Traversed to the Ark of Tomorrow, but was a traveler
Chapter 185 My impressions after watching the mainline animation, and some thoughts I have written s
Chapter 185 My impressions after watching the mainline animation, and some thoughts I wrote up to now
First of all, Amiya is really kind. My heart melted and I felt very sad.
Secondly, the animation plot, copywriting, etc. can completely crush yj's early copywriting, and the tension of yj's early copywriting is still not enough.
I think one of the main reasons for this is the lack of descriptions of expressions and emotions. YJ’s copywriting does not describe content about “atmosphere”, “expression” and “breathing”, which is still not much in the later copywriting Change.
What's more, I feel that Xia Lan's writing is too indifferent to life. At least [-] people have been directly or indirectly beheaded. Not only are there heinous enemies, but also those ordinary soldiers who are driven and confused. Totally inconsistent with Rhode Island's values...
But don’t cut it, and I think it’s too holy. After all, they are still a group of thugs in essence. Some people may have a lot of civilian blood on their hands, so I was quite contradictory when I wrote it, and I even deliberately wrote it. Some:
"He is not a good person at all, but his personality is his own way, which is very bad in the eyes of ordinary people..."
Additional descriptions like this, and I often can't help but emphasize this point, so I feel quite contradictory.
The original intention of writing this book is actually to imagine - if I go to the world of Tomorrow's Ark,
What would I want to do?
How would I want to choose?
what would i want?
How should I deal with life and death?
What kind of ending do I want?
------
Due to the incompleteness of the worldview described in Tomorrow's Ark (in fact, it has been quite colorful until now, much better than when I started writing the book), I wrote like walking on eggshells, and even reopened it once, just to write Find the closest possibility in your mind.
Because I really like it, I want to write as much as possible to fit its worldview, even if I am willing to stop updating when encountering a serious lack of data.
...Fortunately, there are not too many loopholes written so far, and some minor problems can also be explained by "the protagonist has come to this world three times before".
At the same time, the gospel is finally coming. YJ is about to release a collection of settings for the world view of Tomorrow's Ark. That thing should be quite useful. I can only say that I must buy it... I just don't know how long it will take to arrive. Is there an early receipt? The book friends who arrive can send it to me first (the same is true for selecting important content and scanning the code into an idea document)...
Just a little uneasy.
Limited by my writing skills and plot design ability, I don’t really need to have high expectations. Maybe I’ll lose my combat power soon, although it’s already too strong now...not to mention the later decision to find Ling Want the power of [Xiaoyao] (manipulating time and space).
What's more, I still haven't thought about how the ending will be, but it must have something to do with fighting the big boss above the starry sky, whether it is good or bad is not certain.
However, this period of time is obviously stable for the time being...
Stable three thousand for two days (laughs), I think I was four thousand and five a day at the beginning... and then I failed the subject, and it was still several subjects (woo woo woo).
Writing novels is quite interesting, you can beat whoever you want, and kill whoever you want.
If I didn't write "I am a fanatic Skadi single pusher" at the beginning, I can actually add a "fuck whoever I want", of course, I mean an adult beautiful girl.
In fact, I don't have much feeling for the other beautiful characters I wrote. Even if they are not written as one-on-one characters, I will not accept them. They are more inclined to friends who know a certain side of the protagonist.
——What Minar knows is the lonely soul and the eternal pursuit of the bonded land.
——What Wei Yuelan knows is the mystery beyond all destiny and the power to change the direction of the world.
——What Xia knows is her tenderness towards her family and her stubborn idealism that never grew up.
——What Chen knows is personal heroism and trouble-making physique.
——What Nian knows is the essence of the ultimate god who endlessly plunders everything for his own use.
——What Kelsey knows is the fate of the other world that is on his shoulders and keeps him wandering in the endless cycle of life and death.
……
In fact, only Ghost Shark has the urge to accept her. After all, she is too sultry, and she is also one of my favorite characters of Yujie, and there are also factors of love for the house and black...
Now is, fantasy time!
(End of this chapter)
First of all, Amiya is really kind. My heart melted and I felt very sad.
Secondly, the animation plot, copywriting, etc. can completely crush yj's early copywriting, and the tension of yj's early copywriting is still not enough.
I think one of the main reasons for this is the lack of descriptions of expressions and emotions. YJ’s copywriting does not describe content about “atmosphere”, “expression” and “breathing”, which is still not much in the later copywriting Change.
What's more, I feel that Xia Lan's writing is too indifferent to life. At least [-] people have been directly or indirectly beheaded. Not only are there heinous enemies, but also those ordinary soldiers who are driven and confused. Totally inconsistent with Rhode Island's values...
But don’t cut it, and I think it’s too holy. After all, they are still a group of thugs in essence. Some people may have a lot of civilian blood on their hands, so I was quite contradictory when I wrote it, and I even deliberately wrote it. Some:
"He is not a good person at all, but his personality is his own way, which is very bad in the eyes of ordinary people..."
Additional descriptions like this, and I often can't help but emphasize this point, so I feel quite contradictory.
The original intention of writing this book is actually to imagine - if I go to the world of Tomorrow's Ark,
What would I want to do?
How would I want to choose?
what would i want?
How should I deal with life and death?
What kind of ending do I want?
------
Due to the incompleteness of the worldview described in Tomorrow's Ark (in fact, it has been quite colorful until now, much better than when I started writing the book), I wrote like walking on eggshells, and even reopened it once, just to write Find the closest possibility in your mind.
Because I really like it, I want to write as much as possible to fit its worldview, even if I am willing to stop updating when encountering a serious lack of data.
...Fortunately, there are not too many loopholes written so far, and some minor problems can also be explained by "the protagonist has come to this world three times before".
At the same time, the gospel is finally coming. YJ is about to release a collection of settings for the world view of Tomorrow's Ark. That thing should be quite useful. I can only say that I must buy it... I just don't know how long it will take to arrive. Is there an early receipt? The book friends who arrive can send it to me first (the same is true for selecting important content and scanning the code into an idea document)...
Just a little uneasy.
Limited by my writing skills and plot design ability, I don’t really need to have high expectations. Maybe I’ll lose my combat power soon, although it’s already too strong now...not to mention the later decision to find Ling Want the power of [Xiaoyao] (manipulating time and space).
What's more, I still haven't thought about how the ending will be, but it must have something to do with fighting the big boss above the starry sky, whether it is good or bad is not certain.
However, this period of time is obviously stable for the time being...
Stable three thousand for two days (laughs), I think I was four thousand and five a day at the beginning... and then I failed the subject, and it was still several subjects (woo woo woo).
Writing novels is quite interesting, you can beat whoever you want, and kill whoever you want.
If I didn't write "I am a fanatic Skadi single pusher" at the beginning, I can actually add a "fuck whoever I want", of course, I mean an adult beautiful girl.
In fact, I don't have much feeling for the other beautiful characters I wrote. Even if they are not written as one-on-one characters, I will not accept them. They are more inclined to friends who know a certain side of the protagonist.
——What Minar knows is the lonely soul and the eternal pursuit of the bonded land.
——What Wei Yuelan knows is the mystery beyond all destiny and the power to change the direction of the world.
——What Xia knows is her tenderness towards her family and her stubborn idealism that never grew up.
——What Chen knows is personal heroism and trouble-making physique.
——What Nian knows is the essence of the ultimate god who endlessly plunders everything for his own use.
——What Kelsey knows is the fate of the other world that is on his shoulders and keeps him wandering in the endless cycle of life and death.
……
In fact, only Ghost Shark has the urge to accept her. After all, she is too sultry, and she is also one of my favorite characters of Yujie, and there are also factors of love for the house and black...
Now is, fantasy time!
(End of this chapter)
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