I really don't want to be a novelist

Chapter 11 I used to want to anger horses and flowers, fight the sword to the end of the world!
"...Er Lianzi opened his eyes wide, looking straight at the black roof made of thatch and mud, and the old quilt covering his body..."

Holding the mobile phone in one hand, Ye Linhan carefully read the "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" from the beginning.

This is the first sentence of the opening chapter of Mortal Cultivation of Immortals. This idiot is the protagonist, named Han Li.

The plot also unfolds from there.

Han Li was just ten years old this year, and he was with his parents, elder brother and sister.A total of seven people live in a small mountain village.

But the second fool is naturally not really dumb, on the contrary, he is second to none smartest among children of the same age.

After all, he is the protagonist, so he is a little different from other children of the same age who go up the tree, touch the egg and go down the river in other mountain villages.

Han Li has lofty ideals, longing to see the vast world outside.

This day, a "distinguished guest" came to the room, the protagonist's third uncle, a man who works as a big shopkeeper in a restaurant in Qingniu Town.

The restaurant where the third uncle is in charge belongs to the 'Qixuanmen', one of the best Jianghu sects in the vicinity.

The purpose of the third uncle's visit is to recommend Han Li, a child of the right age, to participate in the selection of inner disciples in this 'Seven Xuanmen'.

Once selected, Han Li can enjoy martial arts and better benefits at the same time.

Then the protagonist was taken away from this mountain village and embarked on the road to Qixuanmen.

This is the plot of Chapter 1 of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals",

Not surprised or happy, I can only say that it is mediocre,

If Ye Linhan is still in a state of agitation, he might be able to quit after turning two pages.

However, Ye Linhan, who was more interested in the development of the plot after turning to the back, patiently continued to read.

The plot of Chapter 2 is even simpler,

The third uncle brought the protagonist Han Li to the Chunxiang Restaurant in Qingniu Town where he was the shopkeeper.

After staying for three days, a Dharma protector from the inner sect of Qixuan Sect came and took Han Li away.

During the process, he briefly introduced the situation of Qixuanmen, saying that Qixuanmen was founded more than 200 years ago by a master named Qijue.

Later, Venerable Qijue died, and then fell into decline.A hundred miles away, there is another enemy called the Wild Wolf Gang.

"... Master Qijue? Does this Jianghu sect have a cultivation background?"

Judging from the name, knowing that this is a novel about cultivating immortals, Ye Linhan looked at Chapter 2 and had some guesses.

After reading Chapter 2 with patience, the only thing that impressed me was that the third uncle gave money to the protector of Qixuanmen to help take care of his nephew, who is also the protagonist.

Let Ye Linhan feel that this third uncle is okay.

Further on,
Ye Linghan looked a little impatient again,
It's really too slow to progress, and there are no surprises.

Quickly clicked again, took a rough look,

It is said that the protagonist and other children of the same age arrived at Qixuanmen,
Then started the entry test.

The protagonist did not pass the cliff-climbing test as Ye Linhan expected.

Instead, it exceeded the time and failed to reach the summit.

"...Waste wood flow?"

Ye Linghan frowned.

Is this genre still popular now?
But it feels like something is different.

The whole test is a complete process, not like in many comprehension novels,

Press your hand on some detection stone, and the protagonist is judged to be a waste.

There is no such cliche plot that is ridiculed in the waste wood stream.

The whole plot of failing the test seems to be kind of...

"...realism."

Ye Linhan, a seasoned reader, understands where the feeling is different,

The main character failed the test, which feels very logical,
This logical feeling has been paved since Chapter 1,

The protagonist lives in a mountain village. There are seven people in the house. It would be nice to have enough food and clothing at home.
The bones of the body are definitely not as good as others.

And the testing process is not so mysterious.

It doesn't mean that the protagonist can't do anything and is immediately judged useless... Well, after all, he is a martial arts school.

The protagonist also worked hard during the process, but even if the perseverance is good, the gap in the body itself is there.

So the reader finally reads it, and everything is logical.

And from the looks of it, he seemed to be able to accept the protagonist's failure with ease.

This sense of reality... seems to make people more immersive.

"Mortal, mortal cultivating immortals..."

Looking at the title of this book again, Ye Linhan seemed to understand what he meant.

Then gradually look down.

Although the protagonist didn't pass the test completely, he still became a registered disciple of Qixuanmen together with another person of the same age named Zhang Tie.

The plot unfolds further.

At this moment,
The long foreshadowing and description of details in the early stage began to play a role.
As a reader, Ye Linghan is more easily brought into the novel world and into the protagonist.

Let him gradually immerse himself in it.

When the owner of the noodle shop brought all the noodles, he still lowered his head, looking at the novel,

Later, the plot gradually unfolded.

The protagonist who was accepted into the Qixuanmen as unregistered disciples and another named Zhang Tie were asked to leave by an obviously abnormal Doctor Mo.

Then gave the two of them an unnamed formula for people to practice.

The protagonist who practiced the nameless formula to some effect and Zhang Tie who didn't have any effect later passed the test of Doctor Mo and became Doctor Mo's disciple.

One continued to practice the nameless formula, and later learned that it was a technique called Changchun Kungfu, while Zhang Tie was taught a body-building technique, and at the same time, the protagonist accidentally obtained a mysterious vial in the forest.

Then, the protagonist spends a few years that are not bad,
When Han Li was 12 years old, Zhang Tie disappeared.

All the foreshadowing and exposed clues ahead,
Ye Linhan, a reader, has already guessed that there is something wrong with Dr. Mo.

And the plot behind it is also true.

When the protagonist was 14 years old,

First, he met a man named Li Feiyu and saved his life.

But after saving this person, he almost killed him, which changed the character of the protagonist to a certain extent,

According to the book, it is too early to make the protagonist useless, and lose the honesty of the mountain village boy.

Then I accidentally discovered the effect of the mysterious vial of promoting the birth of medicinal plants, and I also practiced Changchun Kung Fu to the fourth level.

Doctor Mo came back from the outside and brought back something called 'Qu Hun',

At the same time, Doctor Mo also showed his fangs.

Further on,
It's the first climactic scene,

Relying on the role of the mysterious vial to give birth to medicinal plants, the protagonist practiced hard,
In the last coincidence, Doctor Mo was lucky enough to kill Doctor Mo, and also discovered that the 'Qu Hun' was the original Zhang Tie, but he was made into a puppet.

The protagonist's first master directly lets the protagonist understand the intrigue and cruelty in the realm of comprehension in a personal way.

Seeing the climax here, Ye Linghan was a little excited.

The long foreshadowing in front gave the protagonist a strong sense of reality when fighting back.

This feeling of struggling to achieve ultimate success gives a strong sense of refreshment.

Unlike the kind of protagonist who is invincible from the beginning, the refreshing feeling is often purely derived from the protagonist's realm name, and it is still consuming other classic novels to create an impression set in the readers' minds.

The refreshing feeling of this "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is supported,
This kind of support started from the mountain village boy in Chapter 1.

From a boy in the mountain village, to a registered disciple of Qixuanmen, to being accepted as a disciple by this evil Doctor Mo,

Everything up to now has been vented in this desperate anti-killing.

This feeling of exhilaration, the feeling of joy at last made Ye Linhan excited,
Looking at the phone screen, his face was flushed.

Just like what I saw in the comment area before,
He seems to have regained the feeling of reading Xianxia novels back then!

"……call……"

After watching the climax of the plot, the plot going down is a little gentle again,

However, with the support of the previous plots, Ye Linhan felt that he could continue to watch these excessive plots.

However, he didn't continue to look at it now,

Instead, return to the comment area and prepare to write a comment,

How can you not give a good review of this kind of good novel, and how can you not recommend it to others.

"...Good! It's so well written! Readers who recommend other points must read it. As long as you get through the first few chapters, the later ones will get better and better!"

Excited, he typed wrong several times in a row, Ye Linhan first posted this comment in the comment section.

follow closely,

I felt a little unsatisfactory again, calmed down again, and started to write a long review.

"Once upon a time, I also wanted to anger horses and flowers, and hold a sword to the end of the world!"

"I don't know since when, I have forgotten that I was once a teenager, and I also dreamed of being a hero.

But the reality is always ordinary and boring, not so mysterious and novel.

Here, I would like to thank the author, thank the author, for describing a mysterious and miraculous world to me and most of us—that is the yearning of every 'mortal'..."

Ye Linhan read the novel, and then he finished the excitement of the climax of the novel, and wrote about the excitement and other emotions in his heart.

……

And in the noodle shop.

Ji Zhuo's phone was placed by the dining table,

From time to time, the screen is lit up because of the news of the penguin chat,

But Ji Zhuo really didn't want to see it.

In the group of book friends, every sentence about "mortals cultivating immortals" stabbed him in the chest,
Maybe this is murder.

Why in the "clumsy and extraordinary" book friend group,

To discuss the 'epochal coincidence' book!
Are you not afraid of being "clumsy and extraordinary" when you discuss other people's books in the book friend group?

Is this appropriate, is this reasonable?
Ji Zhuo held the chopsticks in his hand, and the chopsticks picked up the noodles in the bowl, eating the noodles one by one,
I dare not look at my phone again, for fear of seeing some bad news again.

Bored and lifeless, Ji Zhuo turned his head and looked at the noodle shop again,
In addition to him as a customer in the noodle restaurant, there is another customer who just came in,

It was the young man I met once in the noodle shop.

"...Is this a novel again? Are you so fascinated by it?"

Looking at the young man holding the mobile phone in a daze, his face flushed and excited from time to time,

Ji Zhuo raised his head and sighed.

Back then, he liked reading novels so much, he would read them all night long.

Now... Now he is more concerned about how his novel will not rush.

Seeing this young man's appearance, Ji Zhuo was a little bit embarrassed,
Then I glanced at the screen of the young man's mobile phone with a little curiosity,
I want to see what novel makes this young man so excited.

So Ji Zhuo straightened up a little, raised his head, glanced at it,
This reader reads quite carefully, and doesn't turn the page quickly. It really made Ji Zhuo see some words on the screen clearly again.

"...Huh? My eyes are blurred?"

Saw some unusually familiar passages,
Ji Zhuo fell into deep thought, stood up straight away, and walked behind the young man.

The young man was still immersed in the novel, unaware that there was someone behind him,

However, it also allowed Ji Zhuo to see clearly the novel he was reading on the screen - "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals".

This made Ji Zhuo a little silent.

Is this reasonable?

Is this appropriate?

How many collections are there in total for this book?

I ran into a novel reader outside, so I was reading my own novel?
Are you kidding me?

Ji Zhuo felt his heart ache again, maybe it's time for him to check his heart.

With a blank expression on his face, Ji Zhuo stood behind the young man,

Seeing this young man getting more and more excited, before finishing reading, he clicked the bookmark,
Then start writing reviews, write long reviews,

Finally, I saw that the young man started to open the tip, hesitating between the tip of 500 yuan and [-] yuan,
Ji Zhuo couldn't hold back anymore.

"...Brother, your face is going to be cold."

"Thank you for reminding me."

The young man didn't even lift his head, and was about to offer a reward.

"...Dude, is this novel a good read?"

"...Brother, let me tell you, this novel is not ordinary good-looking, it is really good-looking!"

The young man raised his head abruptly, and started talking to Ji Zhuo who was standing behind him, madly telling Ji Zhuo how good this novel is,

Also poured out his excitement.

Listen to this young man's Amway,

Ji Zhuo had no expression on his face, and his heart was ashamed.

I wrote novels that became popular, and occasionally met readers who read my novels,
It's obviously two such good things, but why do I still feel so uncomfortable psychologically.

Ji Zhuo's eyes were staring straight, feeling like he lost his light.

hehehehehe

Turning around, Ji Zhuo touched his mobile phone on the table, gave some money and left.

"...Brother, I really recommend you to read it. This novel is different from other novels. It is well written."

What do you say, I will change it.

The young man in the noodle shop tirelessly recommended to Ji Zhuo who left,
Ji Zhuo wanted to answer like this.I didn't dare, I was afraid of hearing something that would poke his heart even more.

The whole person lowered their heads and lowered their waists, and only one stood out and fled.

Ye Linhan watched Ji Zhuo leave the noodle shop,

I feel that this person is a bit inexplicable, but I don't care.

Now his mind is still on the novel,

Turning his head, he was looking at his phone, hesitating how much to tip this book.

At this time, his mobile phone received a WeChat message.

The boss of his company asked him to go back to work overtime, saying that there were some problems with the project.

Seeing this news, Ye Linghan paused again,

The noodle shop was quiet, only the overhead lights shone on him,
He raised his head and looked ahead,
I'm turning 25 this year.

Is it really going to be like this forever?

It seems that Ye Linhan was stimulated by the growth of the main character in the novel "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" today,
A question popped up in Ye Linhan's mind again. He had thought about it day and night, but there was no result.

Do you want to be like this all your life?

Then he saw the title of the long review written by himself earlier,
"Once upon a time, I also wanted to anger horses and flowers, and hold a sword to the end of the world..."

Some issues seem to have finally come to fruition.

"call……"

Ye Linhan let out a long breath, with a smile on his face,
The whole person is much more relaxed, it seems that this is the effect of a good work.

then,

Ye Linhan made a decision and rewarded "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" with a thousand.

……

Walking out of the noodle shop, the winter wind blows,
Ji Zhuo regained his sobriety, then gritted his teeth and regained his strength.

"...No! I can't give up!"

"I can't fall at the moment before the dawn of victory!"

What makes Ji Zhuo cheer up again is not the hope that "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" hit the street,
It's been three weeks since he published the book, and there is less than a week left in a month.

30 million, 30 million!

Thinking about how to spend the money when he got it, Ji Zhuo gritted his teeth and cheered up.

Gritting his teeth, he quickly switched the phone to the author's background.

Quickly edited a single chapter and sent it out,

"Decrease the description of the update."

"Due to the author's personal reasons, starting tomorrow, the daily update of this book will be reduced to two chapters and [-] words per day."

Seeing that the single chapter was released successfully, Ji Zhuo still gritted his teeth.

Reduce the data growth rate, starting with reducing updates.Procrastinate, I have to procrastinate for a month!

Then Ji Zhuo returned the phone to the backstage of the writer.

Ok?
Gan!
How come there is an extra leader to reward!

who is it!What kind of grudges do I have with you, it's worth your 'support' for me!

(End of this chapter)