That's how I became famous
Chapter 273 Change the script
Chapter 273 Change the script
The breeze is blowing, the lake outside the fence is sparkling, and further away is green mixed with dim yellow. Drinking tea in the tea house is very artistic.
No one raised the teacups in front of everyone. Li Xiao didn't know much about tea ceremony etiquette, but he also knew that there are different etiquettes for drinking tea in different places. He didn't know how to drink tea, so he asked:
"Mr. Jin, I don't usually drink tea, and I don't know the etiquette of the tea ceremony, but I have heard some interesting stories about the etiquette of the tea ceremony. Some people say that you can't make a sound while drinking tea, but some people say that you can't make a sound when drinking tea. "The louder the voice, the more respect you have for each other. I guess you usually like to drink tea. Can you explain it to me?"
Li Xiao didn't drink tea, but he saw that Mr. Jin was a bit of a fairy, and he chose the teahouse as the place to discuss, so he would naturally think that he liked drinking tea.To ask this question is to know whether Jin Haoke will pay attention to some tea ceremony etiquette, so as not to offend the other party. This is a question of politeness.
"Actually, I don't usually drink much tea, haha!"
Jin Haoke smiled heartily, "However, the question you asked was heard from others. Regarding whether you can make a sound while drinking tea, it depends on the tea ceremony etiquette in various places. Anyway, we don't need to see outsiders. Drink as you like! "
"Hehe, I'm just kidding."
Li Xiao also smiled heartily, raised the tea in his cup and drank it down, hesitantly, he ran so far after not drinking much tea, it seems that this teacher Jin should be a good businessman, and he can't deal with too much in the future. Otherwise you will be bored to death.
Jin Haoke's reaction when he saw Li Xiao was to drink up the tea in his cup. It's not his business to make an appointment here for the conversation. It's just that he has been retreating and creating at home recently. Now that he comes out, he naturally hopes to find someone Relax and relax in a place with beautiful mountains and clear waters.
"Come on, come on, read my script."
Wu Hao sent a copy of the document to each of them. Seeing Fang Xiaoling who was sitting alone by the side, he hesitated and gave her a copy, but he didn't expect to be rejected.
What do I do with this thing?
Wouldn't it be nice for me to watch the video and brush Weibo quietly?
Fang Xiaoling raised his head and thanked him sweetly, then lowered his head to play with his mobile phone again, and there was always a smile on his face when he looked at it, seeing so many people posting about Li Xiao on the Internet, When I think of the "idol" and "God" they call sitting next to me, I feel a sense of superiority.
Fang Xiaomei, who can only be regarded as an attractive type, just sat and played with her mobile phone. When she saw her smile, Wu Hao, who had seen many beauties, was stunned for a while.
"Xiaohao, your script is really problematic. You can read it here."
Jin Haoke didn't get a response, his brows were slightly frowned, he raised his head and saw Fang Xiaoling who was staring at Wu Hao in a daze, turned his head to look, and saw that Li Xiao was actually taking pictures with his mobile phone.
"cough cough"
Hearing Jin Haoke's dry cough, Wu Hao woke up startled, and when he turned his head, he saw Li Xiao who put away his phone. How could he not know what he was doing, but he didn't dare to make a sound to be noticed by Fang Xiaoling, so he could only look at him with his eyes. Li Xiao threatened weakly.
"Xiaohao, look here, since it is campus bullying, there must be a reason why this person or this group of people want to bully their classmates, of course, it is not ruled out that you want to write about psychopaths, but we prefer Most of them reflect the real campus, and even bullies don’t need to have a reason, but there must be a little foreshadowing, otherwise it will be difficult for you to have a sense of substitution if you don’t know the audience at the beginning.”
The first sentence of Jin Haoke's mouth was right to the point. Li Xiao saw this problem last time, and added:
"That's right, bullies don't need detailed reasons, but they must have certain foreshadowing, such as too much psychological pressure, having been bullied before, or even just for fun, etc. These are actually quite important. Maybe we There is no need to describe it too clearly, but the audience must have a general understanding of the structure of the characters, so that they can dig into the plot of the movie. As Teacher Jin said, the sense of substitution is very important. It’s hard for them to empathize with the storyline, and it can even feel blunt.”
After hearing Li Xiao's opinion, Jin Haoke's eyes lit up. In fact, he thought of many of Li Xiao's words at the first time, but he never thought of it so quickly and clearly.
"Xiaoxiao's remarks are to the point. How to define the identity of a bully is definitely an issue that we need to pay attention to, but we might as well follow this script first, and then we will jump out of all the problems Take it easy." Jin Haoke's name for Li Xiao changed.
"Mr. Jin is right, so let's go on with it first."
Li Xiao already had an idea for a script in his mind, but Mr. Jin is worthy of being a gold medal screenwriter in the industry. Can you give yourself a little more inspiration?
"Hey~"
Jin Haoke waved his hand, "Just call me Lao Jin."
Wu Hao's actions at this time were turning his head around all the time, and what the two of them said could make him feel suddenly enlightened, this is the cooperation of the gods!
"The plot of the love triangle here must be cut."
"Xiaoxiao is right. In the past few years, the plot of this kind of movie may still have some market, but in today's market, it is definitely a big poisonous point that destroys the movie's box office. But we can think about the element of love. .”
"What brother Jin said is exactly what I thought. The love element is indeed a very good story and selling point."
Jin Haoke asked Li Xiao to call him Old Jin, and Li Xiao suggested calling him Brother Jin, but he said that Brother Jin didn't sound good, so he compromised and called him Old Brother Jin.
Listening to the two people talking and talking, at the end, Wu Hao turned to the front and found that most of the stories had been crossed out by him. He was a little hit for a while, because he felt that he was in this industry After working so hard for so many years, he is not as good as Li Xiao, a new movie star. He thought about what they said, but before he could think of these two people, he figured them all out. As a movie director, he felt a little bit of participation nothing.
At the end of their talk, the two frowned deeply, flipped through the previous ones, and said in unison: "Let's change the script."
Li Xiao and Jin Haoke looked at each other with a smile and said: "If it is revised again, the workload may be more difficult than writing a new one. Moreover, it is unnecessary for many people to set up many stories in this script. It’s not good to change it, just change the script.”
"Yes, anyway, we are just an idea now, which can be overturned at any time. Now it seems that changing the script is indeed a better way." Jin Haoke drank a cup of tea comfortably, and today's trip was washed away after many days of retreat. Gloomy, he was quite satisfied and happy.
"."
After hearing so much, Wu Hao actually has a solid foundation in his heart, but he can't help but feel a little sad for a while. Although this story only cost him 500 yuan to buy, it has been changed into a script, and there are some artistic processing. Most of those poisonous points are added by him.
(End of this chapter)
The breeze is blowing, the lake outside the fence is sparkling, and further away is green mixed with dim yellow. Drinking tea in the tea house is very artistic.
No one raised the teacups in front of everyone. Li Xiao didn't know much about tea ceremony etiquette, but he also knew that there are different etiquettes for drinking tea in different places. He didn't know how to drink tea, so he asked:
"Mr. Jin, I don't usually drink tea, and I don't know the etiquette of the tea ceremony, but I have heard some interesting stories about the etiquette of the tea ceremony. Some people say that you can't make a sound while drinking tea, but some people say that you can't make a sound when drinking tea. "The louder the voice, the more respect you have for each other. I guess you usually like to drink tea. Can you explain it to me?"
Li Xiao didn't drink tea, but he saw that Mr. Jin was a bit of a fairy, and he chose the teahouse as the place to discuss, so he would naturally think that he liked drinking tea.To ask this question is to know whether Jin Haoke will pay attention to some tea ceremony etiquette, so as not to offend the other party. This is a question of politeness.
"Actually, I don't usually drink much tea, haha!"
Jin Haoke smiled heartily, "However, the question you asked was heard from others. Regarding whether you can make a sound while drinking tea, it depends on the tea ceremony etiquette in various places. Anyway, we don't need to see outsiders. Drink as you like! "
"Hehe, I'm just kidding."
Li Xiao also smiled heartily, raised the tea in his cup and drank it down, hesitantly, he ran so far after not drinking much tea, it seems that this teacher Jin should be a good businessman, and he can't deal with too much in the future. Otherwise you will be bored to death.
Jin Haoke's reaction when he saw Li Xiao was to drink up the tea in his cup. It's not his business to make an appointment here for the conversation. It's just that he has been retreating and creating at home recently. Now that he comes out, he naturally hopes to find someone Relax and relax in a place with beautiful mountains and clear waters.
"Come on, come on, read my script."
Wu Hao sent a copy of the document to each of them. Seeing Fang Xiaoling who was sitting alone by the side, he hesitated and gave her a copy, but he didn't expect to be rejected.
What do I do with this thing?
Wouldn't it be nice for me to watch the video and brush Weibo quietly?
Fang Xiaoling raised his head and thanked him sweetly, then lowered his head to play with his mobile phone again, and there was always a smile on his face when he looked at it, seeing so many people posting about Li Xiao on the Internet, When I think of the "idol" and "God" they call sitting next to me, I feel a sense of superiority.
Fang Xiaomei, who can only be regarded as an attractive type, just sat and played with her mobile phone. When she saw her smile, Wu Hao, who had seen many beauties, was stunned for a while.
"Xiaohao, your script is really problematic. You can read it here."
Jin Haoke didn't get a response, his brows were slightly frowned, he raised his head and saw Fang Xiaoling who was staring at Wu Hao in a daze, turned his head to look, and saw that Li Xiao was actually taking pictures with his mobile phone.
"cough cough"
Hearing Jin Haoke's dry cough, Wu Hao woke up startled, and when he turned his head, he saw Li Xiao who put away his phone. How could he not know what he was doing, but he didn't dare to make a sound to be noticed by Fang Xiaoling, so he could only look at him with his eyes. Li Xiao threatened weakly.
"Xiaohao, look here, since it is campus bullying, there must be a reason why this person or this group of people want to bully their classmates, of course, it is not ruled out that you want to write about psychopaths, but we prefer Most of them reflect the real campus, and even bullies don’t need to have a reason, but there must be a little foreshadowing, otherwise it will be difficult for you to have a sense of substitution if you don’t know the audience at the beginning.”
The first sentence of Jin Haoke's mouth was right to the point. Li Xiao saw this problem last time, and added:
"That's right, bullies don't need detailed reasons, but they must have certain foreshadowing, such as too much psychological pressure, having been bullied before, or even just for fun, etc. These are actually quite important. Maybe we There is no need to describe it too clearly, but the audience must have a general understanding of the structure of the characters, so that they can dig into the plot of the movie. As Teacher Jin said, the sense of substitution is very important. It’s hard for them to empathize with the storyline, and it can even feel blunt.”
After hearing Li Xiao's opinion, Jin Haoke's eyes lit up. In fact, he thought of many of Li Xiao's words at the first time, but he never thought of it so quickly and clearly.
"Xiaoxiao's remarks are to the point. How to define the identity of a bully is definitely an issue that we need to pay attention to, but we might as well follow this script first, and then we will jump out of all the problems Take it easy." Jin Haoke's name for Li Xiao changed.
"Mr. Jin is right, so let's go on with it first."
Li Xiao already had an idea for a script in his mind, but Mr. Jin is worthy of being a gold medal screenwriter in the industry. Can you give yourself a little more inspiration?
"Hey~"
Jin Haoke waved his hand, "Just call me Lao Jin."
Wu Hao's actions at this time were turning his head around all the time, and what the two of them said could make him feel suddenly enlightened, this is the cooperation of the gods!
"The plot of the love triangle here must be cut."
"Xiaoxiao is right. In the past few years, the plot of this kind of movie may still have some market, but in today's market, it is definitely a big poisonous point that destroys the movie's box office. But we can think about the element of love. .”
"What brother Jin said is exactly what I thought. The love element is indeed a very good story and selling point."
Jin Haoke asked Li Xiao to call him Old Jin, and Li Xiao suggested calling him Brother Jin, but he said that Brother Jin didn't sound good, so he compromised and called him Old Brother Jin.
Listening to the two people talking and talking, at the end, Wu Hao turned to the front and found that most of the stories had been crossed out by him. He was a little hit for a while, because he felt that he was in this industry After working so hard for so many years, he is not as good as Li Xiao, a new movie star. He thought about what they said, but before he could think of these two people, he figured them all out. As a movie director, he felt a little bit of participation nothing.
At the end of their talk, the two frowned deeply, flipped through the previous ones, and said in unison: "Let's change the script."
Li Xiao and Jin Haoke looked at each other with a smile and said: "If it is revised again, the workload may be more difficult than writing a new one. Moreover, it is unnecessary for many people to set up many stories in this script. It’s not good to change it, just change the script.”
"Yes, anyway, we are just an idea now, which can be overturned at any time. Now it seems that changing the script is indeed a better way." Jin Haoke drank a cup of tea comfortably, and today's trip was washed away after many days of retreat. Gloomy, he was quite satisfied and happy.
"."
After hearing so much, Wu Hao actually has a solid foundation in his heart, but he can't help but feel a little sad for a while. Although this story only cost him 500 yuan to buy, it has been changed into a script, and there are some artistic processing. Most of those poisonous points are added by him.
(End of this chapter)
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