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Chapter 141 Take Miss Sister to the Palace of Ming and Qing Dynasties!

"Slaying Wolf 2"!
After Wu Jing returned to the mainland to develop, the first notebook he saved!
Since the plot took place in Thailand and required cross-border filming, the filming did not start for a long time.

last life.

This movie was only released 15 years ago. Relying on the excellent performance of the previous "Wolf Warrior 1", Wu Jing's popularity soared, driving "Slaying the Wolf 2" to a box office of more than 5 million yuan.

But that's it, the plot of "Slaying the Wolf 2" is too thin, and now it is born early, it is impossible to get [-] million box office.

The reason why Wu Jing took out this notebook in advance was because he saw that "Tang Detective" was filming in Thailand, and the results exploded.

He was itching in his heart, thinking of finding an opportunity to make "Slaying the Wolf 2" as soon as possible.

Taking the opportunity of participating in "The Four Famous Catch", he took out the script last night and asked Fang Ziheng to read it for him.

To be honest, Fang Ziheng is very interested in "Slaying the Wolf 2".

Really interested!

The core of the movie tells the story of a policeman who endured humiliation and suffered cruel torture for his mission, and finally persisted in eliminating criminal organizations in one fell swoop.

The idea of ​​the story is very good. After people understand the outline of the story, they have the desire to continue watching.

But.. how to say it?

Wu Jing probably was influenced by gangster movies on Hong Kong Island, and the script he produced was endless, and the plot twists were too abrupt.

What was originally a good story has been abruptly turned into an action movie, which has exactly the same disadvantages as Hong Kong Island gangster movies!
After reading the script, Fang Ziheng's first thought was to revise it.

The script needs to be overhauled!

"Brother Jing, the beginning of the script won't work."

He opened the script, pointed to the first paragraph and said: "When the protagonist appears in the cell, he simply recalls that he is a policeman, which is very problematic.

At the very least, the protagonist's mission must be clarified through memory, or at the beginning of the chapter. I'm talking about clear missions! "

"Clarify the mission!"

Wu Jing froze for a moment, frowned and said, "Couldn't it be a task to bring out the villain later and explain the organ trade?"

"That's too superficial. In the later stage, criminal groups sell organs, which belongs to the category of plot stories!"

Fang Ziheng smiled, and dialed: "For example, when the protagonist is in a coma, he recalls the scene of accepting the task. The organization told him that there are many dangers. It is necessary to protect his own safety and fight crime. Criminals must be brought to justice!"

"This is called getting straight to the point, setting up a character for the confused protagonist, so that the audience has a more sense of substitution."

"You know, the identity of the protagonist Chen Zhijie is not an undercover agent, but a policeman who was discovered by a crime. He doesn't need to keep his identity secret. After he wakes up in prison, he even has to take the initiative to investigate the situation and wait for the opportunity."

"And at this time, he discovered the prison guard Achai!"

"In this way, the plot logic of the first half of the movie will be more reasonable, and it will also pave the way for the protagonist to rise up and resist!"

After Fang Ziheng finished speaking, he stopped talking to give Wu Jing room to think.

initiative!

Wait for the moment!

Wu Jing took a light breath and muttered to himself.

In the original plot, the protagonist Chen Zhijie has been passive in the early stage, but he was able to stand up to resist in the end because of problems within the criminal group, which gave him and A-Chai an opportunity.

If it follows the director's modification, it will become the protagonist who is shrewd and capable, nibbles away and disintegrates the criminal group little by little, and finally confronts the big villain Gao Jin head-on!
Such a change is tantamount to completely overturning his previous settings.

Is it really good?

For a moment, Wu Jing was puzzled!

Fang Ziheng sighed: "Brother Jing, I know what you think, you want to create a more powerful villain group, and deliberately suppressed the protagonist and Ah Chai in the early stage.

Wait until the later stage to highlight the difficulty of the protagonist's resistance, so as to show the last passionate high court! "

"That's right, director, that's what I think."

Wu Jing patted his thigh and grinned embarrassedly.

"No need!"

Fang Ziheng shook his head, pointing at the character Gao Jin: "This character's force value is enough to beat Chen Zhijie and A Chai. If the front is too hard on the two of them, in the end, the good guy wins the villain, it will be a plot kill!"

Drama kill!

Wu Jing exclaimed, staring in disbelief!
He is not a rookie, so he naturally knows the meaning of 'drama killing'.

Many films on Hong Kong Island do not have perfect scripts before filming starts, and the directors play freely during the filming process, often creating villains who are too strong, and the decent protagonists are unable to fight, and in the end they can only arrange plot-killing drama operations.

This kind of show operation, once or twice is fine, the audience will find it novel, and at most make complaints about it.

This is the case in every movie of Nima, it's no wonder the audience is not bored!
Over time, Hong Kong Island movies have become synonymous with no logic!

After the new century, there is a reason why Hong Kong films have been unable to open up the mainland market and attract audiences to the cinema.

In addition to the investment and production being too petty, and the actors being too stereotyped, the poor script is also a big reason.

"After so many years, plot killing has become the most rubbish ending method in film and television dramas."

Fang Ziheng turned to the end of the script, and smiled softly: "For example, this Gao Jin, even if he survived in the end, Chen Zhijie and Ah Chai were seriously injured and rushed to the hospital. He vomited blood and escaped, which would be more acceptable to the audience than the plot killing. association."

"I understand!"

"Director, thank you!"

Wu Jing turned the corner and solemnly thanked Fang Ziheng.

After being tapped by the master, he was looking back at the script of "Slaying the Wolf 2".

Full of loopholes!

No matter how you look at it, you feel twisted.

Fang Ziheng waved his hand and said sincerely: "Brother Jing, try to modify it first, and come to me directly if you need it."

"After the script is finalized, we are discussing cooperation!"

"no problem!"

Wu Jing patted his chest and smiled happily.

in the afternoon.

Fang Ziheng put down his work and went to the supermarket with Liu Qianqian.

The two wore thick down jackets, sunglasses, and scarves. They left the hotel and went straight to the Ming and Qing Palace in the film and television city.

Go to the supermarket!
What supermarket to go to, where can't I buy toiletries when I come back.

When they came to the Ming and Qing Palaces, Fang Ziheng spent money to buy tickets, and the two lined up to enter the palace gates like ordinary tourists.

The sun was just right at this time, and it was warm on the body.

The young lady stood in front, wearing a white down jacket. The long dress covered her knees, revealing a section of padded jeans underneath.

The little sister also wore a white woolen hat on her head, and there were two crystal pendants hanging on both sides of the hat.

Blown by the wind, the crystal pendant swayed back and forth, hitting her hair blown away by the wind back and forth.

Xu Shi waited for a long time, the young lady stomped her feet, took her hand out of her pocket and put it to her mouth to breathe.

While exhaling, he turned around and looked at Fang Ziheng.

"Hanhan, I'm cold"

"Hey, put your gloves on."

Fang Ziheng took off the shoulder bag on his shoulder, took out a pair of pink gloves, and handed it to the young lady with a smile.

"Sissy, do they know you're coming out?"

This they, of course, refers to Song Yi and Da Tiantian.

The three beauties established a preliminary friendship after shopping yesterday.

"know."

Liu Qianqian blinked, put on her gloves, and said with a smile, "Let me tell you, I almost couldn't get out. Da Tiantian bought two sets of toiletries and said he would send me one set."

"Oh, what did you say then?"

Fang Ziheng reached out to help her straighten the hat on her head, and asked with interest.

"I just said that I didn't bring a lot of things, so I have to go to the supermarket."

"Didn't they say they would go with you?"

"Of course I'm coming out after they go to the training."

(End of this chapter)