Exiled, there is space, the mistress of the gate will raise her cubs

Chapter 139 The Ups and Downs of the Plot

Recently, Huanyu Pavilion is very lively.

Mostly they came to inquire about Miss Haitang's first night.

"I heard that the Begonia girl here sold for 2000 taels on the first night, directly surpassing Mao Yuanwai. Ask a foreigner to pick this delicate flower?"

Hua Niang, who was hugged in the other party's arms, was not angry, she just said: "Miss Haitang is indeed very lucky. That father is still in Miss Haitang's room on the second floor. I heard that his mother personally entertained him. Hey, I was a few years earlier , or when Hua Kui fell in love with that grandfather, and won't he be famous for thousands of miles?"

The man lightly picked Hua Niang's jaw, "Just you?"

"Master, don't underestimate me. I was no worse than Miss Haitang when I was young."

"It's not because of her looks. I heard from my close friend that Miss Haitang was born in a wealthy family in the capital. Just her temperament and self-cultivation, I'm afraid you can't match it in your life. Otherwise, who would want to pay 2000 taels?"

However, in the eyes of these people, no matter how good-looking the oiran is, no matter how temperamental he is, it is not worth it for them to spend 2000 taels of silver to buy it overnight.A girl in a brothel who has not opened or budded can redeem her body for a few hundred taels, and 2000 taels...

Tang Zangyue became in their hearts, and before they met him, they defined him as a fool with a lot of money.

Zangyue, who is a fool in Tang Dynasty, is enjoying lying on his side on the couch at the moment, letting the other maids pinch his legs, while Wen Siyue peels grapes one by one and feeds them into her mouth.

She looked at the poor scholar who had polished the ink on the table, and said: "The main thing is the dialogue and scenes of the characters. The plot is promoted according to the climax of the original folk story. The dialogue of the characters should be in vernacular as much as possible, so that ordinary people I can also understand and understand, the words of the scene are reflected in the props and background..."

She said that the scripts of later generations are similar, as long as poor scholars write wonderful and easy-to-understand scripts, presumably Wen Siyue will be able to accept them soon.After all, this was the only way she could find for her future situation, if she was not sure, it was up to Wen Siyue herself.

In the face of adversity, people can always stimulate their infinite potential.

"Props?" The poor scholar was puzzled.

Tang Zangyue gave an example: "Hua Mulan has to have a knife in her hand when she goes to the battlefield, right? Does she have to wear armor? Even Zhu Yingtai in Liang Zhuli has to dress up as a man... These are all props, and they have to be used in a scene. manifested in it."

"Oh oh oh."

Tang Zangyue continued: "Literati, poets, romantic talents, even people in the market, both men and women look forward to beautiful love, but ordinary, ordinary love is not impressive enough, it has ups and downs."

"Ups and downs?"

Tang Zangyue frowned slightly, then relaxed for a moment, and said: "That's right, there are ups and downs. For example, Liang Zhu, a man and a woman always have a low status, which leads to different concepts of family status. The elders in the family object, because the love is too deep, which eventually leads to tragedy. You can make appropriate changes, as long as the process is not too bad."

"... Please tell me how to change it, sir?"

The poor scholar came to this Huanyu Pavilion for his family's livelihood, and he knew that the man in front of him was spending a lot of money.When they didn't meet, the poor scholar also classified him as a dude.When I saw myself, I was attracted by his demeanor and novel thinking.

Only then did the poor scholar realize that he was narrow-minded.

It's nothing for a man to be romantic, as long as he has talent, he will be respected everywhere.

Tang Zangyue: "If the women are strong and the men are weak, the sense of substitution is not strong, and it will even attract a lot of troubles. Then the identities are swapped, with Liang Zhu as the center, and the love between humans and ghosts is unfinished, and the sadomasochistic triangle ends in a tragic end. ending."

Not only the poor scholar, but also the leg-pinching maid and Wen Siyue peeling the grapes behind him, even the well-informed bustard also listened with gusto.

The poor scholar asked for advice again, and Tang Zangyue was not stingy, saying: "The hostess disguised herself as a man and entered the academy, and fell in love with the male host. After knowing that the family was right, they exchanged Geng Tie. They should have a happy life, but the male second fell in love at first sight. Robbery. Due to the huge difference in status and the heroine's resistance, the male second kept her outside."

The poor scholar was filled with righteous indignation: "This is too much! Then?"

"..." Tang Zangyue couldn't say a word seeing how everyone else was looking at her brightly, looking forward to what would happen next.

Originally, I wanted to bury the beginning like this, and then throw it to poor scholars.Let the other party make up their own follow-up, and see how strong the other party is.

Forget it.

Tang Zangyue continued: "On the night of being robbed, the male lead wanted to save the female lead, but was beaten to death by the people under the second male lead."

Wen Siyue covered her mouth in shock, even the maid who pinched her calf followed suit.

The old bustard who has always been in vain for human life also felt a little emotional: "It's so sad that the male protagonist's father and mother are white-haired and black-haired."

Tang Zangyue: "It was the night of the full moon. The hero wore a red robe and wanted to save the heroine, but at the same time eloped with her, which eventually led to tragedy. God couldn't stand it anymore, and turned the hero into a ghost. "

The bustard: "Is this going back for revenge?"

Tang Zangyue rolled her eyelids and said, "Revenge? I'm talking about love and hatred here. What kind of revenge?"

"Then, the hero has become a ghost..."

"The male lead came from an extraordinary background. When the male lead first became a ghost, there were some restrictions, which could only cause constant nightmares. Later, the family invited a Taoist priest to know the existence of the male lead. At this time, the female lead followed the male lead, and her heart gradually Following the body, I developed a different feeling for the male second, and begged the male lead to let the male second go..."

Wen Siyue let out a soft cry, and even the procuress said angrily: "This female lead, the male lead died in vain trying to save her!"

Compared with the angry expressions on other people's faces, Tang Zangyue was very calm, and said: "The male lead is angry and the female lead intercedes for the second male lead. The reason... is naturally the same as yours. So the male lead hates the female lead because of love. Did the same thing as the second male."

This time, changing to a poor scholar is beyond words.

Why did it get more and more outrageous the more I heard it?Can……

He is also a little curious about the follow-up development. Like everyone else in the room, he also expects Tang Zangyue to continue editing.

Seeing that Tang Zangyue didn't speak for a long time, the bustard couldn't bear it any longer, and said, "And then?"

Tang Zangyue didn't even bat an eyelid, and said, "What do you think of the plot, Mom?"

"Okay! It's so attractive! Once the stage is set up, it will definitely attract many guests!" Even she, who is well-informed, has never heard of such a love triangle.
It is a brothel girl who sells herself, and that is also clearly marked. This heroine is good. Not only is she sorry for her fiancé, but she also falls in love with the man who killed her fiancée, and even has sex with her ghost fiancé...

The plot is indeed ups and downs, but also exciting enough.

Tang Zangyue's eyes fell on the poor scholar: "You need to highlight the helplessness of the heroine, the dominance of the second male lead, the deep roots of love when the male lead was a human being, the resentment after he turned into a ghost, and the turning point of his temperament change. to progress.”

The poor scholar probably felt his lifeblood and nodded, "Okay, I got it."

The old bustard couldn't help but said again: "Master, what's next? You're too tantalizing."

(End of this chapter)