Great Military Division

Chapter 145
I received a notice from the editor today, and it can be put on the shelves in the early morning.

According to the usual practice, I always write a testimonial to thank the editor for his care, and then beg the readers to subscribe.

Ah!
This is crucial.

But please allow the author to make a small summary of the content of this book before doing so.

First of all, the novel is inspired by "Kidnapping All Mankind".

In the original version, if the protagonist suffers a little damage, all human beings will be harmed accordingly. In this way, hundreds of millions of netizens will be forced to help the protagonist grow up, which will naturally involve high-level power.

But
Considering that these things are too sensitive and are only useful in the initial stage, they will basically not appear in the later stage, or even impossible to appear again. In order to avoid unnecessary troubles, this aspect is not mentioned at all.

Many readers commented that the higher-ups would not allow such a live broadcast room to exist, and that the author is an idiot, brain-dead, and almost poisoned him to death.

In fact, it’s not that the author didn’t think about it, it’s just that such a version was deleted by the author. As for the content, readers can make up their own brains. In a word: since it can’t be stopped, then guide it to play its due role.

Second.

The author has high hopes for this novel.

Especially the opening volume of the golden cicada shelling volume, which has a detailed outline and detailed outline.

According to the original content, in fact, it can be written directly to the shelves, with a conservative word count of 30 words.

However, considering the rhythm problem, a large number of content was deleted, and finally fixed at 20w characters. Although the rhythm is faster, a lot of detailed content is missing, especially the content of the villains Li Ru and Dong Zhuo.

For example, after the imperial city plan was stolen, didn't the Lantai people notice it?
Modern enterprises have to carry out an inventory at the end of each month. Doesn't the secretary in charge of the map and data in the palace not take an inventory?
Obviously not possible!
However, once the inventory is taken, it is bound to be known that something is missing, and then suspicions will be spread to the protagonist, and finally spread to Li Ru, arousing his suspicions. Although the case will be closed by finding the blueprints in the end, it is more reasonable in this way.

In addition, the scenes of Wang Yi, the food supervisor, were also deleted. The two were later transferred to monitor Wang Yi's food supervisor assistants, and the whole process was deleted by the author.

According to the author's thinking, Li Ru could finally pass through a well only in the midst of constant doubts. He thought of the map of the underground canal, and then thought of Liu Bian's escape, and finally made the move to directly surround Luoyang.

This is the most reasonable!
Just for the golden cicada's shelling volume, the author drew five logical mind maps, consulted an unknown amount of information, and tried to make the story as real as possible, without flaws, and logically.

But it might have been too much.

In the minds of readers, the author only feels that the author is dragging the pace and slopping the article.

The author is indeed reflecting.

I only care about the rationality of the story, but ignore the reader's reading experience.

This is not right!

Therefore, the author has been doing subtraction during this period, especially the content of the second volume, which greatly reduces the content of the military division alliance's analysis of the situation, and only a small amount is interspersed in the plot. Unless it is particularly important, the rest is just a point.

But even so, in the end, the joint battle between Wubao and Zongguan was still criticized by readers and slowed down the pace. The author is really trying to speed up the pace, and I ask the readers to give the author some time to change.

There are no code words this afternoon, so I deleted about [-] words in the follow-up content, sped up the pace a little, and slightly modified the outline to ensure that the follow-up ideas are not biased, and the plot is as reasonable as possible.

If there is an unreasonable storyline, just leave a message directly, the author will express his own point of view, let's communicate together, the author will fully consider reasonable opinions, and then modify the content to make the article more rigorous.

Although a book is created by the author, it is ultimately achieved jointly by the readers and the author.

If there is any problem, even if you raise it, the author will accept it with humility.

And then thank you.

Thank you for editing Qing Zhou.

Thanks to every reader for their monthly tickets, recommendation tickets, and rewards.

Authors wouldn't be able to stay active without your daily votes.

Although there are various problems in this book, and it has not been able to go to Liuban, Sanjiang, and Strong Push, but you can rest assured that the author will definitely complete the book with quality and quantity.

Finally, let's talk about the update after it is put on the shelves, and the principle of adding more.

Regardless of grades, the minimum guarantee is 6k. Of course, under normal circumstances, it should be more than this number.

In fact, the author doesn't like adding updates. After all, if the speed is too fast, it is easy to rush, which will affect the quality.

But the flag that should be established still needs to be established.

A leader, add another chapter.

If the goal is set higher, there is no need to add more.

Haha!

My damn IQ.

Then, for every 100 additional subscriptions, one chapter will be added on the same day.

The author absolutely loves this.

So please book readers to make a custom order, don't let the order be dropped, use the reward money from the author to order it yourself.

Let's see you in the early morning, the [-]D update will be delivered at once.

(End of this chapter)