Chapter 201 Evaluation
"My favorite is the chapter of arrogance in "The Seven Sins". The protagonist of the chapter is called Novel. I followed the author's habit of the previous chapters and found a word with a similar sound. 'Humble', 'inconspicuous' .

The story of such a name is placed in the chapter of arrogance, which is a bit ironic, and it is very natural. As the bottom, like dust, even if two gangsters on the street would not deliberately shoot him a bullet, Nouvel is really humble To the dust... also suffered the most 'arrogance'.After reading the whole story, I felt extremely depressed and uncomfortable, with a kind of inexplicable anger, and I didn't know whether it was to Novel in the book or myself. "

"I want to see Novel angrily revolt, yell at the homeless man who has taken over his place, drive him out, and say no to those who oppress him...but at the same time I know that this is not a good thing for a man like Novel For human beings, it is too strong for others.

He is just a humble person who can only think in the bottom of his heart if he wants to be arrogant, he has no ability to resist, nor does he have the courage to resist, he has always been like this..."

"It's not just the story of this chapter. After reading the whole book, what I see is not the seven original sins written by the author on the title of each chapter."

"Instead, war, hunger, poverty, disease, class... Hal in the gluttony chapter ended up starving to death, or being strangled to death by the mud. A food seller died like this because of poverty and war."

"In the chapter of lust, why did Senashish die like this in the end? Is it because she didn't have self-salvation? No, it was because she simply couldn't get rid of her original living environment by herself, and at the same time, no one else helped her.

Her mother was a prostitute, and she grew up in a den of prostitutes. Can you expect her to love learning and hate trading, and finally take another path?She seems to have a choice, but in fact she never has a choice, but can this be her fault?Who can think so when seeing the director of the private welfare home pressing on the prostitute and talking about his business to a wider range of ideals. "

"...Looking back at the introduction of the whole book, it's no wonder that it feels so ironic when I read it. It turns out that the reason why the devil can seduce so many people is because he knows that some people need people."

"Then if it is said that the protagonist in the story in this chapter was tempted by the devil again, could it be the fault of these people? Do they have other choices?"

"... Like most readers, this is a good book, one that should not be missed this year. If you haven't read it, I suggest you take some time to read it. But it is also a depressing book..."

This is an article published on the Internet,
Review of The Seven Sins.

It was Xi Yuan who once again read the chapter on arrogance,
I feel like I have a lot to say, so I still posted a comment post,
But it's not all his words, his roommate in Great Britain read the chapter on arrogance,

Still feeling uncomfortable, seeing Xi Yuan post related comments, and asked Xi Yuan to add a few words for him.

……

And when Ji Zhuo saw this comment, he was having dinner with Yun Qingmu,
When I came back from the outside, I was enjoying the shade under the gazebo in the community.

Looking at this long comment, Ji Zhuo paused for a moment, then a smile appeared on his face,
Simply because readers like the work.

"Brother, do these strings in English mean anything?"

Little Chubby's fan is on his lap, he holds a bowl of ice cream in one hand and a spoon in the other,

While eating spoonfuls, he glanced at Ji Zhuo's phone screen and asked curiously,

"That's too exciting to say."

"How do you look excited?"

"There are a bunch of exclamation marks, and there are exclamation marks every other line, aren't you excited?"

Little Fatty said casually.

Ji Zhuo laughed when he heard this,
Then he replied,
"It's an evaluation of a book, maybe it's some thoughts after reading it."

"Evaluation? I thought it was a reminder. Most of the excited comments under the comment section of the dog author are reminders."

"..."

The little fat pier ate another scoop of ice cream and said casually.

Ji Zhuo fell into silence, then raised his head and looked at Xiaopangdun.

Ji Zhuo looked a little chubby at the little chubby,
Tentatively, I handed over a little ice cream in my hand,
"Eat... take a bite?"

"..."

"Eat by yourself."

"Oh."

It's easy to say nothing if you don't eat his ice cream, so the chubby continued to eat on his own.

Ji Zhuo turned his head and glanced at the comment post on the phone screen.

After the comment is posted,
Soon there were some of the same comments about The Seven Sins,

Most of them agree with the views of this post, and explain their own views by the way.

"...I bought this book after listening to my friend's suggestion. After reading it, I didn't sleep all night, and I got up the next day and beat him up. The book is a good book, but it's too depressing. I've put it on the bookshelf now top."

"...already purchased, but not yet delivered. Some are looking forward to the full content."

After taking a look, Ji Zhuo casually liked the first post,

He got up from the bench and put away his phone.

"Brother, are you leaving?"

"gone."

Ji Zhuo waved his hand and went back to his residence.

……

…Congratulations to the host for achieving the goal of the main professional task of this period, creating a work with physical sales of no less than 15 (within three months of release), and the number of words of the finished book is no less than 20. "

"Congratulations to the host for obtaining: plot +1, inspiration +1, free attribute +8"

"Congratulations to the host for creating each work, the master's professional experience +1"

Lying on the sofa, Ji Zhuo looked at the reminder on the system interface.

Sure enough, as he expected, "Seven Sins" has achieved the task goal of the main job of this issue,

And it was a little faster than he expected. It seems that "Seven Sins" sold at least tens of thousands of copies today.

Looking at the reminder that the current mission goal has been settled, Ji Zhuo is quite calm.

After all, has it been expected?

But Ji Zhuo was thinking about another thing.

I am writing another book at the same time, "Hour Hand Leaps to Death" is almost finished, can I also gain some main professional experience after finishing this book?

If he could obtain it, wouldn't he be able to upgrade his main occupation level again?

After thinking about it, Ji Zhuo gave it up for now, and can only watch it when the time comes.

Looking at the system panel again, Ji Zhuo conveniently gave points for the free attributes of this reward.

The various attributes of the main occupation in the system panel become like this.

"Host: Ji Zhuo.

Main occupation: Writer.

Main occupation level: Level 3 (4/5)

Sub-occupation: Screenwriter (Level 2) (0/2)

Sub-profession: not yet open.

Occupational Attributes:
Writing style: 16
Plot: 17
Speed: 18
Inspiration: 17
Scripts: 15
Main occupation current task target: According to the main occupation level and past works, the requirement is to create a book with physical sales of no less than (20W-30W) or online order no less than (5W-10W), and the number of words to be completed should not be less than 20.

(The specific requirements are determined according to the subject matter and type of the current new book)

Task rewards: writing style +1, speed +1, free attribute +8.

Current incentives: 600 million/month.

Sub-occupation: Screenwriter Current goal:..."

Ji Zhuo added all four free attributes to the script attribute, and the remaining four free attributes were divided into one point each.

After adding it, Ji Zhuo naturally didn't feel much. The attributes of writing and plot strengthened Ji Zhuo's sensitivity and ability to use words and plot rhythm.

He didn't pour any knowledge into his mind.

Looking at the current attribute panel, Ji Zhuo is quite satisfied.

It can be said that the script attributes have caught up and made up for the shortcomings.

But conversely, it can also be said that script attributes slow down the overall growth of attributes.

In this way, if you prepare to pounce at that time, it will be very good.

Then there are the current main occupational task objectives, the requirements have increased a lot again,
It may also be due to practical considerations. After all, the mission goal is too low, and there is really no pressure on Ji Zhuo now.

Ji Zhuo was quite satisfied with this.

Whether it is for the consideration of fleece, or the consideration of earning royalties,

He can't wait for the system to jump to the sky, it's better to set a goal that he can't achieve.

That's not the best, just take the system cash directly, if it is achieved, then it will also earn royalties.

It's a pity that the system's target increase is okay, but it's still not very impressive.

Dog system, can you be more generous,
It's a bit of a pattern!
With sales of 30 million in three months, who do you look down on!

Ji Zhuo might be a little drifting.

And the system naturally ignored Ji Zhuo,
Maintain the system panel as usual.

After muttering for a while, Ji Zhuo felt the meaning,
After closing the system panel, he collapsed on the sofa again.

Just looking at the hazy night outside the living room window, I was lazy.

Blowing the evening wind that blows into the house, looking at the lights of other people's houses near and far outside the window,
Quiet around and enjoy a moment of comfort.

Obviously it's more comfortable to lie back on the bed, but Ji Zhuo really doesn't want to move right now.

Watching the wind blowing outside the window,
Ji Zhuo thought about something more.

It was supposed to be time for him to start thinking about the next new book.

After all, although "Hour Hand Leaps to Death" has not been finished yet, he has already finished it.

But he still wanted to wait and see.

Waiting for the completion of "Hour Hand Leaps to Death",
Will the system give some experience to increase his main occupation level?
If the level of the main occupation is increased, the wool and goals of the system will definitely be different.

Now it's 600 million a month, and one more level... There is really room for imagination.

So Ji Zhuo prepared to wait and see.

It's definitely not that he is lazy, he is going to rest for two days after finishing the book.

He is working hard.

Otherwise, if you read a few novels, you can finish two works in less than three months, and you still have to finish the book!

Thinking about it, Ji Zhuo continued to slump on the sofa.

Until the night was dark, the wind blowing in from outside was a bit cold.

Ji Zhuo yawned again, got up and walked to the bedroom.

……

"Grass in the canyon: Have you read the update of the author of the dog today? I feel that this book is almost finished.

Zeng Canghai: I didn’t see it.

Canyon Grass: ? ? ?
Grass in the canyon: You can resist watching, do you have any secrets, teach me, teach me!
Zeng Canghai: It is because the book by the author of Dog is almost finished that I don't read it.Think about the previous record of the author of the dog. After the old book is finished, the new book will be released for at least half a month.

Zeng Canghai: Now that I’ve finished watching it, I have to save what I’m going to watch for the next half month, and I’ll watch it later.

Grass in the canyon: ...Boss, I remembered an idiom about monkeys, it's all right!Up and down, no way...

Grass in the Canyon: Think about it, you will be able to read two more chapters by then, but now you will have to read two less chapters every day... This is something you can’t read now, it’s obviously because there are too few authors, new books It's too slow!

Zeng Canghai: Hmm...it makes sense...

Zeng Chaohai: Dog Author!You are playing monkey here!Update it now!get up!
The Eight Immortals Crossing the Sea: ...

30 per second:..."

In the reader group, a group of Sand Sculpture readers are still chatting.

In the group of authors on the other side, there are still those from Versailles who are repeating the readings with the Qianqi Party. Occasionally, some big bosses will come and go, and there will be a burst of rainbow farts for repeating.

"The new book has been opened: Imitate the dog author... No, the clumsy and extraordinary boss, wrote a horror novel, hey, it's on the shelves today, the first order is not very good, I feel like rushing.

Half fluttering: how much?

The new book has been opened: Three thousand just now, what are you talking about?
Half fluttering: ...

I wrote: ...

Octopus: It is recommended to cut it.

Salted fish turned over: it is recommended to cut +1
Half fluttering: It is recommended to cut it... But recently, horror themes written by dog ​​authors are quite popular.

The new book has been opened: This is to say, what subject is the dog boss writing that is not popular, two updates a day, hundreds of thousands of readers have red eyes, looking for novels with similar themes all over the world... I am one of them.

Octopus: The dog author is almost done with this book, and I don't know what to write.I really want to follow suit!

Salted fish overturned: I advise you to think carefully. Last time I followed the trend and wrote hard science fiction, I risked eating steamed buns for two months... Sometimes the selection of materials by the dog author can really make people's eyes dark... As a loyal reader of the dog author, I have a profound experience.

Half fluttering: Hey, the whole group is close to the author's lackeys, I am ashamed to be with you! "

"Half-aggressive and non-aggressive was banned by the administrator for 1 minute."

"Half fluttering: I'm kidding, boss, I'm kidding.

Octopus: Aren't you?
Half fluttering: yes... the author of the dog is too damn slow to update, and it makes me wait for the update to code words carelessly! "

And at this time... Ji Zhuo was soundly asleep.

……

"Everyone is working hard and persevering."

"The animation of "The Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals" that we agreed with the audience will start in one and a half months."

"During this period, we should at least produce the first few episodes of "The Shepherd Boy's Search for Immortals."

The person in charge of the animation production team of Pioneer Film and Television Media poured a cup of coffee for the animation production team who were still working overtime.
As he spoke, he yawned again.

The team members of the animation department all have thick dark circles on their eyes.

Although even if they work overtime, everyone still has enough sleep time, but they can't afford to devote themselves to the animation production of "The Shepherd Boy Seeking Immortals" every day except for sleeping and eating.

However, the animation production team has no complaints.

In addition to the benefits and overtime wages of Pioneer Film and Television, and the full bonus after the animation is released, the more important thing is that most of these big cows dug from everywhere are loyal readers of the dog author at the moment.
Even at this moment, he still maintains his excitement and enthusiasm.

I almost screamed.

The animation of "Mortal Cultivation of Immortals" is the first animation of this pioneering film and animation production team.
It is a good start, and this "Shepherd Boy Searching for Immortals" is the most important work to consolidate the influence of the Pioneer Film and Television Media animation production team.

It is also the most important one that bundles the animation production of Pioneer Film and Television and the label of "The Best Adaptation Production Team of Dog Author's Works".

This group of animation production team members all hope that the copyright of other works of the author of the dog will not be authorized to other film and television companies in the future,
can hear the audience and readers say,
"The adaptation of the work of the author of the dog depends on Pioneer Film and Television Media."

This is also an important step for Pioneer Film and Television Media to enter the field of animation production.

"...Okay, it's not too late today, let's go here, everyone, let's rest."

"Wait, I still have something to finish here."

"Just a few strokes, and you're done."

The person in charge of the animation team finished his work,
Looking at the sky and time outside again, he stood up and greeted him.

Then everyone went back to the house to rest.

Pioneer Film and Television Media arranged accommodation for those who work overtime in the animation production team, each with a small suite.

However, the production staff of the animation team were not happy to leave.

"Go away."

"Director, why are you urging me, these few frames will be finished immediately."

"That's right, what did the director urge, I'll get it done right away... Director, if you're free, please contact the dubbing side, it's the third episode..."

"Hey……"

The person in charge sighed, this is the point now, where can I contact you?

"Director, I've edited the PV here, why don't you watch it."

"PV ready? Alright, I'll come over and have a look..."

The person in charge who was still sighing just now responded and walked over.

(End of this chapter)

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