A Perfect Life Beginning as a Light Novel Writer

Chapter 243 Comments
Also, why can't I be with my dad when I have a boyfriend? Is there any inevitable connection or conflict between my boyfriend and my dad?

Li Zeliang is relatively simple.

After all, graphic novels, animations and other works are not realistic literature, even two-dimensional works on the plane of Dragon Kingdom, basically there will be no plot of abusive masters.

In addition, the preconceived idea is too deep. From Chapter 1 of this manga to the present, he always thought that Natsuki and his father were the real father-daughter relationship.
But this can’t be blamed on Li Zeliang. In the parallel world, there are also a lot of fans of Initial D. I don’t know how many teenagers saw the plot of Xia Shu and his father as the daily plot of warm father and daughter when they watched the animation of Initial D .
So Xia Yan also considered this situation. In order not to misunderstand his fans, he added an extra scene in the comics.

This plot was originally about Xia Shu's relationship with Tu Hai warming up, and feeling that he and his godfather's underground relationship was sorry for Tu Hai, so he took the initiative to show his cards and chose to break up with his godfather.

But in the Longguo version of this plot, Xia Yan added a scene where Xia Shu's former godfather kissed Xia Shu for the last time when the two parted in the parking lot for the last time.

This scene.
It happened to be seen by Tu Hai who just came to the parking lot
A dozen or 20 meters away, the girl I like kisses a middle-aged rich man in his 40s who drives a Mercedes-Benz at a place I don't know.
Li Zeliang is as confused as Tu Hai in the comics.

What the hell is this?

But what Li Zeliang didn't expect was that the angle of view of the comic storyboard changed again, and he came to Baishi who was studying in a certain villa.

In the animation version of the initial D in the parallel world, there is no name who sent a note to the protagonist in this plot to make a small report to expose Natsuki, but in the manga, there is a direct statement
Xia Shu and Shiraishi were good girlfriends in junior high school, and Xia Shu's rich godfather is the father of his best friend Shiraishi.
In order to take revenge on Natsuki, a friend who made her family a mess, Shiraishi exposed the matter between Natsuki and his father to Natsuki's favorite boy, Tu Hai, for the purpose of revenge.
In the Longguo version of the manga, Xia Yan presents this plot to the manga readers through Baishi's memories later on.
At this time, Li Zeliang opened his mouth wide.
Xia Shu and her father are not a father-daughter relationship, but a mistress and nurturing relationship?
Li Zeliang was completely dumbfounded. This story only had less than ten pages of comics to shape Li Zeliang's outlook on life, values, and worldview.

This... what is this?
The protagonist Tu Haihe. He is so pitiful.
It's even more heartbreaking to kill someone!

This is the relationship between the girl he likes behind his back and Uncle Mercedes.
He also saw it with his own eyes.

Who can stand this?
In the last scene of the manga in this chapter, Tu Hai left the parking lot with anger in his eyes, and drove directly to Chicheng.

Originally, he was still hesitating whether to go to Chicheng to compete with Jing Yi, but now, there was an indelible anger in his heart.

The last shot of this chapter of the manga is the picture of 86 disappearing in the street
Li Zeliang lost his mind and put down the Beizhou comic journal in his hand.

Ah.
Ha ha
His memory is very good, from the manga Chapter 1 to the present, most of the scenes can be recalled.

In Chapter 1, Xia Shu was surprised when Tu Hai only got so little money working at a gas station for a month.
And later, every time Natsuki and Tu Hai go on a date, they have to go to their father's scene.
uncomfortable ah! ! ! !

Li Ze is so angry, he was confused by this plot.

Why, why did you arrange this plot?
Li Zeliang clicked on his own Xia Yan fan group, and the comment section of the Xia Yan creator account on the Nine Heavens Forum.

"Teacher Xia Yan, why are you doing this?"

"Natsuki, my Natsuki has been destroyed."

"I feel sorry for Tu Hai."

"In the two-dimensional world, the plot of Mr. Xia Yan's chapter is quite explosive."

"I've been reading comics for more than [-] years, and this is the first time I've seen a comic author dare to create a plot where the heroine is the mistress."

"Actually, I think it's okay. Anyway, I read this manga because of the protagonist Tu Hai's cool car skills, so I didn't like Natsuki."

"Didn't Wu Lei say something in the early stage of this comic? Racers don't need women. From Wu Lei to Chi Gu, to Zeng Zhi and now Tu Hai, there are always characters in this comic who want to fall in love. It all ended tragically."

"I'm really uncomfortable, but it's not easy to scold. After all, he is Teacher Xia Yan. The plot is arranged in this way, and I worry that there will be foreshadowing in the future, and I will slap myself in the face."

"What kind of foreshadowing can there be? Xia Shu even kissed that Mercedes-Benz man, is there still a foreshadowing?"

"My goddess Xia Shu, why did this happen all of a sudden. I'm still looking forward to the sugary plot in this comic after Xia Shu and Tu Hai formally date."

"Stop being sugary, Tu Hai hastened to cut off the relationship with Xia Shu. If Tu Hai can forgive Xia Shu, I will definitely not be able to read this manga."

"Actually, have you read the initial D and haven't seen what this comic draws? On the surface, the racing cars are drawn, but in fact they are all depicting the inner growth process of the protagonist Tu Hai. Teacher Xia Yan probably wants to focus on portraying Let’s take a look at the psychological growth process of the protagonist Tu Hai.”

"I'm serious, that is, the author is Xia Yan. For the sake of Moyuan and Sword Art Online, I can't help but not complain about him. For other cartoonists, I will call the fan group to comment on the author. The area is broken."

"You can bear it, but I can't bear it. I think the plot of Mr. Xia Yan is a failure, and it is the biggest plot mistake in the work of Initial D. This plot vividly talks about a manga of Fengshen falling into the altar."

"That's right, a cartoon in which the main character is greened is too much. No matter how powerful the car racing plot is, it can't hide the fact that Tu Hai is greened."

"Well, is there a possibility that Xia Shu and her godfather met first, and then Tu Hai was the third party who intervened in her life with her godfather. Think about it carefully, the godfather took money to support Xia Shu, but Xia Shu But Shu took the opportunity to have a secret affair with Tu Hai, a fresh meat. To be precise, the person who was greened should be the Mercedes-Benz male godfather, right?"

"That's right, isn't the godfather the most hurt in this relationship? The money was spent, but the girl's heart is not with him, so she still wants to break up with him."

"Wuuuuuuuuuuuu, I feel a little sympathetic to Xia Shu's godfather."

"."

"It seems true. Strictly speaking, Tu Hai is the third party between Godfather and Xia Shu."

"And the plot of this chapter, it's really timely. The protagonist Tu Hai just saw the scene where the girl he likes kisses the Mercedes-Benz guy and is about to go to Chicheng for a competition. I'm so worried about Tu Hai's mental state."

"Damn it, Teacher Xia Yan is out of control again."

The plot of the latest chapter of Initial D, one stone caused a thousand waves, and fans of Initial D's comics were not confused after watching this plot.

But after all, Xia Yan's fan group has a complex composition, including fans of novels, comics, and animation. Although the fans of comics responded strongly, the trend of vigorously complaining about Xia Yan on a large scale has not formed.

Xia Yan spent the whole day at home watching the comments on his creator account, and was relieved to see that he was only slightly sprayed on the whole.

Although fans of the manga have opinions on the plot, when it comes to the popularity of readers' comments on the Internet, I haven't seen a few people threaten to give up the manga.

It can only be said that this plot is indeed challenging the limit of readers' patience, but it has not really pierced it.

"It seems to be okay." Mo Ran also looked nervously at the comment area of ​​her own creator account tonight.

Basically no one complained about her, it was all remarks asking her to work hard.

She is just a cute girl in charge of painting, and fans are still very sensible to her.

"It can only be said that the comic fans in Longguo are quite tolerant." Xia Yan laughed.

He also knew that after this plot was serialized, it would definitely be criticized by fans.

The plot of Xia Shu and Mercedes-Benz is an extremely important plot of the protagonist Tu Hai's inner transformation and growth in the comic work of Initial D.

Because after seeing the picture of liking girls as mistresses, in the duel with Jing Yi under anger, the 86 car exploded and lost.

This episode made Tu Hai finally understand what racing means to him?
Xia Yan can delete this plot, but in that case, Xia Yan feels that it is a choice to lose points.

after all
Even in the parallel world, so many Initial D fans are spreading the word about Mercedes climbing a tree, and few people don't read Initial D because of this plot.

In other words, the initial D can maintain its popularity for so many years, thanks to the various stem sentences composed of Mercedes-Benz, Natsuki, 86, and the vocabulary of these works.

In the process of manga serialization, this plot may be questioned by fans.

But what about when the initial D was born in the Dragon Kingdom a few years, or even ten years later?
There is a high probability that this plot will become a meme like a parallel world, so that the popularity of the work of Initial D in Dragon Kingdom will never fade.

Of course, Xia Yan will definitely not copy it directly. For example, in the original manga, the protagonist Tu Hai really forgave Xia Shu later, and the two continued to date for a while, knowing that Xia Shu was going to leave Qiu Mingshan to pursue her ideal life. Only when two people stick together can they break up
Even Xia Yan couldn't accept this plot, let alone Long Guo's comic fans.

So for the follow-up plot, Xia Yan's approach is to refer to the approach of the initial D in the movie version in the parallel world. After the protagonist Tu Hai clears up his inner confusion, he completely cuts off his relationship with Xia Shu, and concentrates on racing from then on.
The next day, inside the Beizhou Comics Club, the operator received complaint calls from various fans in the early morning, complaining that the editors of the comics club did not do anything, and that Mr. Xia Yan let himself go to make a show. Give him advice and brake decisively.

Because Xia Yan has moved them too much in the past, most fans are still very patient with Xia Yan, and will not yell at them just because a chapter of the manga makes them uncomfortable.

But for the staff of Beizhou Comic Club, the attitude is different.

Many people in the editorial department and the brokerage department are having a headache today.

But wait until the voting data of each work in this issue of the journal is released
Initial D still ranks first in the journal with 3236598 votes. Not only has the number of reader votes not decreased, but it has even increased by tens of thousands of votes compared to the previous issue.
Both the editorial department and the agent department laughed out loud, letting go of the stone in their hearts.

Data represents everything. If readers are really unhappy with the plot, it is difficult to accept.Then the number of votes for Initial D in this issue must have plummeted.

But soon, the smiles on their faces disappeared again, because they remembered the comic plot in the next chapter of Initial D.

The plot of the initial D manga is not only in this chapter, but also in the next chapter.
Qiu Mingshan Rider lost on the Akagi Mountain Road!

"These fans are superficially blasphemy, but they voted honestly."

"No way, just like my own son, even if it makes you angry occasionally, can you really deny him?"

"Looking at the situation, the plot of this week has been muddled, and the next week's plot will be the plot of Qiu Mingshan's ae86, the plot of defeat"

"Oh, Mr. Yuanqing is just too capricious. Our editorial department has communicated with him many times, and told him that in the manga plot, Natsuki is the mistress and the protagonist Tu Hai fails. The risk of the plot is too great. Creation. But Teacher Yuanqing ignored it!"

"I don't know if the defeat of 86 will lead to a wave of fans abandoning this work. Anyway, the risk of this plot is too great, alas."

"Young people always have various ideas."

"The main reason is that he didn't sign a long-term contract with our comic agency, so he can create whatever he wants. How can those long-term comic artists do this? The plot creation must first respect the opinions of the comic agency, or you will be stuck with the contract every minute."

"This is the privilege and self-confidence of a genius! Even as the current ace work of our comic agency, which has increased the sales volume of our comic agency's periodicals from 1300 million to 1450 million, he can create whatever he wants. It doesn’t matter if a plot may cause initial D’s word of mouth to collapse.”

"After all, the current situation is that our comic club cannot do without him, and Xia Yan, he can write novels if he doesn't draw comics. He can't continue to write novels. He still has his own animation company. There are many ways to retreat. Naturally, he can create his own My favorite comics. From this point of view, I am quite envious of Xia Yan, a young man."

The entire Longguo comics world was completely disturbed by the plot of the latest chapter of Initial D in one day.

Discussions about the plot of Initial D are everywhere in major forums.

Comics fans suppress their outrage.

On the other hand, Xia Yan's novel fans and animation fans got the news one after another after the matter fermented for a day.

The protagonist of the Initial D manga is covered in green.

This plot.
Let the fans of Sword Art Online novels rejoice.

They all left happy messages on the official website of Beizhou Comics Club.

"Fortunately, the plot of our Sword Art Online novel is very stable, and it is a true pure love novel. A moment of silence for fans of Initial D comics."

As the author, Xia Yan, saw the speeches of these Sword Art Online fans, and he had a strange expression.
It's too early to be happy.

Not to mention other works, at least Initial D and Sword Art Online.
In the field of tauren, they are brothers and sisters.

Although Xia Yan will greatly delete or downplay the plot of Xuxiang's coveting of Asuna when he serializes the alo chapter, trying to make the readers less uncomfortable, but...
The protagonist's wife's soul has been imprisoned by a perverted man for several months. Even if Xia Yan doesn't describe anything, readers will definitely not feel better.

Now Sword Art Online fans laugh at Initial D fans, after a while, I'm afraid the situation will be reversed again.

　I coded this out before twelve o'clock, nearly [-] characters. Let me see, if I can code [-] characters tomorrow, I will make up for what I owed yesterday.

　　
　
(End of this chapter)