Reborn next door twins first grow up

Chapter 468 Internet Literature Expert Ling Yi

S432 Lab.

Lu Man rarely comes here anymore. As the base where he first made money by refining his ID photos, this place is given to Wang Xuehui and Li Zhaohui. He comes here occasionally just to brag and chat with his friends.

He entered the laboratory with a mouse and walked to Liu Qicheng's seat.

"Qicheng, see if you need this mouse."

Lu Man gave him his original mouse: "Don't mind, I've used it a few times, but I just bought it a while ago, so I think it's 95% new."

"Damn! This thing is so expensive!"

Liu Qicheng took the mouse and looked it up and down: "Brother Lu, are you really willing to give it to me?"

"I got a new mouse."

It was Gu Lingyi's New Year's gift to him.

Lu Man smiled, found a photo from the photo album on his phone, and showed it to Liu Qicheng.

"Ah? Isn't this the same brand of mouse? And..."

Liu Qicheng looked at Lu Man's expression and said, "The one you are replacing is one level lower than the original one. It should not be as expensive as the old one I have."

He guessed that Lu Man had been tricked by some unscrupulous businessman.

Lu Man shook his head: "The point is not the price. Look, this mouse has stickers on it, doesn't it look good?"

Liu Qicheng stared at the mouse in the photo carefully. No matter what, the two stickers were paper that could be seen everywhere...

"This is just from Pokémon...56 I saw cooked meat online, should it be called? Round Penguin?"

The other sticker is more girlish. It is a rabbit with ears like candy canes. The translated name should be "curly ears".

Liu Qicheng understood that the new mouse must have been given to him by the twins, so he would rather give away the more advanced old mouse than use the gift from them.

"Brother Lu, are you waiting for the 10 o'clock physical examination?" Liu Qicheng asked.

Physical examinations for new students were originally conducted shortly after admission. However, during the exam preparation period when the holidays were approaching, a student caught a cold and developed severe myocarditis because he got up early to endorse. This was reported by the provincial media and caused some trouble in the school. Worried.

Therefore, students who have made up for an additional physical examination and are willing to have more examinations can get tickets to check more items at a discount. Those who do not want to go to the trouble have to go through the formalities and keep a health file.

Lu Man nodded and asked Liu Qicheng: "How is your online novel going? How has the response been to the world where there is only fighting spirit?"

During the previous chat, Liu Qicheng suddenly said, "You can't write a book with no magic but only fighting spirit, right?", which shocked Lu Man.

He then briefly recalled the preliminary outline of "Fights Break the Sphere" in his previous life, especially highlighting the selling point and the emotional atmosphere of "Don't bully young people who are poor".

Lu Man had some evil intentions and wanted to see how much success this friend could achieve like Tiancan Tudou.

Unexpectedly, Liu Qicheng shook his head fiercely, lowered his head and sighed: "No one is watching at all."

"Huh?" Lu Man couldn't believe it. How many Internet writers in the past life could make a lot of money by copying Tudou's skin.

"Brother Lu, you asked me to start by provoking hatred and then write about my three-year agreement with my fiancée."

Liu Qicheng looked embarrassed: "I felt that the anger was too strong, and I wrote it so fast, and the writing was a bit impatient. In the terms of our online writers, it was too 'novice', so I made some modifications."

He gave a rough outline of his revised version. The first five chapters introduced the eight types of fighting spirit settings he created, and then the next ten chapters described the protagonist's gradual cultivation without any conflict...

Lu Man almost had veins on his forehead when he heard this.

Do you still use the terminology of your online writers?

My wife is the deputy editor-in-chief of online novels. I have slept with her for ten years. Before going to bed, I often listen to her complaining about the author and analyzing the plot. How can I still not persuade you to be a new writer who has never been able to sign a contract?

"So now you have written chapter 50..."

"Yes, we are leaving the city soon. Next is the protagonist's first battle, hunting the exploding boar."

"..." Lu Man patted Liu Qicheng on the shoulder.

It seems that throwing wealth and wealth is not something that can be caught casually. Although he gave Liu Qicheng an explosive idea, he didn't listen to it, and he even had his own "unique insights"; what's more, even if he did, he probably wouldn't be able to write something like Potato with his unpolished writing skills. Such as using arm fingers, a sense of rhythm that can be freely retracted, and one percent of the tension of the plot.     “Brother~”

At this time, a twin girl came in from the door.

Liu Qicheng raised his eyelids and wanted to say hello, but was too embarrassed to say a word.

He looked at Lu Man for help, and Lu Man smiled: "Ling Yi."

Gu Lingyi walked over, her face pretending to be angry: "Brother, you admit your mistake again..."

"Don't try this trick on me, Gu Lingyi."

Lu Man squeezed her paws and said, "Then I'll go with the real classmate Lingyi for a physical examination. Just wait until your butt blossoms in the evening."

"Bah!" Gu Lingyi spat at him.

Lu Man introduced to Liu Qicheng, who did not dare to identify the sisters: "The elder sister of the twins, classmate Gu Linyi, I shared with you some online writing skills and abstracts before, she was the behind-the-scenes strategist."

"Sister Gu, we meet again."

Liu Qicheng hurriedly said: "Thank you for sharing your experience. It is very well written. It looks professional at first glance."

"No... Senior Qicheng can use it..." Gu Lingyi said weakly.

Lu Man smiled and said, "Why don't you take this opportunity and invite us to appreciate your works?"

"Goodbye, Senior Brother Lu." Liu Qicheng touched his nose sheepishly, "It will only hurt your eyes to read street articles."

However, considering that the school girl carefully wrote so many things about sharing skills, even though she was doing it for Lu Man's sake, Liu Qicheng felt that it was not easy to turn people away, so he turned on the computer in front of him and showed them his own The novel is currently being serialized, as well as the beginnings of two new novels.

Gu Lingyi read carefully, reading ten lines at a time without missing the main idea of ​​each paragraph. She moved the mouse wheel and quickly watched the page in front of her slide down like a waterfall.

The girl was fascinated. Lu Man looked at her focused little face, and with a thought in his heart, he gently put his arms around Gu Lingyi's waist and asked her to move further back and sit on his lap.

Liu Qicheng saw this scene from the corner of his eye, his eyelids twitched but he said nothing.

"Why do I have the impression that Senior Brother Lu is in love with the younger sister of the twins - Junior Gu Jiaer..."

After a while, Gu Lingyi basically finished scanning the novel, and after thinking for a few seconds, she said: "Senior Qicheng, your writing style is actually advantageous. You can write the story completely, and each character is also given an excellent portrayal. The novel continued smoothly, and I persisted in writing dozens of chapters at the same time. It has surpassed many authors who have been popular for three minutes, but——"

"You are insensitive to the subject matter of online articles. They are obviously passionate fantasy articles, but you always want to create some plot about urban superpowers..."

Gu Lingyi talked about topics she was good at surprisingly fluently, completely losing her cowardly look when she first walked in and not being afraid to face unfamiliar classmates.

Lu Man looked at her confident expression and smiled happily.

It seemed like I saw the familiar shadow of my wife, the independent editor-in-chief Ling Yi.

"Thank you, little junior Gu." Liu Qicheng was a little embarrassed. Although he felt that his writing always lacked "taste" and "style", he was always unable to grasp it, as if he couldn't touch the thin thread that led him into the room.

"You're welcome, Senior Qicheng, I personally feel that you can write about the themes you like first and slowly find your feelings."

Gu Lingyi also tried her best. This senior was Lu Man's friend and had a close relationship with senior Ju Xiaoyu. She hoped to be able to help him to some extent.

"what?"

Only then did Gu Lingyi notice that Liu Qicheng's mouse was somewhat similar to the one she gave Lu Man as a New Year's gift.

"Is this a mouse?"

Liu Qicheng noticed Gu Lingyi's eyes and explained, "Lu Man just gave it to me."

"Brother, it turns out you have a similar mouse." Gu Lingyi looked at Lu Man.

"Ang." Lu Man rubbed her little head, "But after all, the gift from you is the most useful."

Gu Lingyi felt that Liu Qicheng's current mouse seemed to have richer details than the one he had given, and the letters and numbers were further back. According to the naming rules of general electronic products, Lu Man's original mouse seemed to be better than the one he had given. Better?

"Did I send the wrong one..." she asked quietly.


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