I'm not a fool
Chapter 202 The Speed of Cherry Blossoms Falling
Chapter 202 The Speed of Cherry Blossoms Falling
And Bai Mufan, who was equally stress-free, was Xia Fanleo.
Xia Yan's grades have been stable in the top five of her grades all year round. In fact, it is more than enough for her to get the recommendation qualifications of the top schools in Xiacheng, but she herself refused the recommendation. She wants to pass the college entrance examination like everyone else. Pathway to University.
In Xia Fan's own words, that's the only way to be considered as a satisfactory answer to her three years of high school.
After reviewing, Xia Yan followed what she said in the library, and showed Bai Mufan the novel she wrote herself, saying that she wanted him, who had been there, to make an evaluation.
This afternoon, the Department of Literature.
Today, only Xia Fan and Bai Mufan are sitting here, the other students are still studying hard in the classroom, and only these two top students have the leisure and leisure to come to the classroom of the Literature Department to discuss novels.
"Whoa."
Bai Mufan gently flipped through the printed manuscript, carefully looking at each word on it, while Xia Yan sat beside him quietly, and for a while, only the sound of pages turning could be heard in the classroom of the Department of Literature.
After a long time, after Bai Mufan finished reading the last word, he couldn't help but raised his head and stretched his neck. Xia Fan who was next to him immediately asked, "How is it?"
This literary girl was actually blushing slightly at this moment, her eyes filled with apprehension and anticipation.
Bai Mufan looked down at the manuscript in his hand, gently stroked the surface of the paper, and couldn't help but fell into deep thought.
This novel written by Xia Yan is just the beginning. The heroine of the story is the head of the literature department, and the hero is a junior who later joined the literature department. He usually calls the heroine "senior sister".
And the whole story revolves around the relationship between these two people.
Looking at the extremely familiar background and character setting, Bai Mufan vaguely understood why Xia Fan showed this article to himself at this time.
He looked at Xia Fan who was waiting for his answer. At this time, no matter whether he said yes or no, it was not the best answer.
Bai Mufan pondered for a moment, then suddenly said: "I think we can enrich the branches of the story, and at the same time make the characters more fleshed out."
Xia Yan was slightly taken aback. She didn't seem to expect that Bai Mufan would seriously raise her opinion, so she couldn't help but gather herself together, and humbly asked for advice: "Then how should I write it?"
"Like this, through the encounter between the hero and heroine in the literature department, it involves the setting that the two were childhood sweethearts when they were young." Bai Mufan picked up a brush and drew a picture casually, saying: "As for the starting point, you can use cherry blossoms."
"Sakura?" Xia Yan looked at the painting in front of Bai Mufan. On it was a cherry blossom tree, and there were two villains meeting at the bottom.
"Yes, cherry blossoms." Bai Mufan smiled slightly, looked at the painting in front of him, and said softly: "It can be designed that the hero and heroine have a chance encounter at the beginning of school, and then draw out the memories of the two when they were young. As for the scenes of memories... just Let's start with a question."
"Question?"
"The speed at which cherry blossoms fall..." Bai Mufan smiled slightly, and looked up at Xia Wen: "Do you know?"
Xia Yan was slightly taken aback, shook his head and said, "I don't know."
"It's five centimeters per second." Bai Mufan wrote this line next to his painting.
Not bad... He decided to integrate the story of "Five Centimeters Per Second" into Xia Yan's novel, making Xia Fan's novel more colorful, and it was the last push behind Ji Yan.
Although Xia Yan's original story is not bad, it has reached the standard of passing, but if you want to go further, you still need time and experience.
At the same time, he has another plan, which is to hide his real answer in this story.
He and Xia Fan met through literature, and now Xia Fan poured his heart into this novel to convey to him, and he naturally had to use the same method to reply to this girl.
"Five centimeters per second?" Xia Yan's eyes lit up slightly. As a lover of literature, he has absolutely no resistance to such romantic words.
Bai Mufan picked up the pen and slowly wrote down the beginning of "[-] Centimeters Per Second".
"90.00 Centimeters Per Second" is a novel that Bai Mufan used to like very much, and it is also one of the few novels in which Bai Mufan can perfectly restore more than [-]% of the text in the book.
After reading it for the first time, Bai Mufan couldn't forget it for a long time. After that, he would pick up this book and revisit it carefully every time. Every time he had different feelings, he could memorize almost every sentence in it.
…………
"Look, it looks like snow!" Mingli said.
But I don't think so.For me at that time, cherry blossoms were cherry blossoms, and snow was snow.
"Well, is it? Maybe..."
"Hmm...Okay." Mingli said lightly, then ran forward two steps quickly and then turned around.Akari's chestnut hair was shining gorgeously under the sunlight, and then she said something that confused me even more.
"Then, do you know the speed of five centimeters per second?"
…………
The beginning of Second Five was not long, and Bai Mufan finished writing it quickly, and then handed the manuscript to Xia Yan who was quietly sitting beside him waiting.
Xia Yan took it and looked at it seriously. Her eyes became brighter and brighter, and she couldn't help admiring: "The words and emotions are so delicate, much better than what I wrote!"
Bai Mufan just smiled slightly, Xia Fan thought for a while and said: "Adding such a plot can indeed greatly enrich my story, so let's do this, and then this article will be jointly signed by the two of us." Published on Jiyan."
Bai Mufan didn't veto it either. If he gave all the part he thought of to Xia Fan, Xia Fan would definitely not accept it. The way of joint signature is very good.
In this way, while he became famous and retired, Xia Fan's pen name can also be brought into the eyes of readers. The road to writing will be of great help, after all, his pseudonym "Xu Yuanbai" is considered a very popular newcomer in the industry.
The two discussed for a long time, until sunset, when Xia Yan stopped talking.She parted from Bai Mufan, holding the revised manuscript beyond recognition, and left the literature department with a smile on her face.
She couldn't wait to run back and turn the contents discussed with Bai Mufan into words, compose stories, and write them into her novel.
In the deserted Literature Department classroom, Bai Mufan watched Xia Yan's back leave, and a soft sigh echoed in the classroom. He picked up his schoolbag and put it on his back, then got up and left silently.
(End of this chapter)
And Bai Mufan, who was equally stress-free, was Xia Fanleo.
Xia Yan's grades have been stable in the top five of her grades all year round. In fact, it is more than enough for her to get the recommendation qualifications of the top schools in Xiacheng, but she herself refused the recommendation. She wants to pass the college entrance examination like everyone else. Pathway to University.
In Xia Fan's own words, that's the only way to be considered as a satisfactory answer to her three years of high school.
After reviewing, Xia Yan followed what she said in the library, and showed Bai Mufan the novel she wrote herself, saying that she wanted him, who had been there, to make an evaluation.
This afternoon, the Department of Literature.
Today, only Xia Fan and Bai Mufan are sitting here, the other students are still studying hard in the classroom, and only these two top students have the leisure and leisure to come to the classroom of the Literature Department to discuss novels.
"Whoa."
Bai Mufan gently flipped through the printed manuscript, carefully looking at each word on it, while Xia Yan sat beside him quietly, and for a while, only the sound of pages turning could be heard in the classroom of the Department of Literature.
After a long time, after Bai Mufan finished reading the last word, he couldn't help but raised his head and stretched his neck. Xia Fan who was next to him immediately asked, "How is it?"
This literary girl was actually blushing slightly at this moment, her eyes filled with apprehension and anticipation.
Bai Mufan looked down at the manuscript in his hand, gently stroked the surface of the paper, and couldn't help but fell into deep thought.
This novel written by Xia Yan is just the beginning. The heroine of the story is the head of the literature department, and the hero is a junior who later joined the literature department. He usually calls the heroine "senior sister".
And the whole story revolves around the relationship between these two people.
Looking at the extremely familiar background and character setting, Bai Mufan vaguely understood why Xia Fan showed this article to himself at this time.
He looked at Xia Fan who was waiting for his answer. At this time, no matter whether he said yes or no, it was not the best answer.
Bai Mufan pondered for a moment, then suddenly said: "I think we can enrich the branches of the story, and at the same time make the characters more fleshed out."
Xia Yan was slightly taken aback. She didn't seem to expect that Bai Mufan would seriously raise her opinion, so she couldn't help but gather herself together, and humbly asked for advice: "Then how should I write it?"
"Like this, through the encounter between the hero and heroine in the literature department, it involves the setting that the two were childhood sweethearts when they were young." Bai Mufan picked up a brush and drew a picture casually, saying: "As for the starting point, you can use cherry blossoms."
"Sakura?" Xia Yan looked at the painting in front of Bai Mufan. On it was a cherry blossom tree, and there were two villains meeting at the bottom.
"Yes, cherry blossoms." Bai Mufan smiled slightly, looked at the painting in front of him, and said softly: "It can be designed that the hero and heroine have a chance encounter at the beginning of school, and then draw out the memories of the two when they were young. As for the scenes of memories... just Let's start with a question."
"Question?"
"The speed at which cherry blossoms fall..." Bai Mufan smiled slightly, and looked up at Xia Wen: "Do you know?"
Xia Yan was slightly taken aback, shook his head and said, "I don't know."
"It's five centimeters per second." Bai Mufan wrote this line next to his painting.
Not bad... He decided to integrate the story of "Five Centimeters Per Second" into Xia Yan's novel, making Xia Fan's novel more colorful, and it was the last push behind Ji Yan.
Although Xia Yan's original story is not bad, it has reached the standard of passing, but if you want to go further, you still need time and experience.
At the same time, he has another plan, which is to hide his real answer in this story.
He and Xia Fan met through literature, and now Xia Fan poured his heart into this novel to convey to him, and he naturally had to use the same method to reply to this girl.
"Five centimeters per second?" Xia Yan's eyes lit up slightly. As a lover of literature, he has absolutely no resistance to such romantic words.
Bai Mufan picked up the pen and slowly wrote down the beginning of "[-] Centimeters Per Second".
"90.00 Centimeters Per Second" is a novel that Bai Mufan used to like very much, and it is also one of the few novels in which Bai Mufan can perfectly restore more than [-]% of the text in the book.
After reading it for the first time, Bai Mufan couldn't forget it for a long time. After that, he would pick up this book and revisit it carefully every time. Every time he had different feelings, he could memorize almost every sentence in it.
…………
"Look, it looks like snow!" Mingli said.
But I don't think so.For me at that time, cherry blossoms were cherry blossoms, and snow was snow.
"Well, is it? Maybe..."
"Hmm...Okay." Mingli said lightly, then ran forward two steps quickly and then turned around.Akari's chestnut hair was shining gorgeously under the sunlight, and then she said something that confused me even more.
"Then, do you know the speed of five centimeters per second?"
…………
The beginning of Second Five was not long, and Bai Mufan finished writing it quickly, and then handed the manuscript to Xia Yan who was quietly sitting beside him waiting.
Xia Yan took it and looked at it seriously. Her eyes became brighter and brighter, and she couldn't help admiring: "The words and emotions are so delicate, much better than what I wrote!"
Bai Mufan just smiled slightly, Xia Fan thought for a while and said: "Adding such a plot can indeed greatly enrich my story, so let's do this, and then this article will be jointly signed by the two of us." Published on Jiyan."
Bai Mufan didn't veto it either. If he gave all the part he thought of to Xia Fan, Xia Fan would definitely not accept it. The way of joint signature is very good.
In this way, while he became famous and retired, Xia Fan's pen name can also be brought into the eyes of readers. The road to writing will be of great help, after all, his pseudonym "Xu Yuanbai" is considered a very popular newcomer in the industry.
The two discussed for a long time, until sunset, when Xia Yan stopped talking.She parted from Bai Mufan, holding the revised manuscript beyond recognition, and left the literature department with a smile on her face.
She couldn't wait to run back and turn the contents discussed with Bai Mufan into words, compose stories, and write them into her novel.
In the deserted Literature Department classroom, Bai Mufan watched Xia Yan's back leave, and a soft sigh echoed in the classroom. He picked up his schoolbag and put it on his back, then got up and left silently.
(End of this chapter)
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