Revival Road

Chapter 188 Works
"Due to time constraints, I only watched the first 20 episodes, and I think it's okay. I have a few suggestions for your reference. Would you like to listen?"

"I can't ask for it"

"The rhythm is a bit slow. The web novels are produced in the fast-paced era. In a vulgar way, the hero and heroine are not interested after meeting for two days without going to bed... The progress of Song He and Han Yun is a bit slow... …In addition, the plot of Song He’s abandonment of his ex-wife must be strengthened. You have weakened the character of the hero by such a brushstroke…In addition, your writing style is too literary. Fortunately, you are still an Internet writer. Let’s get back to the topic, I It looks like it can be uploaded, isn’t your last book already finished?”

"It's over. I didn't expect you to be very expert... This is considered to have passed the review, right? I have already contacted the editor, and they hope that I will upload a new book as soon as possible. In fact, I have already given the outline to the editor, and I think it is ok ...Hey, it seems that Song He is going to be written as a villain, I'm really not sure..."

"Successful online novels must have a strong sense of substitution, right? What do you think those teenagers want most in life?"

"To have wealth and beauty," he thought, isn't that what adults want?

"Exactly. But that's not the main thing. I'm asking if they want to be a good guy or a bad guy?"

"What do you mean?"

"I think they are more willing to be the bad guys of our age. Why? Because in the real world, good people always have more hardships, and good people bear more family and social responsibilities. But bad people are different, at least they can be willful. But why. You write Song He as a talented rogue to meet everyone’s taste, right? Also, do you think that Baofu in reality is a good person in the traditional sense? I think you portray Song He’s psychology too much Bookish, he shouldn't have so many worries, and he won't think too much about things, and act after making a decision. If you think about everything before doing it, the day lily will be cold! The history of East Lake Full of deceit and luck, no mercy for the losers, that's the way it is..."

"Entrepreneurship is like conquest, I understand this. But if Song He's love life is too much, will it affect the work?"

"I don't think so. Of course you can't write him as a guy who thinks completely on the lower body. He pursues women for a purpose, and you should be able to handle this well. By the way, tell me a real story that just happened, you Have you ever heard of a singer named Lenny?"

"no"

"It's out, right? You're in this line of work, don't you know anything about the entertainment industry? It's essential material. You can look up who Lan Ni is on the Internet. What I want to say is that this singer and Song He have some stories. Don’t want to hear it? Maybe it will help you in your subsequent plot design?”

"Wait...Song He and the singer?"

"Just two days ago. Do you know the Wanshi Hotel in Beiyang?"

"I know, but I haven't been there"

"The location of the story is there. Lanny's reputation is rising. This year's May Day concert was held in Hiraizumi. You can find it with just a search. Song He and Miss Lanny were dating at the Wanshi Hotel, and they were caught by Beiyang The reporter from the Metropolitan Daily was caught, a conflict broke out, Song He gave the reporter a big beating, and all the photos were deleted..."

Sun Dun didn't say a word.

"why do not you talk?"

"Didn't I listen to you?" Sun Dunquan felt that the story was nothing new.

"I think you can write this story in." Zhang Hongqin paused, "If you want to listen, I can tell you about the process of handling the matter. Of course, this matter is not over. It is said that the reporter also has a background, It is very interesting to contact the situation of **** in our province, I hope you will pay attention to this matter..."

"Then let me listen to you..."

Ten minutes later, Sun Dunquan ended the call with Zhang Hongqin.That incident sounded nothing new to Sun Dunquan. In real life, singers with sugar daddies are definitely not news, but it is almost certain that Tang Yikun has multiple female companions. With his wealth and status, it is news that he lives with a wife .What is worth learning is the process of dealing with this incident after it happened, which can be written into the work.Therefore, Sun Dunquan didn't have a strong feeling about Zhang Hongqin's narration, let alone comment on it over the phone.

According to the agreement, Sun Dunquan's new book should obtain the consent of Zhang Hongqin before publishing, and Sun Dunquan did so.He copied the manuscript of about 20 words to Zhang Hongqin. After waiting for more than ten days, he finally got a reply from Zhang, but she only read about 30 to [-] words and thought it was okay.Regarding Zhang Hongqin's problem of slow pace, Sun Dunquan fully admits it, but he is not going to revise it. If the story is told within [-] words, the writer may not make any money at all.what else can we do?this is the truth.

The second author of this book is Zhang Hongqin, and she is fully involved.Even the names of the hero and heroine were given by her, and the allusion is very obvious. With the plot, if it is an employee of Donghu or someone who cares about Donghu reads it, it is very easy to get a seat on it.This made him a little uneasy. He was not worried that Tang Yikun would find this book. He estimated that Tang Yikun would not read online articles at all, but people around him, such as his secretary, might find this "slander" Tang Yikun's novel, because according to Zhang Hongqin's suggestion, Song He, the hero of the book, is basically a villain in the traditional sense.

is this okay?Sun Dunquan was a little uncertain.This is not the case with the protagonist of the two novels he has completed, although the protagonist of the second novel, which is based on the historical background of the Republic of China, is a loser, but he is still a good person in the traditional sense, at least morally in line with the tradition.

Recently, Zhang Hongqin provided him with a lot of material, including the news that was spread just now.These materials have only one direction, that is, the founder of "Xiyuejiang Company" is not worthy of praise except for his superb means of maneuvering in the market.

"Xijiangyue" is the East Lake in reality. Its main business is real estate, and it is the only industry, so it is easy to describe.Thanks to Zhang Hongqin for giving him a lot of professional knowledge that cannot be found on the Internet or in books, which is of great help to him.Now he believes in a point of view in literary theory that the most important thing in a novel is not the plot, but the details. The plot can be fabricated, but the details cannot be fabricated.Those Chinese and foreign masterpieces are all amazing in details. In this sense, only details are considered art.

Sun Dunquan's feeling now is completely different from before.He feels the "extraordinary" of this book. For him, it is not only a challenge in creation, but also a challenge in life.Judging from the chapters that have been completed, he thinks he has made a breakthrough, and the quality is much better than the previous two works.The main thing is to have something to say, and the fate of the protagonist is full of variables, so there are many things that can be written, full of tension.He thinks that he is not a veteran in this industry, and the two completed works are also lackluster, so there is no need to think about the famous mountains.The point is that his wife Yin Yutao has lost confidence in him more and more, which makes him very anxious.It is said that money is the guts of a person, especially for men.The combined earning of the two books is less than 5 yuan, which is not even as good as his work at Red Star every month. As a result, he needs to ask his wife for cigarette money and gas money. How embarrassing is this for him?However, this web article tentatively titled "Far Mountain" has restored some of his ambitions, and it is not known whether he will turn around in terms of income. "Far Mountain" has many essential elements of a successful online novel: huge wealth from strange sources, enchanting beauties, a life full of intrigue and calculations...it may be popular!However, it may touch that behemoth in Hiraizumi City, and now he finds that the documentary nature of the work is too strong, will this be a problem?

He seriously doubted Zhang Hongqin's identity. If she was just an ordinary clerk as she said, she shouldn't have mastered so many secrets of East Lake—she told him many big figures in East Lake Industrial Group and their conflicts and conflicts. Struggles, of course, are of great help to him in completing his novels. Without contradictions and conflicts, the plot cannot advance, but fantasies and fabricated things can never be compared with what actually happens in life.He admits that the leaders of East Lake are charismatic characters, and everyone is bright and outstanding.Each story is thrilling and full of charm.

However, Zhang Hongqin evaded the source of the "first pot of gold" in East Lake that he "tirelessly" pursued. Whenever he asked about this matter, the other party always talked about him. "Gold" is indeed famous.Since "Far Mountain" adopts a flashback structure, it has not yet touched on the road to prosperity of "Xijiang Moon", and has time to conceive, but Sun Dunquan is not satisfied with the few plans he conceived.He believes that the real story must be more exciting than his own fiction, how can he get the truth?

What is her identity in Donghu Industrial Group?How did she know so much about the leaders of Donghu as if she lived beside them?Why did she shape a character like "Song He" in this way?Will such a character be recognized by book friends?

The website editor is a very responsible person and has been in touch with him, urging him to start a new book before the end of his previous book.Unable to withstand the editor's request, he sent the outline of the new book (the name had not yet been chosen at that time), and the editor thought it was ok, saying that there are many such subjects, but there are not many perspectives like yours, so it should be ok.The editor gave him advice on the current increasingly stringent network management situation, which is the so-called positive energy issue, because the hero and heroine in the outline are a bit "biased", because their identity is the owner of a private company, and appropriate "deviant" is okay. But never cross the red line.It's better to have a positive character in the traditional sense as a contrast.Regarding the direction of the plot of the work, the editor also put forward his own opinions, urging him to upload and pass the review as soon as possible.

Now Zhang Hongqin also agreed to release it, but Sun Dunquan hesitated.I feel more and more that it is a very good suggestion for the editor to find a character to "foil" Song He.

The "foil" character is by his side, and he is Tao Tang.Sun Dunquan recently ate Han Ruilin's invitation, heard Han Ruilin express his dissatisfaction with Tao Tang, and heard some negative rumors about Tao Tang that he hadn't thought of.He was surprised to find that it was only a few months in the cave, and thousands of years in the world.Closed at home every day to build a car behind closed doors, so many things happened in the Red Star Factory!Of course, these changes were all brought about by Tao Tang. Does Tao Tang, who is in the vortex of contradictions, know what's going on with him?Sun Dunquan wondered if it was time to chat with Tao Tang. If Tao Tang was used as a prototype in the novel, would the structure need to be greatly changed?
(End of this chapter)