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Chapter 50 I Want His Surname to be Han!

In the next few days, Xi Luting had a very difficult time.

She had considered Ham's suggestion carefully, and was more and more inclined to accept it.

The fee of 20 yuan for retouching is not high, but it is obviously negotiable.

Even if the price is not raised, it is still a good part-time job to earn 10 yuan by editing 2000 words.

She is very clear that the first draft with the plot is the most labor-intensive, but it is not difficult to revise and polish.

There is less work, no tiring, no need to show your face, and you can use other people's money to hone your skills...

So worth it.

It's not that Xi Luting is short of money. Her family has two houses and one shop in a prefecture-level city. Her father is a civil servant and her mother is a teacher. They are considered well-to-do families, and they have never been short of her food.

However, she wanted to take root in Shanghai, and her family really couldn't provide much help.

She can only rely on herself.

It's a pity that the expected path is really not going to work, and she is too lacking in learning talent - every time she thinks of this, she will secretly envy Han Lie.

Also a student of Sanben, why is my learning ability so much different from that of a dog man?
My IQ is obviously not low...

God, dad is so unreasonable.

In short, I'm afraid that I can't count on my professional ability, and the road after graduation will definitely not be easy. Now I have the opportunity to continue to try my hand at online writing, which is really a great thing.

If Ham's outline and the three golden chapters are particularly good, she is even willing to take a gamble and get a share.

But since the chat ended that day, for three whole days, the rich ham didn't log in again.

Waiting made her more and more anxious.

On the night of the 3rd, when she casually logged into the trumpet without any hope, she finally saw a beating bright headshot.

Huh, finally waiting for you...

She hurriedly opened the chat bar, and the first thing she saw was a row of grinning expressions.

Ham for cucumber: "The outline and the three golden chapters are done!"

Ham for cucumber: "I'll send you a copy, you can take a look. By the way, the outline is only the content of the early stage, you just need to understand it."

Xi Luting replied with "um", and couldn't wait to start receiving the documents.

Finally opened the document, the first thing that catches the eye is the title of the book——

"You have to live well without me for the rest of your life"

It's a bit literary, and it's not quite right, but it pokes Xi Luting very much.

Looking at the text again, the heroine Xi Meng and Wang Yan met on the high-speed rail in Chapter 1.

The origin of the story is that Xi Meng was accosted by a middle-aged man. She has a weak and kind personality and doesn't know how to refuse.

As a result, Wang Yan's mood was affected, and the cold-faced male god made a strong appearance.

Like a great detective, he stripped the middle-aged man of his background, strength, and family through his clothes, watches, and speech.

The sharp and mean language angered the middle-aged man.

But before a more intense conflict was about to erupt, Wang Yan calmly revealed his trump card:

"In my eyes, you are like a ridiculous paramecium that is completely transparent.

What is your basis?

Tongsheng Group?

It's impossible for your direct superior to be at Gu Mingtong's level, but if I call Gu Mingtong, he probably won't mind selling me face and dismissing an unclear middle-level group.

How about it, do you want to bet on whether Gu Mingtong's number in my phone is real? "

The little villain was frightened, begged for mercy, and then ran away.

With just a few words, he successfully pretended to be a mellow pussy, showing strong analytical ability and field control ability.

And lead to a BUG-like technique - cold reading.

Xi Meng was conquered by Wang Yan's performance.

At the same time, Xi Luting was also conquered by Ham's writing skills.

"Oh my god! Who is my little fan? Isn't the level of pretending to be too high?!"

Just Chapter 1, Xi Luting enjoyed watching it very well, and is extremely looking forward to the next story.

Of course, not without problems.

In Xi Luting's opinion, many of the descriptions and wording habits in this chapter are still too rigid.

Harder means that it is too masculine.

For example, the description of Xi Meng's resistance is completely guessed from the perspective of a man. In fact, Xi Meng's psychological reaction should be weaker.

But these are minor issues.

The entire Chapter 1, from the character setting to the conception, to the degree of completion and refreshing feeling of pretending to face, is first-class and advanced.

Although the online articles for women do not pay special attention to pretending to be aggressive, but if they pretend to be particularly high-end and stylish, it will actually produce a huge sense of refreshment, which is the same for both men and women.

And the dialogue written by Ham can be used directly as the lines of an idol drama.

The texture of this kind of film and television drama is too rare.

Xi Luting couldn't wait to read all three chapters, and a thought crazily echoed in his mind——

Work with him!

A croaking loneliness: "I don't want a bonus, I want a third of the share!"

When Han Lie received the news, he had already written Chapter 6 of the bloody tricks of cheating girls with money.

"In that case, I will have stricter standards for you. Are you ready?"

A croaking loneliness: "Just let the horse come over!"

Han Lie smiled.

Very evil.

Ham for cucumber: "Then, plan a passionate scene between Xi Meng and Wang Yan in advance, write it out and let me see.

Reasons, scenes, details, and special images must be written clearly.

Give full play to your imagination and write beautifully and warmly from the perspective of women.

By the way, the length is not limited. "

Xi Luting's face suddenly turned red, and he felt all ten toes curl up.

Damn, it's too embarrassing...

Why did Miss Ben write that kind of thing specifically for a man? !

Well, well, for ideals, for art!

Thankfully it's online.

Fortunately, the other party was a stranger...

Forcibly resolved the psychological pressure, but she was still a little awkward.

A croaking loneliness: "Well... I have a small proposal..."

Ham for cucumber: "Huh?"

A croaking loneliness: "That's...can you change the name of the heroine?"

Ham for cucumber: "Why?"

A croaking loneliness: "Just... don't you think it's a bit too ordinary?"

Ham for cucumber: "Then, change it to Xi Mengting?"

w(Д)w!

The moment he saw the word "Xi Mengting", Xi Luting went numb.

Mom, why are you getting closer and closer? !
Again, I really put myself in it!
A croaking loneliness: "Don't don't! I mean, can I change my surname?"

Han Lie was about to collapse from laughter.

Wiping the tears that were forced out, she resolutely rejected Xi Luting's unreasonable request.

Ham for cucumber: "You can't change your surname. The banquet has a deep meaning."

Xi Luting trembled all over, his heart beating wildly.

"What's the meaning?"

Ham for cucumber: "Xi: A mat made of grass or reed. Don't you think it fits her fate well?"

Post a papa!

Xi Luting muttered angrily, and was trying to persuade him again, when another message came from the other side.

Ham for cucumber: "The heroine's surname cannot be changed, but other than that, the right to name the hero and heroine can be handed over to you. I'm really not good at naming female characters, you can think about it carefully."

Xi Luting's eyes suddenly lit up, and a strange joy welled up in his heart.

What is the male lead's last name Wang?

I want his surname to be Han!

(End of this chapter)