Literary life with cute baby

Chapter 49

"The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" is about to start its official serialization. Tang Shuang logged into the author's section, and Li Haonan's website popped up one after another. The time span was from 9:2 am to 20 minutes ago, and there were more than [-] entries.

Tang Shuang glanced at it roughly, and they were all asking when the manuscripts would be uploaded. If they were divided according to the time period, the content in the morning, afternoon and evening was very different, which directly reflected the change in Li's mentality. this day~
In the morning, he happily said that the readers were looking forward to it, and the enthusiasm was high, and he told Tang Shuang to upload a few more chapters today to make a good start.

In the afternoon, Tang Shuang didn't reply. He had a faint feeling that something was wrong, and he stopped asking questions about how many chapters to upload, but said that it would be good to have a chapter to start with.

At night, the editor-in-chief Li was already worrying about gains and losses, and asked pitifully, do you want to release the pigeons of the readers?If he really does this, the editor in charge will be laid off!

Tang Shuang opened the folder. He found ten chapters in the past few days, about 3 words. He originally wanted to upload three chapters, but the first three chapters had a lot of introductory content and the plot was relatively flat. He was worried about disappointing readers, so he decided to upload more In the first chapter, I contributed Chapter 4 "Beating people with strength is like hanging a painting, kung fu is not afraid of guns".

For the first time in Chapter 4, there is a description of actual combat. Wang Chao and Tang Zichen encountered an international killer hired by the CIA.After this chapter comes out, readers can rest assured.

One is that the writing style of "The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" is completely different from that of "Heroes".

For example, Tang Zichen's move of "moving, blocking and hammering" took down a wolf weighing nearly 200 jin, and his move of "turning back palm" crippled a violent bear weighing more than 200 jin. The monkey steals the peach, and the dragon raises its head.

The second is to explain to readers how Chinese martial arts and firearms fight. Will a person who has practiced martial arts for many years be easily killed by a gun?

Shenhu's marksmanship is superb, and with super close-range shooting, only one of the three shots hit.Moreover, Tang Zichen shrugged his shoulders for this shot, and used his muscle strength to easily squeeze out the bullet, and the bleeding stopped, just like ordinary people peeling fruit and peeling the skin.

The impact of Dragon Snake in another world is shocking. Its biggest attraction lies in the description of Chinese martial arts and the passionate battle.

But at the same time, its shortcomings are also obvious. All the plots related to life are relatively blunt, and the characters are not three-dimensional and plump enough, and lack the breath of life.

For example, the description of the relationship between Wang Chao and Tang Zichen is embarrassing.

For example, in the first three chapters, when Tang Zichen and Wang Chao met for the first time, the former would call him "little idiot" and "silly boy" at every turn.

For example, Chen Bin, the eldest lady of the consortium, "lightly sucks a bottle of Wanglaoji herbal tea", which makes people laugh, and there is a strange description, such as Chen Xin, "with a ferocious face, vicious and vicious, worthy of being a returnee who returned from studying abroad". , there is Liao Junhua's naive words like "If you can't handle this matter within 5 minutes, the traffic police chief here should stop doing it."

Therefore, Tang Shuang will continue to extract the essence and discard the dross in the follow-up writing.

After Tang Shuang uploaded these four chapters, she replied to Li Haonan, asking him to put his uneasy heart back, don't worry, since Tang Shuang promised, he will definitely do it. At the same time, Tang Shuang left his mobile phone number to Li Haonan.

Within a minute, Tang Shuang's cell phone rang. Looking at the caller ID, it was Li Haonan's.

Hearing Tang Shuang's voice, Li Haonan asked unsurely, "Teacher Tang?"

The voice is too young, not like Tang Sanjian.He had seen Tang Sanjian's photo before. It is impossible for a person in his fifties to have such a tender voice.

After Tang Shuang explained it, Li Haonan finally understood. No wonder the painting style of "Heroes" changed suddenly, which was completely different from the style of "Impermanence Sword".

It turned out that it was not written by the same person at all. Mr. Tang retired to the second line, and his son inherited his father's career. This made Li Haonan even more happy. A young author is obviously more promising, and he will have more common language and better deal with.

The text of "The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" was updated, and the fans of the Lincheng Library started discussing it immediately.

Sure enough, as Tang Shuang expected, after watching the battle plot of Chapter 4, everyone can finally put their hearts back into their stomachs. The author finally didn’t use spring and autumn brushwork. The battle is not only described positively, but also very exciting, with a strong sense of picture , the emotional mobilization is in place, and readers can't help feeling excited when they read it while substituting into it.

"Before I was worried that the owner of the hall would not write about battles, but I didn't expect to be so old-fashioned. Tang Zichen killed three international mercenaries when he appeared on the stage. It was very refreshing for people watching."

"I counted it. Tang Zichen used Tai Chi, Bagua and Xingyi in total during the battle. He used six moves, one of which was chasing and the other was dodging. So in fact, there were only four attacking moves, four to kill three. People, [Shocked face] Killing one person in ten steps is not as efficient as this, it's too scary, and it's actually completely believable, the sense of reality is too strong."

"The gun is useless! Hit the shoulder and shake it and you'll be fine~ It's okay~ It's okay~ It's okay~[I can't believe it]."

"Ask those experts who practice martial arts. The real battle is to decide the winner in an instant. There will be no battle for hours, or even three days and three nights. This is magic, not a real battle."

"The level of kung fu seems to have come out. It is divided into Ming Jin, An Jin and Hua Jin. The heroine has reached the highest level. It is very difficult for the Dynasty to chase her, but I like it, haha, I like this kind of difficult operation. There is a sense of conquest [wretched face]."

"The so-called national art refers to the martial arts of various schools and schools, such as Xingyi, Taiji, Bagua, Tongbei, Mantis, Baji, poking feet, Hongquan, iron wire, chopping, kicking, wrestling, etc. Martial arts, unified name. This is to unify the world and become the leader of the martial arts!"

"Guoshu is a good word! Put aside the views of the sect, don't cherish yourself, this is the only way to carry forward Chinese martial arts."

""The Romance of the Dragon and Snake" shouldn't be considered martial arts, maybe we can create a new category called national martial arts!"

"The realism of the battle plot is much stronger than that of martial arts. There is no flying around, and there are no awesome and unpredictable moves. The moves used are all real-life moves, such as moving and hammering, monkeys stealing peaches , everyone has heard of it more or less, but it is extremely powerful when used in battle!"

"Upstairs, you have heard of monkey stealing peaches more or less, but almost everyone used it when they were young."

"Everyone won't find it scary when watching vampire movies, but watching Liao Zhai is simply a childhood nightmare. It has haunted me for decades. Similarly, it is precisely because we have heard of these moves in Dragon Snake that they seem extremely real. , and extremely hot-blooded."

"I think it's against the law for a goddess like Tang Zichen to use such a wretched move like monkey stealing peaches?"

"The owner of the museum needs to update! I've already entered the pit~"

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