The superstar starts from the termination of the contract

Chapter 716 "Wandering Ballad"

The other contestants all showed shocked expressions. Xu Xiangyang's poems have always been very aura, and he won the No.1 most of the time in every poetry competition.

So if these people want to compete, they are already very happy to get No.2.

After all, they are only relatively well-known people in the poetry world, and compared with these people in the jury, they are a little bit less interesting.

Although Xu Xiangyang had been ranked second in the past, the works that ranked ahead of him were indeed works that many people applauded.

If Wei Youren just mentioned anyone else's name, perhaps everyone would not be surprised.

After all, with so many years of accumulation, it is normal to write a few good works.

but……

Just now, Wei Youren personally said that the No.1 winner is Lu Fan!

Is Lu Fan also so good at writing modern poetry?

Everyone looked at each other in blank dismay, all of them showing puzzled expressions.

When the live broadcast room heard the news, the netizens went crazy.

"It's over, it's over, other contestants who participated in this year's poetry competition will probably be beaten by Lu Fan."

"Where there is Lu Fan, there is excitement to watch, so I am here today."

"I think Brother Lu is actually quite a good person, why can't he find peace wherever he goes?"

"That's not what he said. Brother Lu doesn't seem to be doing anything, right? Is he not allowed to be talented in modern poetry?"

"That's right, if you want to blame, you can only blame them for their inferior skills. How can you blame us for Brother Lu?"

There was a lot of discussion in the live broadcast room, and the popularity once again soared, reaching 7000 people.

When Lu Fan heard his name, he walked up directly.

Also, I greeted the five judges first, then bowed slightly to the other participants, took the poem I wrote just now, and recited it seriously.

In fact, he can recite it without reading it. If he does so, it is entirely because of the respect of the five judges.

"When the sea breeze rises,"

"Blue roses bloom all over the dark water."

"—Where is the wanderer's home?"

"..."

"A beautiful little travel companion is a sweeter home,"

"The nostalgia of a wanderer lingers there."

"Well, forever sink and float among whales and sea pythons."

……

After Lu Fan finished his recitation, it was as if time stood still in the live broadcast room, and no one spoke at all.

A few seconds later, it erupted in an all-round way.

"I'm low-educated, and I don't seem to understand this poem."

"Me too."

"Although I'm a fan of Brother Lu, to be honest, I don't think it's as good as what Xu Xiangyang wrote just now."

"Actually, I think so too."

"I really can't understand the parallel sentences and some abstract writing techniques in this paragraph."

"It doesn't matter if you don't understand, as long as you remember that Brother Lu's writing is awesome, that's fine."

The barrage on the Internet suddenly exploded, but Hua Yunfeng, who was on the scene, couldn't help laughing.

Of course, he also knew to pay attention to the occasion, so he didn't laugh out loud, but laughed at Lu Fan from the bottom of his heart.

After all, young people are young people, and it is impossible to cover everything. They really think that they can rule the world after learning something.

The poem he wrote just now has neither a clear sense of rhythm nor rhyme, and it is difficult to divide the beat. Based on these points alone, it cannot be regarded as a good poem.

The judges said that it was the first poem, and then I will ask these questions to see how they explain it.

Although the status of these people in the jury is not low, at least they are much better than Hua Yunfeng.

But there was a friend of Hua Yuanfeng in the judges' seat, so he didn't believe that the other party would turn to someone else.

His old friend was called Shu Yurong, and he was at the same level as Wei Youren, but there was a slight gap between them.

Except for Hua Yunfeng, most people can't understand the meaning of Lu Fan's poem. He knows that it is about nostalgia, but analyzing it from various aspects, it seems that it is not as good as Xu Xiangyang's "Taste".

Perhaps these judges knew the thoughts of the following people, and finally Wei Youren gave an explanation.

"From a completely traditional point of view, this poem does not have a clear sense of rhythm, it basically does not rhyme, and the division of beats is also difficult. But even so, its rhythm is still much stronger than that of prose language. .”

Then several other judges also gave their own views.

Fangzheng: "This "Ballad of Youzi" is timeless and elegant, with hazy imagery and distant nostalgia. Although there is nostalgia and sorrow, it is not so thick that it cannot be dissolved, but just like the water drops of flying flowers and broken jade when the waves and the sea wind play. , suddenly slipped into my heart, feeling a little bit of sadness."

Shen Ming: "The fenced gate is the home of spiders, the earthen wall is the home of succulent lily, and the fruit trees with luxuriant branches are the home of birds." However, wanderers can only rise and fall "between whales and sea pythons". The contrast, as well as the subsequent method of moving from emotion to scene, make the expression of emotion more natural and strong. "

Shu Yurong: "..."

Dai Chunbo: "..."

After listening to the explanations of these famous experts, these people in the audience found that this is indeed the case. Although the teachers of Hua Yunfeng and Xu Xiangyang are easy to understand, people can know what is going on at a glance, but what Lu Fan just said The first "Wandering Ziyao", no matter how you analyze it, is more in-depth and layered than them.

In this way, everyone is convinced by the result.

To be honest, it is really difficult for other contestants to write such an abstract way of writing so well in such a short period of time.

And the netizens in the live broadcast room seemed to understand, and commented one after another.

"After the judges' explanations, I seem to understand."

"I also understand. It can be summed up in one sentence, Brother Lu is awesome."

"Pray silently here, these teachers created today must not be selected into textbooks."

"My head gets dizzy seeing such an abstract sentence, why don't you let me recite Xu Xiangyang's song."

The number of people in the live broadcast room is increasing, and it will soon exceed 1 people.

The on-site creation is still going on. To be honest, Hua Yunfeng still feels a little dissatisfied with the judges' comments.

He really didn't think there was anything good about this "Wandering Ziyao". What are the characteristics of modern poetry?
Isn't it about being easy to understand?
Why is he writing so complicatedly?Not to write ancient poems?
But even Shu Yurong gave a very positive evaluation, what else can Hua Yunfeng say?

However, he still does not agree with Lu Fan's strength.

Therefore, he is more confident in the next creation.

Even if he can't compare with Xu Xiangyang and the others, isn't it quite easy to deal with a little Lu Fan?
After Lu Fan finished reciting, he returned to his seat. When passing by Hua Yunfeng, he stopped suddenly and said to him softly, "Mr. Hua, I need your advice then."

(End of this chapter)