Yanzi Valley of Jingcheng

Chapter 298 "The Wild Goose Valley of Jingcheng" Conclusion

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"The Wild Goose Valley of the Jingcheng" is finished today, and it is finally finished. Friends who like this book can send a small recommendation to Shangxue in the comment area, thank you everyone.

At the beginning of the snow, I said that this book was only 30 words. When it was 35 words, I said it was 40 words. When it was 40 words, I said it should be 50 words. Suicide, the result is more than 55 now...

During the writing process of this book, Shangxue read more than 100 million words of industry literature, 75 professional books, and successively interviewed live broadcast beauty bloggers, real estate investment consulting experts, long-term rental apartment entrepreneurs and practitioners, and software development engineers. A total of 56 people, including data engineers, venture capital practitioners, etc., have lived in long-term rental apartments for more than 5 years during their study and work.

I originally only planned to write 30% of the professional content, but it turned out that I couldn’t help but add a little more. At least when you read this book, you won’t feel that the book is just about the plot without any dry content.

Regarding the entrepreneurial experience of the protagonist, Shangxue has incorporated a lot of details. It can be said that I almost knocked out the original code of the big data analysis system and refined management APP for you.

Like all Shangxue’s previous books, this book is updated intermittently. I really admire the author Shangxue whose daily updates exceed [-], but I don’t intend to join this kind of almost deformed industry insider. Slow is fast, more than three times a year, less than double three years.

An editor said something to me before and I think it is right. She said: "If you want to make quick money in a short time, you should write cool articles, how cool you are, but if you want to write what you want to write If you want to write something with depth, you must also have readers, and if someone reads it, then you should write more.”

After listening to Mao Sai at that time, I was enlightened. As long as I adhere to the principle of writing each book with heart, readers who like my writing style will naturally gather.

Some readers have asked me if I have an outline for writing a book, but in fact there is, "Road to Investment Banking" has it, and "Jingcheng: Yanzi Valley" is also the same, but at least for me personally, the outline is only useful for the first half, and the second half Almost useless.

why?
Because as long as a story is well written, the characters will naturally come alive.

Characters will have their own thinking, propositions and behavior motives after they are alive. They will act on their own without the control of the author midway. They will hope to continuously improve their story line, and then affect the direction of the outline. What the author wants them to say in each scene , They are very likely not to abide by what they do.

The plots I conceive are sometimes very different from the plots I actually write.

For example, the scene where Xiao Jie and Guan Sha quarreled because of a misunderstanding, in fact, I have been thinking about it for three months, that is to say, before I wrote that chapter, this plot has been recurring in my mind from time to time, I can memorize the lines from repetition, but when I actually hit the keyboard to write, they quarreled in a different way.

When I was writing some lines, Xiao Jie would tell me that he didn’t think he should say this line, he didn’t want to promise something that he might not be able to do in order to appease Guan Sha, he still tended to solve the problem first .

Guan Sha will tell me that she just wants to leave directly and don’t talk nonsense with Xiao Jie, she can’t talk to Xiao Jie in terms of reason, and she can’t feel Xiao Jie’s strong love for her in terms of feelings, she wants face, she wants to be retained , so she wanted to leave, but she was afraid of being tortured when she left, so she had to blacklist Xiao Jie.

Many people think that the author is God and can manipulate other people's lives at will.

There are such authors, and there are many, but if an author has not experienced the experience of quarreling with the characters in his works, turning faces, cutting each other, or even making the creators stop writing and strike, the vitality of his works generally cannot stand the test.

"Jingcheng: Yanzi Valley" is updated intermittently, and even stopped in the middle, I think you should already know the reason.

Of course, things are not absolute. I can’t say that the author who writes while fighting with the characters must be a good story. I can only say that this is a necessary but not sufficient condition for whether the story is exciting enough and can withstand scrutiny.

The writing process of a writer is actually a process of constantly compromising with the self-logic of the characters in his works.

Shangxue believes that those outstanding writers have more or less similar experiences to mine, and they should have gotten used to the characters they created by themselves, losing control moderately or completely losing control in stages.

Shangxue believes that if a character is always obedient and never violates the author's wishes, then the character is still dead with a high probability, commonly known as: tool man.

Many novels are filled with a large number of tool people, and even the hero and heroine are tool people. It is difficult for tool people to have vitality and cannot survive in the hearts of the audience for a long time.

Sometimes Shangxue also thinks, what is the proof that a person really existed?

Is it the flesh?

Maybe, maybe not.

Is it his/her memory in someone else's mind?
Maybe not, but maybe also.

For example, many of us remember Rose and Jack in "Titanic", Cheng Dieyi in "Farewell My Concubine", Andy the banker in "The Shawshank Redemption", and "Spirited Away". Xiaoqian and Faceless Man, remember Bai Jiaxuan and Lu Zilin in "White Deer Plain", remember Sister Shuihua in "Mountain and Sea Love"...

Do these characters exist in reality?

Maybe not, but they have lived in the hearts of the audience for a long, long time.

In this sense, there is not such a strict boundary between what is real and what is illusory.

Jiang Yifan, Wang Muxue, Bupleurum, Cao Pingsheng, Jiang Yuqi, Li Tianming, Shen Li, Ren Tianxing, Xiao Jie, Guan Sha... These characters are real and living people to me.

Their smiles, tears, voices, ways of speaking, gestures, ideals, goals, advantages, disadvantages and little hobbies will flash in my mind from time to time. They are like my childhood playmates, middle school classmates and work friends. Same as my colleagues.

The memory of being with them makes me laugh at times, tears in my eyes, passion at times, and melancholy at times.

I was thinking, maybe this is the fundamental reason why I decided to become a professional writer. This profession is very sacred if I do it with my heart, because I am using my best efforts in every book to give one character after another a long-lasting life. s life.

Maybe my current level is limited and I am not doing well enough, but I believe that I will write better and better day by day, and I hope everyone can be more patient, give me time, trust me, support me, and accompany me.

Shangxue is very grateful to the more than 5000 readers who are willing to sacrifice time to type and write chapters and overall evaluations during the serialization of this book for more than a year. Read it and use it as a reference for subsequent writing and previous revisions.

Readers who are familiar with Shangxue know that I am a person who can revise the novel as the "Prospectus" for the listing of a company. How many times has this book been revised in total?
There are seven hundred times instead of eight hundred.

If you are the first readers to read as soon as Shangxue is updated, the content of the e-book in your bookshelf will be different from the version you originally saw (the e-book will be updated and overwritten in real time, if your cache is not updated, you can download it again , at no additional cost).

So hehe, unfortunately, you will most likely have to watch it again.

Of course, Shangxue will be very cautious every time he revises the text. As for the plot, he will not revise it unless it is necessary, so as not to make it worse.

But for the following problems, Shangxue will definitely improve, such as:

1. Typos.

2. Sentences are lengthy.

3. Grammatical errors.

4. Unnecessary industry discussion.

5. Plots that conflict with the characters' personalities and traits.

During this period, many readers put forward their own suggestions, and some suggestions Shang Xue thought were very good. After careful consideration, I also made corresponding revisions. The characterization is comprehensive. As writers, we cannot say that this character is 99 The % aspect is written, and the remaining 1% is fine.

Details determine success or failure. Sometimes a word, an action, or a reaction of a character is not valid, and the whole character is completely untenable in the reader's mind, and the consequences are fatal to the novel.

A special character in this book is Shen Li. She was deceived by love and lived in a greenhouse for 9 years, but she was not afraid to start all over again.

In order to have a broader vision and pattern like Ma Yu, she came to the big city alone to work hard. At the beginning, her original intention was positive and upward, but there were some problems in the direction and approach, and she did not make reasonable use of her advantages, which led to falling into "" In the vortex of physical involution".

Shen Li's previous obsession with all opportunities to earn extra money was just that she wanted to accumulate the first pot of money quickly. For this reason, she didn't mind writing comment posts for others while squatting on the toilet, and she didn't mind standing on the catwalk as a changing model in the wholesale market. I don't mind going out early and coming back late to deliver food, and I don't mind using my savings to gamble and invest in the Internet celebrity culture company of Fengnian Factory Mother Fox.

The poorer people are, the more they will work desperately to make money. After they have a little money, they often dare to gamble more than anyone else.

Everyone in the investment community knows that the all-weather strategy of equal allocation of stocks and bonds is generally only listened to by the rich and is willing to strictly abide by it for a long time. When we only have hundreds, thousands, or tens of thousands of funds to invest, we tend to Attracted by those high-yield things, thinking about giving it a go, a bicycle can become a motorcycle.

But when we have hundreds of millions or even billions in our hands, what we think about is how to keep the money, at least keep our assets at the scale of hundreds of millions. To keep this scale is to keep our hard-won social class. At this time, we may be very interested in products with an annualized return of 4% to 5%, and we are willing to invest most of our money in them and hold them for a long time.

Shen Li only has a high school degree, has no work experience and is too old. When she comes to Qingyang, a first-tier city with such fierce competition, she can only start with some physical work.

The most commendable thing about Shen Li is that she has the courage to stand up independently after falling hard, and Guan Sha, Du Jing and Ren Tianxing were all amazed by the degree of desperation.

Sometimes people just want to push themselves, push, maybe a canary can also become an eagle on the mountain.

As for feelings, Shen Li didn't need her at first after her family broke up, and Shang Xue had been thinking that it would be better for Shen Li to reject Lei Biao and raise her children independently. independent women.

Some women think that marriage will lower their quality of life. They think that as long as they get married, women must sacrifice more than men. They will show a lot of evidence, such as who and who lost their jobs after pregnancy.

In fact, if they meet Mr. Right, they will understand that what marriage gives women is not less than what they sacrifice.

As a woman, while Shen Li is independent, she also longs for softness deep down in her heart. Shang Xue thinks this is a very normal psychological need.

After being hurt by a man, she can earn money and raise children. If there is another man at this time, there is a high probability that she will be like Lei Biao. He can help Shen Li in career and take care of Shen Li in life. Values ​​and views on marriage It happens to be the honesty and sincerity that Shen Li desires most. It is reflected in her actions that she does not delay for a second after falling in love, and directly obtains the certificate. You must know that the marriage certificate was something that Shen Li couldn't get after nine years of begging.

For Shen Li, the appearance of Lei Biao is not only a timely help, but also icing on the cake. The two cooperate with each other in their careers and support each other in life. One plus one is greater than two. Therefore, facing Lei Biao's feelings, Shang Xue and Shen Li communicated a lot. Once, I asked her if you really want a relationship. To be honest, Shen Li struggled for a long time, but she finally told me firmly: "Shang Xue, if it was someone else, I might not talk about it anymore, but For Lei Biao, I think I will accept it."

Lei Biao told me at the beginning: "Shangxue, my waist was deformed when I was a security guard, and I felt that my life goal was slowly decaying like my twisted spine, but when I found Shen Li, I felt The little flame of unwillingness to be mediocre in me is lit again, I am a security guard, I don’t have any great achievements professionally, and I can’t have children yet, can I go after him?”

I replied: "You can try to confess first, be bold, and see if she agrees or not, but she probably won't agree, and you have nothing to lose if you agree, but if you agree, you will earn, which is equivalent to a call option. "

Although Lei Biao didn't understand what a call option is, he decided to try it. He really failed, so he told me in disgrace that he should be a security guard and didn't want to try it. , Singing every day is also very good.

Later, Lei Biao recovered and found me again, saying that he accidentally saw Shen Li interviewing tenants and landlords in the community, so he searched for Shen Li's video, and felt that Shen Li was too difficult, and wanted to help her, so he asked me to send Is her pocket camera okay? I said it was quite expensive and she might not accept it. Lei Biao thought about it for a long time and said that he just wanted to give it away. any other luxury.

I said okay, then you can send it.

Everyone knows the later results. Shen Li did not accept the pocket camera and kept rejecting Lei Biao. However, as time spent with Lei Biao increased, Shen Li's heart was slowly changing. I didn't realize it, and I didn't come to tell me, but they were together in the end, so in fact, the combination of Shen Li and Lei Biao was not arranged by Shang Xue, but they walked towards this ending step by step.

I'm not afraid to tell you that Guan Sha, Ren Tianxing, Du Jing and even Tianhai have all come to me, saying that they would not say or do such a thing for some reason, and at this time I can only have a one-on-one meeting with them .

The story you see in the end is the result of countless meetings and discussions.

If you think this book is well written and worthy of praise, you should thank those readers who gave Shang Xue excellent advice and the characters themselves.

Now everyone knows why Shangxue I always don't save the manuscript, but publish it as soon as I write it, and insist on publishing it on the Internet first in the form of serialization?

Because if I write hundreds of thousands of words alone, I can’t figure out many problems by myself, and I send them to publishing houses or newspapers. No matter how good the editor is, my personal level is limited. At least I don’t think these publishing institutions will arrange 5000 employees. Come see my book and write me your thoughts and comments, and it's a real-time review.

Shangxue adheres to the consistent spirit of "dead knocking", going back and forth, going back and forth, tirelessly. Although the revised final draft may not be perfect, nor may it become everyone's work, but I believe it will definitely be better than my own "closed doors" "'s first version is more readable.

Some serious readers will repeatedly struggle with the data in this book, calculate it by themselves, and send me the calculation formula to point out my mistakes. Although it turns out that they made a mistake in the calculation, Shangxue is still very grateful to these readers, Because of you, Shangxue has to take the data in this book seriously and re-check it many times. It is your seriousness that makes the data in this book more authentic and reliable.

Usually after a book is finished, I stop changing the characters and plot.

Because I think that if I have made a reasonable reference to the opinions of 5000 randomly sampled people in a story, then there is a high probability that 50 people will feel the same after reading it. There must be minor flaws. No book can It is perfect in the hearts of all readers, but the big flaw should no longer exist.

So have you seen it?
Everything has two sides, and it is even more painful to follow it all the way, especially when I am facing a writer like me who never updates steadily, but I will read your comments during the serialization process, and your opinions may affect the final presentation of the novel morphological.

Here, Shangxue would like to thank all the readers who are willing to pursue updates all the way and make reasonable suggestions. Thank you for your support. It is because of you that "Jingcheng: Yanzi Valley" can be successfully completed. It is still not a perfect work, but like "The Road to Investment Banking", this is a clumsy work that I have tried my best to achieve the highest standard at this stage.

As a writer, I have learned to balance the "output end" of self-expression with the "input end" of readers' reading. Shangxue believes that a good story will definitely make both of them achieve a win-win situation.

I hope this book did not waste your precious time.

Through this book, Shangxue hopes to:

You will still remember the plot in the book and have emotional resonance;
You can see the helplessness of beating workers, the plight of entrepreneurs and the difficulty of investors;
You can see the fighting spirit of the protagonist, the transformation before and after, and the contradictions of human nature;

You can learn a lot of skills and methods for job promotion, company evaluation, career planning and working hard in big cities;

You can analyze the game and cooperation between venture capital and entrepreneurial enterprises, and clarify the laws of capital operation;

You can express yourself by reading this book.

Whether it is entrepreneurship or investment, it is always profit-seeking, and the result of chasing after me may not necessarily be happy for everyone; shouldering some social responsibilities and slowing down may not necessarily mean a complete failure.

Finally, Shangxue hopes that you can change and improve because of a certain plot or a certain sentence in this book. As long as you become a little different from before and change in a good direction, then Shangxue wrote this The purpose of this book has been achieved.

Please continue to support Shangxue. Under your critical eyes, I will work hard to hone my writing skills, improve my writing skills, polish the accuracy of my works, and improve the level of my works.

I hope that every novel I write is not just a novel.

If you think this book is well written, please give Shangxue a recommendation at the end. You can give a long review, a short review, or even a recommendation without writing a review. Your support is the motivation for Shangxue to continue writing.

Please refer to the introduction of this book for the group number of Shangxue’s readers. Friends are welcome to join, and everyone can learn from each other. Since Shangxue has written many books and there are many groups, please indicate which book readers you are when you join the group .

Up to now, all the completed works of Shangxue are as follows:
"Outside the Sanqingmen", "What Is Now", "The Road to Investment Banking", "The Resistor", "The Goose Valley of Jingcheng", which ones have you not read, you can read them if you have nothing to do, and you will find me after reading them Is a very split personality author.

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The title of the next book in the Jingcheng series of novels is "Xiziwan in Jingcheng". Shangxue has already taken up the title of the book. All the names have been taken, that's how the world of writers is.

When was "Xiziwan of Jingcheng" written?

This depends on the response of the first one. When it is made into a TV series one day and the audience responds well and come to urge me to write novels in the same series, I will naturally continue to write. In the next year or two, I will change my mind and write some novels. The dry goods book I want to write.

PS:

Xiao Jie fans strongly demanded that Shangxue must describe Xiao Jie's hands in the book, and his handwriting must be beautiful and slender...

The text does not satisfy everyone, now I will write a paragraph:
Xiao Jie's hands are well-articulated, slender and slender, like cold jade, and more like pure and beautiful works of art. When these hands hit the keyboard, they will make a clear and regular "click" sound, and at the same time emit a pleasant smell close to the sun. the taste of.

Is it ok to write like this?Any more would be redundant!

To be honest, Shang Xue didn't want to use this kind of method in romance novels to make the male protagonist score points.

Shangxue hopes to properly reverse the aesthetics of contemporary women.

When you fall in love with a man, can it not be because of his eyes, his lips, his skin, his height or his hands...

Shangxue hopes that when you judge whether a man is sexy or not in the future, the first thing you think of is his thoughts.

(End of this chapter)