Princess Consort of Tang Dynasty

Chapter 394
Unimportant people should be skipped directly, just don't get killed alone, passer-by A wants to think about it for a while, it's scary.

You should stay where you are cool and stop writing novels.

Well, the above is probably a partial summary of Shen Sanwen's first novel in his life.

And what I learned later.

The second is the scene.

The scene is actually a very important thing. What the protagonist sees, how magnificent the scene is, and how delicious the food is, all need to be clearly written through the scene.

But there is a limit to being clear.

For example, Shen Sanwen is currently sitting in front of a long red desk.

You only need to explain its color, or mention its material a little bit, and the mission of this table is completed.

If you insist on explaining that he is made of hundred-year-old wood, it is extremely hard. After all, the protagonist is also happy to see wealth.

But you have to tell readers that there are three fruit plates on it, one containing seven oranges, one of which has been eaten by Shen Sanwen, leaving only the orange shell disguised as a fresh orange to trick Wang Bin into being fooled, and then there is a cup of tea on it. A brush, and twelve sheets of rice paper with the fragrance of roses.

That would be too much.

Because this deviates from common sense too much, is he still needing a piece of paper for his wealth?So where did this number come from, and the protagonist sees the pen and paper, can see the white paper, the red table, why can't he see the color of the teacup?

Could it be that the fragrance of rice paper surpasses the high-grade tea in the mansion?
Simply terrified.

In addition, Shen Sanwen, who was devoted to Wang Bin, asked when he took the time to eat the orange. If the orange didn't trick Wang Bin into writing about him, what's the use of it?If you are deceived, you can write again at the moment you are deceived, can't you leave some suspense?

This is called a water scene.

It does not have the slightest nutrition and skills, and it tells things, does not respect the reader's sense of substitution and common sense, and just talks to itself.

It is unreasonable not to rush to the street like this.

The writing should be simplified and done in one step. Adding one word will result in more words, and removing one word will result in insufficient taste, so that readers can appreciate the value of each paragraph.

However, the scene of the water scene is justifiable, and the psychology of water can also make people see the author's thoughts. The last kind of water is outrageous.

water view.

There are more than ten million scenery that can be described in the world?When you look up, there are white clouds and dark clouds, the sun is shining on the crescent moon, blue waves are thousands of miles away or thunder is shining, there is always a scene.Of course, the white clouds are better than the water, so I use them to change their appearance slightly, and the author makes his words into the image of some object or character that he wants to see in his heart, and finally says a few words to the sky insanely words, about a thousand words can be completed.

Does this paragraph help the story?
It can probably deepen the protagonist's momentary emotions.

Then after a day, the protagonist sees different lakes, streams, rivers, and sea water, and can describe it again. Finally, he mentions that the protagonist wants to be with someone, or gather here with old friends in the past, which is wonderful.

In short, the years are quiet and good, the world is delicious, and everything you see is heaven.

This kind of author is probably here to show off what he has seen and heard, not to tell a story sincerely, so it is necessary for him to hit the street.

Shen Sanwen picked up the tea and took a sip, "How about it, what did you remember, can I have a look?"

Wang Bin immediately blocked what he wrote with his body, and said very seriously, "No, this is my family letter from Mrs. Wang, and it cannot be shown to outsiders."

However, your family letter from Mrs. Wang said what I told you?
Shen San asked calmly, "Then I won't watch it, I'm going to rest."

Wang Bin stopped him, "Brother, wait, you've only finished talking about water, and haven't finished talking about poison yet!"

Everything has a beginning and an end, hey!

Shen Sanwen shook his head and sighed, "I can't bear to disturb Young Master Wang's handling of Wang's family letter, so please resign, please allow me."

Allow your sister, this is your home, why do you say this.

Wang Bin reluctantly agreed, "Then I will allow you to watch it, but you must not change the content I wrote without authorization. You promise that I will show you right away."

Shen Sanwen raised his eyebrows, it was written something shameful to slander him, "I don't agree."

Wang Bin held him back, "Forget it, I've convinced you, let me show you, and change it if you want."

Then he muttered softly, "Anyway, I can change it back when I go back."

The voice was just right, Shen San asked what he could hear clearly, but had nothing to say.

Wang Bin handed over what he had written, and when Shen Sanwen saw the title, he felt as if his enthusiasm had been shattered.

His experience talk just now was impassioned and impassioned. Every word was his painstaking effort. He responded to Wang Bin's request very sincerely.

In the end, what is the title of this product?
The great god Shen Sanwen talked about the twelve reasons for rushing to the street in the past.

Even if I really hit the streets, don't mock me in front of Wang's descendants like this, I don't want to lose face.

Shen San asked to leave immediately: "Ben Pujie is a little shallow, I hope Young Master Wang won't laugh at my shallowness, I don't dare to say more in front of an expert, please let me go."

Seeing him like this, Wang Bin was satisfied, "Okay, don't hurt me with those words, just kidding, how could I really write a family letter with this title."

Shen San asked: "Thank you so much."

Wang Bin: "Let's change it to, the twelve reasons why a certain great god hit the street. If there are not enough twelve reasons, then change to eight and nine reasons, and a shocking article will come out."

"This thing can still shock the world?" Shen San asked, expressing extreme doubts, who would want to watch this kind of tutorial.

I was afraid of seeing these contents. When I was in a hurry to submit the manuscript, I didn't avoid the above risks, but directly used the above contents. That would really kill me.

Wang Bin smiled complacently, "You don't know about this. I don't know how many people you said are using these methods, and they also use dialogue, but they don't even care about their own problems. Summarize in your words." , it is not beneficial to the development of the plot and the main line.”

Shen San asked: "Stop it, do you still know dialogue? You have only opened a few books, and you have become such a high-end reader?"

Why don't I believe it.

Wang Bin sighed, "I don't want to either. It's because I read too many dialogues. In fact, it's disgusting to panic. Especially books with martial arts content, they are going to fight to the death. You must drink a few times, or report yourself. The name of the move, no one will sneak attack and hurry up, it is really embarrassing to watch.

And that word you used is so terrifying, I'm so dumbfounded! "

Shen Sanwen gave him a thumbs up, "Gao Ming, I don't know how many people have read many novels to sum up the classic laws, but you have figured out the way in just four or five novels. Consider writing a novel by yourself?!"

(End of this chapter)