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Chapter 105 It's Very Blue
Chapter 105 It's Very Blue
"I was actually writing a novel just now. Since you are an old bookworm, why don't you help me read the beginning and give your opinion?"
Xia Chengye put the densely written paper in front of Jiang Yan.
"Okay."
Jiang Yan said that he was worrying about how to pass the time when he was bored, and happened to read what novel Xia Chengye wrote.
"Chapter 1, The Demon King Comes! "
"The title is quite satisfactory." Jiang Yan commented.
At the beginning of the novel written by Xia Chengye, it tells the story of the protagonist named Ye Xuan waking up after sleeping for a thousand years, and then returning to the city for revenge.
"Gao Zhanpeng, your ancestors killed my whole family back then. My parents were tortured and imprisoned in a pigsty before they died. Fortunately, I escaped and survived!"
"You will pay for this debt on behalf of your ancestors. One hundred thousand black armored soldiers obey the order and kill me!"
Ye Xuan Jie Jie Jie let out a piercing smile, and everyone in the Gao family compound knelt down and begged for mercy.
"Ye Yexuan, it was my ancestor who killed your whole family back then, so don't care about our business!"
Jiang Yan no longer had the desire to let Jiang Yan watch it, seeing Jiang Yan's blood pressure soared.
"How about it?"
Xia Chengye asked expectantly.
Jiang Yan took a deep breath.
"you"
"You write well!"
Jiang Yan said euphemistically.
High EQ: You write well.
Low EQ: What did you write!
"I think it's good too, why don't you give me your opinion?" Xia Chengye felt good about himself.
Seeing that Jiang Yan hadn't spoken for a long time, Xia Chengye smiled.
Could it be that his writing is so good that even Jiang Yan, an old bookworm, can't make any mistakes?
I really am a genius!
"Why did the protagonist wake up after sleeping for thousands of years? Since he is burdened with blood and deep hatred, he should immediately go to Gao's family to take revenge after becoming a strong man, so that readers will enjoy watching it."
Jiang Yan wanted to complain so much that he didn't know where to start.
"Jiang Yan, you don't understand this, right? I am foreshadowing. Ye Xuan didn't take revenge immediately because the exercises he obtained are very special."
"Many great writers have written like this!"
Xia Chengye talked eloquently.
Jiang Yan: "."
"No matter how good and exciting the foreshadowing is, do you think readers will have the patience to continue reading?" Jiang Yan questioned his soul.
"This"
Xia Chengye scratched his head.
"Should be?" Xia Chengye said uncertainly.
"Remove the should and add a no in front!"
Jiang Yan corrected Xia Chengye's words.
"Also, do you think it's cool for the protagonist to kill the reader with the villain who killed his parents, or does it look cool for the reader when the protagonist kills the villain's offspring after the villain is old and dead?"
Jiang Yan continued.
hiss--
Xia Chengye gasped.
"Let me tell you how to write it. The protagonist's family was slaughtered by the villain. A mysterious strong man passed by and saw that the protagonist was a rare cultivation genius. He rescued the protagonist at a critical moment. The protagonist worships the mysterious strong man as his teacher. After returning from school, he happened to meet When the villain's son gets married, the bride is the protagonist's childhood sweetheart!"
Jiang Yan took a sip of water to moisten his throat.
"The protagonist's childhood sweetheart is unwilling to marry the villain's son. Due to family pressure, he is forced to commit suicide to keep his innocence. Villain, you have to torture it slowly so that you can write a long story!"
Jiang Yan didn't forget to tell him, so he just started out casually.
Xia Chengye who was sitting next to him was dumbfounded!
"Jiang Yan, you are too good, have you written a novel before?"
Xia Chengye stuttered when he spoke.
After listening to Jiang Yan's words, Xia Chengye suddenly realized, and then looked at the beginning of his writing.
What kind of rubbish is this!
"It's natural to see more." Jiang Yan said modestly.
"You don't know a little, you know too much!"
Xia Chengye's eyes worshiped.
"Jiang Yan, teach me how to write novels!"
[Ding——Congratulations to the host for unlocking the achievements of famous teachers and outstanding apprentices! 】
Famous teachers make great apprentices?
"System, what's the use of a famous teacher producing a high-achieving apprentice?" Jiang Yan communicated with the system.
[The achievements of famous teachers can improve the host's comprehension ability in the professional field. 】
"understood!"
Jiang Yan nodded. Now that he is 60 in the field of literature, if he trains Xia Chengye to become a novelist, his attainments in the field of literature will improve.
Thinking of this, Jiang Yan looked at Xia Chengye with serious eyes.
"Are you sure you want me to teach you how to write novels?"
Jiang Yan said.
"Sure!" Xia Chengye nodded like a chicken pecking at rice.
A few random words from Jiang Yan benefited him a lot, so it is better to let Jiang Yan teach himself than to write scribbles without knowing anything.
"Tear up the beginning of your writing."
"What I just said was the beginning of a novel that is very popular in the market. Now I will teach you another way of starting a novel."
Jiang Yan spoke slowly, while Xia Chengye took notes seriously.
"Supporting characters are very important. A bright and interesting character will make readers remember this character."
Jiang Yan glanced at the time, it was 11:30.
"That's all for today. I have a premonition that I will be sick in the afternoon and I will take two days off. I will teach you when I recover."
Xia Chengye: "???"
It's okay to predict in advance that you will be sick in the afternoon!
"Teacher, can I start writing now and publish it on Tianxing Novel Network?"
Xia Chengye asked respectfully.
"You can write the beginning, but don't rush to release it. When I am satisfied with the beginning, I will release it." Jiang Yan was about to drink water to moisten his throat, Xia Chengye quickly unscrewed the bottle cap and handed it over.
"I know teacher, I will send it to you as soon as I finish writing the beginning."
"Well, remember what I taught you, don't memorize it by rote, the key is to apply what you have learned."
Before Jiang Yan left, Xia Chengye and Xia Chengye added contact information to each other.
In the afternoon, I will take a plane to Suzhou City to record "The King of Masked Singer". It takes two days to go back and forth, and it is relatively easy to ask for leave from university.
Although the instructor was very dissatisfied with Jiang Yan's behavior of asking for leave immediately after school started, his mother did not say much as a cover.
Sitting on the plane from Yanjing to Suzhou, Jiang Yan looked at the blue screen in front of him.
【Age: 18】
【Appearance: 100】
【Physical Strength: 70】
【Literature: 63】
【Music: 70】
【Comprehensive: 321】
After unlocking the achievements of famous teachers and outstanding apprentices, Jiang Yan taught Xia Chengye for a whole morning, and the field of literature increased from 60 to 63.
In addition, Jiang Yan's physical strength has also increased from 40 to 70, because with the energy drink Jiang Yan can exercise desperately, and there is no need to worry about excessive exercise causing damage to the body.
[Ding, congratulations to the host for triggering the task. 】
[The second issue of "The King of Masked Singer" is fully voted, reward: a silver treasure chest! 】
"Did it pass with all the votes?"
"The King of Masked Singer" had a total of [-] viewers, which meant that Jiang Yan had to get all the viewers to vote for him in order to complete the task released by the system.
"System, what will happen if you can't complete the task?"
Jiang Yan was not only a little curious.
[There is no penalty! 】
"That's all right."
Jiang Yan breathed a sigh of relief, but the silver treasure chest is still very attractive, but the task of getting a full ticket is a bit too harsh.
There were [-] spectators at the scene, and Jiang Yan didn't satisfy everyone with a hundred yuan bill.
The difficulty of this task can be described in four words.
Very blue!
(End of this chapter)
"I was actually writing a novel just now. Since you are an old bookworm, why don't you help me read the beginning and give your opinion?"
Xia Chengye put the densely written paper in front of Jiang Yan.
"Okay."
Jiang Yan said that he was worrying about how to pass the time when he was bored, and happened to read what novel Xia Chengye wrote.
"Chapter 1, The Demon King Comes! "
"The title is quite satisfactory." Jiang Yan commented.
At the beginning of the novel written by Xia Chengye, it tells the story of the protagonist named Ye Xuan waking up after sleeping for a thousand years, and then returning to the city for revenge.
"Gao Zhanpeng, your ancestors killed my whole family back then. My parents were tortured and imprisoned in a pigsty before they died. Fortunately, I escaped and survived!"
"You will pay for this debt on behalf of your ancestors. One hundred thousand black armored soldiers obey the order and kill me!"
Ye Xuan Jie Jie Jie let out a piercing smile, and everyone in the Gao family compound knelt down and begged for mercy.
"Ye Yexuan, it was my ancestor who killed your whole family back then, so don't care about our business!"
Jiang Yan no longer had the desire to let Jiang Yan watch it, seeing Jiang Yan's blood pressure soared.
"How about it?"
Xia Chengye asked expectantly.
Jiang Yan took a deep breath.
"you"
"You write well!"
Jiang Yan said euphemistically.
High EQ: You write well.
Low EQ: What did you write!
"I think it's good too, why don't you give me your opinion?" Xia Chengye felt good about himself.
Seeing that Jiang Yan hadn't spoken for a long time, Xia Chengye smiled.
Could it be that his writing is so good that even Jiang Yan, an old bookworm, can't make any mistakes?
I really am a genius!
"Why did the protagonist wake up after sleeping for thousands of years? Since he is burdened with blood and deep hatred, he should immediately go to Gao's family to take revenge after becoming a strong man, so that readers will enjoy watching it."
Jiang Yan wanted to complain so much that he didn't know where to start.
"Jiang Yan, you don't understand this, right? I am foreshadowing. Ye Xuan didn't take revenge immediately because the exercises he obtained are very special."
"Many great writers have written like this!"
Xia Chengye talked eloquently.
Jiang Yan: "."
"No matter how good and exciting the foreshadowing is, do you think readers will have the patience to continue reading?" Jiang Yan questioned his soul.
"This"
Xia Chengye scratched his head.
"Should be?" Xia Chengye said uncertainly.
"Remove the should and add a no in front!"
Jiang Yan corrected Xia Chengye's words.
"Also, do you think it's cool for the protagonist to kill the reader with the villain who killed his parents, or does it look cool for the reader when the protagonist kills the villain's offspring after the villain is old and dead?"
Jiang Yan continued.
hiss--
Xia Chengye gasped.
"Let me tell you how to write it. The protagonist's family was slaughtered by the villain. A mysterious strong man passed by and saw that the protagonist was a rare cultivation genius. He rescued the protagonist at a critical moment. The protagonist worships the mysterious strong man as his teacher. After returning from school, he happened to meet When the villain's son gets married, the bride is the protagonist's childhood sweetheart!"
Jiang Yan took a sip of water to moisten his throat.
"The protagonist's childhood sweetheart is unwilling to marry the villain's son. Due to family pressure, he is forced to commit suicide to keep his innocence. Villain, you have to torture it slowly so that you can write a long story!"
Jiang Yan didn't forget to tell him, so he just started out casually.
Xia Chengye who was sitting next to him was dumbfounded!
"Jiang Yan, you are too good, have you written a novel before?"
Xia Chengye stuttered when he spoke.
After listening to Jiang Yan's words, Xia Chengye suddenly realized, and then looked at the beginning of his writing.
What kind of rubbish is this!
"It's natural to see more." Jiang Yan said modestly.
"You don't know a little, you know too much!"
Xia Chengye's eyes worshiped.
"Jiang Yan, teach me how to write novels!"
[Ding——Congratulations to the host for unlocking the achievements of famous teachers and outstanding apprentices! 】
Famous teachers make great apprentices?
"System, what's the use of a famous teacher producing a high-achieving apprentice?" Jiang Yan communicated with the system.
[The achievements of famous teachers can improve the host's comprehension ability in the professional field. 】
"understood!"
Jiang Yan nodded. Now that he is 60 in the field of literature, if he trains Xia Chengye to become a novelist, his attainments in the field of literature will improve.
Thinking of this, Jiang Yan looked at Xia Chengye with serious eyes.
"Are you sure you want me to teach you how to write novels?"
Jiang Yan said.
"Sure!" Xia Chengye nodded like a chicken pecking at rice.
A few random words from Jiang Yan benefited him a lot, so it is better to let Jiang Yan teach himself than to write scribbles without knowing anything.
"Tear up the beginning of your writing."
"What I just said was the beginning of a novel that is very popular in the market. Now I will teach you another way of starting a novel."
Jiang Yan spoke slowly, while Xia Chengye took notes seriously.
"Supporting characters are very important. A bright and interesting character will make readers remember this character."
Jiang Yan glanced at the time, it was 11:30.
"That's all for today. I have a premonition that I will be sick in the afternoon and I will take two days off. I will teach you when I recover."
Xia Chengye: "???"
It's okay to predict in advance that you will be sick in the afternoon!
"Teacher, can I start writing now and publish it on Tianxing Novel Network?"
Xia Chengye asked respectfully.
"You can write the beginning, but don't rush to release it. When I am satisfied with the beginning, I will release it." Jiang Yan was about to drink water to moisten his throat, Xia Chengye quickly unscrewed the bottle cap and handed it over.
"I know teacher, I will send it to you as soon as I finish writing the beginning."
"Well, remember what I taught you, don't memorize it by rote, the key is to apply what you have learned."
Before Jiang Yan left, Xia Chengye and Xia Chengye added contact information to each other.
In the afternoon, I will take a plane to Suzhou City to record "The King of Masked Singer". It takes two days to go back and forth, and it is relatively easy to ask for leave from university.
Although the instructor was very dissatisfied with Jiang Yan's behavior of asking for leave immediately after school started, his mother did not say much as a cover.
Sitting on the plane from Yanjing to Suzhou, Jiang Yan looked at the blue screen in front of him.
【Age: 18】
【Appearance: 100】
【Physical Strength: 70】
【Literature: 63】
【Music: 70】
【Comprehensive: 321】
After unlocking the achievements of famous teachers and outstanding apprentices, Jiang Yan taught Xia Chengye for a whole morning, and the field of literature increased from 60 to 63.
In addition, Jiang Yan's physical strength has also increased from 40 to 70, because with the energy drink Jiang Yan can exercise desperately, and there is no need to worry about excessive exercise causing damage to the body.
[Ding, congratulations to the host for triggering the task. 】
[The second issue of "The King of Masked Singer" is fully voted, reward: a silver treasure chest! 】
"Did it pass with all the votes?"
"The King of Masked Singer" had a total of [-] viewers, which meant that Jiang Yan had to get all the viewers to vote for him in order to complete the task released by the system.
"System, what will happen if you can't complete the task?"
Jiang Yan was not only a little curious.
[There is no penalty! 】
"That's all right."
Jiang Yan breathed a sigh of relief, but the silver treasure chest is still very attractive, but the task of getting a full ticket is a bit too harsh.
There were [-] spectators at the scene, and Jiang Yan didn't satisfy everyone with a hundred yuan bill.
The difficulty of this task can be described in four words.
Very blue!
(End of this chapter)
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