Consumer God

Chapter 48
Han Lie was not in a hurry to add her as a friend, but turned to the book "Misty Rain and Frost", which was full of mysteries from the name to the introduction to the story, and read it carefully.

When it came to 11 o'clock, Han Lie finally finished reading all 12 words, and Han Lie had a bottom line.

Open your own trumpet, enter the number, search, and see that interface again.

who am I?
Proud Gherkin.

who are you?
Swap ham for cucumbers.

What are you looking for?
Exchange... ah bah bah!

Delete it, and solemnly change it to another two words: communication.

After sending the application, Han Lie turned the volume to the maximum, went to take a shower and brushed his teeth.

Lights are turned off at 11:[-] p.m. in the humanities apartment building, except for small dorms.

But now everyone has a smart phone, and chatting on QQ will not be delayed when the power is cut off-at the tip of the tail of the 3G era, there is really no other entertainment besides chatting on QQ and reading novels.

So Han Lie reckoned that Xi Luting might log in to the trumpet today.

At about 11:[-], Han Lie was about to go to bed, when suddenly there was a coughing sound from the laptop speaker.

Yoshi, applied through a friend!
Brother Lie jumped up, jumped out of bed, and sat down at the table.

[A groaning loneliness has passed your friend request]

A croaking loneliness: "Hello. Thank you for your support."

A very reserved and quiet opening statement.

This can't work...

Han Lie decisively sent out a picture of a sand sculpture, full of enthusiasm.

(kowtow to the boss)

Ham for cucumber: "Why are you a eunuch! (crying) (crying)"

Ham for cucumber: "I really like your words..."

Ham for cucumber: "Do you have any plans to open a new book?"

……

In bedroom 2333, Xi Luting was lying on the bed, with his body sideways and his legs curled up, looking anxiously at the QQ interface of his mobile phone.

Her book makes too many novice mistakes.

How self-righteous I was before I started writing, how disappointed and embarrassing after the result came out.

100 favorites in a month and a half, three bomb rewards, more than 20 comments on balm...

There may be only a few people who really like this book.

And there is no one who is willing to communicate with her author.

Therefore, it is the first time for her to add readers' QQ numbers and chat with readers.

She was so looking forward to it.

But the problem is that the reader opposite is the only "local tyrant" who gave a big reward. She attaches great importance to it, but she doesn't know what attitude she should use to deal with it.

Therefore, worrying about gains and losses is very serious.

However, when the other party sent three warm greetings non-stop, her heart was shocked, trembling, numb, as if being penetrated by an electric current.

Look!That's my fan!

Finally someone recognized my artistic expression in the vast sea of ​​books!
I'm not a poor little no one understands!
Xi Luting was very excited, a sense of relief and surprise that Boya finally met her son came to her heart, which made her let go of her coldness and guard in an instant.

A croaking loneliness: "Hahaha! Thank you for your liking!"

A groaning loneliness: "It's not that I want to be a eunuch, it's that the data is too bad, which especially hits the mentality, and I really can't write any more. (Woooo)"

A groaning loneliness: "I even suspect that I may not be suitable for writing novels. Apart from words, I am really messed up."

A croaking loneliness: "(crying) (crying) (crying)"

……

When chatting with girls, the most important thing is that you have to know what they want to hear.

Many licking dogs think that it's over if they are brainless and boastful, they are so wrong!
Every beautiful woman has heard how many compliments since she was a child, and it is normal to be tired, annoying, and indifferent.

This also involves a "qualification" issue.

It means, do you have enough weight to directly praise others.

For example, Zhang Yimou said casually: "Girl, you are so beautiful and have a good temperament."

Ouch, what an honor!
But a boy at the passer-by level boasted as soon as he went up: "You are so beautiful, beauty!"

That's frivolity.

Han Lie's reward of 100 yuan initially solved the qualification problem, and he could praise her for her good writing without causing resentment.

However, the following chats cannot continue to follow the old path of mindless praise.

The weight is still not enough, exaggerating too much seems fake.

And we can't talk about the roots.

So Han Lie carefully analyzed Xi Luting's state of mind, roughly determined what she most wanted to hear, and then carefully began to pull.

Ham for cucumber: "Huh? Da Da's condition is very good now!"

Ham for cucumber: "To be honest, the plot setting of "Misty Rain and Frost" is really problematic."

Ham for cucumber: "And the skills are too immature."

Ham for cucumber: "However, now that Da Da has calmed down and can face up to his shortcomings, he will definitely make rapid progress in the future!"

Ham for cucumber: "The author of the web article, except for a few top talent monsters, the rest of the masters and minor gods have been trained little by little. Your later style is very good!"

Seeing those two criticisms, Xi Luting felt a little uncomfortable.

But when I saw the next two words of encouragement, I felt very warm again.

Therefore, it was easy to accept the other party's qualification for commenting.

Ah!
My Tietie is right, if you want to succeed, you must face up to your own weaknesses!
With an unprecedented humility, she asked the only reader for advice: "Can you tell me about my problem in detail? Also, how can I correct it?"

This question is too big to ask, and it feels like going to the doctor for a sudden illness.

Han Lie smiled when he saw it.

If any fan can analyze this kind of problem well, then why do we need professionals?
However, you are lucky, brother is really an expert...

More than ten years of super high reading volume + level 3 literary knowledge + level 3 writing skills = a little god who can write and teach.

It is even a bit overkill to point out a pure novice.

In order to enhance his authority in Xi Luting's heart, Han Lie fired with all his might.

Ham for cucumber: "Let's say it in advance, the following are all personal feelings.

I think, your biggest problem may not be clichés such as plot, character design, rhythm, etc., but common sense of life and social experience are not enough to support such a story.

To put it simply, it is a typical accumulation that cannot keep up with ambition.

The story you want to tell is too big, magnificent, magnificent and dreamy, and it is the perfection in your imagination.

But if you can't fill in the right details, it will appear vain.

When I read a book, I often have a feeling of 'difficulty'.

Your words are more than sufficient, and some places are even full of spirituality.

But looking at the overall situation regardless of the details, the phenomenon of small horse-drawn carts is very prominent, and it is obviously uncontrollable.

So it will be scattered and chaotic.

Coupled with your unconstrained spirituality, the result of wanton writing will inevitably lead to more prominent structural problems, and the reading threshold is so high that it far exceeds the level of online articles...

Therefore, your writing is not bad, it is good when you meet someone who understands it.

I even wonder, are you underage or just grown up?

It's hard for people who are too old to maintain your delicate and pure style of writing that looks cold and precipitous at first glance..."

wow~⊙o⊙!
Xi Luting's eyes widened, and he grabbed the phone tightly, trembling slightly with excitement.

This is not Yu Boya and Zhong Ziqi!

It was Nalan Rongruo who met Gu Zhenguan!

I am Zhenguan, and you are my Rongruo!

How can it be so accurate? !

Xi Luting suddenly felt a kind of ecstasy, his mood was very excited, his brain was filled with some kind of emotion, and the dopamine was crazily secreted, joyful but slow.

So, in the end, she only replied with seven words——

"How to change? I listen to you!!!"

There are three exclamation points, that is a firm determination without hesitation.

Goose Goose Goose Goose Goose Goose……

Han Lie was lying on the desk, laughing until his liver ached, his stomach ached, his intestines were knotted, and tears were about to fall.

Little Cucumber, just listen to my brother!
will i hurt you
It cannot be specified!
Next, let us get along happily!

(End of this chapter)