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Chapter 86 Manuscript Revision

Chapter 86 Manuscript Revision
Early on Sunday morning, Ren Xueming and Du Jianfeng met Wang Yiyuan at the cafe on the first floor of the office building on Xitai Road.As soon as they sat down, the two of them obviously came prepared. They both took out notepads and printed documents from their bags and placed them on the table in front of them.

Wang Yiyuan went over to take a look, and saw that it was filled with notes and symbols one after another.He said with a smile, Lao Ren and Lao Du, it seems that you two have done enough homework, and I should learn from you.While the three were discussing, Wang Yiyuan took notes on the printed manuscript.

They each ordered coffee, and Ren Xueming ordered a large cappuccino.Du Jianfeng jokingly said, it seems that today the three of us must write a weighty tome.It's just this coffee, I still recommend drinking less, because you won't be able to sleep at night.

Ren Xueming said with a smile, it would be better if he couldn't sleep, then perfect the manuscript to the end, which happens to be able to treat insomnia.Today I can say something up front, if the article is not done well, we will never go home.

Wang Yiyuan smiled and said, I don't care.Anyway, if one person is full, the whole family will not be hungry.Can you do it, the two sister-in-laws won't have any objections?

We're both old couples and old wives, so what's your opinion?The time does not allow us to delay any longer. Anyway, I have to finish my work today before going home. I have already greeted my family.Du Jianfeng also said.

This revision, after full discussions among the three people, finally focused on two aspects: one is the analysis of the status quo of the existing domestic urban complexes, and the focus is on the research on the problems existing in the development of domestic existing urban complexes. .The second is urban management and urban branding. As the urban development system is in a process of constant change, it is necessary to attach great importance to the influence of urban brand effects in the process of building urban complexes.

Regarding city management and city branding, the three of them had similar ideas, but made some improvements to the original manuscript.More than half of the time passed in the morning, and the three of them quickly reached a consensus on this point.

Everyone take a break at halftime.Ren Xueming stood up several times, tapping his lumbar spine from time to time.Du Jianfeng suggested that after finishing these things, you can always go for a massage and let your sisters help you step on your back, which may be effective.

Ren Xueming said that he had tried it before.The effect is effective, but it is only the effect at that time. When I get home, it is still the same.Even when stepping on the back, if you encounter a bone spur or something, it will be more uncomfortable to repeat, so I basically don't want to go now.

Wang Yiyuan is typing the revised comments into the computer word by word.Ren Xueming said, I will feel better by walking.Old Du, why don't we go around the park first?Wang Yiyuan said without raising his head, you can see a different Huangpu River when you go back.

More than half an hour later, when Ren Xueming and the two came in again, Wang Yiyuan basically completed the input.There was a printer in the cafe, and Wang Yiyuan printed out a copy of the revised part, and took it to the two of them for review.After reading them one by one, I didn't find any problems, even if I passed it first.

Ren Xueming said, Xiao Wang, the environment in your park is very good. If the transportation is more convenient, we all want to move here.The weather is good today. The section of the Huangpu River we saw is really different. It is wide, the water flow is slow, the ships on the river are constantly on the river, and the sound of whistles makes it even more vibrant.

Du Jianfeng also said, Xiao Wang, do you know what else we found?Wang Yiyuan asked strangely, Lao Du, what good things did you find?

Du Jianfeng said with a smile, we saw the World Expo site under construction on the other side of the river.Although it's a bit blurry, I can still see a rough outline of the construction site I've been in before.So this is really a good place for you.

Ren Xueming cleared his throat and said, let's get back to the topic.We have all read it just now, let’s turn over the part of city management and city branding first.The next step is the key point. We have to put forward critical and realistic guiding opinions in response to the upsurge of urban complex development and construction in my country in recent years.

He went on to say that due to the complexity and stages of economic, social and urban development issues involved in the development of this urban complex itself, coupled with the fact that our country still lacks a complete system of institutional norms and systematic urban planning at this stage Guidance, the development of urban complexes has presented many blindness and uncertainty.

Du Jianfeng said, I feel that there are indeed many ambiguities and even misunderstandings in the understanding of urban complexes.Therefore, we need to conduct in-depth research and discussion on the origin and development of this urban complex, its connotation of causes, practical significance, and construction and development planning. construction and give full play to its positive role in promoting urban development.

This time, there were many obvious differences in the thinking of the three people.The discussion lasted until a little later in the afternoon. Everyone put forward a lot of their own ideas, but in the end they did not discuss any common opinions.

Wang Yiyuan suggested to eat bean curd, but Du Jianfeng didn't want to go out because of the hot weather, so he ordered three sets of meals in the cafe.After eating, Du Jianfeng went to the front desk to bring a few bottles of mineral water, and said, let's drink some white water and coffee all morning, and the taste of the meal will be much less in the mouth.

There was no rest after the meal, and everyone sat down to continue the discussion.It may also be due to the drinking of mineral water. This time, the three of them thought much faster. After reviewing and reflecting on the development and operation of domestic urban complexes, it didn't take long before they reached a few common points. Opinion.

Taken together, I think there are mainly four.Ren Xueming said, one is to ignore the carrying capacity of the city.Urban carrying capacity is a key factor affecting the level of urban development, and its development has a certain relationship with the stage of the city and the level of economic development.

Du Jianfeng said, but judging from the current situation, the development level of some cities has exceeded the original development layout. If it is not handled properly in the design process of urban complexes, it will cause excess resources and even affect the further development of the commercial system.

Lao Ren continued to say, the second is that the planning is unreasonable.Many cities do not carry out a detailed analysis of the planning layout, and most of them build complexes first and then build commercial structures, which seriously affects the development scope of complexes. Unreasonable planning is the key factor.As a result, under the influence of various factors, it cannot promote the further development of the city, and even cause adverse effects on other areas of urban development.

Lao Ren said that the third is serious homogenization.There are essential differences between the functional types of urban complexes and the regions where they are located. The innovation of urban peripheral development is insufficient. There is a relatively large gap between the urban development model and the overall trend. If the individual development characteristics are ignored, it will increase The operation risk of the project will affect the rationality of the construction.

After taking a sip of mineral water, Lao Ren continued, the last point is the project positioning of this complex.Positioning is the most important work in the development of urban complexes, which determines the basis for the success or failure of urban complexes.

Du Jianfeng added that it is also possible, because the development time of this urban complex in China is still relatively short, and most commercial real estate developers do not have a deep understanding of the positioning methods and steps of urban complexes.Therefore, I think it is very necessary to research and summarize the market positioning strategy of urban complexes, which can be used to guide the development work of real estate developers.

Ren Xueming said, I think we have discussed so far, and the parts that need to be changed in this article are basically mentioned. As for the remaining parts, there is basically no need to make changes.Lao Du, and Xiao Wang, what do you two think?
Du Jianfeng also basically agrees.He said, "Xiao Wang, if you work harder, you can fix it now, and we've settled this matter."Sitting at the table, Wang Yiyuan began to concentrate on typing again.

Ren Xueming made a look at Du Jianfeng, and Du Jianfeng agreed, and the two quietly left the cafe.When the two of them came back again, Wang Yiyuan had already placed the reprinted manuscript on the table.

At the end of the day, everyone said they had no opinion.Du Jianfeng stood up, stretched his waist, and said a little tiredly, that's it, I will email this article to Mr. Wu of the real estate company now, let's see his opinion first, and we will discuss it later.After almost a day, it's time for us to take a rest.

(End of this chapter)

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