The Path of the Peasant Girl

Chapter 119 118 Follow-up
How could the impeccable male lead use money to make people talk about it?After asking Peng Dafu to apologize, he donated 100 taels to the poor students in the school to buy pens and inks. As a result, he became more famous among the students and successfully gained a wave of favor.

When he got home, Li Hongyi told his mother about the matter, and his mother suggested that he change the academy for future consideration.

So the family sold the property and went to the capital.

However, just after walking [-] miles on the road, he encountered a bandit who was the king of the mountain.

……

"Oh, so tired!"

Zuo Hua rubbed his sore wrists and neck, looked at the manuscript on the table, and said, "Just write it here, Li Hongyi encountered danger and stepped forward to confront the bandits, a scholar with no power to tie the chicken, how? Dealing with powerful and vicious bandits makes readers worry about Li Hongyi's fate."

"Always make people anxious, and the beauty of breaking the chapters can't be forgotten, so that they will be eager to read the second book."

"It's really yours, that understands the essence of serialization, and someone will send a blade in the future." Zuo Shi couldn't help laughing.

After thinking for a while, my eyes suddenly lit up: "It's called "Dengke", it's concise and suitable for the occasion. I'm really a genius."

Zuo Hua gladly accepted the comments, and then processed and polished the draft again, transcribing the first two chapters.

When the ink dries, the story is put away page by page.

"The rest will be written tomorrow, and it will be finished tomorrow."

Today, she wants to design chapters, make drafts, and imitate the writing style of the script.

To be precise, make her language a little more literary, and Zuo Shi told her that there is no need to write classical Chinese, and it is estimated that people who read the story will not like to read it.

A chapter of the story ranges from [-] to [-] words, and Zuo Hua has written quite a few words today.

"I can write [-] words tomorrow, and in a few days, I will be able to finish this book. The ancient books are quite short, but I don't know if anyone would like to read when I write a long novel."

Zuo Hua was actually apprehensive. Although she was very confident in her plot, she had never thanked her or sold it, and she was still uncertain about the readers' taste.

If you don't bring everyone in your family to listen to it together, there will always be a charter, so it's fine to give him some advice.

In addition, the family members who are illiterate can also write. When the time comes, she will write the draft, and someone will transcribe it, and the speed will be faster!
Just do it when you think of it, Zuo Hua said his thoughts and asked, "Xiao Shi, is this okay?"

Zuo Shi smiled and said: "Why not, eldest sister, you are very powerful, you are smart, and the story is well written, so it will definitely sell! Why don't you call the family over to ask and give some advice?"

Zuo Hua nodded heavily: "Okay!"

So the two moved quickly, called Wen and the others into the study, read the story they wrote, stared at their reactions, and asked them to give some advice.

Zuo Ge and Zuo Jiang both felt good, but Zuo Hua was not happy because of their praise. She knew that no matter what story she told, the two would feel good.

She mainly wanted to hear the opinions of Wen and Fu Yuanzhi.

When Fu Yuanyi heard it, he looked at Zuo Shi, knowing what role she played in it, and smiled: "Yes, this story is very good, it should be able to buy a good price, the serialization is also very good, the first book sold well , the second book can be sold for a little more."

Hearing what she said, Zuo Hua's heart fell back into his stomach, and he smiled very happily: "Thank you, Big Brother Fu."

Zuo Shi: "..."

Dare she said so much, it's not as good as Fu Yuanzhi's words, so angry!

Zuo Ge and Zuo Jiang stared at the article for about a quarter of an hour, and looked at Zuo Hua in amazement.

"Sister, this story is so beautiful, is it true? Do you know Li Hongyi? Your previous stories are really not so good-looking and true. I think your story was written rationally from our escape. Zuo Ge's eyes widened, and his long eyelashes flickered, which was very cute.

Zuo Jiang asked: "No no, Sanjie, where is the story of our escape from the famine? The male protagonist in the story is obviously so powerful, and we don't have Li Hongyi at all, okay? This story is attractive at the beginning, but it is not finished, no Knowing what happened later, is there any danger on the way to escape from the desert, will Li Hongyi still go to the exam? Hurry up and write!"

Zuo Shi said: "Art comes from life, and it is higher than life. The story of the eldest sister is to write the things we have experienced into the story, but there are fictitious things when writing, when the eldest sister writes, she wants to write. When things are written in, they will abandon evil and promote good, so that bad people can get retribution, and a good cup of peace."

Zuo Ge and Zuo Jiang: "So that's the case. Big sister, you lost the rest of the family later, please tell us about it."

The story stops halfway through, isn't that tantalizing?

Zuo Hua was very surprised: "Do you want to know?"

"Think about it, otherwise why look at it?"

Zuo Hua was more confident: "...I want to use this story to sell money, so I have to write stories these days. When I make money, I will give Xiao Jiang a new book and buy you new clothes, okay?"

"No need for big sister, I will buy it myself." Zuo Jiang said.

"Eldest sister is working hard, and I don't want new clothes." Zuo Ge said.

I know it hurts people, that's fine.

Zuo Shi is more gratified: "When the eldest sister has the ability, you can't afford to read, buy clothes, buy food, you can study obediently, help with things at home, let's make money together as a family, and Xiaojiang will be a high-ranking official in the future, and live a good life together. day!"

Zuo Ge and Zuo Jiang were attracted by the bright prospects she described, their faces flushed with excitement, and they nodded heavily: "We must be obedient and make money."

Several people talked about Yi Zhenhua, ate dinner together, washed up, and went to bed early.

There was no nightlife in ancient times, and everyone went to bed early.

Zuo Hua pulled out the lamp oil at home and wrote down her thoughts for the day. She was tired after a busy day, and she was a child again. After a while, she fell asleep.

The next day, Zuo Hua devoted himself to writing the book and was in very good condition.

The family knew that she was doing business, so they consciously didn't bother to disturb her. They either cleaned the house, or sat there obediently watching her write, and offered tea and water thoughtfully.

On this day, Zuo Hua wrote very smoothly. He kept writing and writing. He wrote three chapters in the morning, three chapters in the afternoon, and two more chapters after dinner in the evening.

"This work is really tiring. Although the thinking is straightened out, the hands are really tired."

Back pain, hand cramps, really uncomfortable.

Zuo Jiang looked at it and couldn't help but miss her keyboard, her voice, and her various artifacts. It would be great if there were these things in ancient times.

"Everyone, why don't you read it and I'll write it?" Zuo Shi suggested.

Zuo Hua thought for a while and said, "Okay, let's try."

So, with Zuo Hua dictating and Zuo Shi writing, another chapter was completed.

After dark, the siblings climbed into bed to rest.

(End of this chapter)