This childhood sweetheart has a problem

Chapter 132 A Work with Full Commercial Potential

With reference to the original novels of the earth world and the adapted TV series and movies, Xu Qingru used her "expert level" writing skills to write the beginning of it, which can be said to be extremely smooth and silky.

She is not using this work to reap literary value, but to pursue commercial achievements, so that readers can read it refreshingly and enjoyable. She can say that she has no worries about writing, and she is definitely returning to the original intention of being a cool writer.

As for whether to serve hard dishes like "Your Lie in April" or "Life Grows and Hates Water Changdong" directly after the nesting is completed, or to be steady and continue with the layout, it all depends on Xu Qingru's mood.

Xu Qingru found out that she gained literary and artistic value through novels, songs and other works. Over time, there will always be a day when she reveals her secrets, but if she uses the carrier of the game to make a knife and cause depression, she can hide it deeper.

In the plots of some games in the earth world, the knives are one after another, but the players did not go to the bottom of the screenwriter who killed a thousand knives to lead all this.

In this way, Xu Qingru felt that the players seemed to be much more fooled than the readers, and the script writers and screenwriters of the game were not as hateful as the novel authors.

The topic is still returning to the new novel Xu Qingru is writing. Its opening rhythm is still very lively, and it does not play literary arts like Second Five. Instead, it looks very down-to-earth and full of life, so that readers will be more involved. feel.

The general plot at the beginning is like this-

In the large-scale martial arts MMO online game "Dream Tour of Jianghu", Zhenshui Wuxiang is fighting monsters together with Lu Weiwei, who is dressed in a red dress. For this treasure, Nini agrees to Weiwei's appointment at the inn outside Jinling City at [-]:[-] p.m.

Zhenshui Wuxiang and Luwei Weiwei are heroes in the game, but they have been "married" for more than half a year, Weiwei is still called "Zhenshui", and there is no intimacy like other couples in the game.

This day, Zhenshui asked Weiwei if the real person was studying at the university in the imperial capital.He said that he was also in the imperial capital and wanted to ask Weiwei to meet for dinner offline. Bei Weiwei in front of the computer hesitated for a while, but still refused Zhenshui. She said that as long as everyone had fun in the game, it would be fine.

Zhen Shui never gave up, and wanted to ask Wei Wei to take a look at the photos, when suddenly the electricity in the dormitory was cut off, and it turned out that Erxi was cooking noodles on the electric stove, causing the electric meter to trip.

When Wei Wei repaired the circuit and wanted to turn on the computer, she found that the computer was actually broken. Erxi next to her told her guiltily that she had borrowed her computer yesterday and accidentally dropped it. Well, now the computer is broken. The sudden disappearance of himself, Zhen Shui Wu Xiang must have thought that he was guilty.

Thinking about the martial arts competition that was scheduled tonight, Wei Wei decides to drag Er Xi to buy a motherboard and repair the computer by herself. When she passes by the school bulletin board, she sees everyone watching the announcement of the basketball match between the boys from the Department of Computer Science and the Department of Biochemistry. A tall and handsome figure emerged.

That is Xiao Nai, a fourth-year computer student who is known as Xiao Dashen. Thinking that Xiao Dashen, the soul of the basketball team in such an important game, will definitely come back to compete, the two girls couldn't help getting excited, and secretly decided that the game must be played early. An hour to grab a vantage point.

Bei Weiwei and Erxi came to the digital store and happened to meet the school belle Meng Yiran who was shopping for memory sticks. Wei Wei saw that the boss was selling the second-hand memory sticks as if they were new ones. I bought it, and said that it is only natural for the boss to open a store to make money.Erxi couldn't be more angry, and made Meng Yiran black, but Wei Wei didn't care.

Wei Wei came to the Internet cafe and entered the game on time. She flexibly manipulated the mouse with skillful gestures and used various skills to the extreme. After a short while, she won the duel. Immediately, the world channel started talking about it, saying that Wei Wei was worthy of being the only female player on the duel list. Players, with her level, she is only ranked sixth. How amazing is the skill of Yixiao Naihe, who is ranked number one in the legend.The opponent is unwilling to lose and invites Wei Wei to try again.

In the inner room of the Internet cafe, Xiao Nai is playing Go with his uncle and discussing his career after graduation. When his uncle heard that Xiao Nai wanted to start his own company, he wanted to give him the Internet cafe as an office space, but Xiao Nai decisively refused, and he yearned for it even more. The fun of building from scratch.

When Xiao Nai left the Internet cafe, he happened to pass by Bei Weiwei, and seeing Wei Wei's concentrating and fingers fluttering, Xiao Nai immediately felt attracted.

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This beginning is mainly to explain the character of the heroine, pointing out her status as a master in the game.

At the same time, the male protagonist also appeared directly. When no one else knew that "Luwei Weiwei" was a super beautiful woman in reality, but thought she was a "shemale", the male protagonist Xiao Nai happened to see her in an Internet cafe. When Bei Weiwei was playing with the account "Lu Wei Wei Wei", she knew the real identity of "Lu Wei Wei Wei".

Similarly, he was also attracted by Bei Weiwei's very good game technology, and since he and Bei Weiwei were in the same school, he naturally knew that Bei Weiwei was in the school. A very low-key top student, if it wasn't for being too low-key, she might have been ranked first in the school flower list.

Undoubtedly, Xiao Nai was really full of affection for Bei Weiwei, not to mention it was love at first sight, even at that time, he was already thinking about how to chase Bei Weiwei...

For female readers, this kind of plot where the male god falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight will definitely be very enjoyable. Conversely, in male-oriented works, the plot where the male protagonist falls in love with the beautiful woman at first sight is of course also refreshing.

Therefore, such an opening chapter is undoubtedly very eye-catching, and at the same time, it also combines the most popular MMO online game elements. Now is the time when the end game dominates, which is equivalent to the era of "WOW" in the earth world. Mobile games have not yet emerged.

That's why Xu Qingru hopes that the "Aiyou" company will overtake cars in curves on the track of mobile games in the future.

And I have to say that the appearance of this kind of online game novel in a magazine will definitely refresh most readers!
Of course, "A Slight Smile is Alluring" is just a layer of online game novel skin, it is still a romance novel in essence.

Soon, Xu Qingru sent the opening chapter of the completed new work to Su Manwen, the editor-in-chief of "Youth Sacrifice".

Su Manwen, of course, started reviewing manuscripts right away. "Teacher Xu Nuo" was basically the author she valued the most. It was her very courageous decision to offer such good conditions to win over the other party.

And as long as the works of "Teacher Xu Nuo" achieve excellent results, her right to speak in the magazine will naturally be greater, and she may be able to make further progress in the future.

Therefore, when Su Manwen watched "A Slight Smile is Alluring", she was more cautious and cautious while she was looking forward to it. She never worried about the quality of "Teacher Xu Nuo", but worried that the other party wrote too much. Literature and art, on the contrary, make the works tend to be niche.

Like "[-] Centimeters Per Second", although it is highly discussed and the copyright has been sold, it is a bit "popular but not popular". After its publication, the sales volume of its booklet is not as expected. so high.

In fact, this is also a very normal thing. In the earth world, this animated film is essentially a literary film. How many literary films can sell well at the box office?
After all, "Youth Sacrifice" is a commercial fiction magazine. While Su Manwen likes "[-] Centimeters Per Second", it does not prevent her from looking forward to seeing a hit that can further increase the magazine's sales.

However, she felt that placing such hopes on "Teacher Xu Nuo" seemed a bit difficult?
Can Wenqing authors really put down their airs and write commercial blockbusters?

And when Su Manwen saw the heroine Bei Weiwei appearing on stage, she froze for a moment. Can a girl like this really be the heroine?

But once you accept this setting, it seems to be very interesting?
This time "Small Smile is Alluring", it is not the previous "[-] Centimeters Per Second", the latter is a youth novel from the perspective of the male protagonist, while the former is a romance novel with a correct taste, completely based on the female "Bei Weiwei" The perspective of the main character unfolds.

This actually filled Su Manwen with a sense of anticipation. After all, she is a woman, and reading romance novels from the perspective of the heroine always feels more substituting.

But what Su Manwen never expected was that the character design of the heroine of this novel is so perfect!

According to the general setting of romance novels, shouldn’t the heroine be ordinary and attractive, while the rest of the female protagonists are extremely beautiful? In this way, the perfect male protagonist likes the ordinary female protagonist, but is indifferent to the beautiful female protagonist. This is a very typical romance novel, so cool...

Holding this doubt, Su Manwen continued to look at it seriously, and she smiled when she looked at it.

The more she read, the more she was enveloped by the joyful and warm atmosphere of this novel. She couldn't help but think of those online jokes about Mr. Xu Nuo's new work. She always felt that this time, they were all wrong!
Such a relaxed, joyful, and warm work, is it possible that there will be a super magical turning point in the future?

There is no doubt that Su Manwen, the editor-in-chief, was very satisfied with the beginning of "A Slight Smile Is Allure".

Whether it is from the perspective of a pure reader or an editor, she feels that Teacher Xu Nuo has written another excellent work!

As a pure reader, if one does not consider the commercial value of this work, Su Manwen also finds it very enjoyable to read.

Obviously, this work basically doesn't have any particularly bloody business novels, but it looks very cool, and it can make people smile from time to time, especially if you play MMO online games, you will understand its attractiveness better The place.

The relaxed and joyful atmosphere in the novel can always linger in the readers’ minds. In addition, the heroine herself is a super beautiful woman, who can always make readers feel pleasing to the eye. How can such a work not be popular? Readers like it?

From an editor's point of view, Su Manwen also feels that this work shows Teacher Xu's extremely high level of writing books. On the level of writing, there is a feeling of returning to the original and integrated, and the sense of picture is still very strong. Readers like Is watching a TV series or movie!
No matter how picky the editor is, I am afraid that there is no way to find the flaws. If you insist on looking for it, it will definitely be nitpicking...

Su Manwen even thinks that this "Small Smile is Alluring" is more suitable for "Youth Sacrifice" than Xu Qingru's previous "[-] Centimeters Per Second", because the former's supple and cool romance novels are more commercially successful. It must be better.

Among the readers of "Youth Sacrifice", most of the readers are female readers. After all, "[-] Centimeters per Second" is unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist. Many female readers prefer the supporting actress who has a crush on this work. "Chengtian flower seedlings".

However, the beginning of "Small Smiles Are Allure" is good, but Su Manwen is a little worried. At the later stage of this work, Mr. Xu Nuo suddenly fell into a literary problem and made a super magical twist!

For example, when it is stated that the perfect heroine and the perfect hero have been appointed at the beginning of the chapter, the heroine is suddenly pushed by another male lead, but this male lead is not as good as the perfect hero in every way, just a yellow Hairy bastard or something...

Many writers of Wenqing's romance novels, perhaps for the sake of more words, or for the sake of playing with depth, have to add some serious material to the so-called love between men and women, as if the male protagonist only still likes the "wrong place" Only the heroine can reflect the greatness of love.

There is no way, some of the creators of Wenqing are like this, as if the male protagonist does not have a little green on his head, life will be difficult.

As a senior editor-in-chief, Su Manwen can tell at a glance that this work has the potential to kill both male and female readers. Give……

Once such a plot happens, it will definitely cause most male readers to abandon the book!
As for female readers, as long as they are normal girls, most of them will be full of affection for the perfect hero Xiao Nai. After all, he is an almighty god, and they are all waiting for the heroine and heroine to come together happily. But suddenly suffered such a fatal blow...

Although female readers are more able to bear it, they can't stand such messing around!

In fact, like "[-] Centimeters Per Second", Su Manwen didn't expect that the male and female protagonists who had such a tacit understanding when they were young could only pass by in the end.

If there is an accident in "Small Smile is Alluring", at that time, the entire "Youth Sacrifice" magazine will probably be dragged down by this work.

Because as long as this work maintains the current style, it will definitely become a hit and attract countless readers into the pit. As a result, the sudden turning point will definitely kill an unknown number of readers. What's the end?

Su Manwen has decided that this time, he must keep an eye on "Teacher Xu Nuo", stop abusing readers and make big news!
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