The Great Writers of Hogwarts

Chapter 4 Ten Years of Skill Breakdown

After Andre wrote JK Rowling's name, a line of ink quickly appeared on the parchment.

"This pseudonym has been protected, and no extraordinary power will be able to detect the host's information from this pseudonym."

"The host can currently protect the number of pseudonyms: 1/3."

Andre also let out a sigh of relief when he saw the information emerging on the parchment.

"There are still two pen names that can be protected, which will definitely be enough in a short time."

When all these preparatory work is over, it's time for him to actually start the adaptation of "Harry Potter".

With the rustling sound of the quill pen on the parchment, the black ink flowed out, and the distracting thoughts in the mind were also pulled away, leaving a quiet thought.

"J.K. Rowling's original version of Harry Potter is a fantasy work in reality, and she wants to show an imagined wizarding world for ordinary readers.

Therefore, the opening chapter she adopts does not directly start with the wizarding world, but starts from the Dursley family in the Muggle world, gradually laying the groundwork for the wizarding world, arousing readers' curiosity. "

"If this opening chapter is moved to the wizarding world for publication, I dare say that most readers will give up if they can't read a few lines, and they will never see Harry Potter and those secrets appearing. "

"After all, most wizards are not interested in Muggles at all, let alone endure a lengthy description of a Muggle family."

"So I had to modify the entry point of the opening chapter, using the night of Voldemort's failure as the background, to arouse the resonance of readers in the wizarding world.

The first character should also attract readers' attention and interest, and Dumbledore is a good choice.

Then we should put Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall, who only appeared in the second half of Chapter 1 of the original novel, in the front, and then put the part where the Dursleys appeared in the back..."

"As for the issue that the transition between these two parts may cause readers to lose, we can make a hook to arouse suspense and readers' curiosity..."

In this field related to creation, it is never the speed of coding that restricts the productivity of practitioners, but whether the thinking is smooth.

The thinking is smooth, even with paper and pen, you can write large paragraphs of text freely.And if the train of thought is blocked, even with expensive equipment, you can't wait to grab the ground with your head.

Fortunately, Andre's state today belongs to the former.

Inspiration burst out in his mind, and the words jumped out of his quill smoothly one by one.

The ink will flicker a little on the parchment, and spread a little at the edge of the text. Those spread ink dots are like fireworks, like carnival, like the meteor shower in the night sky all over the country on the night Voldemort failed, like flapping wings into A flock of owls...

The brush strokes of the quill describe the scene of the day when Voldemort disappeared, as if bringing people back to the day of universal celebration ten years ago,

After a description of the atmosphere that combines J.K. Rowling's original work and Andre's own play, Dumbledore's name is written on the tip of the quill.

Dumbledore took the lead in a street where Muggles lived, and met Professor McGonagall who was waiting here in the form of an Animagus. He also used a lamp extinguisher to extinguish the lights of the entire street very cautiously. It seems to be performing an extremely important and secret task.

As for the dialogue between Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall, Andre just changed the word order to adapt to the context, ensuring that the details and tone of their dialogue would not deviate from the original work—or, in other words, deviate from the magical world he was in. Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall.

Andre can be sure that the description so far is enough to arouse the curiosity of readers in the magic world.

Then it's time for something big.

The quill revealed on the parchment the reason why Dumbledore wanted to meet Professor McGonagall here, and also revealed the answer to the most concerned question in the wizarding world [Where did Harry Potter go].

"I came here to pick up Harry and send him to his aunts and uncles. They're his only family now."

click.

At this point, Andre's strokes came to an abrupt end.

The first part of Chapter 1 is completed here.

"Generally speaking, changes in perspective and characters in literary works will cause readers to lose.

Even with the refreshing style of the previous life's web articles, as long as you change the map or start writing the plot related to the supporting role, the data will definitely be lost.

But this is not an iron rule. If it is handled well and the sense of expectation is buried beautifully, readers can't wait to read it. "

Andre read what he had written from the beginning, and after correcting some typos and grammar mistakes, he nodded in satisfaction.

He felt that the handling of this part was quite neat and beautiful.

In the previous life, it would be the key to increasing the data.

"Then let the Dursleys appear on the stage, and it will be a success, and the readers in the wizarding world will also have a vague guess - this Muggle couple can't be Harry Potter's aunt and uncle?"

"They'll be shocked, they'll be skeptical, and they can't wait to read on to find out...

That's what I'm trying to achieve. "

Exhaling lightly, Andre squeezed his slightly sore fingers, and his mood became quite happy because of this proud stroke.

"The days of exchanges in the starting training class were really not in vain.

If you don't have ten years of broken chapter skills, you absolutely can't break it so just right. "

(End of this chapter)