxurious and frozen room.

(The funny music of "The Old Driver Take Me" changes into a sad variation.) Frost climbed onto Han Ziang's face, and his pupils no longer shone brightly.

The screen of the mobile phone was cracked, flickered, and went out.The surrounding debris fell one after another.In the end, only the heart rate monitor turned into a long beep in a straight line.

Scene: Ice Field (outside the central building of Shanghai) - Day

On the monitor in Zhou Qian's hand, Han Ziang's vital signs showed a straight line.

Wang Lei and Liu Qi slammed heavily on the ice, causing broken ice to splash everywhere.Wang Lei and Liu Qi scrambled and ran forward for a while, and finally escaped from danger. The center of the magic city behind them sank rapidly.

Han Duoduo looked at his feet in despair.

(desperate cry) Grandpa!grandfather!
Zhou Qian:
Blooming!

Liu Qi struggled to climb towards the collapsed ice cliff.Wang Lei grabbed him.Liu Qi angrily shook off Wang Lei's hand.

Wang Lei:

don't go!
Liu Qi (Liu Qi got up suddenly):

Don't touch her!Don't touch her!
Zhou Qian approached Han Duoduo.Han Duoduo retreated slowly towards the edge of the cliff.

Zhou Qian:
Danger!stop moving!Dodo, it's not safe to stay here!
Zhou Qian: If you stay here, you will only freeze to death.

Han Duoduo has already stepped on the edge of the cliff.Everyone is still.

Han Duoduo:
That's better than following you!
Wang Lei walked up to Liuzi, who pointed to the two signal sources on the screen on his arm.

Liuzi:

Boss, there are distress signals from two rescue teams nearby, one is [-] kilometers to the southwest, and the other is [-] kilometers to the south...

Liu Qi stared wide-eyed, furious.

Liu Qi:

The car is gone!I am useless to you!

Wang Lei looked at Liu Qi who was in front of the gun, and then at Han Duoduo whose eyes were full of hatred.Wang Lei glanced at the monitor on Liuzi's arm: two arrows and the coordinates next to the arrows.

Wang Lei:

Give them spare supplies and military navigators, go south, to the supply depot.

After Wang Lei finished speaking, he threw some supplies and a rescue signal device in the direction of Liu Qi and Han Duoduo.Turn around, go to "Firestone", and start checking the status of "Firestone".

Tim looked at Liu Qi and Han Duoduo, then at Zhou Qian, and walked to Liu Qi and Han Duoduo in frustration.Zhou Qian picked up the supply and rescue signal equipment and walked towards Tim.

Liu Qiduo looked at everyone disappointed.

The blizzard hit the icy "flint" sphere. "

After Tian Yunxiao laughed just now, he began to frown, until he saw this place, his frown became deeper and deeper.

Suddenly said: "Is it really good to have a forced conflict like this? Is it too deliberate?
This sensationalism is too deliberate, right? "

Zhu Xiaoce wanted to explain just now, but Tian Yunxiao ignored him and continued to read on his own.

At this moment, seeing Tian Yunxiao ignoring him, Zhu Xiaoce felt even more uneasy.

I thought:
"Could it be that Mr. Tian is very dissatisfied with the script I wrote? Otherwise, why would he ignore me?"

"Sulawesi Three turned to the ground near the engine - the night dust dissipated and a spherical air pocket was gradually revealed.

Han Duoduo woke up, her helmet had spider web cracks due to the collision, Han Duoduo coughed twice, and blood sprayed from her mouth onto the mask.Liu Qi's helmet cracked a crack at the position of his right eye.

Liu Qi opened his eyes wide and stared at the sky.

Han Duoduo, who was hugging her body, curled up into a ball.

Suddenly, the broken front of the car that was hanging on the broken bridge hit them head-on.

Liu Qiyi gritted his teeth, and rolled out the spherical airbag while holding Han Duoduo sideways. The huge front of the car behind them hit the position in front of them, and the airbag burst.After the bang.

Half of Liu Qi's mask was shattered, oxygen began to leak out at a rapid rate, and frost climbed onto the right half of Liu Qi's face.Han Duoduo crawled out of Liu Qi's arms.

Sulawesi Underground Elevator - Night

Li Yiyi, Zhou Qian and Hammer were trapped in the elevator that had stopped urgently due to the impact of the shock wave.

Li Yiyi nervously stared at the Roche limit value on the screen of the laptop in his hand: "0.31 blinking...beep...0.33".

Li Yiyi:

We finally made it.

Zhou Qian smiled slightly, and the strong hammer burst into tears.

Liu Qi was already dying, with his head resting on the ground, his left arm stretched out, palm facing up, and his right arm curled up in his bosom.

protective suit

(warning sound)
Warning, the temperature is too low.

Han Duoduo

(communicator) Help!Come down quickly!help!

TIM (Voiceover)
(communicator)
I'm going down right now, right now!

Slow motion: The angle of view is pushed along Liu Qi's left hand to his right eye, and Han Duoduo in the background finds the first-aid medicine behind him, ready to give Liu Qi an injection.Liu Qi didn't respond, but his eyes seemed to be looking at something.

Space
All the steering engines of the earth facing Jupiter are fully advancing, and the blue flames are gradually pushing the earth away from Jupiter.

The ground near the Sulawesi III steering engine - night

Liu Qi (first perspective): (eyelids closed and opened transition)
Han Duoduo cried and called Liu Qi's name.

On the edge of the fuzzy darkness, the flames of the Sulawesi No. [-] engine soaring into the sky are spraying rhythmically.The loud tinnitus was mixed with Han Duoduo's faint cry for help.But soon, these sounds were drowned out by two sounds, Liu Qi's heartbeat and the sound of the engine's injection, both synchronized.

With the sound of "heartbeat" gradually increasing, Liu Qi's eyelids gradually closed, and there was darkness.

Liu Qi (narrator)
Earth, alive...

[end of third act]
Scene: (Emperor Capital No. [-] Dungeon) Memorial Wall-Day

Epilogue (narration)
In the past countless years, the sun that gave birth to all living things has now become synonymous with fear and death.

Liu Qi (back view) lit three sticks of electronic incense and clasped his hands together.In front of him are photos of the portraits of Liu Peiqiang, Han Ziang and Wang Lei.

Liu Qi (back view) turned and left, and his perspective receded. In addition to these three photos, there were also photos of He Lianke, Liu Zi, Da Gang, Huang Ming, and the driver of the construction vehicle.

The frame of the photo rises along the sliding rails on the wall, and is scattered to each occupation classification area (for example, soldiers are classified into the column of soldiers, engineers are classified into the column of engineers, etc.).

commentary (narration)
The core of the sun ages rapidly and continues to expand. After 300 years, the earth will be swallowed up...

More and more photos appeared on the wall. These are people who gave their lives for the "Wandering Earth" project. The magnificent high wall is full of photos, which is shocking.

A huge beam of light was projected and hit the wall. It was a beam of light in the silhouette of a planetary engine.Liu Qi (back view) walked out.

commentary (narration)
In order to survive, mankind has formulated an unprecedented grand plan, driving the entire earth to escape to a new home 4.2 light years away.

Scene: (Underground City No. [-]) Square (Wangfujing) - Day

The angle of view follows Liu Qi (back view) as he walks through the square with the atmosphere of the Spring Festival.

Lion dancers:

I miss you guys so much!

When the lion dancers saw Liu Qi (back view), they stopped and greeted him with a smile.Pedestrians stopped to say hello to Liu Qi (back view).

There are still a dozen or so protesters holding warning signs saying "Oppose the Wandering Earth Project".Among them, three girls asked Liu Qi (back view) to sign with a pen to show their support, but Liu Qi (back view) waved him down.

commentary (narration)
The plan is divided into five stages: In the first stage, human beings will do everything they can, and it will take 30 years...

In the skewer shop, the hammer is rolling skewers, and the second uncle greets Liu Qi (back view) with a smile.

commentary (narration)
...in the most solid Eurasian and North American continental plates on the earth, the area north of the [-]th parallel north latitude...

When the first brother saw Liu Qi holding the walnuts, the first brother laughed heartily at Liu Qi.

Brother One (coming closer):

Brother, thanks to me lending you clothes back then!Liu Qi (back view) smiled and patted Brother Yi on the shoulder.

commentary (narration)
...to build ten thousand planetary engines that drive the earth forward and ten thousand dungeons that shelter human beings...

Tim was walking out of the square pharmacy with Zhou Qian on his arm, but he didn't see Liu Qi walking behind him.

Liu Qi (back view) patted them, and Tim and Zhou Qian turned around, smiling brightly.

commentary (narration)
…At the same time, 72 giant steering engines are built around the equator to control the direction of the earth.

In the second stage, the steering engines are turned on one after another, driving the earth to stop its rotation...

Two security personnel waved to Liu Qi (back view), and then skillfully scanned the barcode.Monitor, showing data: Liu Qi, 30 years old, intermediate engineering mechanic. (Details here, stating this is three years later.)
commentary (narration)
…The Earth’s stoppage caused sea water to rush from the equator to the poles, huge waves swept across the world, the underground city was saturated with refugees, and the global population dropped by more than half…

When Liu Qi (satchel bag) was scanned, a warning sound suddenly "beeped".There was still a bottle of wine wrapped in a black plastic bag and handed over to security guard A.

Security Guard A

(smiling)
Look at you... you are polite, you are polite...

Scene: (Emperor Capital No. [-] Underground City) Elevator Suspension Bridge Corridor-Day

commentary (narration)
In the third stage, in order to avoid the collision between the earth and the moon, hydrogen and oxygen deflagration is used to push the moon away from its original orbit...

Below the suspension bridge is a grand war preparation warehouse with the national flag hanging high.

commentary (narration)
Afterwards, the ten thousand planetary engines started synchronously... The earth revolves around the sun in an elliptical orbit, accelerating in a ten-year "gravitational slingshot"...

A number of heavy-duty transport planes are slowly rising and falling on the landing gear; a large number of carrier vehicles and military vehicles pass under the bridge in an orderly manner; soldiers wearing exoskeleton armor are working step by step.

commentary (narration)
…In 2075, when the orbits of the Earth and Jupiter overlap, the Earth will use Jupiter’s gravity to make a final acceleration sprint…

Liu Qi (back view) is walking on the suspension bridge. A group of soldiers wearing exoskeleton armor is getting out of the elevator. Seeing Liu Qi oncoming, the soldiers stand at attention and salute uniformly. Liu Qi (back view) returns the salute and walks by. .

commentary (narration)
...and then break away from the gravity of the sun and officially embark on a journey of wandering.

Scene: (Dungeon No. [-] of the Imperial City) Elevator/Old Imperial City - Night

elevator voice
(beep)
...I don't wear my clothes well, and my relatives cry...

Li Yiyi:

How many years have passed, why is this sentence still...

In the elevator, Liu Qi (back view) slung his helmet on his waist, standing in a heroic posture.Liu Qi (back view) glanced at Li Yiyi who was standing beside him.

Li Yiyi:

I'm ready, definitely done in three hours...

commentary (narration)
In the fourth stage, after the earth escapes from the solar system...

The elevator kept going up, and the outside light kept passing by Liu Qi (back view). The "Earth Hero" medal hangs on the chest of Liu Qi (back view), shining with the light.

The elevator rushed out of the ground and continued to soar over the huge dam body.

commentary (narration)
...the planetary engine is turned on at full power...

Weak sunlight (because it is getting farther and farther away from the sun, the sky is basically dark.) Entering the elevator through the elevator lookout hole, the roar of the planetary engine is getting louder and louder.

When approaching the top of the dam body, Liu Qi (back view) saw the ruins of the old BJ city in the dam body, almost razed to the ground, like a brightly lit construction site, where many construction machinery structures were erected, and the engine has been repaired and nearly completed state.

commentary (narration)
...will accelerate to five thousandths of the speed of light in 500 years.

Engine Levee/Carrier Cab Half Cut - Night

In the snowy night, Liu Qi (back view) and Li Yiyi walked towards a transport vehicle.

The carrier vehicle started and headed for the distance, and a taupe planet (Pluto) hung in the sky.

commentary (narration)
In the fifth stage, the earth enters the target star: Alpha Centauri galaxy orbit, arrives at the new home, and becomes a new member of the target star system.

Liu Qi (voiceover)
By the way, how is your preparation for the college entrance examination...

Han Duoduo (voiceover):

I want you to take care... I'm so annoying, the teacher sent out a bunch of mock papers... (Voice fades out)
Li Yiyi (voiceover):

How about I do it for you... (Voice is weak to disappear)
commentary (narration)
Liu Qi looked at Liu Peiqiang.

Liu Peiqiang smiled.

Liu Qi:

Dad, I miss you..."

Tian Yunxiao finally finished reading the script when he saw this. At this moment, he breathed a sigh of relief and said:
"Director Zhu, you just put a name on my original book~
Your content has basically nothing to do with my original work~"

Zhu Xiaoce became anxious when he heard Tian Yunxiao's words, and argued hastily:
"Mr. Tian, ​​it's not that I don't want to completely follow your original work~
The main reason is that your original work is too concise and to the point, and most of the time it describes the inner activities of 'my'.

After all, your original book is a first-person novel, and I have made a reasonable adaptation of this book..."

After Tian Yunxiao heard this, he immediately interrupted:

"Stop, stop, Director Zhu, I didn't express my dissatisfaction, I still feel pretty good about the script as a whole.

After all, the human nature described in my original novel is too dark..."

At this moment, after hearing Tian Yunxiao's words, Zhu Xiaoce patted his thigh immediately and said:
"Mr. Tian, ​​do you think so too?"

Tian Yunxiao nodded at this time and said:

"I really think so, but Director Zhu, I feel that your script needs to be revised in some places."

Zhu Xiaoce said casually at this time:

"Oh? I don't know what kind of advice Mr. Tian has?"

Seeing Zhu Xiaoce's appearance, Tian Yunxiao didn't take it seriously, and said:

"Director Zhu, your plot design is still a bit weak, the conflict is too deliberate.

What is conflict?It was nothing more than a family conflict within the old Liu family.

What is the conflict with the outside?Fighting with gangsters and pk with the staff in the system, the end must be educated.

These conflicts lack imagination, and the ending can be guessed at a glance.Nor did it touch on larger conflicts—such as individual versus collective, collective versus collective.

What is the solution?The solution is nothing more than Duoduo crying, making trouble, begging~
Doesn't this kind of plot feel a little too childish? "

At this time, Zhu Xiaoce still said indifferently:

"Teacher Tian, ​​how do you solve this problem?"

Tian Yunxiao straightened his body very seriously at this time, and said:

"How do I solve it?

My solution is that under the premise of this "community of shared future for mankind", the protagonist of the flower planter proposed the solution of the flower planter.

In a situation where people from various countries have conflicts with each other and are in disarray in the face of adversity, the protagonist of the flower planter should use wisdom, kindness, selflessness, and diligence in the first two scenes to help friends from various countries solve problems and win friendship.

The protagonist organizes everyone to achieve the final strategic goal, instead of begging and crying. "

At this time, Zhu Xiaoce put away the carelessness on his face, took out a notebook, and said:
"Teacher Tian, ​​please speak slowly~ I will remember..."

As soon as Tian Yunxiao saw this posture, he continued:

"At this time, we can portray another American villain, who only wants to save the American people, or only wants to save the Westerners before this common crisis of all mankind.

Wanting to give up the entire Eastern Hemisphere, thinking that it is enough to leave only one American civilization in the world, represents selfishness and a narrow worldview, of course, it can be said to be a little more cryptic in the movie.

The goal of the protagonist of the flower planter is to protect the entire earth, protect all people, and would rather sacrifice himself, representing a selfless and collective worldview.

Why let the American villain call the shots?Let them decide who lives and who dies? "

At this time Zhu Xiaoce heard this, slapped his thigh suddenly, and said:

"Wonderful, Mr. Tian, ​​the plot you designed is simply wonderful~"

Huang Sibo next to him had a cold face and said to Zhu Xiaoce:
"Why don't you pat your own legs?"

Zhu Xiaoce said:
"Won't patting your own leg hurt?"

Seeing that Tian Yunxiao's speech was interrupted by Zhu Xiaoce, Pei Pei stared at Zhu Xiaoce with cold eyes, Zhu Xiaoce couldn't help shivering at this moment.

Hastily said:

"Teacher Tian, ​​keep talking, keep talking..."

Seeing this, Tian Yunxiao continued talking.

"In the second act of the dark night of the soul, everyone doesn't trust the protagonist of the flower planter and China's plan, and decides to follow the plan of the villain American and American. At this time, it is necessary to highlight the protagonist's nothing. The whole world does not believe in the protagonist..."

At this moment, after Zhu Xiaoce heard this, he immediately yelled and said:

"Mr. Tian, ​​your storyline is absolutely amazing. The talent in the world is shared by one stone. Mr. Tian, ​​you are the only one who owns eight fights~"

Pei Pei also praised when he heard this:

"Old Tian, ​​you can do this, your talent is overflowing, I admire you so much~"

Huang Sibo: "I...I am the same..."

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