Devil Fruit in Place: Naruto World Shattered

Chapter 40

I wrote 40 words in 24 days, and reflected a lot. The failure of the last "Global Forced Game" was that the plot unfolded slowly and the beginning was chaotic.

But the stamina of the plot is very strong, and the story is ok.

This book "Devil Fruit in Place: The World of Naruto Shattered" is refreshing and fast-paced, but it has no sense of substitution and no emotional resonance. It is like a performance standing in the stands under the stage. After reading 20 chapters, it will be dropped. .

After trying to understand the reason, I lost all energy in my heart. I felt very tired after sitting in front of the computer for half an hour. I didn't move for the previous four hours.

After reflection, I wrote a new book that combines empathy, empathy, and storytelling atmosphere——

"The villain prince, suddenly stopped being a fool"

I hope this is a good start, and I hope you like it.

Introduction one:

Also known as: Chuanshu: The second villain, the Prince, suddenly became even more prodigal
"My blood pressure is on the rise. Who is stupid with more money and low IQ? Who made the family line up to beg for a slap in the face and give away the head! Who was finally blown up by the pig's feet and contributed a whole body of magic soldiers? I, Wang Ye, don't waste money." Already! The first step is to start with facial paralysis!"

Introduction two:

Also known as: Chuanshu: The Villain Wang Gongzi, suddenly became more sloppy

Wang Xiaoyao, a street writer, wrote a book about the street: in the book, there are all kinds of vulgar face-slapping plots, the villains are screaming and begging to be slapped and killed, and naturally the subscription cannot be added, so Wang Xiaoyao's eyes turned red and he created A second-generation villain with the same name as himself——

His father, Wang Jiuxiao, set foot on the starry sky at a young age. He doesn't talk too much and loves his son very much. From time to time, he sends the villain Wang Xiaoyao precious armored soldiers, beautiful wives and several beautiful masters with different temperaments.

But Wang Xiaoyao had a low IQ, so he still screamed and begged to be slapped in the face. The family members lined up begging to be killed and begged to be slapped in the face.

In the end, the villain Wang Xiaoyao was also smashed by the protagonist, and he contributed his armor of magic weapons, beautiful wife-to-be and several beautiful masters.

After conceiving the plot, Wang Xiaoyao, a street writer, laughed at himself and fell asleep, and then!

He suddenly became the second generation of the villain in the book——

Wang Xiaoyao, who is known as being very sloppy!

"My blood pressure has gone up. Who is so stupid with so much money and low IQ? Who told the family members to queue up instead of fighting in groups? I, Wang Xiaoyao, don't be a fool! The first step is to start with facial paralysis!"

Title of the book: "The villain prince, suddenly stopped being a villain", an original light novel with a fairy-tale style, there is no barrier to reading, it is not a fan.

A new book will be released for trial reading later,
I hope everyone will give more suggestions and opinions, and I haven't signed a contract for three consecutive books!
(End of this chapter)