Princess Consort of Tang Dynasty

Chapter 396 Finding the Root
Others wrote the whole story about the protagonist Niu, but you wrote the whole story about the protagonist having some kind of super power so he took advantage of it.

In terms of coolness, if you don't use your superpowers to the extreme, the protagonist is a little salty in it, and the experience the readers get is weak, and even gives birth to a certain sense of unfairness.

Shen Sanwen paused again.

I always feel that all this is talking about myself, and I don't know if Wang Bin has discovered it.

Seeing him stop, Wang Bin said, "Go on, why not?"

Shen San asked: "Take a break and sort out your thoughts."

Wang Bin: "I found that you still didn't tell the real reason. I tried to summarize it myself."

Shen San asked surprised, "Brother, you are amazing, come on, tell me."

Wang Bin stood up, turned his head solemnly, and walked back and forth in the living room.

"The first is that the positioning is not clear, causing readers to misjudge. For example, some people like to watch wars, and some like to watch daily life. If the same length is too heavy and the main plot has not appeared for a long time, it is a failure. .

In a historical novel, it must be worthwhile to write people's true feelings, and it can also move people, making readers worry about the future of the characters and want to know how the follow-up will change.

But the theme of the whole book should still be that the protagonist is conforming to history, or working hard to change history.

Let readers see the protagonist's efforts, recognize his efforts, and have a sense of approval for what he has done.

Once there is no such resonance, readers will leave one after another. This is my most personal feeling.

Second, it should be a question of characterization.

Everyone likes the protagonist in his own writing, but just like in the real reality, no one can be perfect enough for everyone to like, too much pursuit of perfection will cause conflicts between the characters.This point is only for you, the leader of the Ministry of Education.

Most flutters on the street don't know how to portray people, and they must write out the words and strong emotions that the characters can blurt out in each incident.

For example, in a book I read, a person who was written was a scumbag.

How is he such a scumbag?
The first step is to ask the heroine to do a lot of things to meet his personal requirements, but he doesn't have to do much, which portrays this person's selfishness.

The second step is to ask the heroine's family to be nice to him, and even to other people he likes. This request is excessive and unreasonable, isn't it?

The third step is to write how this person treats his parents and friends, how selfish he is, and only considers himself in the face of real interests, to show this person's inferior personality.

The fourth step is to give the heroine the identity of the hero's savior, so that the readers will despise the man's actions from the bottom of their hearts.

The fifth step, after the heroine is freed and the two break away from the relationship, another male protagonist will come to beg for mercy, the female protagonist will help kindly, and finally be framed again.

In this way, the image of a social and emotional scumbag is portrayed in place, and readers will feel that this person is a waste of air to live, and they strongly like to see this person's final tragic ending. If they can't see it, they can't eat or sleep. "

"Wait, is that your book about women's news? When have you been to women's news?" Shen San asked in disbelief. Could it be that Mr. Wang is actually a person who likes to watch house fights and palace fights.

Although the character portrayal he mentioned is indeed quite good, but for Shen Sanwen who frequently reads and interrogates men and women together, he has actually seen many, more disgusting characters than this one.

Wang Bin: "Look what happened to the female channel."

Shen San asked and stared at him with a smile, "Why do I remember that you only bought a few books for men when we went last time, when did you secretly buy books for women? When you were in Luoyang, you just stared at the books for women. No wonder I haven’t seen you in the Ministry of Culture.”

Wang Bin smiled embarrassingly, "Actually, I have read them all. The key is that I am a man who reads women's books. It feels quite strange, and I am a little embarrassed."

Shen San asked: "What's wrong with this? Women's books also have the advantages of women's. I read them too, but they often don't last long."

At this time, Wang Bin had already put the analysis of the matter behind him, "Come on, tell me, I think the routines of female songs should be much more exciting than those of male songs, especially the description of indescribable by female songs."

Shen Sanwen took a step away from him, "So you want to discuss this, you should think about it yourself, I'm not interested."

Wang Bin took a step closer, "Come on, let's talk about it, talk about what you like. You must have read more than I do, let's discuss it in depth."

For the sake of this kind word, Shen Sanwen decided to discuss it with him reluctantly.

"I'll talk about men and women together."

Wang Bin nodded, "Come here as you please."

Shen Sanwen slowly opened his mouth: "The book routines of male fans mainly change in fighting monsters and upgrading. All the protagonists change from weak to strong. You can know who the protagonist will become in the end after reading the beginning. As for the kind of fantasy novels, the protagonists are all I am invincible, but where are they coming out one by one and being slapped in the face by all kinds of heaven-defying characters, it is really boring enough to make people can't stand it.

The routines of women's novels are similar to her theme. The main line of women's novels is the emotional line, so there is only one routine, which is the separation and reunion of the male and female protagonists.

The poisonous point of female frequency lies in the particularly embarrassing reason for the separation, all kinds of wonderful psychological changes and descriptions, and then cooperate with an inexplicable and unbelievable explanation, and finally the two of them settled their suspicions.

In the writer's writing, two people always love each other very much, but they never trust each other. This is the most poisonous point in my opinion.

Then there is the explanation.

I have read no less than ten novels, and there will be such a plot. The master or parents of the hero or heroine disagree with this marriage, and the relationship with the parents and master is very good and cannot be disobedient, and then both sides can't be human.The second is that one party has a disease or an incurable disease. In the end, the result is either a misdiagnosis, or a sudden technological advancement in the world. I dare not say about other problems. Solving this disease is a surefire thing.

Even if the success rate is only one in ten thousand, the protagonist must be one of the lucky ones. "

Wang Bin couldn't help laughing when he heard this, thinking about his own reading experience, what Shen Sanwen said was right, and he quickly added, "There are also those who admit the wrong person, and then both parties give up on what they thought they had feelings for." The person who chooses the male lead or the female lead, goes through the process of thinking that he loves the wrong person, until finally the mystery is revealed."

Shen Sanwen expressed his approval, "In short, Nvfeng's novel is a difficult marriage history. If the two people's love is not vigorous enough, and they don't experience opposition from family, friends, society, country, natural disasters and man-made disasters, self-doubt, they will end up with a lot of customer service. Difficulties prove the power of love, and this is a novel that is bound to hit the market."

(End of this chapter)