A Perfect Life Beginning as a Light Novel Writer

Chapter 5 Good Starts and Alumni
Xia Yan finally waited until she finished watching the plot of Chapter 1, what did she think she would say?
Unexpectedly, Tang Yin grabbed the manuscript of Chapter 2 and read it without saying a word.

At this time, Xia Yan almost realized something, and the tension in his heart gradually disappeared.

If you think it's boring, you won't waste such a long time, right?
the other side.

Another person waiting outside the reception room, the girl in red sportswear who entered the Hongfeng Literature office building from the elevator with Xia Yan
It has been the 100th time that I have looked at the frosted glass shadow in the reception room.

Through the light and shadow of the frosted glass, you can see the reflection of the conversation between the boy and the woman who entered the room before. It has been going on since 10 minutes ago, and it is still chattering now.

He has been in for half an hour.

The girl in the red sportswear took off the mask on her face for ventilation, revealing a beautiful and delicate face.

Small nose, cherry-colored lips, pupils as clear as spring water, and fair and smooth skin that was a little red from being covered in the mask for too long.

"What work did he bring?" The girl looked curious.

She also understands very well that if the boy's work is not interesting, the editors in it will not waste such a long time with him.

But then, she felt uneasy in her heart.

The longer she waits, the more she will think wildly. She has already rehearsed more than a dozen scenes in her mind where her work will be slammed by the review editors inside.

"So, your problem is that you give too much space to Futaba's text description. Obviously, the two main characters of Youth Journey are Futaba and Han, but where is your detailed description of Han? I read the novel through Chapter three Futaba is sensitive, afraid of getting hurt, likes Kou, and hopes to bring time back to three years ago, and connect with Kouu with the image of a cute girl who once had a broken relationship."

"Where is he? A mysterious boy? I only have a very vague concept of him. I can't describe his appearance, height, and interpersonal relationship with classmates. Is there any double-standard behavior towards the heroine Futaba and other girls? These details are very important. Yes, it’s true that the main body of teenage romance novels is the heroine, but if the portrayal of the heroine is not clear enough, don’t expect the readers of the journal to have a deep sense of substitution.”

Tang Yin criticized Xia Yan's manuscript, and Xia Yan shrugged and accepted suggestions and criticisms humbly.

"Here, here, here, here... and here, give Guang a little more room to play, and also, appropriately expand the plot of the boudoir girlfriends around Futaba. Seriously, these girlfriends can draw hatred."

"After revising these parts, tomorrow, the day after tomorrow at the latest, come to me directly with the manuscript. This is my business card and call me directly when the time comes." Tang Yin took out a business card from her pocket and handed it to Xia Yan.

"I'll accept your submission first. Remember to contact me directly after the article is revised. Don't go to other bookstores to try your luck. Novels about girls' love are the main themes of our Hongfeng Literature novels. So coming to our company as the first stop to submit a manuscript must have done your homework." Tang Yin finally said in a slightly soft voice.

"Then this is me?" Xia Yan asked one more time.

"At least this work has passed the test with me." Tang Yin stroked the hair beside her ear.

"Three days later, our company will hold a regular meeting to discuss the number of vacancies for some completed novels in the company's novel periodical, so your revised version of the novel manuscript must be handed over to me the day after tomorrow."

Tang Yin's words were obvious.
She thinks that the novel manuscript of Journey of Youth has potential, but she can't give a clear answer whether it can be serialized in Hongfeng Literature's fiction journal, or which journal can be serialized. This kind of thing needs to be edited Departmental meetings to discuss.

The success or failure of this kind of thing, to Xia Yan, is only related to whether there is a manuscript fee, but to Hongfeng Literature, the serialization of each work is not a small matter, it is related to the company's reputation in the hearts of novel fans.We have to check carefully, it is impossible for one or two grassroots editors to have the right to make decisions.

"clear."

Xia Yan was overjoyed. Passing the review and editing process meant that the work would be submitted to the serialization meeting. This situation went smoothly beyond imagination.

But Tang Yin told him not to submit the manuscript to other book clubs, but to submit it to her immediately after revising the manuscript.
Xia Yan thought for a while, took a deep breath, then nodded, exchanged a few words with Tang Yin, and left the reception room.

At this moment.
The girl in red who had been waiting outside for Xia Yansi for 10 minutes, wearing a mask, passed Xia Yan who was about to leave the reception room.

When the girl passed by, she looked carefully at Xia Yan's face.

She walked into the reception room, and of course, she must have taken off her mask out of politeness.

After all, she wears a mask just because she is worried that acquaintances will see her contribute and spread some gossip in school.

"Song Lingyun, right? I'm editor Tang Yin." Tang Yin looked at the information Song Lingyun had filled out before, and then looked at her.

Creator of beautiful girl novels. Rare animals!

"The two are in front of each other, and they are also a student of Nancheng No. [-] Middle School." Tang Yin had a strange expression.

"You know Xia Yan, did you come together?"

"Xia Yan? Who is it?" Song Lingyun blinked and asked in a cold voice.

"Well, I don't know you! Then forget what I just said." Tang Yin coughed.

But the speaker has no intention, and the listener has a heart.

Song Lingyun's eyes pondered.

Another student from Nancheng No.[-] Middle School
Xia Yan? .
Song Lingyun took another look at the text information on the first page of the stack of novel manuscripts on Tang Yin's desk.

【Journey of Youth Works by Xia Yan】

Thinking about it, Song Lingyun basically figured out the meaning of Tang Yin's previous words.

Is that so, is he an alumnus?

The corner of Song Lingyun's mouth curled up slightly. She was also worried that mere high school students who did not go to study, but submitted light novels would be criticized for not doing their job properly, so she wore a mask to submit the manuscript, worried that she would be recognized by acquaintances.

but at least now i know
It turned out that there was another idler in the school.

What a coincidence.

Hmm. Journey of Youth, is this the novel he came to contribute?That name sucks.

"Yesterday's starlight."

Tang Yin took the manuscript of the novel handed over by Song Lingyun, and she felt awkward when she saw the name of the novel.

But she didn't say much. After all, Tang Yin knew that her taste did not represent the general public. Although she didn't like it, it didn't mean there was something wrong with the title.

And after careful review of the manuscript
Tang Yin's expression gradually changed
It was another 7-minute manuscript review, she raised her head, and she looked more serious than before, both with a good expression and a good attitude towards Song Lingyun.

The novel is also quite interesting.

Didn't this Nancheng No. [-] Middle School pay much attention on weekdays?Why is this school full of potential novel writers among its students?
Xia Yan walked out of the Hongfeng Literature office building, looked at the office buildings where the other four bookstores were located, and sighed, but gave up the idea of ​​submitting more than one manuscript.

Tang Yin had already said that he would submit the work of Journey of Youth to the meeting to decide whether to serialize it, and told him not to vote for other companies, and Xia Yan also personally agreed to Tang Yin on the spot.

The most important thing is that Tang Yin also tried her best to point out some flaws in Xia Yan's article in the previous conversation, and expressed her willingness to cooperate. You can think about other weird operations later. Xia Yan hasn't practiced that yet. Kind of cheeky.

And he thought about it. It is true that Red Maple Literature is among the five large-scale novel publishing houses in Nancheng, the company that is most suitable for girls' romance novels like Youth Journey.

Just... no more adventures!That's great. If Tang Yin's serialization proposal at the meeting fails, Xia Yan will submit another article, and it will only delay a few days.

It was already noon. Xia Yan stopped thinking about it and took the bus home.

　During the new book period, please vote for me if you have votes. If you have any problems with the plot, you can tell me, and the author will listen to the opinions.You can also say what works you like, and if appropriate, the author can add it to the plot of the book.

　　What's more, everyone should try not to keep books. The latest chapters of the novel can't be read, and the starting point is not recommended. It's miserable.

　　


(End of this chapter)