The star's wife's gold medal director husband

Chapter 108 108. I want to ask you to read the script

Ren Han sat beside her, and then looked at her computer screen, and briefly read a few lines:

"Gao... Sister Yaming, is this a new script you created?"

"I have just finished writing a youth comedy. I would like to invite you to come over and ask for advice in person. It can provide you with some valuable experience and make the characters in the script more fleshed out. I hope that Mr. Ren will not hesitate to teach you!" Gao Yaming said with a slight smile. , making Ren Han feel very nervous.

Although Ren Han is talented in writing, he doesn't have the problem of being a good teacher. He doesn't like to give advice to others, not to mention that Gao Yaming is older than him and has been in the screenwriting industry longer than him.

Ren Han smiled, sat on the office chair where Gao Yaming was sitting before, moved the mouse in his hand, and continued to look at the script file on the screen.

Ren Han watched without missing a word, showing a thoughtful expression.

I already have a basic understanding of the script written by Gao Yaming. The name of this script is "The School Girl's Bikini Party", and the outline of the story is.

The school belle Liu Juan was originally a shy, tall beauty. She was always the object of boys' flirting since she was a child. In the beginning, she was also said by people because she was pure from the mud but not stained, and she was clean and not demonic. girl.

During college, I slowly got in touch with some people in the society, and later I was taken care of by a big boss. The big boss has a special hobby, that is, he likes women to wear swimsuits no matter the weather is sunny or rainy. Liu Juan was originally a very shy person. When I was a student, I didn’t even dare to wear navel-baring clothes, and later I dared to wear bikinis. I used to talk shyly, but later I smoked and drank, and I was good at everything. I completely compromised with the rich...

After reading it, Ren Han simply said a few words:

"Sister Yaming, your script is not bad, the overall style is rather humorous, but it's not blindly funny, it satirizes some gold diggers, and the details are not bad, I think it can be rated as a B-level work! ""

Gao Yaming, a judge of the Screenwriters Association, is of course a little creative. After she finished writing "School Girl's Bikini Party", she was quite satisfied. He called Ren Han to come over and make suggestions, but he just wanted to see him If Ren Hanhan denies the level of the work.

Then Gao Yaming also disagreed. Fortunately, the opinions expressed by Ren Han were quite satisfactory, neither sycophant nor picky.

"Ren Han, you are also a person who wrote A-level works and S-level works. Compared with you, I am still a lot worse, so I ask you to come over and help me decide!" Gao Yaming smiled:
"Ren Han, do you think that this work of mine still needs micro-shaping, that is, the details, and then refine or modify it a little bit. Do you think these tiny flaws are still there!"

Ren Han thought about it, and felt that it was a difficult question. If he said that the work was perfect and there was nothing to modify, the answer was obviously not true enough. If he pointed out the flaws in the plot on a large scale, it would not only offend Gao Ya Ming was unhappy, and increased his workload for no reason. Thinking of this, Ren Han was a little vague:
"If you want to talk about the flaws of "School Girl's Bikini Party", I can't really talk about it, but I personally think that there are a few places in it that may be modified appropriately. Of course, what I said may not be correct. In short, it is only for Sister Yaming is just for reference!" "

Ren Han spoke late, allowing both parties to have room for maneuver, neither hurting Gao Yaming's face, nor making the other party feel that he is not sincere enough.

"Tell me! I'm listening!" Gao Yaming smiled, feeling that this young man in his teens is not a glib guy, he is serious and responsible in his work, and has a good attitude. His affection for him is on the way again. step.

The two exchanged the seats of the office chairs respectively. Earlier, Gao Yaming asked Ren Han to sit on her office chair and check the script files on the computer. This time, Gao Yaming sat back on the previous office chair, and Ren Han Han sat aside and pointed out the problem of the script to her.

Since he picked a mistake in the work, Ren Han felt that he should be responsible, at least he had to make suggestions based on his vision. In his previous life, Ren Han had taken many similar works. Based on the opinions of his previous life, he had no reservation For Gao Yaming, I put forward my own views.

At this moment, the two of them seemed not to be Wang Nian's good friends, as if Ren Han was a tutor and Gao Yaming was a student in a cram school.

After Ren Han pointed out the shortcomings, Gao Yaming did not forget to strike while the iron was hot, and correct the mistakes Ren Han pointed out by the way.

Sometimes, Gao Yaming disagreed with Ren Han's views, and the two would discuss it, trying to seek common ground while reserving differences. Sometimes Gao Yaming would stick to her own opinion, and held objections to Ren Han's advice to her.

In short, the two discussed the script in a relaxed and harmonious atmosphere. There were occasional quarrels during the process, but it was done in a relaxed and harmonious atmosphere.

Gao Yaming feels that competing with masters can enhance her creative level.

"Sister Yaming, the script is already good enough. I've said all the suggestions I can make. To be frank, "The School Girl's Bikini Party" is really well written, and I don't think there are many things that need to be revised!" After discussing for nearly three hours, Ren Han's mouth was already parched. After the entire script was revised, Ren Han took a sip of tea to moisten his throat.

A work, no matter it is good or bad, for the author himself, it is like a child born to him, he is always full of infinite expectations and love for it, even though Ren Han has finished speaking, Gao Yaming is still concentrating on it , I also want to polish the work better and strive for excellence.

"Ren Han, do you think the ending part needs to be revised? Does the ending I wrote feel a bit abrupt, making people feel that the story is not fully explained!" Gao Yaming pointed to the screen with the mouse, making Ren Han stunned .

"School Belle's Bikini Party", this script doesn't need to read the content, just look at the name, it can attract the public's attention, especially men's attention, the school belle, at first glance, is a high-value beauty, bikini, full of visual enjoyment.

Isn't there a saying that bikinis are the most beautiful clothing in the world except for wives. Basically, men have no resistance to beautiful women in swimsuits.

The name of the script, Gao Yaming, carefully considered the words for a long time, and felt good about the whole plot, but at the end of the plot, she also felt a little dissatisfied with the entanglement between the heroine Liu Juan and the local tyrant Wang Zun.

At the end of writing the script, there were two plans. One plan was that the heroine Liu Juan would have an abortion, and she would be fooled by the local tyrant Wang Zun and continue to live with Wang Zun.

Another version, since the heroine Liu Juan became pregnant, the local tyrant Wang Zun abandoned her, Liu Juan quietly had an abortion, and just when she graduated from university, she left the city that made her sad.

Gao Yaming felt very hesitant about the two versions, so she wanted to hear Ren Han's opinion. Ren Han was very satisfied with these two versions. Both versions satirized the gold digger.

"I feel that the endings of the two versions are more reasonable, but I can't think of a better ending. The two endings I wrote are a bit old-fashioned, and I can't write a more clever ending. Can you help me? !" Gao Yaming continued, apparently she was not satisfied with the description of the ending.

"Well, I have an idea about the ending..." Ren Han patted his forehead.

"You said..." Gao Yaming blushed with excitement.

"I plan to write the ending like this, Sister Yaming, just listen to it!" Ren Han said the ending he wrote.

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The school belle Liu Juan was with the local tyrant Wang Zun. She also kept an eye out and took contraceptive measures. However, she still pretended that she was pregnant and wanted to see the local tyrant Wang Zun's reaction.

Unexpectedly, Wang Zun started to be lukewarm towards Liu Juan. Liu Juan completely saw Wang Zun's face. He is a bastard who likes to pick up girls, playing with the feelings of little girls. Luckily, Liu Juan kept his eyes open. Not really pregnant.

From then on, Liu Juan began to reflect on her own life. She understood a truth, the relationship bought with money is fake, it is just a game for the rich, and she has since gotten rid of the habit of worshiping money.

After graduating from university, he left his hometown and no longer expected to marry into a wealthy family. Later, he found a young man who could be the right family, and lived happily...

Ren Han added a few words:
"Sister Yaming, my ending has a very clear meaning, that is, I want to educate those little girls not to worship money blindly, but to recognize themselves, and not to be played with by those scumbags!"

Ren Han was describing the ending of his writing, and Gao Yaming was mesmerized after listening to it, her eyes were full of adoring little eyes. At this moment, she is not a mature Yujie, but a youthful fangirl.

"Ren Han, can I borrow the ending you dictated just now!" Gao Yaming struggled and said:
"Don't worry, I won't take the fruits of your brainwork for nothing. When the script is handed over to the Screenwriters Association for review, I will sign both of our names on it. "School Girl's Bikini Party" is sold, and I will give you 30% The profit, what do you think!" ""

"Sister Yaming, you're out of touch by saying that. We're old friends. I just made a suggestion for you. Sign it and share the money. Forget it!" Ren Han smirked in embarrassment. .

"That won't work. If you don't agree, I won't use the ending you just said. The big deal is that my work is of a lower standard and sell for less money. In other words, if I use the ending you just said, it will be sold at that time." The price may be doubled, but in fact, I will share 30% of your profit, and I will still make a profit, so I will give you a little money, what's the matter!" At Gao Yaming's insistence, Ren Han couldn't bear it, so he had to agree to sign him. name.

With the signature, Ren Han also paid more attention to the script "School Girl's Bikini Party". The two continued to discuss in the office, and the afternoon passed quickly.

When Ren Han thought of the name of the script, his mouth felt parched. "School Beauty's Bikini Party", school beauty, bikinis, all can arouse men's infinite reverie.

"Mr. Ren, before I knew it, I delayed you all afternoon, I'm really sorry!" Gao Yaming looked at the clock on the wall and smiled slightly.

It's already 5:30 in the afternoon.

"Sister Yaming, you are too out of touch. I like to communicate with colleagues, and I prefer to communicate with excellent colleagues, especially Yujie who is very handsome. I can learn a lot myself! Learn from each other, Let's make progress together!" Ren Han felt hungry.

"Sister Yu, haha, I just don't know Mr. Ren, do you want to have dinner with a sister like me?" Gao Yaming is a mature woman, and she is very skilled in teasing and joking with men. Sister Yu, she is very happy, which proves that she is attractive.

"I'm willing to accompany you!" Ren Han said decisively. On the way to the Capital Screenwriters Association at noon, he bought some snacks casually. In order to save time, he almost didn't eat lunch and was already hungry. Forget about being hungry, if it wasn't for what Gao Yaming said just now, Ren Han still wouldn't feel hungry.

After Ren Han agreed to have dinner with Gao Yaming, he regretted it a bit. He didn't go back to Su's mansion to have lunch with Su Yuefei at noon today, and he won't go back to have dinner tonight.

Ren Han and Gao Yaming came to a western restaurant outside the Screenwriters Association. After they were seated, Ren Han sent a message asking Su Yuefei not to wait for him for dinner.

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the other end.

After filming for a whole day, Su Yuefei sat in the passenger seat and fell asleep on the way home. In a trance, she turned on her phone and saw Ren Han's WeChat message.

"I'm going out to eat with my friends tonight, and I won't be back for dinner."

Eating out with friends made Su Yuefei feel very strange. She always felt that something was wrong. What kind of friend did she eat out with? Is it a friend or a friend of the opposite sex? The bastard Ren Han said in WeChat It's very vague.

Although very tired, Su Yuefei was still very curious.

Specifically which friends to eat with, which restaurant to eat at, and with whom to eat.Why eat together.

Su Yuefei typed a series of doubts on the phone screen, but did not send them out.

However, Su Yuefei instantly felt that she was a little self-indulgent, why did she ask this guy so carefully, the bastard Ren Han has really changed his ways recently.

Su Yuefei also doesn't want to put too much pressure on him in life. This guy's wings are much tougher now, if he asks him oppressively, it will make him disgusted, so why bother himself.

This bastard swears that he is not entangled with other women, and it is also impossible for Su Yuefei to monitor Ren Han 24 hours a day.

Ren Han is like a kite in her hand, she doesn't want to pull him too tightly, and should give him some space to live.Relax with him, maybe this guy is a little better, because interpersonal relationships are like springs, the stronger the oppression, the greater the resistance.

Thinking of this, Su Yuefei hastily deleted all the words that she originally planned to send to ask questions, and simply replied:
"Okay, then I won't wait for you, pay attention to safety!"

(End of this chapter)