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Chapter 38 The Problem with the Script

Li Yi did make an appointment with You Ningsheng.

It's mainly about the script.

Because "Mom Loves Me Again" is always a work of the last century.

Li Yi completely reproduced the content of the original work before.

But during this period of time, after thinking over and over again, he still felt that the sword of the previous dynasty could kill the officials of this dynasty?
Therefore, he always felt that some things were inappropriate, but he didn't have much idea about how to change them.

For this reason, he specially asked You Ningsheng, a gold medal screenwriter, to drink tea with him, hoping that You Ningsheng, a great screenwriter, would give him some advice.

Li Yi is very clear about how much weight he has. If it weren't for the memories and thoughts of his previous life popping up from time to time, simply speaking of screenwriting skills, he would not be able to catch up with an old screenwriter like You Ningsheng.

It's still Li Kee Tea Restaurant!
After ordering a few refreshments, the two chatted while eating.

"Uncle You, please give me your pulse. I feel that the scene I designed, in which the mother was reluctant at first, and then she would rather drive the recovered son back, is a bit out of date, but I'm not sure if it should be changed. " Li Yi looked at You Ningsheng and asked humbly.

"Let's analyze your story first. In your story, there are two pairs of mother and child.

Lin Mu and Lin Guorong, Huang Qiuxia and Xiaoqiang.

In my opinion, your story can actually be said to be a witness to how traditional culture gradually incorporates a "person" into its rules. "

You Ningsheng began to analyze.

Li Yi nodded.

This is why Li Yi feels that although he is not worried about emotional resonance, the details of the plot are a bit contrary to this era.

"I think the most touching part of your story is the warm time between Huang Qiuxia and the child, and the most tearful part is the parting of Huang Qiuxia and the child.

Huang Qiuxia did not want her child to become an orphan like herself. "Orphan" in ancient China refers to a person who lost his father.

Huang Qiuxia didn't know who her father was since she was a child, and she was also raised by her mother. She died of illness three years before talking about marriage with Lin Guorong.

But Huang Qiuxia still thinks that she is an orphan, obviously following the definition of "orphan" in ancient China.

Huang Qiuxia's years of raising children actually happened to simulate her own native family model.On the surface, Huang Qiuxia returned the child to the Lin family because she did not want the child to have a father like herself; she considered the child's future; and because Lin's father understood her pain, but fundamentally it was still caused by traditional concepts. .

Because she didn't realize that mothers are even more indispensable for children, and having a mother who is as strong and independent as she is, who can give children emotional dependence is what children need most.

What children want is not a rich family, but rich and filling love.Even if there is no wealth, only a life accompanied by love can form a complete personality.

I think these are, this story, your plot arrangement is somewhat contradictory to this era.

Because of the biggest difference between humans and animals, the most valuable product of human evolution to the stage of modern civilization is human love.Those who are satisfied with being accompanied by love will be happy now and in the future.Huang Qiuxia's definition of happiness is still sadly consistent with the tradition.Because Father Lin understood her pain, Father Lin gave her fatherly care. Although this care was pitiful and superficial, it could also touch her heart, and finally decided to return the child to the Lin family. "

You Ningsheng obviously did a lot of work, otherwise, he would never have said these words easily.

This moved Li Yi quite a bit.

"In my opinion, Huang Qiuxia's way of separating from her children is to persuade and teach her to make her "obedient"! This is the obedience of filial piety in our traditional culture. To be a good child, you must first listen to your parents! The second is simple and rude. , when the child sneaked back to cry and hug Qiuxia, she pushed her son away cruelly, taught him to go back and kneel down to admit his mistakes, to be filial to his grandparents, cut off the child's emotional needs, and reversed it into the orthodox concept of filial piety. The third is Lying and cheating, "If you come back to Mom, Mom will hide. "As a result, the child sneaked back again but did not dare to enter the house. Think about it, how many parents use these three tactics to deal with their children?! Do not pay attention to children's emotional needs, do not protect children's fragile hearts, do not give children the best Instead, they blindly teach their children with traditional concepts that have no respect for their own hearts, so that children grow up before they have experienced a childhood full of unrestricted exploration, and teenagers have matured before experiencing unbridled independent growth.”

"In my opinion, these points may be the biggest problem of your story, because in this era, there may still be such people, but they are definitely not the mainstream thinking." You Ningsheng continued to analyze.

"Even if your original intention is to express that a mother "considers the child", so she reluctantly does so, but it is too much. In other words, such a reason is somewhat untenable in our era!"

Li Yipo suddenly became enlightened.

"That's right, but if it needs to be changed, how should it be changed?" Li Yi asked with some distress.

"You are asking the wrong person. The so-called art comes from life. You should probably ask those mothers what makes a mother prefer to be separated from her child. Yes, it is for the child's good, but this requires a process. I think the biggest problem in your story should be that such a process is missing, but don't ask me how to arrange it, I don't know much about it." You Ningsheng said with a smile.

Li Yi nodded.

In fact, he also thinks that Huang Qiuxia's way of separation in the story may be okay, but the reason for the separation, in other words, a mother would definitely not want to be separated from her child at the beginning, but why did she want to be separated later?Even took the initiative?

There needs to be a process, that is, a reason, but this reason needs to be revealed, through some things and some encounters.

And this is the change Li Yi is going to make now.

After returning, Li Yi was the first to look for his own mother.

Knowing that her son wanted to learn from her, Yi Lingling was naturally extremely happy.

It's just that when Li Yi asked the first question, Yi Lingling couldn't help but frown coldly.

"Mom, I mean if, if you were Huang Qiuxia, why would you choose to push the child to the Lin family?" Li Yi asked.

Yi Lingling glared at Li Yi.

"I mean if! After all, mom, you are also a mom." Li Yi said with a smile.

"You are asking the wrong person. Our family's situation is completely different from Huang Qiuxia's, okay? But I want to say that what the Lin family can give, she can't give. For example, educational resources, in the countryside, Xiaoqiang can't accept anything at all. The best education, or something in life that made Huang Qiuxia feel that no matter how hard she tried, she couldn't give it to her children."

(End of this chapter)