A Perfect Life Beginning as a Light Novel Writer
Chapter 16 The first fan
Chapter 16 The First Fan
"interesting."
Ni Na changed her posture slightly to read the book.
Although she only read a few hundred words of the plot, the writing style of this Youth Journey gave her the feeling that it was slightly different from most popular love novels in Longguo.
To put it simply, girls' romance novels do pay more attention to the heroine's inner world, but generally speaking, they won't be written in such detail and written so frequently like this book.
If one is not done well, readers will feel that it is long-winded and the plot is redundant.
But Youth Journey can be said to be the inner monologue of the heroine Futaba. On the contrary, the description of the heroine is very hazy, indistinct, and unclear, but it allows you to establish a relatively clear image.
Ni Na admitted that the sense of substituting these words is indeed a little bit strong.
Obviously the text was just an understatement, "I waited at the agreed place all night at seven o'clock in the evening, but he didn't come." But it really made Ni Na feel a little uncomfortable.
A sentence of "I hate all the boys!" blurted out to the boring boys in the class, while protecting myself, it also hurt the person I like.
She thought about going to class the next day to apologize to Kou, but in fact, the reason why Kou agreed to meet her at seven o'clock tonight was to say goodbye to Futaba for the last time before transferring to another school.
If the night in the story did not come, there is no chance to apologize
Ni Na continued to read.
[I really, really like him, even now, he is a corner of my heart!I really want to go back to that time.]
The perspective jumps, switching from junior high school to the heroine Futaba's high school stage.
Learned the lesson of being isolated by girls because she was too weak and cute in junior high school. After high school, she hid her true nature, intentionally carefree, talked loudly, and ate too much. As long as she was not liked by boys, she would be liked by the girls in the class.
"It's so realistic." Ni Na sighed when she saw this.
The company she works in is also like this. She is beautiful and lively, and she dresses brightly every day. Women who are liked by male colleagues are mostly pointed at and ridiculed by other women behind their backs.
This heroine is so beautifully portrayed, this is high school.
read on.
In high school, I ran into the young boy I had a crush on in junior high school, the throb of passing by, and went to the place where I was sheltered from the rain to meet again, and the reunion in the sunset after three years.
In fact, from the perspective of the plot, it is not complicated. Even if you think about it carefully, the plot seems to be ordinary.
But this is the point of view of girls' love works. How can there be so many magnificent and earth-shattering love in this world? Most people's love is ordinary and sincere. The biggest point of this kind of work lies in the shaping of characters .
And Ni Na has seen the plot from the first word of Youth Journey Chapter 1 all the way to the present, it can be said that she has a strong sense of substitution.
The long-winded inner description in the text not only did not make her feel irritable like when she read similar novels before, but felt that the novel was written in water, but the sense of substitution became stronger.
When she saw the moment when Han and Futaba reunited in the rain shelter for the first time in the plot, Ni Na's heart began to jump for joy.
"Are you coming? An apology after three years, and a new start after three years."
Ni Na looked at it very seriously.
"After three years, let's have a long-lost reunion hug!" Seeing that the girl across from him finally recognized him, there was a gentle smile on his face as before.
"I don't want it, I don't want to hug anyone who talks like that."
"That's right. After all, you've hated men since before." Guang said with a smile in a calm and indifferent tone.
Ni Na felt sore in her heart.
How can it be calm?Maybe indifferent?
You still remember the fact that Futaba hates boys after three full years.
read on.
"Well, I have hated boys since before. But, you are an exception." Futaba was silent for a while, then looked at Guang and said calmly.
"Well, me too. I used to like you"
When Ni Na saw this, her eyes became very serious.
Although, but... the plot is so fast, but this novel is also too interesting.
Chapter 1 The hero and heroine confessed to each other?Still young what journey?The author's pen name is "Yuanqing", author sister, you really understand what our readers want to see.
What's so good about those books that have been serialized for several months, and the male and female protagonists haven't signed them?
But the plot quickly took a turn for the worse.
I thought that the two of them would tell each other their hearts, and it would be fine after the misunderstanding three years ago was resolved.
But Kou set the tone for the relationship between the two.
"Already, I can't go back anymore, everything has passed, everything has become a memory"
After the boy finished speaking, he left without looking back.
Seeing this, Ni Na felt unspeakably uncomfortable.
【Just as I have changed, the 洸 at that time has disappeared, and I will never return, that time is gone】
Chapter 1 of the novel ends with Futaba looking at Kou's back and a monologue ringing in her heart.
The content is close to [-] words, and Ni Na has finished reading it before she knows it.
now
There was a feeling of melancholy in her heart.
Futaba, Kou
"Why does this novel have such a strong sense of substitution? Is it because it suits my taste?"
After reading Chapter 1 of Journey of Youth, Ni Na suddenly felt a little empty in her heart.
Although I bought two periodical novels, I don't want to read the other novels in "Instant Youth" for the time being, and the same is true for "Red Maple".
I want to see the plot of Chapter 2 of this novel, however.
"We have to wait until Sunday! It's uncomfortable." Ni Na fell straight on the bed.
At this time, she suddenly remembered something, and hurriedly got up and took out the promotional poster of Youth Journey that was clipped in the book earlier.
In the scene where the boy and the girl look at each other, in the setting sun, Futaba is beautiful and weak, and Gaolang is handsome, but there is an inexplicable emotion in the eyes of the two of them staring at each other.
It was only after reading the novel that Ni Na saw this poster.
"The drawing is really good. This is Kou and Futaba!"
Unlike Wugan before, she likes this poster very much now.
After carefully reading the novel Chapter 1 of Youth Journey a few more times, Ni Na took out her mobile phone.
Logged in to the official website of Red Maple Literature, followed the prompts and clicked all the way, and finally, a pop-up window popped up on the phone page.
After entering the different genuine serial numbers on each genuine periodical
Another popup.
[Are you sure to vote for "Youth Journey"?Note: Each periodical has one and only one genuine serial number, and after entering the serial number for verification, only one novel can be voted for. 】
Ni Na nodded without hesitation.
And in the grading system that popped up later, she also gave the Youth Journey Chapter 1 novel without hesitation a perfect score of [-].
(End of this chapter)
"interesting."
Ni Na changed her posture slightly to read the book.
Although she only read a few hundred words of the plot, the writing style of this Youth Journey gave her the feeling that it was slightly different from most popular love novels in Longguo.
To put it simply, girls' romance novels do pay more attention to the heroine's inner world, but generally speaking, they won't be written in such detail and written so frequently like this book.
If one is not done well, readers will feel that it is long-winded and the plot is redundant.
But Youth Journey can be said to be the inner monologue of the heroine Futaba. On the contrary, the description of the heroine is very hazy, indistinct, and unclear, but it allows you to establish a relatively clear image.
Ni Na admitted that the sense of substituting these words is indeed a little bit strong.
Obviously the text was just an understatement, "I waited at the agreed place all night at seven o'clock in the evening, but he didn't come." But it really made Ni Na feel a little uncomfortable.
A sentence of "I hate all the boys!" blurted out to the boring boys in the class, while protecting myself, it also hurt the person I like.
She thought about going to class the next day to apologize to Kou, but in fact, the reason why Kou agreed to meet her at seven o'clock tonight was to say goodbye to Futaba for the last time before transferring to another school.
If the night in the story did not come, there is no chance to apologize
Ni Na continued to read.
[I really, really like him, even now, he is a corner of my heart!I really want to go back to that time.]
The perspective jumps, switching from junior high school to the heroine Futaba's high school stage.
Learned the lesson of being isolated by girls because she was too weak and cute in junior high school. After high school, she hid her true nature, intentionally carefree, talked loudly, and ate too much. As long as she was not liked by boys, she would be liked by the girls in the class.
"It's so realistic." Ni Na sighed when she saw this.
The company she works in is also like this. She is beautiful and lively, and she dresses brightly every day. Women who are liked by male colleagues are mostly pointed at and ridiculed by other women behind their backs.
This heroine is so beautifully portrayed, this is high school.
read on.
In high school, I ran into the young boy I had a crush on in junior high school, the throb of passing by, and went to the place where I was sheltered from the rain to meet again, and the reunion in the sunset after three years.
In fact, from the perspective of the plot, it is not complicated. Even if you think about it carefully, the plot seems to be ordinary.
But this is the point of view of girls' love works. How can there be so many magnificent and earth-shattering love in this world? Most people's love is ordinary and sincere. The biggest point of this kind of work lies in the shaping of characters .
And Ni Na has seen the plot from the first word of Youth Journey Chapter 1 all the way to the present, it can be said that she has a strong sense of substitution.
The long-winded inner description in the text not only did not make her feel irritable like when she read similar novels before, but felt that the novel was written in water, but the sense of substitution became stronger.
When she saw the moment when Han and Futaba reunited in the rain shelter for the first time in the plot, Ni Na's heart began to jump for joy.
"Are you coming? An apology after three years, and a new start after three years."
Ni Na looked at it very seriously.
"After three years, let's have a long-lost reunion hug!" Seeing that the girl across from him finally recognized him, there was a gentle smile on his face as before.
"I don't want it, I don't want to hug anyone who talks like that."
"That's right. After all, you've hated men since before." Guang said with a smile in a calm and indifferent tone.
Ni Na felt sore in her heart.
How can it be calm?Maybe indifferent?
You still remember the fact that Futaba hates boys after three full years.
read on.
"Well, I have hated boys since before. But, you are an exception." Futaba was silent for a while, then looked at Guang and said calmly.
"Well, me too. I used to like you"
When Ni Na saw this, her eyes became very serious.
Although, but... the plot is so fast, but this novel is also too interesting.
Chapter 1 The hero and heroine confessed to each other?Still young what journey?The author's pen name is "Yuanqing", author sister, you really understand what our readers want to see.
What's so good about those books that have been serialized for several months, and the male and female protagonists haven't signed them?
But the plot quickly took a turn for the worse.
I thought that the two of them would tell each other their hearts, and it would be fine after the misunderstanding three years ago was resolved.
But Kou set the tone for the relationship between the two.
"Already, I can't go back anymore, everything has passed, everything has become a memory"
After the boy finished speaking, he left without looking back.
Seeing this, Ni Na felt unspeakably uncomfortable.
【Just as I have changed, the 洸 at that time has disappeared, and I will never return, that time is gone】
Chapter 1 of the novel ends with Futaba looking at Kou's back and a monologue ringing in her heart.
The content is close to [-] words, and Ni Na has finished reading it before she knows it.
now
There was a feeling of melancholy in her heart.
Futaba, Kou
"Why does this novel have such a strong sense of substitution? Is it because it suits my taste?"
After reading Chapter 1 of Journey of Youth, Ni Na suddenly felt a little empty in her heart.
Although I bought two periodical novels, I don't want to read the other novels in "Instant Youth" for the time being, and the same is true for "Red Maple".
I want to see the plot of Chapter 2 of this novel, however.
"We have to wait until Sunday! It's uncomfortable." Ni Na fell straight on the bed.
At this time, she suddenly remembered something, and hurriedly got up and took out the promotional poster of Youth Journey that was clipped in the book earlier.
In the scene where the boy and the girl look at each other, in the setting sun, Futaba is beautiful and weak, and Gaolang is handsome, but there is an inexplicable emotion in the eyes of the two of them staring at each other.
It was only after reading the novel that Ni Na saw this poster.
"The drawing is really good. This is Kou and Futaba!"
Unlike Wugan before, she likes this poster very much now.
After carefully reading the novel Chapter 1 of Youth Journey a few more times, Ni Na took out her mobile phone.
Logged in to the official website of Red Maple Literature, followed the prompts and clicked all the way, and finally, a pop-up window popped up on the phone page.
After entering the different genuine serial numbers on each genuine periodical
Another popup.
[Are you sure to vote for "Youth Journey"?Note: Each periodical has one and only one genuine serial number, and after entering the serial number for verification, only one novel can be voted for. 】
Ni Na nodded without hesitation.
And in the grading system that popped up later, she also gave the Youth Journey Chapter 1 novel without hesitation a perfect score of [-].
(End of this chapter)
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