dream of red mansion

Chapter 811
Step into the Xiaoxiang Pavilion, pass the corridor, and step into the atrium.

I saw the courtyard was deep and quiet.

Once under the mottled bamboo forest, the little girl guarding the courtyard couldn't bear the sleepiness in autumn, and leaned against the wooden railing chair with her head propped up, already falling into a dream.

The autumn wind is bleak, and the bamboo shadows are ginseng.

It is a picture of Jiaoer sleeping in autumn.

Jia Qing didn't disturb her, walked past her and headed towards the main room.

Daiyu was not in the house, and Jia Qing walked towards the backyard again.Sure enough, Daiyu and Xiangling were found under the corridor in the backyard.

They put a copybook on the promenade, and the two sat opposite each other, as if they were studying poetry.

I only heard Xiangling say: "Since the girl asked me, I had to say it directly, but girl, don't joke. In my opinion, the benefits of poetry seem to have meanings that cannot be expressed out of the mouth.

Thinking about it is real, and it seems unreasonable, but thinking about it is reasonable. "

Daiyu had already seen Jia Qing, but she just pretended not to see her, and said with a smile, "This has a new meaning, but I don't know where you read it from?"

Seeing being recognized by the talented "Teacher Lin", Xiangling gained a lot of confidence and raised her tone, saying: "I read Wang Youcheng's "The Fortress", "The desert is solitary smoke straight, the long river falls into the sun." I want to come No matter how straight the smoke is, the sun is naturally round. The word "straight" seems rude, and the word "round" seems too vulgar. When I close the book and think about it, it seems like I have seen this scene. I want to find two more words Replace these two, and I can't find them anymore!

Also, 'The rivers and lakes are white at sunset, and the sky and earth are blue when the tide comes. The two words "white and green" also seem unreasonable. I don't want to use these two words, but how can I describe them completely?There is also the setting sun at the crossing, and the solitary smoke in the market. ' In a word, it's difficult for him to think about the characters 'Yu' and 'Shang'!

When we came to Beijing, we lived in a boat at Bianwan that evening, and there was no one on the shore, only a few trees, and a few families far away were cooking dinner, and the smoke was green, even above the clouds.Unexpectedly, after reading these two sentences yesterday, I seemed to have returned to that place again. "

Daiyu listened carefully to what she said, and sighed: "The meaning of the poem is indescribable. Knowing every single word is so romantic. Now that you have this feeling, you know you have crossed the threshold. Now you just read it." Wang Mojie's, Lao Du's Qilu, Li Qinglian's Qijue, after you read and comprehend these carefully, you can count them as entering the house."

After hearing this, Xiangling hesitated for a moment, took out a scroll of manuscripts buried deep in her "school bag", and said: "Since the girl said so, I made it up after a whole night of thinking last night, the girl showed me but it's so Made"

Daiyu can also see from her expectant eyes that this is a work that Xiangling is both satisfied with and lacks confidence in.

Taking it over, he glanced at it and frowned.At first, she wanted to talk, but she saw that Jia Qing had already walked behind Xiangling, stretched her head to look at the many semi-finished poems on the copywriting, she joked and said with a smile: "When you and I are alone, I can still be your teacher, but Now that there is this famous child prodigy poet in the country, where is my seat? I don’t dare to fight against others, so you should ask him.”

As he spoke, he returned the manuscript to Xiangling.

Only then did Xiang Ling realize that there was someone behind her, and she quickly got up to say hello to Jia Qing.

Jia Qing accepted it, and said with a smile, "show me."

He didn't mind Daiyu putting a high hat on him. He thought it was great to see two beauties discussing poetry here in a serious manner.

In addition, in Daiyu's words, with his level, although he didn't dare to fight in front of Daiyu, but he was confident that he could deal with a little girl from Xiangling who had only just finished reading and had just learned to compose poetry.

Xiangling blushed, folded her hands behind her back and said, "I'm just envious, so I begged the girl to learn to play, it's not worth being a second master."

Xiangling was very nervous.Even though Daiyu knew that she was extremely talented, she had served her daughter's family for several years and knew her temperament well, so she had the nerve to ask her for advice.

But how dare she give her new work to a serious scholar like Jia Qing for guidance.

I am ashamed to death.

"Give it to me." Jia Qing was expressionless, as if he was about to get angry.

Xiangling was wronged, and under Jia Qing's watchful eyes, she had to obediently hand over the manuscript with a bitter face.

Seeing this, Jia Qing almost laughed out loud. How could this scene look like a menopausal teacher confiscating a little girl's romance novel.

Take a look, the font is beautiful and soft, which fits Xiangling's personality.Look at the text again:
It's not silver or water reflecting the coldness of the window, try to see the jade plate protected by the clear sky.

The faint fragrance of plum blossoms is about to be dyed, and the willows are just dry with dew.

It's only suspected that the residual powder is painted with gold, and it looks like a jade railing with light frost.

Dreaming of waking up, the west building is completely deserted, Yu Rong can still see through the curtain.

Seeing that it was the rhyme of Fourteen Cold, he asked Daiyu again, "What's the title?"

Daiyu laughed and said, "The title is simple, it is Yinyue."

Jia Qing blurted out: "Singing the moon, I thought it was writing about the moonlight in winter."

As soon as Xiangling heard it, she knew that Jia Qing said that she had strayed off the topic, her face was flushed, and she stood on one side restlessly.She thought her song was excellent, but it turned out to be so unbearable.

She is a little sad.

However, Jia Qing didn't actually mean that.

Not to mention writing about the moon as the moonlight, even if it is written as a tree under the moon in later generations, it will still be "closely related to the theme", and maybe it will get a full score.However, in this day and age, not to mention the stereotyped format for writing essays, even for writing poems, the restrictions on titles and rhymes are extremely strict.

Among other things, if you can't even distinguish the rhyme, how can you talk about poetry?
The so-called "Fourteen Cold" refers to the rhyme of "Han" that ranks No. 14 in the first volume among the thirty flat rhymes.

Han, Pan, Gan, Lan, Kan, etc. are all characters in the rhyme of Han.

Jia Qing took a look at Xiang Ling and knew that she was hit, so she smiled and said: "I won't lie to you, little girl, you can write such poems as a beginner, it can be said that you are very talented.

Do you know how I wrote the first poem I gave to my husband when I was learning to write poems? "

Hearing this mentioned, not to mention Xiangling, even Daiyu's ears turned up.

it's a secret
Xiang Ling asked weakly: "What is it?"

Jia Qing put away the manuscript in his hand, glanced at Daiyu, smiled and said:

"Huifangxi, Huifangqiao, Huifangxi under Huifangqiao, there are lotus in Huifangxi!"

Daiyu frowned after listening to the first half, what is this?
She knows both Huifang Bridge and Huifangxi. They were all the scenery in Huifang Garden in Ningguo Mansion in the past, but now they have become Qinfang Bridge and Qinfangxi in Grand View Garden.

It is normal for children to learn to compose poems and write about the scenery at home, but this content
However, I heard that Jia Qing entered school at the age of four, maybe he did it at that time, and it is understandable.

Daiyu suppressed her thoughts of complaining, and then listened to the second half of Jia Qing's speech: "There are toads on the lotus, poke and jump."

Uh.
Quiet, very quiet.

Xiangling's big eyes widened, as if seeing a prehistoric giant crocodile!
Daiyu also stared at Jia Qing with a look of shock and disbelief.Jia Qing frowned and said, "How about it, are you impressed by my talent at that time?"

"Pfft~!"

Daiyu burst out laughing loudly, then covered her stomach and laughed loudly, bending her waist straight laughing.Xu was afraid of falling, so he supported the copywriting with his other hand.

"Hehe, poke, hop, hahaha, I'm dying of laughter." Daiyu rarely cared about her image.

Xiang Ling laughed a couple of times, and when she saw Jia Qing looking at her, she quickly stopped her, but her face was almost purple from the suffocation.

Jia Qing was afraid that she would have something wrong, so he said displeasedly: "Laugh if you want to, and be polite to me now!"

"Hee hee hee!!"

(End of this chapter)