Entertainment: The opening and the official announcement of the national goddess

Chapter 228 Revising the script, worship and gratitude (please recommend and collect)
After Yang Mi and Reba finished reading the script, Zhang Xiao asked with a smile: "How do you think this script is good?"

Yang Mi thought for a while, and said: "I will give seven points at most. The story is a bit simple and nothing new."

"However, martial arts films mainly focus on artistic conception and action. As long as these two aspects can be controlled well, a 9-point script should also be able to produce a [-]-point effect."

As for Reba, she has never been in contact with movies before, and she has similar views on the script as Yang Mi, but she didn't say anything, but nodded in agreement with Yang Mi's statement.

After Zhang Xiao heard Yang Mi's words, he looked at her in surprise, and said, "Hey, you can do it, my wife. These words almost directly pointed out the essence of martial arts movies. It seems that this time I will let you go back to the stove." Rebuilding is still useful!"

Yang Mi said with a little satisfaction: "As the saying goes, people should treat each other with admiration after three days of goodbye. After re-studying this time, I have indeed gained a lot."

After finishing speaking, he looked at Reba again, and said, "Come on, take down this role, and when it's over, you can also remake it."

"Well, good!" Reba replied with firm eyes.

Seeing Yang Mi's changes now, Reba is very envious.

At this time, Yang Mi looked at Zhang Xiao again, and asked curiously, "Husband, how would you rate this script?"

Zhang Xiao shrugged his shoulders and said: "Six points, there are many loopholes in the story, and many places have not been explained clearly. In this way, you wait for me here for a while, and I will correct it and try to make it reach eight points."

"Husband, are you ready to take on the role of Yuhuatian?" Yang Mi knew that Zhang Xiao had already decided to take on the movie as soon as she heard that Zhang Xiao was going to change the script.

"That's right!" Zhang Xiao said with a single head: "If the score of this drama is six, I will give the character of Yu Huatian a nine. As long as it is played well, this role will definitely become a classic, right? What do you two say?"

"I definitely accepted it!" Yang Mi said, "I think Su Huirong's villain role is very suitable for me, just to test my acting skills."

It's just that Reba was a little bit in trouble, and said with a wry smile: "I have already agreed to participate in "The God of Songs", and I don't have any confidence at all, although I really want to play this role."

Zhang Xiao heard the words, thought for a while, and said: "Reba, since you chose to be with Mimi, then I will treat you as my own. My suggestion is that you can transform and become an acting school. The decision is in your hands.”

"As for the variety show, I think they will hold more than just this episode. Let your agent discuss it with the show crew. It's not too late to go again, what do you think?"

"En!" Reba nodded heavily when he heard the words, and said, "Brother Xiao is right, I will listen to you!"

Zhang Xiao smiled, stood up, and said, "Okay, you guys rest here first, and I'll change the script."

After speaking, Zhang Xiao walked into the study.

What he said about changing the script, of course, was helped by the system.

"System, how much reputation do I need to modify the script of "Flying Swords of the Dragon Gate" and to what extent?" Zhang Xiao asked in his mind.

[The current system rating, the script is rated at 6.2 points. If the main plot remains unchanged, it can only be modified to a maximum of eight points, which requires 1000 million reputation points. 】

"What? 1000 million? This is more expensive than exchanging for a new script." Zhang Xiao was speechless for a moment.

[Modifying the script on the basis of the original is far more difficult than the new script, so more reputation points are required. 】

The system explained a sentence lightly.

"You cheating system, change it!"

Zhang Xiao said something angrily.

An hour later, Zhang Xiao spent 1000 million reputation points to revise the script of "Flying Armor of the Dragon Gate", and now the script has reached eight points.

When Zhang Xiao showed the new script to Yang Mi and Reba, they couldn't help giving him a thumbs up.

Yang Mi looked at Zhang Xiao even more excitedly, and said, "Honey, you are too good. After your modification, the quality of this script has been improved by at least several grades."

"Thank you for the compliment!" Zhang Xiao replied with a smile.

And Reba cast an admiring look at Zhang Xiao.

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The next morning, Zhang Xiao sent the revised script to Li Liangjie.

Soon, Li Liangjie called him and invited him, Yang Mi and Reba to visit his home together to discuss "Flying Armor of the Dragon Gate" in an instant.

With Zhang Xiao's revised script, as long as Reba has a little bit of acting skills, both Li Liangjie and Xu Ke will choose to use Reba.

He was originally a supporting role, so it wasn't a big problem.

At six o'clock in the afternoon that day, Zhang Xiao and others arrived at Li Liangjie's home by plane.

Li Liangjie personally greeted the three of them into the living room. Zhang Xiao took a glance and found that besides Li Liangjie's wife, there was also a middle-aged man around 50 years old with sharp eyes and a radiant look.

This person is the eight-star director of Hong Kong Island, Xu Ke.

After everyone greeted each other, they sat at the dining table together and began to eat.

After three rounds of wine, five flavors of dishes, and a meal of pushing and changing glasses, everyone gradually became acquainted.

At this time Xu Ke looked at Zhang Xiao and said, "Xiao Zai, you are indeed a great screenwriter who can write a classic TV series like "Langya Bang"."

"After your revision of the script this time, our "Flying Swords of the Dragon Gate" has been upgraded by two or three levels, which makes me more confident."

Zhang Xiao smiled, and said modestly: "Then Director Xu means that he is going to use my revised script to shoot?"

Xu Ke took it for granted: "Of course, with a better script, fools don't need it!"

"Hahaha!" Li Liangjie laughed loudly, and said, "Zhang Xiao, if you get in touch with Director Xu a lot, you will find that he is not the kind of person who wants to save face. As long as it is helpful to the movie, he can give any opinion accept."

"By the way, what are you thinking about?"

Zhang Xiao replied with a smile: "Such a good script, such a good team, of course we are willing to accept it, but Reba?"

Xu Ke patted his thigh, and said happily: "That's really great. I've watched Reba's film and television works, and his acting skills are pretty good. There's no problem at all."

Reba looked at Zhang Xiao with eyes full of gratitude. She knew that she had never acted in a movie before, and the director would give her a supporting role when she acted in a movie for the first time. .

Yang Mi felt that Reba was a little nervous, patted the back of her hand, looked at Xu Ke and asked, "Director Xu, when will our "Flying Armor of the Dragon Gate" start?"

Xu Ke thought for a while, and said, "I've already completed the relevant preparations, and I can start the machine after a week. I estimate that the shooting cycle this time will take three to four months."

(End of this chapter)